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Krillonian Chronicles #1
The Collar and the Cavvarach
A collar that defines him as property. A weapon that could set his sister free.
Enslaved teen Bensin promised his mother on her deathbed that he would free his little sister from the horrors of slavery. But when an escape attempt fails, their owners separate them, and Bensin is sold—powerless to protect the sister who needs him.
His new owner, a martial arts coach, trains him to fight in tournaments. As Bensin’s skills sharpen, so does his desperation, knowing each wasted moment brings Ellie closer to danger. Every plan to save her requires money—something he doesn’t have. His only asset is his growing mastery of the cavvarach, the weapon that could be his key to her freedom—or the tool of his destruction.
When Bensin learns Ellie is about to be sold to a ruthless owner, his last hope to save her lies in the Grand Imperial, the empire’s most prestigious—and brutal—fighting tournament. But the best of the best compete there, and after another failed rescue attempt leaves him injured and exhausted, Bensin faces impossible odds. Can he overcome the empire’s most skilled martial artists and win his sister’s freedom before she disappears into a life of suffering and abuse?
Also available as an audiobook!
Grab your copy of The Collar and the Cavvarach now and dive into a pulse-pounding adventure perfect for fans of The Hunger Games, Karate Kid, and Gladiator!
Enslaved teen Bensin promised his mother on her deathbed that he would free his little sister from the horrors of slavery. But when an escape attempt fails, their owners separate them, and Bensin is sold—powerless to protect the sister who needs him.
His new owner, a martial arts coach, trains him to fight in tournaments. As Bensin’s skills sharpen, so does his desperation, knowing each wasted moment brings Ellie closer to danger. Every plan to save her requires money—something he doesn’t have. His only asset is his growing mastery of the cavvarach, the weapon that could be his key to her freedom—or the tool of his destruction.
When Bensin learns Ellie is about to be sold to a ruthless owner, his last hope to save her lies in the Grand Imperial, the empire’s most prestigious—and brutal—fighting tournament. But the best of the best compete there, and after another failed rescue attempt leaves him injured and exhausted, Bensin faces impossible odds. Can he overcome the empire’s most skilled martial artists and win his sister’s freedom before she disappears into a life of suffering and abuse?
Also available as an audiobook!
Grab your copy of The Collar and the Cavvarach now and dive into a pulse-pounding adventure perfect for fans of The Hunger Games, Karate Kid, and Gladiator!
290 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 1, 2015
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Annie Douglass Lima
34 books174 followersAnnie Douglass Lima considers herself fortunate to have traveled in twenty different countries and lived in four of them. A fifth-grade teacher in her “other” life, she loves reading to her students and sparking their imaginations. Her books include science fiction, fantasy, YA action and adventure novels, a puppet script, poetry, a Bible verse coloring and activity book, and a cookbook. When she isn’t teaching or writing, Annie can often be found sipping spiced chai or pomegranate green tea in exotic locations, some of which exist in this world.
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March 18, 2016
Who doesn’t like a young hero who can deal with what life has given him and learns to work within its confines? Step inside a world set in contemporary times, a world where slavery exists and to own a slave or two is not uncommon, because to the winners go the spoils. Be prepared to meet Bensin, a young teen with the weight of a promise on his shoulders and the commitment to see it through, no matter the cost to himself. Follow his story as he touches the lives of the free and the “collars” and anyone who reads this tale.
Annie Douglass Lima has created a world that thinks it is humane to its slaves, where one boy beats all odds as a champion and his younger sister’s protector. The Collar and the Cavvarach is a brilliantly told young adult tale that will appeal to all ages.
All Bensin wants is to free his sister from slavery, but the cost is far beyond anything he will every earn, unless his new owner, a martial arts instructor and coach can find that magic zone that Bensin must enter to win the all- important Krillonian Empire’s most prestigious tournament that will earn him a portion of the prize money, as well. Meanwhile, Bensin will attempt all he can to find freedom from the brutality his young sister could face as a female slave. From his unlikely friendship with an officer of the Krillonian police to his almost brotherly relationship with his new owner, Bensin’s honor as a man will astound you, even as he sometimes runs afoul of both the law and the trust of his owner.
Bensin will come of age in a tale that will rivet you to each page, cheer him on and feel your heart breaking for a boy who tries to stand against the world out of love.
I cannot recommend this book highly enough nor give enough praise to Annie Douglass Lima’s talent as a writer and storyteller. This is a well-written tale with a powerful message within, as well as a cast of characters that are easy to both respect and despise. Looking for a tale appropriate for ALL ages? One that provides a hero with heart? This is it!
I received this copy from the author in exchange for my honest review.
Publisher: Annie Douglass Lima
Publication Date: May 9, 2015
Genre: Dystopian | YA | Abuse
Print Length: 306 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
For Reviews & More: http://tometender.blogspot.com
Annie Douglass Lima has created a world that thinks it is humane to its slaves, where one boy beats all odds as a champion and his younger sister’s protector. The Collar and the Cavvarach is a brilliantly told young adult tale that will appeal to all ages.
All Bensin wants is to free his sister from slavery, but the cost is far beyond anything he will every earn, unless his new owner, a martial arts instructor and coach can find that magic zone that Bensin must enter to win the all- important Krillonian Empire’s most prestigious tournament that will earn him a portion of the prize money, as well. Meanwhile, Bensin will attempt all he can to find freedom from the brutality his young sister could face as a female slave. From his unlikely friendship with an officer of the Krillonian police to his almost brotherly relationship with his new owner, Bensin’s honor as a man will astound you, even as he sometimes runs afoul of both the law and the trust of his owner.
Bensin will come of age in a tale that will rivet you to each page, cheer him on and feel your heart breaking for a boy who tries to stand against the world out of love.
I cannot recommend this book highly enough nor give enough praise to Annie Douglass Lima’s talent as a writer and storyteller. This is a well-written tale with a powerful message within, as well as a cast of characters that are easy to both respect and despise. Looking for a tale appropriate for ALL ages? One that provides a hero with heart? This is it!
I received this copy from the author in exchange for my honest review.
Publisher: Annie Douglass Lima
Publication Date: May 9, 2015
Genre: Dystopian | YA | Abuse
Print Length: 306 pages
Available from: Amazon | Barnes & Noble
For Reviews & More: http://tometender.blogspot.com
February 12, 2022
I went into this expecting a gladiator-fighting-for-survival story, but quickly found out that it had more of a Karate Kid vibe. That wasn't a bad thing, though. I like The Karate Kid. 😁
Although I never really fell in love with the characters, they were fun to root for. And Bensin's relationship with his little sister was pretty adorable.
I was impressed by the amount of detail that went into the slavery system. I wished I could have seen that kind of detail with the rest of the story's world. Aside from their practices of slavery and some of their sports, there wasn't much description of the culture--and any description I got sounded too similar to our world.
Despite that drawback, I'd be interested in seeing where the next book leads.
Although I never really fell in love with the characters, they were fun to root for. And Bensin's relationship with his little sister was pretty adorable.
I was impressed by the amount of detail that went into the slavery system. I wished I could have seen that kind of detail with the rest of the story's world. Aside from their practices of slavery and some of their sports, there wasn't much description of the culture--and any description I got sounded too similar to our world.
Despite that drawback, I'd be interested in seeing where the next book leads.
July 4, 2017
I really enjoyed this book!
The world Lima has created is familiar and easy to settle into. Her characters are clear and believable. She'll have you rooting for Bensin and Ellie from chapter one. The character of Bensin is particularly well done. I love how Lima balanced his maturities and immaturities. Her worldbuilding is intricate and well-crafted. And the plot is smart but believable.
But my favorite part was the emotional intelligence of this book. From the first chapter I knew I was in good hands. She raises some difficult questions through the course of the story and doesn't always give the answer. But Bensin finds his way with the help of some healthy authority figures in his life!
Love the themes of loyalty, truth, and redemption. And I particularly loved the part at the end when Bensin finds his struggles actually help give him victory!!
The world Lima has created is familiar and easy to settle into. Her characters are clear and believable. She'll have you rooting for Bensin and Ellie from chapter one. The character of Bensin is particularly well done. I love how Lima balanced his maturities and immaturities. Her worldbuilding is intricate and well-crafted. And the plot is smart but believable.
But my favorite part was the emotional intelligence of this book. From the first chapter I knew I was in good hands. She raises some difficult questions through the course of the story and doesn't always give the answer. But Bensin finds his way with the help of some healthy authority figures in his life!
Love the themes of loyalty, truth, and redemption. And I particularly loved the part at the end when Bensin finds his struggles actually help give him victory!!
May 1, 2015
Every now and then, my determination to spend most of my time reading and exploring Indie Christian Authors really pays off. Sometimes my love of my brothers and sisters in Christ has to overcome my love of reading really well-written books, but every now and then I don't have to choose. This is one of those times.
PROS:
1) Well written story. There was a simple but discernible plot that hooked in early enough in the story to grasp the reader's attention, then carried through to the end. No derails or switching objectives that sometimes plagues Indie works. There were several sub-plots which were aptly used to spice up the narrative, but there was a clear focus on the main theme throughout.
2) Well paced. This is key because where so many otherwise decent stories fall apart is that they either begin or end in the wrong place, leading to either a draggy or nonsensical opening or ending, OR the pace is so inconsistent as to give one whiplash. Again, Collar and Cavvarach is perfectly balanced in pace, sustaining interest and developing that "can't put it down" feeling while not wearing the reader out trying to rush ahead of itself.
