When i heard Quinn was going to be writing another book following on from SOL i was so excited! I have always wanted to find out how characters find parenthood and what happens after the happily ever after. I have loved Quinn's books for years and I really didn't want to give this such a bad review, usually I love every second of these books but this just didn't work for me. I found myself looking at the percentage bar and wondering when it would end.
My biggest problem was that NOTHING HAPPENED, now normally I wouldn't have minded if it meant we got more time with our favorite characters, but when I say nothing happened I mean it. If it was just them living, I wouldn't have minded, but the storyline mentioned in the blurb (I'm trying not to give too many spoilers here so this may not make much sense) about Jaque trying to help Fane by making it like they never met just took up the whole book, so we didn't get much time with Jaque and Fane, Jen and Dec. I know that probably makes no sense but bear with me here. This plot that was keeping us away from watching Jen as a parent and such, was completly pointless. There was no suspense and it added nothing to the overall story. I feel like it could have been done so much better.
okay i give up... WARNING SOME SPOILERS AHEAD (although it's not a huge one and it won't ruin too much)
Before Jaque could make any decisions, The Great Luna interferes and shows her what will happen should she make this decision and I feel that could have been done with some more suspense. Maybe they never met at all so Fane and Decebel and who ever else go feral and the world is destroyed by Mona and the demons, perhaps Volcan finds Sally and the other healers and drains there blood and such, Vasile could have died from the poison at Mate Fest, and with no healer to save him, the Romanian pack now belongs to whatever that Serbian wolf was called.
Or maybe just like in the story, Fane, Costin and Decebel do find them to be with the Coldspring pack, but Jaque and everyone loves them so when Fane and co come and claim them, they despise them and don't mate. Just something more exciting than what did happen. (just my thoughts)
SPOILER OVER
This whole rant probably made no sense and this is just the best way I can put it into words, I just felt the whole thing was pointless and there could have been more suspense, I don't mean there had tp be any huge conflict like in previous books, I mean I liked the idea of seeing them when nothing too bad was happening and i wanted to see them develop as couples, but I just wanted more of SOMETHING than there was.
Although, by this point, anyone reading this book is a true fan of Quinn's books so I'm not saying don't read it, because I know you will, just be warned that it doesn't add anything new to the series and you could probably read the next novella in the series (because I'm sure that I read that there was a next one) without having to have read this.
I feel like this was too negative, I did love this book and I love the characters (especially Costin) and anyone who loves Quinns books will love this, I just personally don't think we saw enough of the characters we love so much and it just wasn't as good as her others. Just don't let my review put you off, this one just didn't work for me but others seem to have really enjoyed it. There were things I enjoyed in this book but I just find it easier to write about the negatives than the possitives.