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Most Truly the Gentleman: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
A man of consideration in the world can afford to marry where he pleases… When one has wealth enough for security, the next thing to be sought must be happinessWhen Colonel Fitzwilliam quits the Continent on crutches and accompanies his cousin to Hertfordshire, he arrives determined to enjoy himself—and quite incapable of allowing Fitzwilliam Darcy to brood in a corner while a roomful of charming strangers goes unmet.
The colonel cannot dance. What he can do is talk, and his easy warmth soon draws the truth from the proud master of it is not contempt that fixes Darcy silent in a crowded assembly, but an affliction of the nerves that Elizabeth Bennet recognises at once, for her own father suffers the same. A single honest conversation undoes the insult that ought to have divided them—and that is only the beginning of what the colonel sets right.
With Fitzwilliam at his elbow, Wickham's lies collapse before they can take root, an officious clergyman is gently steered toward a wife who actually wants him, and a scheming sister's poison-pen letter is exposed before it can part Jane from her Bingley. Yet for all the colonel manages, one thing he cannot do for his win the lady himself.
That Darcy must learn to do alone. And a man accustomed to commanding a room by his silence must discover whether he can earn a heart by his conduct.
The colonel cannot dance. What he can do is talk, and his easy warmth soon draws the truth from the proud master of it is not contempt that fixes Darcy silent in a crowded assembly, but an affliction of the nerves that Elizabeth Bennet recognises at once, for her own father suffers the same. A single honest conversation undoes the insult that ought to have divided them—and that is only the beginning of what the colonel sets right.
With Fitzwilliam at his elbow, Wickham's lies collapse before they can take root, an officious clergyman is gently steered toward a wife who actually wants him, and a scheming sister's poison-pen letter is exposed before it can part Jane from her Bingley. Yet for all the colonel manages, one thing he cannot do for his win the lady himself.
That Darcy must learn to do alone. And a man accustomed to commanding a room by his silence must discover whether he can earn a heart by his conduct.
262 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 14, 2026
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September 16, 2026
I do enjoy a good Colonel Fitzwilliam story! His presence at Netherfield certainly makes all the difference here. Rest assured, the book gives Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth the lion's share of attention, but he influences a number of factors in the story surrounding them.
He doesn't have the prideful, haughty outlook of his class-conscious cousin, feeling grateful just to be alive after having been wounded in battle. He is witty and approachable at social gatherings, making him popular immediately at the Meryton Assembly despite being unable to dance. Most relevantly for the Pride and Prejudice plot, his positive attitude means Mr. Bingley isn't the only one at Netherfield who doesn't look down on their neighbors. He's observant enough to recognize that Mr. Collins is gearing up to offer marriage to Elizabeth Bennet and helps Darcy come up with a plan to intervene. And when Colonel Fitzwilliam indicates he's found a lady worth pursuing for himself, Darcy notices how much attention his cousin is paying Miss Elizabeth.
The good colonel certainly doesn't mess around when he finds Wickham in Meryton, either. Unfortunately, his influence doesn't extend to Lydia Bennet, whose immature heedlessness is bound to create a scandal one way or another.
Ms. Reynolds is a capable writer, and she delivers an entertaining story. I felt like it was missing a bit of something that I can't quite put my finger on. I found it pleasant but not compelling reading. But maybe that was just my own headspace during the time I read it...
Content is clean.
I received a free copy and am voluntarily leaving a review
He doesn't have the prideful, haughty outlook of his class-conscious cousin, feeling grateful just to be alive after having been wounded in battle. He is witty and approachable at social gatherings, making him popular immediately at the Meryton Assembly despite being unable to dance. Most relevantly for the Pride and Prejudice plot, his positive attitude means Mr. Bingley isn't the only one at Netherfield who doesn't look down on their neighbors. He's observant enough to recognize that Mr. Collins is gearing up to offer marriage to Elizabeth Bennet and helps Darcy come up with a plan to intervene. And when Colonel Fitzwilliam indicates he's found a lady worth pursuing for himself, Darcy notices how much attention his cousin is paying Miss Elizabeth.
The good colonel certainly doesn't mess around when he finds Wickham in Meryton, either. Unfortunately, his influence doesn't extend to Lydia Bennet, whose immature heedlessness is bound to create a scandal one way or another.