3) Engaging characters. I liked that the protagonist was competent, but due to societal situations was mostly restrained from fully letting loose with his capabilities. This made the MC meek, but not weak. Weakness is a lack of power, but true meekness is power under control, like a thoroughbred in the starting gates just before the race. This made Bensin a very engaging character. I also liked that there were enough side things going on with the other characters to give them depth and flesh them out without detracting from the pacing and storyline.
CONS:
1) Honestly I almost have to invent something to say here. There were minor little niggling things here and there which briefly caught my attention, but I have never read a book without some of these, nor I daresay have I ever written one without them. None of them however is worthy of individual mention nor any deduction whatsoever in the rating of this book.
As another reviewer mentioned, this is a clean, YA adventure book by a Christian author, but it is not an overtly Christian book. There are certainly moral and virtuous themes in the book, but overall it is just a really solid Speculative Fiction piece. I can say without hesitation that this is one of the most enjoyable books I have read recently, and I wholeheartedly recommend it to anyone who enjoys Speculative Fiction. A rare diamond in the sea of Indie rough.
PROS:
1) Well written story. There was a simple but discernible plot that hooked in early enough in the story to grasp the reader's attention, then carried through to the end. No derails or switching objectives that sometimes plagues Indie works. There were several sub-plots which were aptly used to spice up the narrative, but there was a clear focus on the main theme throughout.
2) Well paced. This is key because where so many otherwise decent stories fall apart is that they either begin or end in the wrong place, leading to either a draggy or nonsensical opening or ending, OR the pace is so inconsistent as to give one whiplash. Again, Collar and Cavvarach is perfectly balanced in pace, sustaining interest and developing that "can't put it down" feeling while not wearing the reader out trying to rush ahead of itself.
3) Engaging characters. I liked that the protagonist was competent, but due to societal situations was mostly restrained from fully letting loose with his capabilities. This made the MC meek, but not weak. Weakness is a lack of power, but true meekness is power under control, like a thoroughbred in the starting gates just before the race. This made Bensin a very engaging character. I also liked that there were enough side things going on with the other characters to give them depth and flesh them out without detracting from the pacing and storyline.
CONS:
1) Honestly I almost have to invent something to say here. There were minor little niggling things here and there which briefly caught my attention, but I have never read a book without some of these, nor I daresay have I ever written one without them. None of them however is worthy of individual mention nor any deduction whatsoever in the rating of this book.
As another reviewer mentioned, this is a clean, YA adventure book by a Christian author, but it is not an overtly Christian book. There are certainly moral and virtuous themes in the book, but overall it is just a really solid Speculative Fiction piece. I can say without hesitation that this is one of the most enjoyable books I have read recently, and I wholeheartedly recommend it to anyone who enjoys Speculative Fiction. A rare diamond in the sea of Indie rough.
July 17, 2015
When I first saw this book as part of the author's blog tour, I was instantly intrigued. Set in an alternate world with all of our modern technology, the story follows a young slave named Bensin and his goal to free his younger sister. An escape attempt in the beginning of the book doesn't work out quite as planned and Bensin is sold to a martial arts coach who is down on his luck. Bensin's already had some training in what's known as cavvara shil, (which frankly, was pretty cool) and the coach begins to train him personally with the goal of competing in the Grand Imperial Tournament.
I really liked Bensin and how dedicated he was to his sister. They've both had a pretty tough life but he's willing to stay a slave if it means his sister can be free. I liked the relationship he developed with the Coach and how they gradually opened up to one another. The martial arts tournaments were always exciting to read, and the author did a really good job of describing everything so that you had a pretty good idea of what was going on.
I really enjoyed the book and I'm looking forward to the sequel. Recommended for anyone who likes stories about family, perseverance, and martial arts.
I got this book as a free download in exchange for a review.
I really liked Bensin and how dedicated he was to his sister. They've both had a pretty tough life but he's willing to stay a slave if it means his sister can be free. I liked the relationship he developed with the Coach and how they gradually opened up to one another. The martial arts tournaments were always exciting to read, and the author did a really good job of describing everything so that you had a pretty good idea of what was going on.
I really enjoyed the book and I'm looking forward to the sequel. Recommended for anyone who likes stories about family, perseverance, and martial arts.
I got this book as a free download in exchange for a review.
May 6, 2015
Another great book from Annie Douglass Lima! I read this book in one day because I couldn't wait to see what happened next. This book will make your heart thump, make you laugh, make you cry, and make you buy every book in this series! Themes dealt with in this novel were: love, family, social injustice, loyalty, honesty, bravery, and chivalry. I would highly recommend this book to everyone!
January 27, 2019
There was danger, there was fighting, and there was a heart-warming story about a boy who will do anything to save his little sister.
Annie again makes her characters shine out in a story that made me want to charge grizzly bears with nothing but a stick.
From the ex-wife I wanted to stuff in a gunny sack and toss in the river, to Bensin who I wanted to fight side-by-side with.
A story of heroics. A story of morals. A story about characters who aren't always good or bad. People who have glaring flaws as well as positive traits.
A Watch officer who is kind, a good father, a family man, and fair. But who has no issues with slavery.
A down on his luck coach with strong morals and a belief that slavery is wrong. Who when the chips are down, makes a decision against what he believes in and purchases a slave. His struggle with that choice throughout the book is amazing. I love that it didn't get swept under the rug and no matter how kind he was to Bensin that it doesn't justify slavery or his role as an owner.
A kid who will do anything to free his sister, even if it means lying and betraying the trust of the only person who's shown him kindness and told him that he is just as good as anyone who is free.
Hats off to a great author for delivering another stellar story.
More emotions and memes can be seen in my blog post on this story.
Annie again makes her characters shine out in a story that made me want to charge grizzly bears with nothing but a stick.
From the ex-wife I wanted to stuff in a gunny sack and toss in the river, to Bensin who I wanted to fight side-by-side with.
A story of heroics. A story of morals. A story about characters who aren't always good or bad. People who have glaring flaws as well as positive traits.
A Watch officer who is kind, a good father, a family man, and fair. But who has no issues with slavery.
A down on his luck coach with strong morals and a belief that slavery is wrong. Who when the chips are down, makes a decision against what he believes in and purchases a slave. His struggle with that choice throughout the book is amazing. I love that it didn't get swept under the rug and no matter how kind he was to Bensin that it doesn't justify slavery or his role as an owner.
A kid who will do anything to free his sister, even if it means lying and betraying the trust of the only person who's shown him kindness and told him that he is just as good as anyone who is free.
Hats off to a great author for delivering another stellar story.
More emotions and memes can be seen in my blog post on this story.
October 26, 2017
4.5 stars review to come during the next weeks
March 5, 2018
Sometimes when you really love a book it’s hard to review it. Instead of reviewing it, I went on and devoured the rest of the series (yes it helped I was sick in bed!) and shamelessly begged the author for more *blush*.
This first book is all about a brother who will do anything to get freedom for his sister, even if it means sacrificing everything else that is good in his life and betraying his first kind owner.
This first book is all about a brother who will do anything to get freedom for his sister, even if it means sacrificing everything else that is good in his life and betraying his first kind owner.
February 25, 2017
I've read other books by Annie Douglass Lima, and her insight and writing style once again kept me engaged from beginning to end of "The Collar and the Cavvarach." Writing speculative fiction is an art as an author must create another world that makes sense and one in which you picture yourself walking down the streets in the shoes of the main character.
Young Bensin made a promise to his dying mother. It's a promise that he's committed heart and soul to, regardless of the horrendous punishments that await the slaves of the Krillonian Empire who dare to ignore the rules.
As Americans, we tend to think of slavery as it happened in this country. It's nearly impossible to think of a land where our parents and siblings will be forced to wear a slave collar and submit to the beatings and maltreatment of owners who have total control over their 'property rights.' As I read the book, Bensin took on the persona of a brother who protected me from the neighborhood bullies and one really frightening witch who lived down the street. I felt Bensin's love and devotion from the first chapter for a little sister who was still not wise enough to the ways of the world to understand the real danger for young girls sold into slavery in this land.
The moral lessons in this book and the realization that at the foundation of every life, we are equals, makes this a read that should be in every school library in the nation. The book is a clean read and appropriate for kids 12 & up and adults like me who love a book that engages all of our senses with a story of salvation and redemption. If your sons or daughters are involved in the martial arts, this is a 'must read' novel! You won't be disappointed when you pick up this book and when you're done, you'll race to your keyboard to order the second in the series.
Young Bensin made a promise to his dying mother. It's a promise that he's committed heart and soul to, regardless of the horrendous punishments that await the slaves of the Krillonian Empire who dare to ignore the rules.
As Americans, we tend to think of slavery as it happened in this country. It's nearly impossible to think of a land where our parents and siblings will be forced to wear a slave collar and submit to the beatings and maltreatment of owners who have total control over their 'property rights.' As I read the book, Bensin took on the persona of a brother who protected me from the neighborhood bullies and one really frightening witch who lived down the street. I felt Bensin's love and devotion from the first chapter for a little sister who was still not wise enough to the ways of the world to understand the real danger for young girls sold into slavery in this land.
The moral lessons in this book and the realization that at the foundation of every life, we are equals, makes this a read that should be in every school library in the nation. The book is a clean read and appropriate for kids 12 & up and adults like me who love a book that engages all of our senses with a story of salvation and redemption. If your sons or daughters are involved in the martial arts, this is a 'must read' novel! You won't be disappointed when you pick up this book and when you're done, you'll race to your keyboard to order the second in the series.
