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The Work of a Moment: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
How is one to distinguish a good, honourable man from one of weak character?
When Elizabeth Bennet slips into a darkened corridor at Netherfield Park, seeking nothing more than fresh air, she stumbles upon a scene she was never meant to Mr Bingley in close conference with a pretty red-haired housemaid. Their hushed exchange and promise to return later, as well as their fervent hope that the truth remain hidden can mean only one thing in Elizabeth’s the genial gentleman courting her beloved Jane is a libertine.
Determined to spare her tender-hearted sister irrevocable heartbreak, Elizabeth sets about quietly separating Jane from the man she is certain will ruin her. She tells herself she leaves nothing behind at Netherfield, certainly not the silent, dark-eyed attentions of his proud and disagreeable friend, which had unsettled her more than she cared to admit. When Caroline Bingley’s letters arrive boasting that her brother is all but engaged to Georgiana Darcy, the rightness of Elizabeth’s interference seems beyond question.
When, months later, Elizabeth finds herself in Kent she meets a very different Mr Darcy. A man whose composure cracks at the sight of her and who offers her an unexpected proposal. In the bruising aftermath of that rejected proposal comes a reluctant confession. Miss Bingley’s letters have rippled farther afield than Elizabeth ever imagined. Elizabeth has been partial, blind, prejudiced and absurd and has spent half a year misreading the only one whose good opinion she truly wishes to keep.
Together and apart, Darcy and Elizabeth must answer the slanders, navigate two formidable aunts and two impossible Bingleys, and discover whether a love forged in misunderstanding and tempered by months of silent longing can claim its hard-won happily ever after.
The Work of a Moment is a variation of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice.
When Elizabeth Bennet slips into a darkened corridor at Netherfield Park, seeking nothing more than fresh air, she stumbles upon a scene she was never meant to Mr Bingley in close conference with a pretty red-haired housemaid. Their hushed exchange and promise to return later, as well as their fervent hope that the truth remain hidden can mean only one thing in Elizabeth’s the genial gentleman courting her beloved Jane is a libertine.
Determined to spare her tender-hearted sister irrevocable heartbreak, Elizabeth sets about quietly separating Jane from the man she is certain will ruin her. She tells herself she leaves nothing behind at Netherfield, certainly not the silent, dark-eyed attentions of his proud and disagreeable friend, which had unsettled her more than she cared to admit. When Caroline Bingley’s letters arrive boasting that her brother is all but engaged to Georgiana Darcy, the rightness of Elizabeth’s interference seems beyond question.
When, months later, Elizabeth finds herself in Kent she meets a very different Mr Darcy. A man whose composure cracks at the sight of her and who offers her an unexpected proposal. In the bruising aftermath of that rejected proposal comes a reluctant confession. Miss Bingley’s letters have rippled farther afield than Elizabeth ever imagined. Elizabeth has been partial, blind, prejudiced and absurd and has spent half a year misreading the only one whose good opinion she truly wishes to keep.
Together and apart, Darcy and Elizabeth must answer the slanders, navigate two formidable aunts and two impossible Bingleys, and discover whether a love forged in misunderstanding and tempered by months of silent longing can claim its hard-won happily ever after.
The Work of a Moment is a variation of Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice.
241 pages, Kindle Edition
Published August 31, 2026
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Jan Ashton
30 books111 followersAuthor and editor of Austenesque novels, lover of history and romance, co-founder of Quills & Quartos Publishing.
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Review of advance copy received from Publisher
Nice spin that examines consequences of the Bingley family's behavior. Bingley is flighty, easily led, and a bit dim-witted here (...making one wonder why Darcy hangs out with him). Darcy never opposes a potential match between his friend and Miss Jane Bennet. If anything, he thinks she might have a steadying influence on him. Meanwhile, Caroline Bingley's letters to Jane when the Netherfield group leaves Hertfordshire have an unintended ripple effect.
At the story's onset, Elizabeth, while staying at Netherfield to nurse her ill sister, overhears a scandalous-sounding conversation between Mr. Bingley and a chambermaid. She later sees them alone together again. It seems that Mr. Darcy is aware of what's going on between the two. Shocked, Elizabeth revises her formerly enthusiastic opinion of Jane's suitor and is barely civil to him through the rest of their stay.
