The first page was intriguing, the writing setting the mood and leaving me with the initial impression that this was going to be a fantastic read. That mood was broken on the second page when Daisy countered it with a modern, slightly slang phrase (“…so this guy was certainly pushing it”). It was disappointing, as the magical mysterious aura continued to be upset with Daisy’s verbalizations. Another descriptive passage that I thought worked well: “But on most days – like this one – the shop was so quiet I could hear every gear turning in the grandfather clock, which was said to be possessed by the ghost of a murderous musician.” A vision of the shop is created, a store that is unlike others, and thus deserves to be investigated further. Despite the periodic mood intrusions, the overall writing compelled me to continue reading.
There are different definitions of YA. I have seen YA describes as 18-25, 15-20, and 12-18 years of age. If I would have stopped after the first couple chapters, I would have described it as a book geared for late teens, early twenties. The reading level dropped as the book continued, and I would assign the overall book to an age block of 12-14. Either less time and thought were dedicated or the author lost her way and settled into a mode that better suited younger readers. Unfortunately, the main thrust of the book, memory theft and Daisy’s attempts to thwart the monster Farnsworth and recover the lost memories, is extremely convoluted. Although time and effort contributed to a train of thought that makes sense, the constant explanations may lose a young teen.
Less dismaying yet still bothersome are some of the grammatical errors that were missed and still present well after a year this book was published. For instance, though spelled similarly, discretely cannot be swapped with discreetly. The terms “incredibly loudly” and “incredibly firmly” are wobbly, although may be used as an effect with younger readers (and we are then back to the intended audience for this book).
So what was good about the book? This is a whimsical tale, with quirky characters that a younger reader would enjoy. It contains a lot of action, with the main characters in constant danger. The author creates a likable character in Daisy, and it is not difficult for readers to become wrapped up in her dilemmas and wish her to succeed. The whole idea of the Strange Luck store is an idea that could lend itself to a multi-book series, and Ms. Winters, through her descriptions of some of the store items, has already demonstrated she could ably handle this.
Bottom Line: Recommended for readers in their early teens, or for older readers who can overlook some of the elements that fit together, but not perfectly (I left some of these out so as not to include spoilers in the review). Two-and-a-half to three stars.