March 29, 2019
The concept and setting of this book were intriguing, although the idea of socially-accepted slavery seems so foreign to the modern world that I kept having to slap myself back to "present day." I also really liked the way the time and place were established--as though this could be just about anywhere in the world we know, but without having to calculate how long our society would have taken to evolve into such a state.
I'm not a huge fan of martial arts, but I enjoyed the unique spin that the author put on the invented art of cavvara shil, making it feel enough like a battle to be exciting, but enough like a sport that you're not horrified to see young people engaged in it. :)
That said, I was surprised at the seriousness of some of the themes in the story, especially for a YA audience. I'm not talking about the slavery issue, which is serious enough and could spark some great discussions, but the recurring mentions of marital betrayal (by Coach Steene's ex-wife) and the heavy emphasis on human trafficking (beyond the "legal" slave trade) and unspoken-but-unspeakable things that can happen to young slave girls made me a bit uncomfortable and could easily have been too much for me at a younger age.
I found myself invested in the characters and the story right away and caught myself holding my breath and rooting them on several times during the initial escape attempt, even though I knew they weren't going to make it. That definitely says something for the author's abilities! I really appreciated Bensin's protective instincts and care for his little sister and his later desire to make Coach Steene proud. Ellie was sweet and realistic, and the glimpses we had of Ricky were somehow fun and sad at the same time. Coach Steene was a bit of an enigma; I liked him a lot at first, but I got a bit more ambivalent the more it became obvious that he was ignoring his conscience and convictions and justifying his actions for his own selfish motives. Actually, when his conscience started arguing with him (which was pretty funny, by the way), I had to do a double-take of my own perceptions and realized that I'd somehow overlooked the whole ethical dilemma of his buying Bensin in the first place. Uh, wow, not sure how that happened...
The plot was tense and exciting all the way through, and I appreciated the way things wrapped up.
Overall, a very intriguing and engaging story, even with some of the darker subject matter and character flaws. I'll probably be continuing the series.
3.5 stars
Content--mentions of divorce; veiled references to an affair; mentions of kidnapping and human trafficking; veiled but ominous references to the danger of girls in slavery; children steal and run away (corrected); mentions of whippings; some violence, injuries, and blood (not graphic); people threatened with a gun; invented expressions used in place of cursing
I'm not a huge fan of martial arts, but I enjoyed the unique spin that the author put on the invented art of cavvara shil, making it feel enough like a battle to be exciting, but enough like a sport that you're not horrified to see young people engaged in it. :)
That said, I was surprised at the seriousness of some of the themes in the story, especially for a YA audience. I'm not talking about the slavery issue, which is serious enough and could spark some great discussions, but the recurring mentions of marital betrayal (by Coach Steene's ex-wife) and the heavy emphasis on human trafficking (beyond the "legal" slave trade) and unspoken-but-unspeakable things that can happen to young slave girls made me a bit uncomfortable and could easily have been too much for me at a younger age.
I found myself invested in the characters and the story right away and caught myself holding my breath and rooting them on several times during the initial escape attempt, even though I knew they weren't going to make it. That definitely says something for the author's abilities! I really appreciated Bensin's protective instincts and care for his little sister and his later desire to make Coach Steene proud. Ellie was sweet and realistic, and the glimpses we had of Ricky were somehow fun and sad at the same time. Coach Steene was a bit of an enigma; I liked him a lot at first, but I got a bit more ambivalent the more it became obvious that he was ignoring his conscience and convictions and justifying his actions for his own selfish motives. Actually, when his conscience started arguing with him (which was pretty funny, by the way), I had to do a double-take of my own perceptions and realized that I'd somehow overlooked the whole ethical dilemma of his buying Bensin in the first place. Uh, wow, not sure how that happened...
The plot was tense and exciting all the way through, and I appreciated the way things wrapped up.
Overall, a very intriguing and engaging story, even with some of the darker subject matter and character flaws. I'll probably be continuing the series.
3.5 stars
Content--mentions of divorce; veiled references to an affair; mentions of kidnapping and human trafficking; veiled but ominous references to the danger of girls in slavery; children steal and run away (corrected); mentions of whippings; some violence, injuries, and blood (not graphic); people threatened with a gun; invented expressions used in place of cursing
August 19, 2015
I was excited to receive an advance review copy of Ms. Lima's The Collar and the Cavvarach, and once I began reading I couldn't put it down. The main character, fourteen-year-old Bensin, is a strong and sympathetic character. He's a slave in a modern empire with undertones of Ancient Rome. The collar on the stunning cover is like the one he has to wear. Benson's five-year-old sister does not yet have a collar, though she is also a slave, and his one goal is to free her. He goes to extraordinary measures to try to make that happen, even putting his own life at risk, because he knows the abuse his pretty sister can expect as a slave. The author does a great job of writing about the brutality of this culture without being graphic, so the stakes are extremely high, making the reader more and MORE anxious. This is a MUST read for anyone who likes YA urban fantasy. The way the cavvarach (the hooked sword on the cover) is used in this story, both literally and figuratively, is unforgettable. The other characters, both good guys and bad guys, are three-dimensional and add much to this powerful story of honor and determination against all odds.
May 23, 2016
This is a book that isn't your typical adventure novel. You land in a world modern enough to be recognizable, one that is just like our own in fact-- however there are several interesting twists, one of which is that slavery is legal. Another main part of the book is that there is a martial art called cavvara shil, a mix of fencing and other real martial arts. Basically in this book, Bensin, who is a slave, is trying to use his skills in cavvara shil to win his sister's freedom and fulfill his promise to their mother.
This book captures Bensin's desires and determination in an unpredictable, interesting plot. Not only is this book full of emotion and action, but it also is very well-thought out and detailed. I found this book engaging with a satisfied ending.
This book captures Bensin's desires and determination in an unpredictable, interesting plot. Not only is this book full of emotion and action, but it also is very well-thought out and detailed. I found this book engaging with a satisfied ending.
June 14, 2021
The premise had me at “slave” and “martial artist,” not your everyday combination. And “tournament” promised some good competition and action. I wasn’t disappointed. I read this book within a day, staying up too late for “just one more chapter” until – you know how it goes – there weren’t any more chapters. I wanted to go right back to the beginning and read the whole thing again.
The book begins with 14-year-old Bensin trying to escape slavery with his five-year-old sister, Ellie—maybe not your most unique story problem, but I was intrigued by both the characters and the setting. I wanted to find out more about Bensin’s martial arts skills and the CSF and what’s a cavvarach and why is there formal slavery in what could easily be a modern American city?
I was even more intrigued when I met Steene Mavyins, a martial arts instructor at the local fitness center. Steene’s POV jumps right into several significant but very real problems — a messy divorce, low finances, and competition at work — that hooked me like a cavvarach blade.
The author kept my interest – and won my admiration – with her introduction and development of conflict both between characters (Steene and Markus, Bensin and Jayce) and within characters (Steene’s conscience about slavery, Bensin’s conscience about hiding Ellie). As the story unfolded, I stayed invested in Bensin’s cavvara shil matches, his developing friendship with Steene, his challenging relationship with Officer Shigo, and his plans to win Ellie’s freedom. The stakes kept rising, new problems kept coming up, deadlines kept tightening, and I found myself skimming (which I hate to do) because I wanted to find out what happens. Even the quieter scenes kept the story moving while providing needed respites from the adrenaline rush and angst.
I also really liked the setting. The “slave” part of the premise had me expecting a historical setting, but this book takes place in an alternate right now. A realistic fiction fan at heart, I enjoyed exploring the exoticism of the alternate world (different currency, country names, customs, races) from the security of “my world” (same asphalt parking lots, cell phones, air conditioning, pickup trucks). The author provides enough details to ground the story in a relatable setting without giving info dumps or going overboard. (I loved the cultural terms like “who the slark are you,” “grang you,” and “for the emperor’s sake.” “Beefbarf” made me laugh out loud.)
The slavery system is well thought out and realistically portrayed. I found myself equally fascinated and appalled by this world in which people wear collars like animals, are treated like inanimate property, and call other people owners. Thankfully there are slave rights and legal measures that protect slaves, especially minors -- and not all owners are like Mr. Creghorn. Note: while nothing is shown or explicitly mentioned, it’s implied several times that slavery is worse for girls than for boys. Only one scene, in which a man is asking about a young girl for sale, has dialogue that is clearly suggestive and may trigger a reader with a past of sexual abuse.
I LOVED the cavvara shil, a super cool martial art that seems to combine fencing, kickboxing, and a little bit of wrestling. (I actually Googled it to see if it’s a real thing. It’s not, sadly.) All the details – moves, equipment, classes, tournament schedules – made it seem so real and super cool even to readers like me who can’t tell a roundhouse from a square house. I loved that cavvara shil plays a major role in the story, and not just in the arena. (No spoilers.)
I only have a few, small bones to pick with The Collar and the Cavvarach. While the story structure is strong and the author employs some masterful storytelling techniques, I thought the writing itself to be on the bland side -- few good comparisons or metaphors, descriptions that are mostly vague or cliché, and no turns of phrase that really stood out to me. I didn’t really mind, since the writing is still solid and the story carries itself, I just like a bit more spice in my narrative.
Both Bensin and Ellie’s relationship and Ellie as a character seemed more stereotypical than unique. They have cute moments together, and their characters and their relationship are realistic, but there wasn’t anything that really gave snap to their relationship or made Ellie her own character.