Later, Miss Bingley's cruel letters break Jane's heart; she believes every word. Although Elizabeth isn't convinced of the attachment between Mr. Darcy's young sister and Mr. Bingley, she hopes the man and his sisters never return. She encourages her sister to seek love elsewhere. While visiting her aunt and uncle in Cheapside, Jane innocently shares the news from Caroline's poison pen notes with Mrs. Gardiner's cousin, who happens to be well connected in London Society. Soon the rumor of Georgiana Darcy's engagement to Mr. Bingley is all over London, to Caroline's dismay.
Elizabeth's time in Hunsford, as always, is when things change dramatically between her and Darcy. The marriage proposal scene, however, plays out quite differently. And Charlotte Collins's character is altered just enough that her lack of discretion stirs up a hornet's nest by the name of Lady Catherine. Unfortunately for Elizabeth, Darcy has already headed to London when Mount Catherine erupts.
These and other tweaks add up to a thoroughly entertaining and unpredictable journey for Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy to get to their Happily Ever After. Ms. Ashton keeps the pace appropriately brisk. Characters are well drawn. Dialogue is particularly excellent throughout. If I have a quibble, it's that the established friendship between Bingley and Darcy seems rather unlikely; this story really embellishes his less attractive qualities. Otherwise, it's a great read.
Content is clean.
At the story's onset, Elizabeth, while staying at Netherfield to nurse her ill sister, overhears a scandalous-sounding conversation between Mr. Bingley and a chambermaid. She later sees them alone together again. It seems that Mr. Darcy is aware of what's going on between the two. Shocked, Elizabeth revises her formerly enthusiastic opinion of Jane's suitor and is barely civil to him through the rest of their stay.
Later, Miss Bingley's cruel letters break Jane's heart; she believes every word. Although Elizabeth isn't convinced of the attachment between Mr. Darcy's young sister and Mr. Bingley, she hopes the man and his sisters never return. She encourages her sister to seek love elsewhere. While visiting her aunt and uncle in Cheapside, Jane innocently shares the news from Caroline's poison pen notes with Mrs. Gardiner's cousin, who happens to be well connected in London Society. Soon the rumor of Georgiana Darcy's engagement to Mr. Bingley is all over London, to Caroline's dismay.
Elizabeth's time in Hunsford, as always, is when things change dramatically between her and Darcy. The marriage proposal scene, however, plays out quite differently. And Charlotte Collins's character is altered just enough that her lack of discretion stirs up a hornet's nest by the name of Lady Catherine. Unfortunately for Elizabeth, Darcy has already headed to London when Mount Catherine erupts.
These and other tweaks add up to a thoroughly entertaining and unpredictable journey for Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy to get to their Happily Ever After. Ms. Ashton keeps the pace appropriately brisk. Characters are well drawn. Dialogue is particularly excellent throughout. If I have a quibble, it's that the established friendship between Bingley and Darcy seems rather unlikely; this story really embellishes his less attractive qualities. Otherwise, it's a great read.
Content is clean.
September 3, 2026
Oh, this was good, really good. While at Netherfield, Elizabeth sees something shocking she wasn't supposed to see. It's the catalyst for the rest of the story. She needs to solve problems without consulting with, or confessing to, anyone about anything. and all without raising suspicions. She's understandably mopey about it. Darcy is puzzled about her clear avoidance of him. He sees that something is troubling her, but hasn't a clue what it could be. Months later, at Rosings, he still hasn't correctly read her signals when he tries to propose. Dealing with the real culprit in this scenario brings the two of them together.
The culprit is, of course, Caroline Bingley, who writes her letter to Jane, hinting at a marriage between Charles Bingley and Georgiana. That tidbit of gossip reaches the ears of the ton. Darcy is beyond furious when he learns of it. Bingley is not a likable character in this story. He acts on his whims and seems directionless, not to mention clueless. This may be the first variation I've read in which Darcy approves of Bingley's desire to marry Jane, thinking that she would be a positive influence for him.
The last half of the book involves dealing with the Caroline problem, culminating in a satisfying set down. A further demonstration of the consequences of her actions is delivered in a bonus epilogue.
Excellent writing! And kudos for such well-executed twists to the story.
The culprit is, of course, Caroline Bingley, who writes her letter to Jane, hinting at a marriage between Charles Bingley and Georgiana. That tidbit of gossip reaches the ears of the ton. Darcy is beyond furious when he learns of it. Bingley is not a likable character in this story. He acts on his whims and seems directionless, not to mention clueless. This may be the first variation I've read in which Darcy approves of Bingley's desire to marry Jane, thinking that she would be a positive influence for him.
The last half of the book involves dealing with the Caroline problem, culminating in a satisfying set down. A further demonstration of the consequences of her actions is delivered in a bonus epilogue.
