I wanted to like this book, really I did. I have read and greatly enjoyed other of Mr.Avera's work. But this I cannot include as part. Written in the first person, the story continues to follow Serus, our assassin policeman hero (from Exodus) as, together with his sister and girlfriend, they travel to earth in an attempt to put an end to the Syndicate but then decide also to save Mars There is a lot of self deprication and gnashing of teeth over his history and so many tears wiped from the corners of eyes, a touch of jealousy and protestations of love. Yet the characterisations fail, all is flat and unformed. But worse is the apparent missing (and crucial) central section between chapters 14 and 15, crucial since it seems to change the direction of their objectives.
Two stars for the conceptual story and the last two chapters which promise so much more. But for the book as a whole it needs serious editing, and proof reading, also, to become worth the reading. It could have been good - such a pity.