I really do not know where to start with this review. I thought this was going to be hot. I liked Jamie even before the book started. He was not mentioned much in the first book, only as a mediator for Mick and Allie, but he piqued my interest. He was confident and knew who he was and able to convey that. He was responsible, sensual, careful, and knew how to get things done. I figured he needed a strong woman by his side to submit to him. However, the author failed to bring that character into his own book. I did not picture Jamie as hot. The author did not do a get job of presenting a mental image. I thought he would be a Scottish firecracker. All I pictured him being was a tall, skinny guy with abs and a nipple piercing.
I usually get my first impressions of a person from when they are first mentioned. Summer Grace was a blip in the first book, but I knew she was not going to be the one to compliment Jamie. I was totally right. I made my final judgment of her in the first 12 pages. I did not like her. Summer Grace is a slut, even from a young age. At 14, she knew how to suck cock!!!??? What 14 year old knows how to do that? At 15, she was crawling into Jamie's bed on family vacation trips trying to seduce him???!!!
The pairing of these 2 characters did not work for me. Jamie needed a strong, no nonsense woman. Jamie stated that he was in love with her at the age of 14. I do not think that love at that age is genuine. What 14 year old knows about true love? It made no sense. The chemistry was not there. Jamie said that it had always Summer Grace that he was meant to be with. There had been no sexual interaction between them. He had been fantasizing about her for 16 years. Why? What is it with this author having characters that have not had any sexual experiences but waiting long periods of time for one person?
The romance and BDSM did not mesh well together. The sex scenes were putting me to sleep. They got repetitive. Jamie talked too much in these scenes. It got irritating. Instead of talking about what he was going to do, he should have just been doing it. Once again in this author's book, I did not feel the Dom/sub relationship. That dynamic was lost on them. She was just complying because she wanted to be with him. I did not see the development of trust in the relationship. It was not natural. These characters were just another Mick and Allie. Summer Grace was going to be whatever Jamie wanted her to be because she liked him a lot.
Jamie and Summer Grace were weak characters. Summer Grace was feeble. I came to that decision because she cannot stick to resolves. "She decided right then that she had to find a way to let go of her juvenile obsession with him or she's spend the rest of her life alone." She said that but like ten minutes later she was having sex with him. She has no self-control over herself and it shows her immaturity. She also blamed her brother's death on her not being with Jamie. Really? That is just sad. Then she had trust issues. For what reason? She had not allowed herself to get close to anyone because she was stuck on a man for 16 years. It also seemed like she wanted to chase Jamie for the rest of her life and not really have him. The relationship was presented to her on a silver platter and she doubted if she deserved it. Oh please!!! Then there was the back and forth of wanting and not wanting to be with him. It got sickening. She would get close to him and then panic. Jamie would do the same thing. Too many mixed signals. It was silly issues that showed she was not ready for a relationship.
Jamie was not better as a character. Like I said, I usually make my opinions of characters when they are first mentioned. I liked Jamie at first. My opinion of him just disintegrated throughout the book. Jamie was a typical man. He wanted to make the decision to pursue Summer Grace and take the initiative only after seeing her naked and watching her receive pleasure from someone else. Summer Grace knew that but continued to give in to him. He was also indecisive. Why think about another woman while making a covenant before God with the woman he decided to marry? That was disgusting. He also had his silly issue to get over. What was keeping him from getting close to Summer Grace. He had a notion that he had the kiss of death to people and relationships. He was too old for that kind of thinking. He had nothing to do with his twin brother's death or the death of his best friend or was the cause of his parents basically falling apart after his brother's death.
The writing was subpar. It got repetitive. Also, the description of things according to Summer Grace was bizarre. You have to read it to see it. It took away from the reading experience. The author tried to do the happily ever after but it was not believable. It was so ridiculous that it was funny. Two hurt people cannot heal together, in my opinion. Ms. Bradley missed the mark again on this one.