Excellent writing! And kudos for such well-executed twists to the story.
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
While Elizabeth cares for her ill sister at Netherfield she only seeks a moment of solitude but stumbles upon a scene she never thought to witness - Mr Bingley in close conference with a pretty young housemaid. The incident leaves her with the certain belief that the man who is courting her sister is in truth a libertine.
Therefore Elizabeth feels no regret when she and Jane leave Netherfield and she certainly feels not inclined to push her sister in encouraging Mr Bingley to take the next step. When Caroline Bingley’s letter arrives, telling of the growing relationship of her brother and Miss Darcy, Elizabeth is certain to have done the right thing.
Some months later Elizabeth encounters Mr Darcy again in Kent. He seems a changed man - he offers her his hand in marriage while she thought he had only looked to find fault. Elizabeth turns his offer down but when they meet again she asks about Bingley’s conduct and tells him of the letters Miss Bingley wrote to Jane and about the former's belief about the upcoming wedding of Miss Darcy and Mr Bingley. Darcy tells Elizabeth about Bingley but when he learns about the rumours about his sister he is deeply distressed and rushes to London.
Will Darcy return in time to prevent the rumours about his sister from spreading? Has Elizabeth, by telling him about what she observed in Netherfield and what Miss Bingley wrote to Jane, lost his love and regard? Or is there still a chance that Darcy loves her and wants to spend his life with her?
The story was very well written by the author Jan Ashton. I always enjoy her stories very much and was therefore looking forward to reading this one. And I was certainly not disappointed by it.
I really liked that, due to Elizabeth’s changed perception of Bingley, she begins to see others with eyes more open. She can see the good in Darcy (especially in comparison with his friend Bingley) and does not hold many prejudices against him. Therefore, when Darcy makes her an offer of marriage, she is not very harsh in her refusal and soon regrets some of her words. I enjoyed her more open way of seeing the world very much.
I also enjoyed that, in this variation, Darcy is not set against Jane, he tries to persuade Bingley to trust his own judgement and make a decision on his own. Darcy is therefore not to blame for Bingley’s actions.
I also loved Darcy’s protectiveness. First it is only for his sister, but the more he begins to care for Elizabeth, the more his protection also extends to her. I really liked that Elizabeth notices his care and protection for his sister and that her esteem for him is growing as a result.
I didn’t like Charles Bingley in this variation. He is more naive than ever and causes much trouble because of his careless and thoughtless actions. He also lets others, especially his sister, dictate his life and he does not even notice it. As he also does not notice when his attention is unwanted. I was very glad that Jane found another, more worthy, husband in this story.
I also didn’t like Charlotte Collins in this story. Marriage has changed her - but not for the better. I’m quite sure Elizabeth does not want to see her again in her lifetime ;-)
As I already mentioned, Caroline Bingley dictated her brother’s life and also tries to influence Jane so that she also acts the way she, Caroline, wants. Unfortunately for Caroline, not all her plans work the way she wants and, due to her actions to prevent her own ruination, she makes matters worse for all others. I really didn’t like Caroline and I was glad that, in the end, she gets what she deserves.
If you want to know how Elizabeth’s perception of the Netherfield party changes when she thinks that Bingley is a rake, you should read this excellent story.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of the book from the publisher and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Therefore Elizabeth feels no regret when she and Jane leave Netherfield and she certainly feels not inclined to push her sister in encouraging Mr Bingley to take the next step. When Caroline Bingley’s letter arrives, telling of the growing relationship of her brother and Miss Darcy, Elizabeth is certain to have done the right thing.
Some months later Elizabeth encounters Mr Darcy again in Kent. He seems a changed man - he offers her his hand in marriage while she thought he had only looked to find fault. Elizabeth turns his offer down but when they meet again she asks about Bingley’s conduct and tells him of the letters Miss Bingley wrote to Jane and about the former's belief about the upcoming wedding of Miss Darcy and Mr Bingley. Darcy tells Elizabeth about Bingley but when he learns about the rumours about his sister he is deeply distressed and rushes to London.
Will Darcy return in time to prevent the rumours about his sister from spreading? Has Elizabeth, by telling him about what she observed in Netherfield and what Miss Bingley wrote to Jane, lost his love and regard? Or is there still a chance that Darcy loves her and wants to spend his life with her?
The story was very well written by the author Jan Ashton. I always enjoy her stories very much and was therefore looking forward to reading this one. And I was certainly not disappointed by it.