Sometimes the characters provided information in dialogue that didn’t sound natural, and while in one way I didn’t mind the chapter titles, in another way I found them distracting. And I wish the book didn’t end so soon. I knew what happened, but because of the wild ride I’d just been on, I still harbored doubts that said ending could really come true, and I think I would have felt more closure if I’d actually seen the expected events for myself.
But those are small things and not worth complaining about. If you’re looking for a gripping story with sports action, good morals, relatable characters, and alternate reality, I highly recommend The Collar and the Cavvarach. Perfect for fans of sports adventures AND realistic/contemporary fantasy or sci fi.
The book begins with 14-year-old Bensin trying to escape slavery with his five-year-old sister, Ellie—maybe not your most unique story problem, but I was intrigued by both the characters and the setting. I wanted to find out more about Bensin’s martial arts skills and the CSF and what’s a cavvarach and why is there formal slavery in what could easily be a modern American city?
I was even more intrigued when I met Steene Mavyins, a martial arts instructor at the local fitness center. Steene’s POV jumps right into several significant but very real problems — a messy divorce, low finances, and competition at work — that hooked me like a cavvarach blade.
The author kept my interest – and won my admiration – with her introduction and development of conflict both between characters (Steene and Markus, Bensin and Jayce) and within characters (Steene’s conscience about slavery, Bensin’s conscience about hiding Ellie). As the story unfolded, I stayed invested in Bensin’s cavvara shil matches, his developing friendship with Steene, his challenging relationship with Officer Shigo, and his plans to win Ellie’s freedom. The stakes kept rising, new problems kept coming up, deadlines kept tightening, and I found myself skimming (which I hate to do) because I wanted to find out what happens. Even the quieter scenes kept the story moving while providing needed respites from the adrenaline rush and angst.
I also really liked the setting. The “slave” part of the premise had me expecting a historical setting, but this book takes place in an alternate right now. A realistic fiction fan at heart, I enjoyed exploring the exoticism of the alternate world (different currency, country names, customs, races) from the security of “my world” (same asphalt parking lots, cell phones, air conditioning, pickup trucks). The author provides enough details to ground the story in a relatable setting without giving info dumps or going overboard. (I loved the cultural terms like “who the slark are you,” “grang you,” and “for the emperor’s sake.” “Beefbarf” made me laugh out loud.)
The slavery system is well thought out and realistically portrayed. I found myself equally fascinated and appalled by this world in which people wear collars like animals, are treated like inanimate property, and call other people owners. Thankfully there are slave rights and legal measures that protect slaves, especially minors -- and not all owners are like Mr. Creghorn. Note: while nothing is shown or explicitly mentioned, it’s implied several times that slavery is worse for girls than for boys. Only one scene, in which a man is asking about a young girl for sale, has dialogue that is clearly suggestive and may trigger a reader with a past of sexual abuse.
I LOVED the cavvara shil, a super cool martial art that seems to combine fencing, kickboxing, and a little bit of wrestling. (I actually Googled it to see if it’s a real thing. It’s not, sadly.) All the details – moves, equipment, classes, tournament schedules – made it seem so real and super cool even to readers like me who can’t tell a roundhouse from a square house. I loved that cavvara shil plays a major role in the story, and not just in the arena. (No spoilers.)
I only have a few, small bones to pick with The Collar and the Cavvarach. While the story structure is strong and the author employs some masterful storytelling techniques, I thought the writing itself to be on the bland side -- few good comparisons or metaphors, descriptions that are mostly vague or cliché, and no turns of phrase that really stood out to me. I didn’t really mind, since the writing is still solid and the story carries itself, I just like a bit more spice in my narrative.
Both Bensin and Ellie’s relationship and Ellie as a character seemed more stereotypical than unique. They have cute moments together, and their characters and their relationship are realistic, but there wasn’t anything that really gave snap to their relationship or made Ellie her own character.
Sometimes the characters provided information in dialogue that didn’t sound natural, and while in one way I didn’t mind the chapter titles, in another way I found them distracting. And I wish the book didn’t end so soon. I knew what happened, but because of the wild ride I’d just been on, I still harbored doubts that said ending could really come true, and I think I would have felt more closure if I’d actually seen the expected events for myself.
But those are small things and not worth complaining about. If you’re looking for a gripping story with sports action, good morals, relatable characters, and alternate reality, I highly recommend The Collar and the Cavvarach. Perfect for fans of sports adventures AND realistic/contemporary fantasy or sci fi.
February 15, 2018
After only reading 15 pages, I instantly realized this book was going to be a 5 star read. I wished I could give it 6 stars if I could.
The book begins with a pair of paper clippers and a successful escape from a house. Bensin is 14 years old, blond with blue eyes and was born into slavery through no fault of his own or his parents. His ancestral country lost a civil war against invasion from the powerful Krillonian Empire that spans 3 continents (the book reminded me of the brutality seen in that anime Code Geass), and thousands of his people were enslaved as a warning.
Not that history lessons mattered to Bensin at the time. His somewhat ruthless owners are planning on taking his innocent little sister Ellie to have the slave office place her very first metallic collar on her neck, forever branding her as a slave and seemingly impossible to remove without special equipment. His hopes of saving the innocent 5 year old girl from a life of abuse and potential sex slavery were slipping away. He did the only thing any overprotective older sibling could do at the time and it was to escape and send her to a police station under the guise that she is an orphan.
Things don't go very well and both of them are captured by an honest cop named Shigo. While Ellie only gets a warning, Bensin endures another lashing as punishment for a second failed escape. After feeling sorrow for Bensin's good intentions, he reveals to him that his sister's data was set up in the computer system the day she was born and his plan was going to fail anyways.
Devastated that he is going to fail a promise he made to his deceased mother, his owner decides to sell him to a man that is falling under duress. Steene is left nearly penniless from a bitter divorce and wallowing in self pity (not to mention he stepped on a cockroaches among the endless pizza boxes at his new bachelor pad). Horrified that his job gave the employee award of the year and his best martial arts student to his arch rival Markus, he stumbles upon Bensin's classified ad and is stunned that he's skilled in cavvara shil. Curious, he decides to test Bensin's skills in the front lawn and purchases him that very day.
Bensin's life begins to change for the better when he realizes Steene doesn't mistreat him and begins to train him to become a national champion in his beloved sport, but he is depressed that he has been separated from his sister. The clock begins to tick and he needs to make enough money to liberate Ellie before her owners grow tired of her and sell her off.
The book drags you inside this twisted world where an entire nation finds slavery to be both convenient and socially acceptable. People have no qualms that innocent slaves can be framed and given the death penalty. Children are sold to rapists, whipped, mocked and even murdered. Bensin finds the collar dangling on his neck to be inconvenient at times and you can feel his short lived joy when he regains full movement of his neck albeit for a brief moment when the slave office changes the name of his owner on his collar. But he seems to accept this life as depressing as it may seem. Vastly more worrying is the fact that some slaves in the story were born free and due to crimes comitted by their immediate family, they are auctioned themselves.
The story moves at a steady pace and you get to enjoy the personalities of every major character. Some characters are freemen that dislike slavery and would like to improve things in their own little way and we have antagonists that ridicule Bensin such as his arch-nemesis during competitions Jaycee.
The pinnacle of the story kept me reading nonstop until I finished the book almost immediately. It had a fulfilling ending and I will definitely read the sequels very soon. If there is any thing missing in the story, it's the utter lack of romance, but it features a different kind of sibling love that drives the story forward.
Definitely worth your time.
The book begins with a pair of paper clippers and a successful escape from a house. Bensin is 14 years old, blond with blue eyes and was born into slavery through no fault of his own or his parents. His ancestral country lost a civil war against invasion from the powerful Krillonian Empire that spans 3 continents (the book reminded me of the brutality seen in that anime Code Geass), and thousands of his people were enslaved as a warning.
Not that history lessons mattered to Bensin at the time. His somewhat ruthless owners are planning on taking his innocent little sister Ellie to have the slave office place her very first metallic collar on her neck, forever branding her as a slave and seemingly impossible to remove without special equipment. His hopes of saving the innocent 5 year old girl from a life of abuse and potential sex slavery were slipping away. He did the only thing any overprotective older sibling could do at the time and it was to escape and send her to a police station under the guise that she is an orphan.
Things don't go very well and both of them are captured by an honest cop named Shigo. While Ellie only gets a warning, Bensin endures another lashing as punishment for a second failed escape. After feeling sorrow for Bensin's good intentions, he reveals to him that his sister's data was set up in the computer system the day she was born and his plan was going to fail anyways.
Devastated that he is going to fail a promise he made to his deceased mother, his owner decides to sell him to a man that is falling under duress. Steene is left nearly penniless from a bitter divorce and wallowing in self pity (not to mention he stepped on a cockroaches among the endless pizza boxes at his new bachelor pad). Horrified that his job gave the employee award of the year and his best martial arts student to his arch rival Markus, he stumbles upon Bensin's classified ad and is stunned that he's skilled in cavvara shil. Curious, he decides to test Bensin's skills in the front lawn and purchases him that very day.
Bensin's life begins to change for the better when he realizes Steene doesn't mistreat him and begins to train him to become a national champion in his beloved sport, but he is depressed that he has been separated from his sister. The clock begins to tick and he needs to make enough money to liberate Ellie before her owners grow tired of her and sell her off.
The book drags you inside this twisted world where an entire nation finds slavery to be both convenient and socially acceptable. People have no qualms that innocent slaves can be framed and given the death penalty. Children are sold to rapists, whipped, mocked and even murdered. Bensin finds the collar dangling on his neck to be inconvenient at times and you can feel his short lived joy when he regains full movement of his neck albeit for a brief moment when the slave office changes the name of his owner on his collar. But he seems to accept this life as depressing as it may seem. Vastly more worrying is the fact that some slaves in the story were born free and due to crimes comitted by their immediate family, they are auctioned themselves.