Ms. Reynolds is a capable writer, and she delivers an entertaining story. I felt like it was missing a bit of something that I can't quite put my finger on. I found it pleasant but not compelling reading. But maybe that was just my own headspace during the time I read it...
Content is clean.
I received a free copy and am voluntarily leaving a review
September 24, 2026
A lovely, low-angst story.
Beyond the lovely romances of the three couples featured in the story, I was especially impressed with how the author wrote Mr. Collins and Georgiana. She kept both characters close to canon while avoiding some of the exaggerated, almost cartoonish, portrayals that are often found in P&P variations.
Mr. Collins is not a complete idiot; he makes some sensible comments and decisions along with his admiration for his patroness. I liked him in the story, and his romance with his future wife was believable.
Georgiana is not crippled by shyness and suffering overwhelming regrets for Ramsgate. She’s a young girl still learning her way in society while successfully interacting with other people and forming friendships with Elizabeth and Kitty.
I enjoyed the story. I can easily imagine the story as an audiobook.
Beyond the lovely romances of the three couples featured in the story, I was especially impressed with how the author wrote Mr. Collins and Georgiana. She kept both characters close to canon while avoiding some of the exaggerated, almost cartoonish, portrayals that are often found in P&P variations.
Mr. Collins is not a complete idiot; he makes some sensible comments and decisions along with his admiration for his patroness. I liked him in the story, and his romance with his future wife was believable.
Georgiana is not crippled by shyness and suffering overwhelming regrets for Ramsgate. She’s a young girl still learning her way in society while successfully interacting with other people and forming friendships with Elizabeth and Kitty.
I enjoyed the story. I can easily imagine the story as an audiobook.
September 16, 2026
4.5 rounded up to 5
I liked it! No repetitive internal monologs. Well written. I recommend it.
I liked it! No repetitive internal monologs. Well written. I recommend it.
September 17, 2026
There's no nail-biting adventure or angsty melodrama in this variation. Just a slow account of the events beginning with the gentlemen's arrival at Netherfield. This time, a wounded Colonel Fitzwilliam has arrived with them to add humor, common sense, and good will. He is the fixer, the most perceptive of them, the man with the solutions. Darcy is his usual haughty self, steadfast in his determination to ignore the attraction he feels for Elizabeth because of her status. The colonel, on the other hand, has seen the worst of life and survived it. To Hades with status; life is too short.
Elizabeth seems less perceptive. She begins to realize early on that the first impressions she has formed of several new acquaintances are not entirely accurate. We are spared a lot of misunderstandings as a result. She does, however, perceive that Darcy is uncomfortable in crowds and sensitive to noise. She realized that not all of his behavior was haughtiness; some of it was discomfort.
Lydia must cause drama, although in a different way. Mr. Bennet bestirs himself to deal with it. He's a somewhat different father in this one.
In the end, there are four weddings and no funeral. 4.5 stars
Elizabeth seems less perceptive. She begins to realize early on that the first impressions she has formed of several new acquaintances are not entirely accurate. We are spared a lot of misunderstandings as a result. She does, however, perceive that Darcy is uncomfortable in crowds and sensitive to noise. She realized that not all of his behavior was haughtiness; some of it was discomfort.
Lydia must cause drama, although in a different way. Mr. Bennet bestirs himself to deal with it. He's a somewhat different father in this one.
In the end, there are four weddings and no funeral. 4.5 stars
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
Elizabeth Sees Darcy Differently
Most Truly the Gentleman begins with Colonel Fitzwilliam returning wounded from the Continent. His recovery brings him to Hertfordshire with Darcy, and his outgoing nature changes quite a few things from the start.
Darcy still makes his infamous insult at the Meryton assembly, but Elizabeth soon learns there is more behind his discomfort in company than pride or disdain. He has difficulty with crowds and loud, chaotic places, something she understands because her father suffers from the same affliction. Darcy apologizes early, the insult is put behind them, and instead of the usual misunderstandings, he and Elizabeth gradually become friends.
Colonel Fitzwilliam has a hand in setting quite a few things right early in the story. Wickham’s lies are exposed before they can do much damage, Caroline’s interference with Jane and Bingley does not go according to plan, and even Mr Collins has just a lick more sense than usual and is somewhat more easily managed. Mary will suit him well. Lydia is—well, Lydia.