I really liked that, due to Elizabeth’s changed perception of Bingley, she begins to see others with eyes more open. She can see the good in Darcy (especially in comparison with his friend Bingley) and does not hold many prejudices against him. Therefore, when Darcy makes her an offer of marriage, she is not very harsh in her refusal and soon regrets some of her words. I enjoyed her more open way of seeing the world very much.
I also enjoyed that, in this variation, Darcy is not set against Jane, he tries to persuade Bingley to trust his own judgement and make a decision on his own. Darcy is therefore not to blame for Bingley’s actions.
I also loved Darcy’s protectiveness. First it is only for his sister, but the more he begins to care for Elizabeth, the more his protection also extends to her. I really liked that Elizabeth notices his care and protection for his sister and that her esteem for him is growing as a result.
I didn’t like Charles Bingley in this variation. He is more naive than ever and causes much trouble because of his careless and thoughtless actions. He also lets others, especially his sister, dictate his life and he does not even notice it. As he also does not notice when his attention is unwanted. I was very glad that Jane found another, more worthy, husband in this story.
I also didn’t like Charlotte Collins in this story. Marriage has changed her - but not for the better. I’m quite sure Elizabeth does not want to see her again in her lifetime ;-)
As I already mentioned, Caroline Bingley dictated her brother’s life and also tries to influence Jane so that she also acts the way she, Caroline, wants. Unfortunately for Caroline, not all her plans work the way she wants and, due to her actions to prevent her own ruination, she makes matters worse for all others. I really didn’t like Caroline and I was glad that, in the end, she gets what she deserves.
If you want to know how Elizabeth’s perception of the Netherfield party changes when she thinks that Bingley is a rake, you should read this excellent story.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of the book from the publisher and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 25, 2026
4.25*
Oh Elizabeth. What a mix of naivety, surety, stubborness, protectiveness and arrogance in her own discernment while having real moments of self doubt in that discernment. Spot on for her age and I quite like this depiction of her even if at times I didn't like her - she won me over with her sincerity: even though she didn't see that she was manipulative (even with the best of intentions, she was). Darcy is a gem though. And I really like this story, its telling and how the main characters unfolded into 3 dimensional beings - flaws and virtues mixed in. Oh - and did I mention that there was drama? There is drama. Lots of it.
I received a free copy of this book direct from the publisher and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Oh Elizabeth. What a mix of naivety, surety, stubborness, protectiveness and arrogance in her own discernment while having real moments of self doubt in that discernment. Spot on for her age and I quite like this depiction of her even if at times I didn't like her - she won me over with her sincerity: even though she didn't see that she was manipulative (even with the best of intentions, she was). Darcy is a gem though. And I really like this story, its telling and how the main characters unfolded into 3 dimensional beings - flaws and virtues mixed in. Oh - and did I mention that there was drama? There is drama. Lots of it.
I received a free copy of this book direct from the publisher and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 15, 2026
Interesting premise
While nursing Jane at Netherfield, Elizabeth witnesses Mr Bingley meeting a maid secretly, overhears part of their whispered conversation, and draws a conclusion that Bingley dallies with the hired help. She resolves to discourage Jane's growing affection for him. After the Netherfield ball, Caroline Bingley's letter announcing their departure, and implying that Bingley is destined for Darcy's sister inadvertently helps Elizabeth's plans, but it also has far reaching scandalous effects. Darcy, meanwhile, is fighting his strong attraction to Elizabeth, but when he sees her during his visit to Rosings, he declares himself to her. Elizabeth refuses him, but they have a discussion about her issues with his character, and that of his best friend.
I like this author, and the book is well done. I don't, however, like the character of Elizabeth in this version. She's all over the map with her decisions and opinions, is way too impulsive, and constantly contradicts herself. Her decisions to never tell anyone about what she's seen or heard are OOC, IMHO. Why wouldn't she tell Jane about Bingley and the maid? Why wouldn't she tell Darcy about Caroline's letter (until it's almost too late)? I think a better title for this story would have been Presumptions and Riddles, since everyone skirts around facts to the detriment of everyone else.
The book is well written and well edited. Although the story frustrated me, I recommend it.
While nursing Jane at Netherfield, Elizabeth witnesses Mr Bingley meeting a maid secretly, overhears part of their whispered conversation, and draws a conclusion that Bingley dallies with the hired help. She resolves to discourage Jane's growing affection for him. After the Netherfield ball, Caroline Bingley's letter announcing their departure, and implying that Bingley is destined for Darcy's sister inadvertently helps Elizabeth's plans, but it also has far reaching scandalous effects. Darcy, meanwhile, is fighting his strong attraction to Elizabeth, but when he sees her during his visit to Rosings, he declares himself to her. Elizabeth refuses him, but they have a discussion about her issues with his character, and that of his best friend.