The story moves at a steady pace and you get to enjoy the personalities of every major character. Some characters are freemen that dislike slavery and would like to improve things in their own little way and we have antagonists that ridicule Bensin such as his arch-nemesis during competitions Jaycee.
The pinnacle of the story kept me reading nonstop until I finished the book almost immediately. It had a fulfilling ending and I will definitely read the sequels very soon. If there is any thing missing in the story, it's the utter lack of romance, but it features a different kind of sibling love that drives the story forward.
Definitely worth your time.
August 13, 2017
The collar around Bensin's neck announces to all that he is a lowly slave, downtrodden, abused by owners, and sold as those owners see fit. There is no going out in public without a Pass from the owner. Clothing, used or very used, is at the discretion of the owner. Meals are also dictated by them. There are almost more rules than one can count. In fact, there is even a rule book on slaves for these owners.
Bensin's sister, Ellie, is only five years old. They have always been together and he can't imagine a life without her. They are purchased by Mr. and Mrs. Creghorn. Bensin works the yard, runs errands, and does housework. Young Ellie babysits their infant, which she is very good at, keeping Baby Creghorn happy most of the time.
When their mother died, Bensin promised her that he would obtain freedom for Ellie. Slaves are expensive to purchase and it will take years to buy her freedom. So, Bensin hatches a plan to set her free, even though he will still remain a slave. One night, they sneak out of the house, walk a long while, hiding behind cars and in alleys. Still, they are caught by the Watch officers. They're hustled to a station, where punishment is meted out: thirty lashes for being a runaway. At fourteen, Bensin is used to being beaten by Mr. Creghorn, who is as short-tempered as a person can get. On top of his thirty lashes, he knows he will get more by his owner once he returns. Bensin realizes life is about to get even harder, but he knows he can take it if it means freeing Ellie from slavery.
Soon, Bensin discovers that the Cleghorns are selling him and he will no longer see his sister. They are both devastated at the thought, but his owners have run out of patience, dealing with a runaway, and want him gone. He is sold to Steene Mayvins, who coaches cavvara shil skills. Since he has been trained in this sport, Bensin hopes to make money for his new owner by winning matches. This is just the tip of the iceberg in the tale of Bensin and Ellie.
This story caught my interest immediately. Bensin is an engaging character with a strong personality, which must be hidden to survive in this life of slavery. Just when I thought he is an adult in disguise with all the answers, he does some 'kid' thing and I was reminded of his age and the strong spirit within. There is a lot that goes on in each chapter; never was I left with a ho-hum moment. I did find Ellie to be a little overly mature for her age; I have some difficulty seeing a five-year-old carrying an infant or managing to get him into his crib. Also, for being a slave, I thought she was rather unaware of the danger they were in when they tried to make a run for it.
This book is about a youngster learning a life lesson: be patient, persevere, work through your fear, and do your best. Bevin has some struggles, but he always returns to his goal of freeing his sister. Once he is owned by Steene, he becomes even stronger through the adult guidance he receives. As he is coached to physically prepare for competitions and mentally prepare for his adversaries, he becomes an admirable boy that I took pleasure watching become a mature athlete who sometimes made the right choice, and occasionally the wrong. I believe most readers will enjoy this book.
The rating:
Genre & general reading age - YA fantasy, but readers of all ages will appreciate it.
Level of sexuality: None.
Is there graphic language: Very little.
Did I cry? No.
Did I laugh? No.
Is this part of a series? The Krillonian Chronicles book one.
Level of character development - I enjoyed all of the characters, even the ones I thought of as 'bad'. They were very well presented.
I give this book ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ stars.
Bensin's sister, Ellie, is only five years old. They have always been together and he can't imagine a life without her. They are purchased by Mr. and Mrs. Creghorn. Bensin works the yard, runs errands, and does housework. Young Ellie babysits their infant, which she is very good at, keeping Baby Creghorn happy most of the time.
When their mother died, Bensin promised her that he would obtain freedom for Ellie. Slaves are expensive to purchase and it will take years to buy her freedom. So, Bensin hatches a plan to set her free, even though he will still remain a slave. One night, they sneak out of the house, walk a long while, hiding behind cars and in alleys. Still, they are caught by the Watch officers. They're hustled to a station, where punishment is meted out: thirty lashes for being a runaway. At fourteen, Bensin is used to being beaten by Mr. Creghorn, who is as short-tempered as a person can get. On top of his thirty lashes, he knows he will get more by his owner once he returns. Bensin realizes life is about to get even harder, but he knows he can take it if it means freeing Ellie from slavery.
Soon, Bensin discovers that the Cleghorns are selling him and he will no longer see his sister. They are both devastated at the thought, but his owners have run out of patience, dealing with a runaway, and want him gone. He is sold to Steene Mayvins, who coaches cavvara shil skills. Since he has been trained in this sport, Bensin hopes to make money for his new owner by winning matches. This is just the tip of the iceberg in the tale of Bensin and Ellie.
This story caught my interest immediately. Bensin is an engaging character with a strong personality, which must be hidden to survive in this life of slavery. Just when I thought he is an adult in disguise with all the answers, he does some 'kid' thing and I was reminded of his age and the strong spirit within. There is a lot that goes on in each chapter; never was I left with a ho-hum moment. I did find Ellie to be a little overly mature for her age; I have some difficulty seeing a five-year-old carrying an infant or managing to get him into his crib. Also, for being a slave, I thought she was rather unaware of the danger they were in when they tried to make a run for it.
This book is about a youngster learning a life lesson: be patient, persevere, work through your fear, and do your best. Bevin has some struggles, but he always returns to his goal of freeing his sister. Once he is owned by Steene, he becomes even stronger through the adult guidance he receives. As he is coached to physically prepare for competitions and mentally prepare for his adversaries, he becomes an admirable boy that I took pleasure watching become a mature athlete who sometimes made the right choice, and occasionally the wrong. I believe most readers will enjoy this book.
The rating:
Genre & general reading age - YA fantasy, but readers of all ages will appreciate it.
Level of sexuality: None.
Is there graphic language: Very little.
Did I cry? No.
Did I laugh? No.
Is this part of a series? The Krillonian Chronicles book one.
Level of character development - I enjoyed all of the characters, even the ones I thought of as 'bad'. They were very well presented.
I give this book ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ stars.
August 21, 2021
As I often say, I didn’t read the summary for this book before I requested is a review copy or listened. I bring this up here because I feel like the summary somewhat misrepresents what the story is about. While freeing his sister is Bensen’s biggest motivator, the “people closing in on her” is a very minor aspect of the story.
The world doesn’t seem all that different from the United States, possibly other ‘western’ nations. One of the few changes is the legal slavery. I got the distinct impression the made-up kingdom, currency, etc. were used so it wouldn’t seem too similar to any real nation.
The protagonist, Bensin is completely and utterly determined to get what he wants. The fact that he doesn’t give up, not for anything is a trait that I respect. In a world where he’s the underdog and looked down on for being a slave, Bensin never lets that stop him. He makes a name for himself and means the respect of the people around him.
The book ends on a cliffhanger, much to my annoyance. But it didn’t piss me off as much as other books for two reasons. The first was the awesome preview of book 2, which has me excited to listen to it. The second is because it feels like part 2 and not book 2. If you read a few reviews of this book and it sounds like something you’d enjoy, make sure to get both parts. I’ve noticed there’s a part 3 and a novella, but I’ll see how things go with part 2 before I look into obtaining those.
The martial art of the series ‘cavvara shil’ is pretty well fleshed out. I’ve never heard of it but I was seriously starting to wonder if it was a real sport. The combat is very well done and easy to follow, which is what led to me wondering this.
My only other complaint is Bensin and his sister having green eyes, how it’s made note of in the story. Green eyes are rare as hell and not a single other character’s eye color is mentioned, as far as I can remember. I wouldn’t have taken issue with it, but I’ve been reviewing a LOT of books the last couple of months. Authors always seem to point out characters with green eyes, like we’re something exotic. It’s starting to get annoying. I did a search online and found an article talking about this issue, so it’s not just me imagining things either.
The narrator overall does a great job. My only issues with the audiobook are minor. At one point, the audio repeated the same dialogue twice. Which from previous experiences with Audible narration, has nothing to do with the book’s dialogue. The other 2 are a strange echo, likely due to a poor attempt to overlap the dialogue.
I feel this book is worth a read, I enjoyed it and I’m looking forward to at least listening to part 2.
NOTE: This copy was provided to me free of charge as a digital review copy. The opinions stated in this review are mine and mine alone, I was not paid or requested to give this book a certain rating, suggestion, or approval.
The world doesn’t seem all that different from the United States, possibly other ‘western’ nations. One of the few changes is the legal slavery. I got the distinct impression the made-up kingdom, currency, etc. were used so it wouldn’t seem too similar to any real nation.
The protagonist, Bensin is completely and utterly determined to get what he wants. The fact that he doesn’t give up, not for anything is a trait that I respect. In a world where he’s the underdog and looked down on for being a slave, Bensin never lets that stop him. He makes a name for himself and means the respect of the people around him.