Other than some changes to events and dialogue, particularly involving Colonel Fitzwilliam early in the book, the story stays pretty close to canon. Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship is basically a slow-burn friends-to-lovers romance after that initial insult and apology. I liked Elizabeth immediately understanding his difficulty with noisy social settings because of her experience with her father, and especially that she never sees it as a weakness.
I enjoyed this and thought it was nicely written, although it was a little heavy on the telling side for me. I also wanted more romance between Darcy and Elizabeth. Their friendship was nice, but I would have liked a little more between them as it turned into love.
There was nothing I disliked about the story, but having enjoyed this author’s other books, this one did not quite stand out for me in the same way.
Most Truly the Gentleman begins with Colonel Fitzwilliam returning wounded from the Continent. His recovery brings him to Hertfordshire with Darcy, and his outgoing nature changes quite a few things from the start.
Darcy still makes his infamous insult at the Meryton assembly, but Elizabeth soon learns there is more behind his discomfort in company than pride or disdain. He has difficulty with crowds and loud, chaotic places, something she understands because her father suffers from the same affliction. Darcy apologizes early, the insult is put behind them, and instead of the usual misunderstandings, he and Elizabeth gradually become friends.
Colonel Fitzwilliam has a hand in setting quite a few things right early in the story. Wickham’s lies are exposed before they can do much damage, Caroline’s interference with Jane and Bingley does not go according to plan, and even Mr Collins has just a lick more sense than usual and is somewhat more easily managed. Mary will suit him well. Lydia is—well, Lydia.
Other than some changes to events and dialogue, particularly involving Colonel Fitzwilliam early in the book, the story stays pretty close to canon. Darcy and Elizabeth’s relationship is basically a slow-burn friends-to-lovers romance after that initial insult and apology. I liked Elizabeth immediately understanding his difficulty with noisy social settings because of her experience with her father, and especially that she never sees it as a weakness.
I enjoyed this and thought it was nicely written, although it was a little heavy on the telling side for me. I also wanted more romance between Darcy and Elizabeth. Their friendship was nice, but I would have liked a little more between them as it turned into love.
There was nothing I disliked about the story, but having enjoyed this author’s other books, this one did not quite stand out for me in the same way.
September 27, 2026
Very nice
Colonel Fitzwilliam is injured in the war seriously enough that he anticipates surrendering his commission. When the Bingleys and Darcy come to Netherfield, he accompanies them. His jovial but steely-eyed presence has far reaching effects on many situations, including Darcy's struggle against his strong attraction to Elizabeth. The colonel has a hand in solving the Wickham issue, in helping Bingley grow a backbone when it comes to his vicious sister, and in redirecting Mr Collins away from Elizabeth, to name a few. But his time spent in Hertfordshire also has some far reaching effects on himself personally.
I like this author. She's an automatic purchase for me. This isn't her best, IMHO, as much of it is very familiar from the original P&P, which makes it a bit bland. Colonel Fitzwilliam is the difference, and I felt that the title could have been "Colonel Fitzwilliam Takes Charge - Sorta Kinda." His forthright manner and views directly affect those around him to also be brave and forthright. There's a lot of romance in the air, but I'm always a bit disappointed when Darcy has to be talked into pursuing Elizabeth over and over again. It puts a damper on the whole idea of a love story for the ages. However, the book is well written and well edited. I recommend it for an interesting tale from a talented storyteller.
Colonel Fitzwilliam is injured in the war seriously enough that he anticipates surrendering his commission. When the Bingleys and Darcy come to Netherfield, he accompanies them. His jovial but steely-eyed presence has far reaching effects on many situations, including Darcy's struggle against his strong attraction to Elizabeth. The colonel has a hand in solving the Wickham issue, in helping Bingley grow a backbone when it comes to his vicious sister, and in redirecting Mr Collins away from Elizabeth, to name a few. But his time spent in Hertfordshire also has some far reaching effects on himself personally.
I like this author. She's an automatic purchase for me. This isn't her best, IMHO, as much of it is very familiar from the original P&P, which makes it a bit bland. Colonel Fitzwilliam is the difference, and I felt that the title could have been "Colonel Fitzwilliam Takes Charge - Sorta Kinda." His forthright manner and views directly affect those around him to also be brave and forthright. There's a lot of romance in the air, but I'm always a bit disappointed when Darcy has to be talked into pursuing Elizabeth over and over again. It puts a damper on the whole idea of a love story for the ages. However, the book is well written and well edited. I recommend it for an interesting tale from a talented storyteller.