I like this author, and the book is well done. I don't, however, like the character of Elizabeth in this version. She's all over the map with her decisions and opinions, is way too impulsive, and constantly contradicts herself. Her decisions to never tell anyone about what she's seen or heard are OOC, IMHO. Why wouldn't she tell Jane about Bingley and the maid? Why wouldn't she tell Darcy about Caroline's letter (until it's almost too late)? I think a better title for this story would have been Presumptions and Riddles, since everyone skirts around facts to the detriment of everyone else.
The book is well written and well edited. Although the story frustrated me, I recommend it.
September 8, 2026
Enjoyed
I enjoyed this book. It was interesting story, but I would have enjoyed it more if I could have read the epilogue. I tried to download to my email address and it wouldn't download. So please next time include the epilogue at the end of the book. That way I won't get upset because I can't read the ending.
I enjoyed this book. It was interesting story, but I would have enjoyed it more if I could have read the epilogue. I tried to download to my email address and it wouldn't download. So please next time include the epilogue at the end of the book. That way I won't get upset because I can't read the ending.
September 7, 2026
Delightful story.
I read P&P variations all the time but rarely take the time to write a review. This book was so well written and enjoyable that I had to write this review. It’s a must read for anyone wanting an enjoyable story.
I read P&P variations all the time but rarely take the time to write a review. This book was so well written and enjoyable that I had to write this review. It’s a must read for anyone wanting an enjoyable story.
September 1, 2026
A cute P&P variation
September 5, 2026
power of inference
What a wonderful variation! I enjoyed seeing how inferences and assumptions directed many events to take different paths. Watching Darcy and Elizabeth actually talk about each of their perspectives was like a door of revelation opening.
What a wonderful variation! I enjoyed seeing how inferences and assumptions directed many events to take different paths. Watching Darcy and Elizabeth actually talk about each of their perspectives was like a door of revelation opening.
September 5, 2026
Spotty
I highly recommend this book. I liked how all villains were handled. It was good to have jane s eyes opened to the bingley siblings.
I highly recommend this book. I liked how all villains were handled. It was good to have jane s eyes opened to the bingley siblings.
September 5, 2026
Worth Reading
Just the right length, well written and edited, and kept my attention. Solid 4 stars.
Just the right length, well written and edited, and kept my attention. Solid 4 stars.
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
“Could a man who lacked steadiness be trusted with the heart of her most beloved sister?” (quote from the book)
Elizabeth Bennet is shocked to find Mr. Bingley in an intimate scene with a maid at Netherfield Park while caring for her sister. Overhearing their furtive conversation, leaves her questioning all the residents at Netherfield and their intentions. Determined to save her sister from such a man, Elizabeth works to remove her from his influence.
“Miss Darcy, wife to Mr Bingley? How could her brother sanction such a thing?” (quote from the book)
Miss Bingley’s letter of leave taking arrives after the Netherfield ball, and her suggestive wording that there is a strong attachment between Mr. Bingley and Miss Darcy surprises both Elizabeth and Jane. It is reinforced by a response to Jane’s letter to Miss Bingley. Fortunately, Elizabeth has asked her Aunt Gardiner to take Jane to London after Christmas to help distract Jane from her disappointment. It will be the contents of these letters that will cause a great deal of upheaval.
It was ‘a work of a moment’ for this clever plot twist to capture my full attention! I had a hard time putting this book down. I needed to know how it would all end. I was not disappointed. Just a few tweaks and so much changed. One of the things I enjoyed most, was Elizabeth and Darcy’s scene at the Hunsford parsonage. I always dread it, but not this time. And like Elizabeth, I was quite upset with Charlotte Collins!
As for Mr Bingley and his sister…well, I will leave that for you to find out!
I highly recommend this well written and unique variation by Ms Ashton!
Elizabeth Bennet is shocked to find Mr. Bingley in an intimate scene with a maid at Netherfield Park while caring for her sister. Overhearing their furtive conversation, leaves her questioning all the residents at Netherfield and their intentions. Determined to save her sister from such a man, Elizabeth works to remove her from his influence.
