Queen of kindness had been Emeny’s name since she first ascended the throne, she visited orphanages, gave money to the poor, listened to her people and helped them when needed. Emeny herself was the only one who knew of the fire that burned within her, a rage that was safely kept hidden and no one ever saw.
When news of a captured dragon reached Chillmore Emeny knew it was her chance for the adventure she had always craved but a ticking clock followed her and it was only a matter of time before the fire was let free and when a fire is started it burns everything in its path.
I really enjoyed watching Enemy travel through her kingdom and realize it's not as she thought it was. People are struggling, bad things are happening and not everyone loves her. I also liked that the book showed the messier, political side of ruling. I loved the dragons and that they could speak!
Enemy was facing a lot of shit on her journey. There really was A LOT going on and I sometimes felt really bad for her. Slavers, attacks, sirens, dragons, a huge reveal about her father's death that I didn't see coming. But for most part, a lot of things came together way too easily for her. There was always a way out somehow.
My main critique is that Emeny goes through so much without much emotional processing on the page. I wanted to feel her fear, her guilt, her grief, her relief, but a lot of it is more "told" than "felt." Therefore the way she changed by the end wasn't really relatable to me. She really gone madddd, like really mad. I even agreed with her awful mother when she said she didn't recognize her anymore. I really struggled to connect with her end-personality.
Writing-wise, the sentences are often very long and layered, which sometimes made it a bit hard to follow. There's some editing work to do before the official release.
Overall it's a good first release and I really hope for the kingdom that their new queen will be more of the kind side again :)
I really enjoyed this book and loved the world building - I can't wait to find out more about the world through the rest of the series
The book was fast paced and a lot happened in a short period of time and there always seemed to be a way out for Emeny, I would have loved for more focus on Emeny's feelings as she changed throughout the book but did enjoy the mystery of not knowing sometimes
I loved the formatting of the PDF version and thought the chapter art was amazing! You can tell the author has put a lot of effort into the book and it is going to be an amazing debut
I also loved the diversity of the book - some descriptions could have been in more detail to hammer this across
The author is also amazing, I reached out to point out some spelling and grammer mistakes and she was so kind and thankful
(PS - this is my first ever ARC so created this goodreads to leave the review as Amazon was not allowing me to leave one on there)
I received this book from the author as an advanced reader copy I absolutely loved reading this! The story is a wonderful read, and I was completely captivated by emeny and her growth throughout the book. This book is beautiful, and language guide and time guide and all that is a fantastic touch that really enhances the experience. However, the pacing felt a bit slow at times. I also wished the author used more "showing" rather than "telling" to describe the events. Because of the heavy exposition, I found myself feeling confused during several parts of the story. I noticed a few spelling mistakes, though I am sure these can be easily fixed during the final editing process before official publication. Overall, despite these minor issues, it is a lovely book with fantastic character development. I highly recommend it!
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Emeny’s story was interesting and enjoyable to read. I did feel the story could have had more struggle, certain aspects could have been explored more. There was alot of character introduced at the beginning which felt a bit overwhelming.