September 27, 2026
3.5 stars
I really debated whether to round up or down. I eventually rounded down because while the framework of this tale was well done, the story itself was not. It was a no-angst novel that should have been a novella. This book took far too many days to finish because my mind would wander to other things (such as 30 minutes of Candy Crush) every two pages. I hate to say it, but I will remember nothing from this book. I found no insights to further my appreciation of Austen’s original work. I am sorry to be so harsh, but the story didn’t work for me.
I really debated whether to round up or down. I eventually rounded down because while the framework of this tale was well done, the story itself was not. It was a no-angst novel that should have been a novella. This book took far too many days to finish because my mind would wander to other things (such as 30 minutes of Candy Crush) every two pages. I hate to say it, but I will remember nothing from this book. I found no insights to further my appreciation of Austen’s original work. I am sorry to be so harsh, but the story didn’t work for me.
September 18, 2026
3&1/2 rounded to 4.
September 18, 2026
Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam was wounded in battle and therefore, when his cousin Fitzwilliam Darcy is to stay with Bingley at Netherfield, Colonel Fitzwilliam accompanies his cousin. The Colonel, after staying in bed for far too long, is determined to get to know the neighbourhood and enjoy himself as much as possible. And no brooding cousin of his will destroy his intentions.
But the Colonel is not the only one to soften Darcy’s mood. Darcy is often in a foul mood because he is sensitive to the noise in ballrooms. When Elizabeth recognizes this because her father has the same affliction, Darcy and Elizabeth soon form a friendship. But Darcy is not sure if he wants the friendship to become more.
With a little scheming the Colonel changes many situations for the better and eases Darcy’s way into Hertfordshire's society. But there is one thing that even the Colonel is not capable of doing for his cousin - winning the heart of his love interest.
Will Darcy even admit his feelings for Elizabeth? Will he try to win her heart or will he hide behind his duties? And does Elizabeth return his feelings?
The story was very well written by the author Frances Reynolds. I have read many of her books and enjoyed them very much. This one was no exception. I enjoyed her style of writing very much.
Colonel Fitzwilliam is one of the main characters in this story and I enjoyed his presence in Meryton so very much. His presence alone causes so many minor changes and improvements. Due to his being at the Meryton Assembly, too, Darcy is much more agreeable and does not insult Elizabeth - giving them a better start for their relationship. The Colonel is also very perceptive. He does not only recognize his cousin’s interest in Elizabeth, he also recognizes some things before they can become disagreeable. He is also able to deal with Wickham before the latter has the opportunity to spread lies about Darcy. Don’t get me wrong, the Colonel is not a superhero, but a bit of a voice of reason and a means to let Darcy feel more at ease. And I like that the Colonel’s presence alone makes things so much easier for Darcy.
A bonus for me was that the Colonel also finds his happiness in Hertfordshire. I will not tell more to not spoil the story but I like the development of his life after his injury.
Due to the Colonel’s presence Darcy does not act too foolishly at the Meryton Assembly and he and Elizabeth have a lovely start for their relationship. I like that they can both secretly admit their attraction to the other. They do not instantly have a relationship but they become friends, their acquaintances can develop and they can get to know each other better. I like this natural progression and that time can work its magic on them without them being prejudiced.
Another development I really liked was that Mr Bennet was firm with his youngest daughter. He finally checked her and her flirting. This prevented her from ruining the family and, nearly more importantly, gave the other girls the opportunity to show themselves to advantage. I especially liked the way Kitty developed after separating her from Lydia. She became such a lovely girl and I loved her friendship with Georgiana. I can imagine that they both can learn from each other and improve themselves by doing so.
There are some villains in the book, but all do not have much time to shine or cause harm. They are all dealt with swiftly and the only thing that now stands in Darcy and Elizabeth’s way is Darcy’s indecisiveness. He first needs to find out what he wants in life and if he wants to have Elizabeth as a part of it.
If you like to know how Colonel Fitzwilliam’s being part of the Netherfield party can change Darcy's perception of Hertfordshire and its inhabitants you should read this excellent variation.