“Miss Darcy, wife to Mr Bingley? How could her brother sanction such a thing?” (quote from the book)
Miss Bingley’s letter of leave taking arrives after the Netherfield ball, and her suggestive wording that there is a strong attachment between Mr. Bingley and Miss Darcy surprises both Elizabeth and Jane. It is reinforced by a response to Jane’s letter to Miss Bingley. Fortunately, Elizabeth has asked her Aunt Gardiner to take Jane to London after Christmas to help distract Jane from her disappointment. It will be the contents of these letters that will cause a great deal of upheaval.
It was ‘a work of a moment’ for this clever plot twist to capture my full attention! I had a hard time putting this book down. I needed to know how it would all end. I was not disappointed. Just a few tweaks and so much changed. One of the things I enjoyed most, was Elizabeth and Darcy’s scene at the Hunsford parsonage. I always dread it, but not this time. And like Elizabeth, I was quite upset with Charlotte Collins!
As for Mr Bingley and his sister…well, I will leave that for you to find out!
I highly recommend this well written and unique variation by Ms Ashton!
September 1, 2026
One Misunderstanding Changes Everything
The Work of a Moment offers a nice twist on the familiar story. In this version, it is Elizabeth who wants to separate Jane from Bingley. Her efforts to protect Jane feel reasonable and never become overbearing. However, a moment of misunderstanding clouds Elizabeth's view of the men she encounters. One of my favorite lines has her thinking, "What a bewildering group of grumblers, braggarts, rakes, and… whatever Mr. Darcy may be!"
While misunderstandings exist between Elizabeth and Darcy, they are far less extreme than in canon. Elizabeth does not despise him; instead, she is puzzled by him. I liked how the author had her reassess her opinions when presented with new information. She is not stubbornly stuck in her judgments or unwilling to see another side of people.
Darcy is also more open with Elizabeth beginning at Hunsford, which allows them to talk honestly and make genuine efforts to better understand one another.
I read this as an advance reader copy and am voluntarily leaving my review.
What I particularly enjoyed:
* I really liked this portrayal of Elizabeth.
* Darcy was not such a jerk that he had to be knocked to the floor figuratively before making a complete turnaround and becoming lovable.
* Jane, the Bingleys, Wickham, and Charlotte all have interesting storylines. I suggest reading the book to discover more about them.
* The story is sweet and clean.
* My only wish is that the epilogue had been included in the book.
The Work of a Moment offers a nice twist on the familiar story. In this version, it is Elizabeth who wants to separate Jane from Bingley. Her efforts to protect Jane feel reasonable and never become overbearing. However, a moment of misunderstanding clouds Elizabeth's view of the men she encounters. One of my favorite lines has her thinking, "What a bewildering group of grumblers, braggarts, rakes, and… whatever Mr. Darcy may be!"
While misunderstandings exist between Elizabeth and Darcy, they are far less extreme than in canon. Elizabeth does not despise him; instead, she is puzzled by him. I liked how the author had her reassess her opinions when presented with new information. She is not stubbornly stuck in her judgments or unwilling to see another side of people.
Darcy is also more open with Elizabeth beginning at Hunsford, which allows them to talk honestly and make genuine efforts to better understand one another.
I read this as an advance reader copy and am voluntarily leaving my review.
What I particularly enjoyed:
* I really liked this portrayal of Elizabeth.
* Darcy was not such a jerk that he had to be knocked to the floor figuratively before making a complete turnaround and becoming lovable.
* Jane, the Bingleys, Wickham, and Charlotte all have interesting storylines. I suggest reading the book to discover more about them.
* The story is sweet and clean.
* My only wish is that the epilogue had been included in the book.
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
The Bingleys go down in Jan Ashton's new story, The Work of a Moment, and man, do I love a good Caroline Bingley comeuppance! When her letter to Jane Bennet upon leaving Netherfield has serious potential consequences and Mr. Bingley is caught in a careless moment, Darcy and Elizabeth band together to save the reputations of both of their beloved sisters.
I love stories where Darcy and Elizabeth get a lot of page time. There are some creative ways that make familiar scenes feel new, including the Hunsford confession. I really loved the moments between ODC that created introspection and decreased the angst. There is plenty of confusion and miscommunication which served as a major driver of the plot. The scene in Darcy house made it all worth it!
A major strength of the writing was the contrast of stronger and more decisive characters versus Bingley's indecision and Caroline's nonchalance, which stood out and felt more serious in comparison. I wouldn't label this story necessarily as a "bad Bingley" trope because they are not particularly devious. Their behavior just had consequences and I thought it was really well done. I also really enjoyed the multiple POVs throughout the story as it gave insight and emphasis to several characters thoughts, struggles or machinations.