The book ends on a cliffhanger, much to my annoyance. But it didn’t piss me off as much as other books for two reasons. The first was the awesome preview of book 2, which has me excited to listen to it. The second is because it feels like part 2 and not book 2. If you read a few reviews of this book and it sounds like something you’d enjoy, make sure to get both parts. I’ve noticed there’s a part 3 and a novella, but I’ll see how things go with part 2 before I look into obtaining those.
The martial art of the series ‘cavvara shil’ is pretty well fleshed out. I’ve never heard of it but I was seriously starting to wonder if it was a real sport. The combat is very well done and easy to follow, which is what led to me wondering this.
My only other complaint is Bensin and his sister having green eyes, how it’s made note of in the story. Green eyes are rare as hell and not a single other character’s eye color is mentioned, as far as I can remember. I wouldn’t have taken issue with it, but I’ve been reviewing a LOT of books the last couple of months. Authors always seem to point out characters with green eyes, like we’re something exotic. It’s starting to get annoying. I did a search online and found an article talking about this issue, so it’s not just me imagining things either.
The narrator overall does a great job. My only issues with the audiobook are minor. At one point, the audio repeated the same dialogue twice. Which from previous experiences with Audible narration, has nothing to do with the book’s dialogue. The other 2 are a strange echo, likely due to a poor attempt to overlap the dialogue.
I feel this book is worth a read, I enjoyed it and I’m looking forward to at least listening to part 2.
NOTE: This copy was provided to me free of charge as a digital review copy. The opinions stated in this review are mine and mine alone, I was not paid or requested to give this book a certain rating, suggestion, or approval.
November 17, 2021
As I often say, I didn’t read the summary for this book before I requested is a review copy or listened. I bring this up here because I feel like the summary somewhat misrepresents what the story is about. While freeing his sister is Bensen’s biggest motivator, the “people closing in on her” is a very minor aspect of the story.
The world doesn’t seem all that different from the United States, possibly other ‘western’ nations. One of the few changes is the legal slavery. I got the distinct impression the made-up kingdom, currency, etc. were used so it wouldn’t seem too similar to any real nation.
The protagonist, Bensin is completely and utterly determined to get what he wants. The fact that he doesn’t give up, not for anything is a trait that I respect. In a world where he’s the underdog and looked down on for being a slave, Bensin never lets that stop him. He makes a name for himself and means the respect of the people around him.
The book ends on a cliffhanger, much to my annoyance. But it didn’t piss me off as much as other books for two reasons. The first was the awesome preview of book 2, which has me excited to listen to it. The second is because it feels like part 2 and not book 2. If you read a few reviews of this book and it sounds like something you’d enjoy, make sure to get both parts. I’ve noticed there’s a part 3 and a novella, but I’ll see how things go with part 2 before I look into obtaining those.
The martial art of the series ‘cavvara shil’ is pretty well fleshed out. I’ve never heard of it but I was seriously starting to wonder if it was a real sport. The combat is very well done and easy to follow, which is what led to me wondering this.
My only other complaint is Bensin and his sister having green eyes, how it’s made note of in the story. Green eyes are rare as hell and not a single other character’s eye color is mentioned, as far as I can remember. I wouldn’t have taken issue with it, but I’ve been reviewing a LOT of books the last couple of months. Authors always seem to point out characters with green eyes, like we’re something exotic. It’s starting to get annoying. I did a search online and found an article talking about this issue, so it’s not just me imagining things either.
The narrator overall does a great job. My only issues with the audiobook are minor. At one point, the audio repeated the same dialogue twice. Which from previous experiences with Audible narration, has nothing to do with the book’s dialogue. The other 2 are a strange echo, likely due to a poor attempt to overlap the dialogue.
I feel this book is worth a read, I enjoyed it and I’m looking forward to at least listening to part 2.
NOTE: This copy was provided to me free of charge as a digital review copy. The opinions stated in this review are mine and mine alone, I was not paid or requested to give this book a certain rating, suggestion, or approval.
The world doesn’t seem all that different from the United States, possibly other ‘western’ nations. One of the few changes is the legal slavery. I got the distinct impression the made-up kingdom, currency, etc. were used so it wouldn’t seem too similar to any real nation.
The protagonist, Bensin is completely and utterly determined to get what he wants. The fact that he doesn’t give up, not for anything is a trait that I respect. In a world where he’s the underdog and looked down on for being a slave, Bensin never lets that stop him. He makes a name for himself and means the respect of the people around him.
The book ends on a cliffhanger, much to my annoyance. But it didn’t piss me off as much as other books for two reasons. The first was the awesome preview of book 2, which has me excited to listen to it. The second is because it feels like part 2 and not book 2. If you read a few reviews of this book and it sounds like something you’d enjoy, make sure to get both parts. I’ve noticed there’s a part 3 and a novella, but I’ll see how things go with part 2 before I look into obtaining those.
The martial art of the series ‘cavvara shil’ is pretty well fleshed out. I’ve never heard of it but I was seriously starting to wonder if it was a real sport. The combat is very well done and easy to follow, which is what led to me wondering this.
My only other complaint is Bensin and his sister having green eyes, how it’s made note of in the story. Green eyes are rare as hell and not a single other character’s eye color is mentioned, as far as I can remember. I wouldn’t have taken issue with it, but I’ve been reviewing a LOT of books the last couple of months. Authors always seem to point out characters with green eyes, like we’re something exotic. It’s starting to get annoying. I did a search online and found an article talking about this issue, so it’s not just me imagining things either.
The narrator overall does a great job. My only issues with the audiobook are minor. At one point, the audio repeated the same dialogue twice. Which from previous experiences with Audible narration, has nothing to do with the book’s dialogue. The other 2 are a strange echo, likely due to a poor attempt to overlap the dialogue.
I feel this book is worth a read, I enjoyed it and I’m looking forward to at least listening to part 2.
NOTE: This copy was provided to me free of charge as a digital review copy. The opinions stated in this review are mine and mine alone, I was not paid or requested to give this book a certain rating, suggestion, or approval.
May 1, 2018
Picture yourself in a world where slavery is as common as union workers, nurses and doctors. Strange world one might think. Most Americans and folks in western culture only know about slavery through history or current media hype. But, envision this world, very much like our present everyday, that has embraced slavery as a way to punish criminals for breaking the law. It doesn’t matter what the color of your skin might be or a particular race you may belong to; commit a crime and get a collar sealed around your neck for a long time,, maybe even the rest of your life. This collar will be your stigma, your everyday reminder that you are less than the average person on the street. The Collar and the Cavvarach is a remarkable story of a young slave known simply as Bensin, and his younger sister. Bensin’s sole purpose is to see his sister free, away from the cruel stigma of the collar. Freedom cost something, that’s a given. What’s the cost? As with anything dealt on the darker side of society, these costs are all subject to those who are willing to pay and those willing to make a deal. Sometimes just running away is the first stage in the race toward freedom. Bensin’s escape from his present owners doesn’t end very well at all. He is captured by the authorities and returned to his owners who have had enough. Bensin is sold. Even though it may appear that things are not turning out well, Bensin’s future as a slave is now in the hands of a man who admires the young slave’s skill at cavvara shil, a martial arts form that he participates in his free time. Yes, believe it or not, slaves are guaranteed some free time according to the law. Cavvara shil is lauded all over the Empire and one can earn a good living at it. Now Bensin can really purchase his sister’s freedom and perhaps even his own. But will Bensin’s past play a role in derailing his freedom trail? Annie Lima Douglass has crafted a remarkable story, about a very brave and motivated young man who will win the reader’s heart as this tale moves with the finesse of a martial arts craftsman at the top of his game. Get the book and read it. You’ll not be disappointed.
August 6, 2024
4.5 stars for the audiobook
The Collar and the Cavvarach is a wonderful tale of a teenage slave boy seeking freedom for his 5-year-old sister. After an attempt at escaping from their current cruel owners, Bensin is put up for sale and eventually separated from his sister. However, he is determined to save her from a lifetime of slavery. As he finds himself owned by a martial arts expert, he begins training for tournaments, hoping to earn enough coin from his wins to buy his sister's freedom.
This is a well-written, nicely paced and exciting book. The characters are fleshed out, well-defined from one another, and easy to fall in love with (or hate, for the nasty ones). I especially loved how Ellie (Bensin's sister) was depicted, such as her actions and speech, for it felt very accurate for a young child, especially considering she has grown up as a slave. I'll also admit that, at times, it was a little difficult to wrap my head around the world that is the empire. As modern as it is, there is a strange - but still intriguing - mix of old and new. Due to this mix, even though there is plenty of world-building, you sometimes find yourself not quite sure how things work. Another small point that threw me slightly was Bensin's 5-year-old sister taking care of a baby. It felt a bit too young, seeing as I have children of the same age. However, it is not something that took away from the enjoyment of this book.
The Collar and the Cavvarach is a heartfelt, dystopian YA book with definite Karate Kid vibes. There are no harsh words or gory violence, so it's suited for both young and old readers. I enjoyed it, and I will definitely check out the next one!
Note: I listened to this book on audio, and there were some minor hiccups (especially at the start) that became a little jarring. But the narrator was otherwise great, putting plenty of emotion into each of the characters.
The Collar and the Cavvarach is a wonderful tale of a teenage slave boy seeking freedom for his 5-year-old sister. After an attempt at escaping from their current cruel owners, Bensin is put up for sale and eventually separated from his sister. However, he is determined to save her from a lifetime of slavery. As he finds himself owned by a martial arts expert, he begins training for tournaments, hoping to earn enough coin from his wins to buy his sister's freedom.