I highly recommend it
But the Colonel is not the only one to soften Darcy’s mood. Darcy is often in a foul mood because he is sensitive to the noise in ballrooms. When Elizabeth recognizes this because her father has the same affliction, Darcy and Elizabeth soon form a friendship. But Darcy is not sure if he wants the friendship to become more.
With a little scheming the Colonel changes many situations for the better and eases Darcy’s way into Hertfordshire's society. But there is one thing that even the Colonel is not capable of doing for his cousin - winning the heart of his love interest.
Will Darcy even admit his feelings for Elizabeth? Will he try to win her heart or will he hide behind his duties? And does Elizabeth return his feelings?
The story was very well written by the author Frances Reynolds. I have read many of her books and enjoyed them very much. This one was no exception. I enjoyed her style of writing very much.
Colonel Fitzwilliam is one of the main characters in this story and I enjoyed his presence in Meryton so very much. His presence alone causes so many minor changes and improvements. Due to his being at the Meryton Assembly, too, Darcy is much more agreeable and does not insult Elizabeth - giving them a better start for their relationship. The Colonel is also very perceptive. He does not only recognize his cousin’s interest in Elizabeth, he also recognizes some things before they can become disagreeable. He is also able to deal with Wickham before the latter has the opportunity to spread lies about Darcy. Don’t get me wrong, the Colonel is not a superhero, but a bit of a voice of reason and a means to let Darcy feel more at ease. And I like that the Colonel’s presence alone makes things so much easier for Darcy.
A bonus for me was that the Colonel also finds his happiness in Hertfordshire. I will not tell more to not spoil the story but I like the development of his life after his injury.
Due to the Colonel’s presence Darcy does not act too foolishly at the Meryton Assembly and he and Elizabeth have a lovely start for their relationship. I like that they can both secretly admit their attraction to the other. They do not instantly have a relationship but they become friends, their acquaintances can develop and they can get to know each other better. I like this natural progression and that time can work its magic on them without them being prejudiced.
Another development I really liked was that Mr Bennet was firm with his youngest daughter. He finally checked her and her flirting. This prevented her from ruining the family and, nearly more importantly, gave the other girls the opportunity to show themselves to advantage. I especially liked the way Kitty developed after separating her from Lydia. She became such a lovely girl and I loved her friendship with Georgiana. I can imagine that they both can learn from each other and improve themselves by doing so.
There are some villains in the book, but all do not have much time to shine or cause harm. They are all dealt with swiftly and the only thing that now stands in Darcy and Elizabeth’s way is Darcy’s indecisiveness. He first needs to find out what he wants in life and if he wants to have Elizabeth as a part of it.
If you like to know how Colonel Fitzwilliam’s being part of the Netherfield party can change Darcy's perception of Hertfordshire and its inhabitants you should read this excellent variation.
I highly recommend it
September 15, 2026
Four Charming Romances and a Wonderfully Human Darcy
Most Truly the Gentleman asks an intriguing question: what would happen if Darcy discovered that the young ladies and matchmaking mothers of Meryton were not pursuing him and that the real reason was much less flattering? With the help of an injured Colonel Fitzwilliam, he learns that the townspeople consider him proud, disagreeable, and above their company.
It takes Elizabeth some time to see beyond Darcy's carefully constructed mask. When she does, she recognizes something familiar. She sees similarities between Darcy's aloofness and her father's tendency to retreat to his study. Rather than viewing their behavior as pride or indolence, she comes to understand it as a condition both men struggle to manage. As Darcy explains, “the babble of so many voices made his head spin and turned his thoughts into slippery, elusive things.”
Elizabeth's compassion leads her to offer practical advice on navigating social gatherings. One of my favorite moments was her observation that “the dining room did not collect sound like a dragon hoarding gold.” Their growing understanding of one another forms the foundation of a gentle and believable romance.
While Darcy and Elizabeth are at the heart of the story, Colonel Fitzwilliam and Charlotte Lucas are the quiet engines that keep it moving. Their actions and influence help bring people together, spark new understandings, and set several romances on their course. The author weaves these relationships together beautifully, giving readers not only Darcy and Elizabeth's sweet romance but three additional couples to cheer for as well. The result is a clean, sweet, low-angst read that left me smiling.
I received an advanced reader copy and am sharing my honest opinion. This one has earned a place in my re-read collection for when I want a sweet, gentle story.