I enjoyed this sweet, low angst P&P variation!
I received a copy for consideration from Quills and Quartos without expectation of a positive review. All thoughts contained here are my own.
I love stories where Darcy and Elizabeth get a lot of page time. There are some creative ways that make familiar scenes feel new, including the Hunsford confession. I really loved the moments between ODC that created introspection and decreased the angst. There is plenty of confusion and miscommunication which served as a major driver of the plot. The scene in Darcy house made it all worth it!
A major strength of the writing was the contrast of stronger and more decisive characters versus Bingley's indecision and Caroline's nonchalance, which stood out and felt more serious in comparison. I wouldn't label this story necessarily as a "bad Bingley" trope because they are not particularly devious. Their behavior just had consequences and I thought it was really well done. I also really enjoyed the multiple POVs throughout the story as it gave insight and emphasis to several characters thoughts, struggles or machinations.
I enjoyed this sweet, low angst P&P variation!
I received a copy for consideration from Quills and Quartos without expectation of a positive review. All thoughts contained here are my own.
September 2, 2026
The perils of jumping to conclusions
Elizabeth Bennet, impetuous? Surely not! This book presents an excellent what-if for familiar characters. In this case we are presented with the consequences of naive Elizabeth Bennet making an innocent but misjudged assumption based on something she thought she saw and heard. This is followed up by her equally naive sister making innocent comment based on the words of the pernicious Caroline Bingley. These two actions set the scene for plenty of chaos and misunderstanding as well as substantial consequences for the Bingleys.
The plot is very well paced and the characters are well formed and authentic. This all makes for a very pleasing reading experience.
Elizabeth Bennet, impetuous? Surely not! This book presents an excellent what-if for familiar characters. In this case we are presented with the consequences of naive Elizabeth Bennet making an innocent but misjudged assumption based on something she thought she saw and heard. This is followed up by her equally naive sister making innocent comment based on the words of the pernicious Caroline Bingley. These two actions set the scene for plenty of chaos and misunderstanding as well as substantial consequences for the Bingleys.
The plot is very well paced and the characters are well formed and authentic. This all makes for a very pleasing reading experience.
September 14, 2026
Some the events that changes by Elizabeth overhearing Bingley were unique, good to read..
but Darcy’s characterization suffered a lot. His pride was forgotten, he leaves without pursuing Elizabeth but somehow all his reservations are forgotten.. Elizabeth goes from being oblivious of Darcys interest and disliking him to suddenly having feelings for him in just a day. The only conversation they had were about Bingleys. Author didn’t actually want to focus on the actual main character or their characterization it seems. Instead, after E&D getting engaged and all actual problems resolved, we get chapters / pages of characters discussing how to set down Miss Bingley..
everything after Darcy proposed felt hurried and underdeveloped.
Interesting premise but not executed well
but Darcy’s characterization suffered a lot. His pride was forgotten, he leaves without pursuing Elizabeth but somehow all his reservations are forgotten.. Elizabeth goes from being oblivious of Darcys interest and disliking him to suddenly having feelings for him in just a day. The only conversation they had were about Bingleys. Author didn’t actually want to focus on the actual main character or their characterization it seems. Instead, after E&D getting engaged and all actual problems resolved, we get chapters / pages of characters discussing how to set down Miss Bingley..
everything after Darcy proposed felt hurried and underdeveloped.
Interesting premise but not executed well
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
Be careful not to judge too quickly
I loved the switch up created by one moment of thoughtlessness. This story grabbed me from the first page. The writing is excellent.
Due to this shift, the tension dynamics are different and the cleverness of continued misunderstandings based on incomplete explanations continue though much of the story - keeping that shift in momentum.
I can't point out any one scene that stood out, and that's because from start to finish everything flows so seamlessly.
Very well done!
I received an advance copy and voluntarily leave my reveiw.
I loved the switch up created by one moment of thoughtlessness. This story grabbed me from the first page. The writing is excellent.
Due to this shift, the tension dynamics are different and the cleverness of continued misunderstandings based on incomplete explanations continue though much of the story - keeping that shift in momentum.
I can't point out any one scene that stood out, and that's because from start to finish everything flows so seamlessly.
Very well done!
I received an advance copy and voluntarily leave my reveiw.
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
The Problem with Eavesdropping
Any fan of Pride and Prejudice is aware of Elizabeth Bennet’s tendency to make judgements based on incomplete information. While staying at Netherfield, she overhears a private conversation between Bingley and a housemaid and immediately assumes the worst. Shocked that she could have been so mistaken in Bingley’s character, Elizabeth becomes determined to protect Jane from what she believes can only result in heartbreak for her sister.