This is a well-written, nicely paced and exciting book. The characters are fleshed out, well-defined from one another, and easy to fall in love with (or hate, for the nasty ones). I especially loved how Ellie (Bensin's sister) was depicted, such as her actions and speech, for it felt very accurate for a young child, especially considering she has grown up as a slave. I'll also admit that, at times, it was a little difficult to wrap my head around the world that is the empire. As modern as it is, there is a strange - but still intriguing - mix of old and new. Due to this mix, even though there is plenty of world-building, you sometimes find yourself not quite sure how things work. Another small point that threw me slightly was Bensin's 5-year-old sister taking care of a baby. It felt a bit too young, seeing as I have children of the same age. However, it is not something that took away from the enjoyment of this book.
The Collar and the Cavvarach is a heartfelt, dystopian YA book with definite Karate Kid vibes. There are no harsh words or gory violence, so it's suited for both young and old readers. I enjoyed it, and I will definitely check out the next one!
Note: I listened to this book on audio, and there were some minor hiccups (especially at the start) that became a little jarring. But the narrator was otherwise great, putting plenty of emotion into each of the characters.
July 30, 2020
4.5/5 Stars The Collar and the Cavvarach by Annie Lima Douglas
Summary:
A teen slave has one goal: free his sister.
- The society is a strange combination of advanced (cars, credit cards) and archaic (institutional slavery, big tournaments around an MMA style sport). There are things like credit cards, yet Bensin gets paid some kind of coin or cash because he gives his new owner the money. It’s a little surprising people would trust slaves enough to turn over their wages. (It’d probably be better to go with an electronic system – world equivalent of Venmo or something.)
- Bensin keeps his kid sister a secret, but that doesn’t make much sense. The fact that he had a sister should be part of his record. It’s mentioned the cop had to work a little to find out the info, but the slave office should have the info and have given it to the new owner.
- Bensin’s plan hinges on Ellie making it to new watch station where they don’t know her… but this world has computers. Standard procedure would probably be to check pictures.
- Book has a teen gladiator vibe to it.
- Great world-building – requires some suspension of disbelief to keep the plot moving, but it’s a familiar yet unique world.
- Most of the book moves at a steady pace, but that picks up near the end. It’s very predictable but highly satisfying.
- His sister is 5.5 but she’s in charge of the baby?
- Book ends abruptly because the last half hour is just a preview of the next book.
- End is good but a little too pat.
Conclusion:
Excellent start to an intriguing series.
Summary:
A teen slave has one goal: free his sister.
- The society is a strange combination of advanced (cars, credit cards) and archaic (institutional slavery, big tournaments around an MMA style sport). There are things like credit cards, yet Bensin gets paid some kind of coin or cash because he gives his new owner the money. It’s a little surprising people would trust slaves enough to turn over their wages. (It’d probably be better to go with an electronic system – world equivalent of Venmo or something.)
- Bensin keeps his kid sister a secret, but that doesn’t make much sense. The fact that he had a sister should be part of his record. It’s mentioned the cop had to work a little to find out the info, but the slave office should have the info and have given it to the new owner.
- Bensin’s plan hinges on Ellie making it to new watch station where they don’t know her… but this world has computers. Standard procedure would probably be to check pictures.
- Book has a teen gladiator vibe to it.
- Great world-building – requires some suspension of disbelief to keep the plot moving, but it’s a familiar yet unique world.
- Most of the book moves at a steady pace, but that picks up near the end. It’s very predictable but highly satisfying.
- His sister is 5.5 but she’s in charge of the baby?
- Book ends abruptly because the last half hour is just a preview of the next book.
- End is good but a little too pat.
Conclusion:
Excellent start to an intriguing series.
September 28, 2021
This was an amazing story. Amazing characters that draw you into the story. It is heart wrenching at times and then will make you furious in the next moment. I don't think the description does the story justice. It is about Bensins desire to save his sister Ellie from a life of slavery but it is also so much more than that.
Bensin & his sister Ellie have always been slaves. So far Bensin has a collar but Ellie does not. Their owners are not very nice, always lashing Bensin & just being mean all the time. Bensin decides that they should try to escape. But they get caught by a watch officer. So his owners decide to sell him. That is where Steene Mavvins enters the life of Bensin & Ellie. Steene buys Bensin because of his amazing cavvara shil abilities thinking he can train the boy to become a champion & also hire him out to make extra money. Bensin soon discovers that Steene is much nicer than his previous owner but still doesn't tell him about Ellie. Steene has never owned a slave before or had children so he has a lot to learn. Bensin works hard & Excells in his cavvara shil. He even makes friends with officer Sheego who arrested him after his attempt to escape. Bensin has one obstacle standing in his way of winning the tournament and that is Jayce. He is a spoiled rich brat who will do anything to stop Bensin from beating him, including cheating.
The narrator did a phenomenal job with all the voices and made the story even better. Very talented. A great story that you will devour immediately. I can't wait for book 2.
Bensin & his sister Ellie have always been slaves. So far Bensin has a collar but Ellie does not. Their owners are not very nice, always lashing Bensin & just being mean all the time. Bensin decides that they should try to escape. But they get caught by a watch officer. So his owners decide to sell him. That is where Steene Mavvins enters the life of Bensin & Ellie. Steene buys Bensin because of his amazing cavvara shil abilities thinking he can train the boy to become a champion & also hire him out to make extra money. Bensin soon discovers that Steene is much nicer than his previous owner but still doesn't tell him about Ellie. Steene has never owned a slave before or had children so he has a lot to learn. Bensin works hard & Excells in his cavvara shil. He even makes friends with officer Sheego who arrested him after his attempt to escape. Bensin has one obstacle standing in his way of winning the tournament and that is Jayce. He is a spoiled rich brat who will do anything to stop Bensin from beating him, including cheating.
The narrator did a phenomenal job with all the voices and made the story even better. Very talented. A great story that you will devour immediately. I can't wait for book 2.
September 17, 2018
The Collar and the Cavvarach is set in a modern day world similar to our own, but the big difference is that slavery is allowed. Families that are free can be made slaves if one of the parents is caught doing something bad enough to warrant it.
Annie Douglass Lima had me on the edge of my seat from chapter one. There is a teenage brother with a little sister who are both slaves and who have only each other. The empire they live in is generally harsh and belittling towards slaves. The brother feels responsible for his unprotected little sister and never forgets the impossible promise he made to their mother on her deathbed - to set his sister free.
The story is very believable. The characters have struggles that you and I can understand and relate to. There are plenty of realistic details that always make sense and fit in well as the story progresses.
Also, if you like martial arts, then you will enjoy all the cavvara shil scenes. When I was reading these scenes, I often pictured the Karate Kid movie from 1984.
What gripped me most about this story was the unjust way of life that the brother and sister were subjected to as slaves. It really made me appreciate my freedom.
I recommend this book for young adults who enjoy alternate reality stories. There is quite a bit of violence in the story, so I don't recommend it for anyone younger than 13.
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Annie Douglass Lima had me on the edge of my seat from chapter one. There is a teenage brother with a little sister who are both slaves and who have only each other. The empire they live in is generally harsh and belittling towards slaves. The brother feels responsible for his unprotected little sister and never forgets the impossible promise he made to their mother on her deathbed - to set his sister free.
The story is very believable. The characters have struggles that you and I can understand and relate to. There are plenty of realistic details that always make sense and fit in well as the story progresses.
Also, if you like martial arts, then you will enjoy all the cavvara shil scenes. When I was reading these scenes, I often pictured the Karate Kid movie from 1984.
What gripped me most about this story was the unjust way of life that the brother and sister were subjected to as slaves. It really made me appreciate my freedom.
I recommend this book for young adults who enjoy alternate reality stories. There is quite a bit of violence in the story, so I don't recommend it for anyone younger than 13.
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September 6, 2022
This was an odd story to me. Sometimes I was in to it and other times it seemed to drag, the same thing happening over and over.
Bensin and his sister Ellie are slaves. At the beginning of the story, Ellie doesn't have her collar yet, she is only five years old. Bensin is in his teens. Bensin promised his mother before she died that he would take care of Ellie, and that means finding her a loving family before a collar makes her a slave forever. Their first escape attempt doesn't work and Bensin is whipped and sold, and Ellie is collared.
Bensin's new owner is a trainer of the sport that he is very good at and he treats Bensin with kindness, something he's never known before - but his first responsibility, in his mind, is to Ellie - he needs to set her free because girls get used in wicked ways when they are slaves. This is where I thought the story kind of bogged down - Bensin is trying to work out how he can save Ellie and also participating in tournaments. He takes on extra jobs on his day off so he can pay for Ellie to have her collar removed illegally, but that is going to take time - and as it turns out, Ellie doesn't have time - someone sleazy wants to buy her and when Bensin hears this while visiting her, he and she run - right into another enemy's clutches.
This is a clean read.
Bensin and his sister Ellie are slaves. At the beginning of the story, Ellie doesn't have her collar yet, she is only five years old. Bensin is in his teens. Bensin promised his mother before she died that he would take care of Ellie, and that means finding her a loving family before a collar makes her a slave forever. Their first escape attempt doesn't work and Bensin is whipped and sold, and Ellie is collared.
Bensin's new owner is a trainer of the sport that he is very good at and he treats Bensin with kindness, something he's never known before - but his first responsibility, in his mind, is to Ellie - he needs to set her free because girls get used in wicked ways when they are slaves. This is where I thought the story kind of bogged down - Bensin is trying to work out how he can save Ellie and also participating in tournaments. He takes on extra jobs on his day off so he can pay for Ellie to have her collar removed illegally, but that is going to take time - and as it turns out, Ellie doesn't have time - someone sleazy wants to buy her and when Bensin hears this while visiting her, he and she run - right into another enemy's clutches.