Most Truly the Gentleman asks an intriguing question: what would happen if Darcy discovered that the young ladies and matchmaking mothers of Meryton were not pursuing him and that the real reason was much less flattering? With the help of an injured Colonel Fitzwilliam, he learns that the townspeople consider him proud, disagreeable, and above their company.
It takes Elizabeth some time to see beyond Darcy's carefully constructed mask. When she does, she recognizes something familiar. She sees similarities between Darcy's aloofness and her father's tendency to retreat to his study. Rather than viewing their behavior as pride or indolence, she comes to understand it as a condition both men struggle to manage. As Darcy explains, “the babble of so many voices made his head spin and turned his thoughts into slippery, elusive things.”
Elizabeth's compassion leads her to offer practical advice on navigating social gatherings. One of my favorite moments was her observation that “the dining room did not collect sound like a dragon hoarding gold.” Their growing understanding of one another forms the foundation of a gentle and believable romance.
While Darcy and Elizabeth are at the heart of the story, Colonel Fitzwilliam and Charlotte Lucas are the quiet engines that keep it moving. Their actions and influence help bring people together, spark new understandings, and set several romances on their course. The author weaves these relationships together beautifully, giving readers not only Darcy and Elizabeth's sweet romance but three additional couples to cheer for as well. The result is a clean, sweet, low-angst read that left me smiling.
I received an advanced reader copy and am sharing my honest opinion. This one has earned a place in my re-read collection for when I want a sweet, gentle story.
September 17, 2026
The one where Colonel Fitzwilliam makes all the difference.
In this "what if" Pride and Prejudice variation, the good colonel convalesces at his cousin's, who brings him along on his sojourn to Meryton. His presence provides slight changes to canon, and helps several couples find their happily ever after faster or in different ways than the original.
Surprisingly, the title actually doesn't refer to the colonel, but Mr Darcy, who felt a tad underwhelming in this story. There is no real clash between him and Elizabeth Bennet other than the insult at the assembly. What results is a friendship of sorts. Without any real tension between the two, it takes nearly three quarters of the story for the romance to begin. Take slow burn at its word.
But many of the little tweaks were delightful, including Lydia's comeuppance and Mr Bennet's attention. I liked the relationship between Mr Bennet and all the story's suitors, and I rather enjoyed this Mr Collins.
The first half of the story leans heavily into storytelling and recounting canon activities, so the fresh part of the story began about half way through. There is really zero angst. If you were looking for a great first JAFF story, this might be the one for you. Seasoned niche readers may find it a bit wanting, if not still delightful.
I received a copy for consideration from Quills and Quartos without the expectation of a positive review.
In this "what if" Pride and Prejudice variation, the good colonel convalesces at his cousin's, who brings him along on his sojourn to Meryton. His presence provides slight changes to canon, and helps several couples find their happily ever after faster or in different ways than the original.
Surprisingly, the title actually doesn't refer to the colonel, but Mr Darcy, who felt a tad underwhelming in this story. There is no real clash between him and Elizabeth Bennet other than the insult at the assembly. What results is a friendship of sorts. Without any real tension between the two, it takes nearly three quarters of the story for the romance to begin. Take slow burn at its word.
But many of the little tweaks were delightful, including Lydia's comeuppance and Mr Bennet's attention. I liked the relationship between Mr Bennet and all the story's suitors, and I rather enjoyed this Mr Collins.
The first half of the story leans heavily into storytelling and recounting canon activities, so the fresh part of the story began about half way through. There is really zero angst. If you were looking for a great first JAFF story, this might be the one for you. Seasoned niche readers may find it a bit wanting, if not still delightful.
I received a copy for consideration from Quills and Quartos without the expectation of a positive review.
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
“He had brushed up against death before, but this time he had stared it in the face and felt its cold breath against his cheek…He was giddy with life and with an unexpected alteration to his future prospects.” (quote from the book)
Colonel Richard Fitwilliam has returned from the war injured. He joins Mr. Bingley and his family along with Mr. Darcy at Netherfield Park. The camaraderie between the three men is delightful. What is even more delightful is Colonel Fitzwilliam’s perspective and how he interacts with the denizens of Longbourn and Meryton in general as well as opening the eyes of his taciturn cousin.
“When one has wealth enough for security, the next thing to be sought must be happiness.” (quote from the book)
I was quite beguiled by the colonel and found having him present turned the tide on many points in canon. He provided insight and gentle persuasion that helps not only Bingley and Darcy, but certain characters within the story. But there is one character no one seemed able to get through to…Lydia Bennet.
