I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Together, Separately is Brent Will’s debut novel, and the idea behind it is so enticing: Liam, our main character, finds out he has a secret admirer. It’s a cute, quick read that takes you along on the adventure of Liam discovering himself. And it is fun!
The plot is predictable pretty much the whole way through, so if you’re hoping for a big mystery reveal, that’s not going to happen. Liam is a bit of a “himbo,” and everyone around him seems to know what is going on besides him. That said, the tasks he completes at the advice of his secret admirer are cute, and help him to let loose and discover more about himself along the way. There are some truly endearing scenes throughout the book, such as when Liam needs to make a new friend, or when his best friend Martin needs him. And there are some red herrings that prevent Liam from seeing what is right out front of him, which certainly add interest for the reader.
I feel like some things could have been fleshed out a little better. I would’ve loved to learn more about Liam‘s background. We know such few details: where he works, that he was in a long term relationship, and that he believed he was straight. That’s kind of it. I would’ve liked to read more about his revelation that he might be bisexual, and what it meant for him to realize that. I would’ve also liked to have learned how he and Martin met, and what their relationship was like before the start of this book. We know that they were friends for six years already, but not much else. And Matthew—he ended up adding the most suspense to the novel, but it didn’t really go anywhere. I would’ve loved it if Liam had to confront that obstacle more directly. It would have made up for knowing the ending early on. Sometimes the ride can be more fun than the destination.
I also would’ve liked to see Jeannie and Brad’s reaction—perhaps in the form of an epilogue?
Overall, it was a cute story. I look forward to reading what Brent Wills writes next!