This is a clean read.
April 23, 2020
You know that feeling when you find your new favorite series? Yeah, that's the best.
I don't know if I have the words to describe just how much I loved "The Collar and the Cavvarach." The concept of a contemporary world with modern technology and a slave system was so interesting, and I loved how easy it was to fall into this world. The writing completely captivated me and held me there even when I was forced to put the book down.
Bensin is one of those characters you love to root for. I wanted everything to work out for him from the first page, and I ached with him when things didn't go his way. Steene was also great character and one whose motives I questioned over and over. There was something complex about his feelings for Bensin. They bordered on a father/son relationship that was constantly overshadowed by their master/slave dynamic, and I just found it so interesting, and I constantly wondered where the plot would take them and if it would make them question the system
This book sets the stage for a sequel, and I'm so excited to learn more about this world, its history, and if something is coming to turn the tables on this system. I have nothing but good things to say about this book and I will definitely be starting the sequel.
I don't know if I have the words to describe just how much I loved "The Collar and the Cavvarach." The concept of a contemporary world with modern technology and a slave system was so interesting, and I loved how easy it was to fall into this world. The writing completely captivated me and held me there even when I was forced to put the book down.
Bensin is one of those characters you love to root for. I wanted everything to work out for him from the first page, and I ached with him when things didn't go his way. Steene was also great character and one whose motives I questioned over and over. There was something complex about his feelings for Bensin. They bordered on a father/son relationship that was constantly overshadowed by their master/slave dynamic, and I just found it so interesting, and I constantly wondered where the plot would take them and if it would make them question the system
This book sets the stage for a sequel, and I'm so excited to learn more about this world, its history, and if something is coming to turn the tables on this system. I have nothing but good things to say about this book and I will definitely be starting the sequel.
August 25, 2024
This is a solid read that'll keep you hooked from start to finish. Set in a world where slavery is the norm, this young adult novel follows Bensin, a teenage slave fighting to free himself and his little sister.
The world-building is pretty impressive. The fictional sport of cavvara shil, a mix of parkour and martial arts, adds a unique flavor to the story. It's not just window dressing either - the sport plays a crucial role in Bensin's journey.
The characters are well-developed and relatable. Bensin's determination and loyalty make him an easy protagonist to root for. His owner, Coach Steene, is particularly well-crafted, showing the complexity of human nature in a morally gray world.
While the pacing is generally good, there are a few spots where the story drags a bit. Some of the training sequences, while important for character development, could have been tightened up.
The book tackles some heavy themes like slavery and human trafficking, but Lima handles them with care. It's thought-provoking without being preachy, which is a tough balance to strike.
All in all, tis is an engaging read that blends action, drama, and social commentary. It's not perfect, but it's definitely worth picking up if you're into YA fiction with a bit of depth.
The world-building is pretty impressive. The fictional sport of cavvara shil, a mix of parkour and martial arts, adds a unique flavor to the story. It's not just window dressing either - the sport plays a crucial role in Bensin's journey.
The characters are well-developed and relatable. Bensin's determination and loyalty make him an easy protagonist to root for. His owner, Coach Steene, is particularly well-crafted, showing the complexity of human nature in a morally gray world.
While the pacing is generally good, there are a few spots where the story drags a bit. Some of the training sequences, while important for character development, could have been tightened up.
The book tackles some heavy themes like slavery and human trafficking, but Lima handles them with care. It's thought-provoking without being preachy, which is a tough balance to strike.
All in all, tis is an engaging read that blends action, drama, and social commentary. It's not perfect, but it's definitely worth picking up if you're into YA fiction with a bit of depth.
May 29, 2022
Here we have a YA Fantasy, set in an imaginary society which is uncomfortably akin to ours but allows slavery. This leads to good thematic material, backed up by subtle and realistic mental conflict in both main characters. The slave is trying to be a good slave, while at the same time plotting to free his sister. The slave owner is trying to be a good owner, although he doesn’t believe in slavery. Angst abounds.
Slave ownership is the biggest part of the conflict, but the story deals with honesty and trust and other themes as well, including the general problem of bringing up a teenager, and an added level about the motivation of athletes. Another conflict deals with the idea that the person isn’t the job. A watch officer can be a human as well. The scene where the slave goes to work for the watch officer is a great revelation of an inner conflict that most of us will never experience.
There is perhaps a bit too much explanatory detail about weather and schedules and the like, but generally, the action moves along nicely.
This is a strong, well-written YA novel with clear action sequences, realistic inner struggles of sympathetic characters, and interesting themes.
Slave ownership is the biggest part of the conflict, but the story deals with honesty and trust and other themes as well, including the general problem of bringing up a teenager, and an added level about the motivation of athletes. Another conflict deals with the idea that the person isn’t the job. A watch officer can be a human as well. The scene where the slave goes to work for the watch officer is a great revelation of an inner conflict that most of us will never experience.
There is perhaps a bit too much explanatory detail about weather and schedules and the like, but generally, the action moves along nicely.
This is a strong, well-written YA novel with clear action sequences, realistic inner struggles of sympathetic characters, and interesting themes.
September 24, 2019
Hello. My name is Kelsey, but most people know me by my website YoungLlama.com. And this is my review.
Ok ok!!!!! Annie Douglass Lima sent me one of her books!!!!!! I had read some of her books last year, but didn’t post this one because it’s not kid-friendly. (And at the time my website was an ONLY kid-friendly website; but now I’m doing teens books too!) “Thank you soooooo much Ms. Annie!!!!!”
Anyways, this book is about a slave who wants to free his sister. It is very sweet and soooooooo good! But there is talk about girl slaves being mistreated. It is mentioned multiple times, but not like inappropriately. It’s just mentioned.
Over all, I LOVE THIS BOOK SOOOOO MUCH!!!! This is a must read, and I highly suggest it too teens! And I am totally buying the rest of the series!!!! “Ms. Annie, you are amazing!!!!! And I love your books!!!!!” -The Young Llama Reader.
Pros
So heartwarming!!!
A very good book for teens
Awesome!!!!!
Cons
Lots of mentions of slaves
Ok ok!!!!! Annie Douglass Lima sent me one of her books!!!!!! I had read some of her books last year, but didn’t post this one because it’s not kid-friendly. (And at the time my website was an ONLY kid-friendly website; but now I’m doing teens books too!) “Thank you soooooo much Ms. Annie!!!!!”
Anyways, this book is about a slave who wants to free his sister. It is very sweet and soooooooo good! But there is talk about girl slaves being mistreated. It is mentioned multiple times, but not like inappropriately. It’s just mentioned.
Over all, I LOVE THIS BOOK SOOOOO MUCH!!!! This is a must read, and I highly suggest it too teens! And I am totally buying the rest of the series!!!! “Ms. Annie, you are amazing!!!!! And I love your books!!!!!” -The Young Llama Reader.
Pros
So heartwarming!!!
A very good book for teens
Awesome!!!!!
Cons
Lots of mentions of slaves
May 15, 2023
When I first got this book I was super 😊 . What is more interesting than a brother having to fight to save his little sister from a life of slavery.
The book proved to be rather exciting as I waited to see how exactly he would rescue his sister.
However, the setting of the book confused me as I continued to read on. It is set in an empire that at first feels historical, but proves to be very modern. The only thing that makes it feel like it is set in the past is that slavery is allowed. It took a while for me to wrap my head around it.
From the description of the book my assumption was that the boy had to fight 'life or death' to safe the sister. Which is contrary to the book as he does martial arts and attends competitions.
Apart from that, the book was enjoyable to read and follow along with the characters lives. My best part was seeing how the boy, though a slave, do many things like win competitions and make friends with free children. 🤩 !!!
The book proved to be rather exciting as I waited to see how exactly he would rescue his sister.
However, the setting of the book confused me as I continued to read on. It is set in an empire that at first feels historical, but proves to be very modern. The only thing that makes it feel like it is set in the past is that slavery is allowed. It took a while for me to wrap my head around it.
From the description of the book my assumption was that the boy had to fight 'life or death' to safe the sister. Which is contrary to the book as he does martial arts and attends competitions.
Apart from that, the book was enjoyable to read and follow along with the characters lives. My best part was seeing how the boy, though a slave, do many things like win competitions and make friends with free children. 🤩 !!!
April 19, 2022
I generally enjoy YA adventure stories, so when I saw this one, I was excited. I’d never read anything from this author, though, so I was also prepared to be disappointed; a genre I like doesn’t always mean a well-written, engaging book. What I didn’t expect was to be staying awake until 1:30 a.m. to finish! I was sucked in from the first page!
There is a strong sports emphasis in this book, which is something I don’t usually care for, but in this book, my attention was glued to the page even for the sports scenes: was Bensin going to win? Would he advance to the next round? Perhaps it was more gripping because there was a LOT more than a trophy at stake! I’m so glad I discovered this trilogy after the books have all been released (I assume – the author called it a trilogy), because I know what I’m going to be doing the rest of this week!
There is a strong sports emphasis in this book, which is something I don’t usually care for, but in this book, my attention was glued to the page even for the sports scenes: was Bensin going to win? Would he advance to the next round? Perhaps it was more gripping because there was a LOT more than a trophy at stake! I’m so glad I discovered this trilogy after the books have all been released (I assume – the author called it a trilogy), because I know what I’m going to be doing the rest of this week!
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