As always, I enjoyed this latest variation from Ms Reynolds. She is a great favourite of mine. This was a gentle read with many happily-ever-afters and the ‘villains’ dealt with satisfactorily. I highly recommend it! Kudos on the cover art as well!
Colonel Richard Fitwilliam has returned from the war injured. He joins Mr. Bingley and his family along with Mr. Darcy at Netherfield Park. The camaraderie between the three men is delightful. What is even more delightful is Colonel Fitzwilliam’s perspective and how he interacts with the denizens of Longbourn and Meryton in general as well as opening the eyes of his taciturn cousin.
“When one has wealth enough for security, the next thing to be sought must be happiness.” (quote from the book)
I was quite beguiled by the colonel and found having him present turned the tide on many points in canon. He provided insight and gentle persuasion that helps not only Bingley and Darcy, but certain characters within the story. But there is one character no one seemed able to get through to…Lydia Bennet.
As always, I enjoyed this latest variation from Ms Reynolds. She is a great favourite of mine. This was a gentle read with many happily-ever-afters and the ‘villains’ dealt with satisfactorily. I highly recommend it! Kudos on the cover art as well!
September 15, 2026
4.5*
Colonel Fitzwilliam steps out from his cousin's shadow and is the hero of this variation. After being invalided out of the army he has returned home and is determined to enjoy his life to the full. He is equally determined to see that his friends, both old and new, experience the same and does all in his power to facilitate this.
The character of the colonel is well written being extremely likeable but not too soft. The action all takes place over the course of about three months from the arrival of the Netherfield party, including the colonel.
The author has clearly done her research and understands the period in which she writes very well. Her understanding of life and behaviours is always sympathetic in her work. For example her understanding of the value of money in the early 1800s is excellent and this is an area in which many authors fall foul.
I thought the novel Lydia situation has very well handled.
Colonel Fitzwilliam steps out from his cousin's shadow and is the hero of this variation. After being invalided out of the army he has returned home and is determined to enjoy his life to the full. He is equally determined to see that his friends, both old and new, experience the same and does all in his power to facilitate this.
The character of the colonel is well written being extremely likeable but not too soft. The action all takes place over the course of about three months from the arrival of the Netherfield party, including the colonel.
The author has clearly done her research and understands the period in which she writes very well. Her understanding of life and behaviours is always sympathetic in her work. For example her understanding of the value of money in the early 1800s is excellent and this is an area in which many authors fall foul.
I thought the novel Lydia situation has very well handled.
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
I'd love this Col. Fitzwilliam for my brother
This was a predominantly Colonel Fitzwilliam story with an ensamble cast to round it out. We do get a bit of our dear couple, but that doesn't really begin to happen until the second halfish. It was also kind of lacklustre. Darcy starts with his-She is beneath me- and Elizabeth doesn't even call him a friend until closer to the end. Ergo, their story arc is short and quick.
What we do have is great chemistry between all the male characters and a Lydia who just won't learn a lesson.
This is a great story with a strong Col. Fitzwilliam and a varied list of canon and new characters with more significance.
I received an advance copy and voluntarily leave my review.
This was a predominantly Colonel Fitzwilliam story with an ensamble cast to round it out. We do get a bit of our dear couple, but that doesn't really begin to happen until the second halfish. It was also kind of lacklustre. Darcy starts with his-She is beneath me- and Elizabeth doesn't even call him a friend until closer to the end. Ergo, their story arc is short and quick.
What we do have is great chemistry between all the male characters and a Lydia who just won't learn a lesson.
This is a great story with a strong Col. Fitzwilliam and a varied list of canon and new characters with more significance.
I received an advance copy and voluntarily leave my review.
September 23, 2026
I greatly enjoyed this book! As another reviewer pointed out, there is no nail-biting adventure or super-angsty melodrama, and yet it kept my attention throughout. I had a hard time putting it aside because it was so well-written and interesting.
Colonel Fitzwilliam was great in this story, and his presence at Netherfield improved the overall situation, especially for Elizabeth and Darcy. I liked how Elizabeth recognized Darcy's difficulties with noisy situations and helped him with that. And although Mr. Collins was perhaps not quite as ridiculous in this story, I was glad to see the eventual pairings. Lydia was such a brat; I was glad to see Mr. Bennet finally become firm with her. It was too little too late, but it didn't quite matter in the end.