Then, after the Netherfield party departs for London, Caroline’s letters arrive, strongly implying Bingley’s interest in Georgiana. Elizabeth sees this as confirmation that she was right about him all along. Caroline has no idea what those letters will set in motion.
I liked the premise immediately. The opening chapter, with Elizabeth overhearing that conversation, is an excellent beginning, but after that, it took me about half the book to really get into it. The first half felt a little too heavy on the narration and not quite enough dialogue for my taste, along with more canon than I prefer. Jan Ashton writes dialogue very well, so I really missed that in those earlier chapters. I still found myself very interested in where the variation was going, though, and was anxious to see what would happen next.
Once Darcy declares his feelings for Elizabeth, the story began moving in a direction I found more satisfying. Elizabeth is forced to take a hard look at her incorrect assumptions about Bingley when Darcy explains what she did not know. And better still, they begin actually talking to one another, even though Elizabeth is not yet prepared to acknowledge her own feelings for him.
The second half of the book more than rewarded my patience with the first, particularly with more dialogue and character interactions. By the end, misunderstandings were cleared up, and deserving characters had received their comeuppances and made to face the consequences of their actions. The HEA left me closing the book very satisfied.
Recommend.
I received an advance copy of this book from the publisher and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
Any fan of Pride and Prejudice is aware of Elizabeth Bennet’s tendency to make judgements based on incomplete information. While staying at Netherfield, she overhears a private conversation between Bingley and a housemaid and immediately assumes the worst. Shocked that she could have been so mistaken in Bingley’s character, Elizabeth becomes determined to protect Jane from what she believes can only result in heartbreak for her sister.
Then, after the Netherfield party departs for London, Caroline’s letters arrive, strongly implying Bingley’s interest in Georgiana. Elizabeth sees this as confirmation that she was right about him all along. Caroline has no idea what those letters will set in motion.
I liked the premise immediately. The opening chapter, with Elizabeth overhearing that conversation, is an excellent beginning, but after that, it took me about half the book to really get into it. The first half felt a little too heavy on the narration and not quite enough dialogue for my taste, along with more canon than I prefer. Jan Ashton writes dialogue very well, so I really missed that in those earlier chapters. I still found myself very interested in where the variation was going, though, and was anxious to see what would happen next.
Once Darcy declares his feelings for Elizabeth, the story began moving in a direction I found more satisfying. Elizabeth is forced to take a hard look at her incorrect assumptions about Bingley when Darcy explains what she did not know. And better still, they begin actually talking to one another, even though Elizabeth is not yet prepared to acknowledge her own feelings for him.
The second half of the book more than rewarded my patience with the first, particularly with more dialogue and character interactions. By the end, misunderstandings were cleared up, and deserving characters had received their comeuppances and made to face the consequences of their actions. The HEA left me closing the book very satisfied.
Recommend.
I received an advance copy of this book from the publisher and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
September 1, 2026
We always should learn not to make too quick a judgement from a partially overheard conversation or seen situation. We often misjudge, and although that is partially what happened here, it does not hurt our final HEA circumstances, unless you wanted to see Jane with Bingley…which I can happily let go of.
We still have the angst of Lady Catherine, and definitely Miss Bingley, with a bit from Wickham (but not so much - he is actually not a big player in this and is not really believed by Elizabeth.)
Very well written, and enjoyable development. Will joyfully read again.
We still have the angst of Lady Catherine, and definitely Miss Bingley, with a bit from Wickham (but not so much - he is actually not a big player in this and is not really believed by Elizabeth.)
Very well written, and enjoyable development. Will joyfully read again.
October 1, 2026
Very good.
I really enjoyed the story. Lady Cat and Miss Bingley are perfectly obnoxious, Richard is funny and I like the decision Jane made.
The plot was interesting and held my attention throughout. Elizabeth was herself leaping to conclusions.
I also was intrigued with Charlotte’s character and her responses to Mr. Collins.
The ending was good and satisfying.
Truly a good read.
I really enjoyed the story. Lady Cat and Miss Bingley are perfectly obnoxious, Richard is funny and I like the decision Jane made.
The plot was interesting and held my attention throughout. Elizabeth was herself leaping to conclusions.
I also was intrigued with Charlotte’s character and her responses to Mr. Collins.
The ending was good and satisfying.
Truly a good read.
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