Colonel Fitzwilliam was great in this story, and his presence at Netherfield improved the overall situation, especially for Elizabeth and Darcy. I liked how Elizabeth recognized Darcy's difficulties with noisy situations and helped him with that. And although Mr. Collins was perhaps not quite as ridiculous in this story, I was glad to see the eventual pairings. Lydia was such a brat; I was glad to see Mr. Bennet finally become firm with her. It was too little too late, but it didn't quite matter in the end.
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
This is a very good rendition of our beloved Pride and Prejudice story that includes our Colonel. The story starts with his being wounded and his family going to check on him. Love he has a Great Aunt whom is a bit sassy.
The men, including the Colonel whom cannot dance at present due to his wound, go to the Assembly and the famous insult is present.
This is a nice variation that is just altered enough to be entertaining, with minor angst and the antagonist taken care of. Received an advance copy and am writing a review voluntarily.
Enjoyed.
The men, including the Colonel whom cannot dance at present due to his wound, go to the Assembly and the famous insult is present.
This is a nice variation that is just altered enough to be entertaining, with minor angst and the antagonist taken care of. Received an advance copy and am writing a review voluntarily.
Enjoyed.
September 15, 2026
Gentle HEAs for Favorite Characters
Sweet, low angst story. Love the rewards given to a worthy Richard Fitzwilliam and a actions of a stronger Charles Bingley. Typical antagonists dealt with appropriately and early. Little "on screen time" for Lady C, selfish Matlocks, and arrogant Caroline (refreshing). Darcy acknowledges his social limitations (may be a bit neurodivergent?). Mr Bennet acts responsibly and controls family A calming change. Clean.
Sweet, low angst story. Love the rewards given to a worthy Richard Fitzwilliam and a actions of a stronger Charles Bingley. Typical antagonists dealt with appropriately and early. Little "on screen time" for Lady C, selfish Matlocks, and arrogant Caroline (refreshing). Darcy acknowledges his social limitations (may be a bit neurodivergent?). Mr Bennet acts responsibly and controls family A calming change. Clean.
September 15, 2026
Simply lovely
I just loved this story.
It is just a quiet story. Nothing really bad. I love the added characters .
I was wishing that it would go on when I got to the end.
I've purchased this for my permanent library, and eventually will get a paper copy of it for my JAFF shelves.
I just loved this story.
It is just a quiet story. Nothing really bad. I love the added characters .
I was wishing that it would go on when I got to the end.
I've purchased this for my permanent library, and eventually will get a paper copy of it for my JAFF shelves.
September 16, 2026
A lovely quiet romance
A quietly sweet retelling of the beginnings of P&P, with the Colonel guiding many changes. Influenced by his own appreciation for life, he finds ways to improve several people and their results, including Darcy, Wickham, Lydia, and Mr. Collins. Low angst, nice writing, and a happy ending.
A quietly sweet retelling of the beginnings of P&P, with the Colonel guiding many changes. Influenced by his own appreciation for life, he finds ways to improve several people and their results, including Darcy, Wickham, Lydia, and Mr. Collins. Low angst, nice writing, and a happy ending.
September 19, 2026
A respectable 3 stars for the low angst, slow paced storyline.
5 stars for the witty passages and insightful observations on the characters dotted throughout. I particularly liked Lydia and Mrs Bennet’s insistence that Mr Bennet’s punishment would be forgot by the Netherfield ball, Lizzy’s fear they were correct, and the resulting scene.
5 stars for the witty passages and insightful observations on the characters dotted throughout. I particularly liked Lydia and Mrs Bennet’s insistence that Mr Bennet’s punishment would be forgot by the Netherfield ball, Lizzy’s fear they were correct, and the resulting scene.
September 15, 2026
Bland
I feel like this was a retelling of the original novel, with a few little twists. There was a lot of telling, when I would have preferred showing. Well written and edited.
I feel like this was a retelling of the original novel, with a few little twists. There was a lot of telling, when I would have preferred showing. Well written and edited.
September 28, 2026
lovely
A low angst and sweet little variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Frances Reynolds. I liked it
A low angst and sweet little variation inspired by Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Frances Reynolds. I liked it
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