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Flurry
The white wolf. It's rumored to stalk the mountains surrounding Park City. When one man comes face-to-face with the creature, he finds there's more to the wolf than meets the eye.
Noah is in hiding. A wolf shifter trying desperately to fit in with the human world. While on a ski trip in Park City, Utah, he is forced to show his true form to a friend from college. What he doesn't realize, is he may have stumbled upon his fated mate.
Joshua is a Mormon college boy, excited to go on his first trip away from home. When he's thrust into the dark world of wolf shifters, everything he believes is shaken. As he learns about the white wolves that haunt his dreams, Josh realizes that his feelings for his friend Noah span more than just friendship.
The first book of The White Wolves series, Flurry is 23,000+ words long.
Noah is in hiding. A wolf shifter trying desperately to fit in with the human world. While on a ski trip in Park City, Utah, he is forced to show his true form to a friend from college. What he doesn't realize, is he may have stumbled upon his fated mate.
Joshua is a Mormon college boy, excited to go on his first trip away from home. When he's thrust into the dark world of wolf shifters, everything he believes is shaken. As he learns about the white wolves that haunt his dreams, Josh realizes that his feelings for his friend Noah span more than just friendship.
The first book of The White Wolves series, Flurry is 23,000+ words long.
- GenresM M RomanceShapeshifters
77 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 3, 2015
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About the author
Alyson May Bristol
2 books4 followersAlyson May Bristol grew up on a healthy dose of cartoons, comics and fantasy novels. Being the nerd that she was, she developed her art and writing hobbies into life-long passions.
Bristol currently resides in the Pacific Northwest, sipping her hipster coffee and looking down her nose at your Starbucks. She feels lost without her sketchbook and her trusty feline sidekick.
Bristol currently resides in the Pacific Northwest, sipping her hipster coffee and looking down her nose at your Starbucks. She feels lost without her sketchbook and her trusty feline sidekick.
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November 9, 2015
1.5 stars - The writing was very amateurish and the story needed some serious editing.
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December 15, 2015There are inconsistencies and it just doesn't make enough sense for me to PLOD along.
Like, Josh says he learned how to ski ON these slopes.. and yet he'd never heard anything about a 'ghost' wolf. No comments about the drive up or small talk about how he remembers the slopes being the last time he was there.
Josh 'sleepwalking' outside and 'hearing' the wolf in his head before Noah snaps him out of it.. and yet later on when a white wolf attacks him, he's later told that it is a regular wolf.
That is (?) explained later possibly but shortly thereafter is where we part ways. Noah's freaking out over an aborted 911 call and the boys basically take off....
There was also a sense of young (YOUNG) boys vs. young men with the descriptions used throughout what I read. Ex. ask question from 'long-haired boy' at very beginning. I'm thinking the story is starting earlier in life as a brief lead up but no.. its just them ole college BOYS... I just felt like that the characters descriptiveness could have been handled more appropriately.
And last... this isn't super long but I made it about.. half way. And there's no romance to speak of, let alone if there ever ends up with sex in it. So, that also confirms not my cup of tea..
Like, Josh says he learned how to ski ON these slopes.. and yet he'd never heard anything about a 'ghost' wolf. No comments about the drive up or small talk about how he remembers the slopes being the last time he was there.
Josh 'sleepwalking' outside and 'hearing' the wolf in his head before Noah snaps him out of it.. and yet later on when a white wolf attacks him, he's later told that it is a regular wolf.
That is (?) explained later possibly but shortly thereafter is where we part ways. Noah's freaking out over an aborted 911 call and the boys basically take off....
There was also a sense of young (YOUNG) boys vs. young men with the descriptions used throughout what I read. Ex. ask question from 'long-haired boy' at very beginning. I'm thinking the story is starting earlier in life as a brief lead up but no.. its just them ole college BOYS... I just felt like that the characters descriptiveness could have been handled more appropriately.
And last... this isn't super long but I made it about.. half way. And there's no romance to speak of, let alone if there ever ends up with sex in it. So, that also confirms not my cup of tea..
January 31, 2016
Actually, it was disappointing, and I'm not just talking about the cliffhanger ending. I've dealt with those before. The thing was I wound up skimming about the last 25% of the book.
As others mentioned, I was taken aback by the shifting (no pun) referrals to Josh and Noah. Young man, man, young boy... They have names. Use them. I also have the impression this may have started out in first person, because a few time "I" wound up doing something rather than Josh.
And since Noah insisted the wolf he killed was just a wolf, I wondered if Josh might have shifter blood to have healed so quickly.
I used to ski, and this took me back to those days on Hunter Mountain. Not fun memories, unfortunately. Sorry.
As others mentioned, I was taken aback by the shifting (no pun) referrals to Josh and Noah. Young man, man, young boy... They have names. Use them. I also have the impression this may have started out in first person, because a few time "I" wound up doing something rather than Josh.
And since Noah insisted the wolf he killed was just a wolf, I wondered if Josh might have shifter blood to have healed so quickly.
I used to ski, and this took me back to those days on Hunter Mountain. Not fun memories, unfortunately. Sorry.
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December 13, 2015
NOT A STANDALONE. This was published in May 2015 and says in the back that the next one, Sleet, will be out in June 2015; it's now December 2015 and that book hasn't been released. This was an odd book. It started along just fine but then, toward the end, went way off the rails. I wasn't even sure how to rate it. It was really good then got really weird then ended at a giant cliffhanger. I wouldn't advise reading this until the next installment comes out.
May 10, 2015
Nothing new
I have read a lot of shifter books over the years and I guess I have become jaded. I want a book that is exciting and engrossing. This book was neither. The writer has talent and I will try one of her books again in the future. This book just was not for me.
I have read a lot of shifter books over the years and I guess I have become jaded. I want a book that is exciting and engrossing. This book was neither. The writer has talent and I will try one of her books again in the future. This book just was not for me.
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March 26, 2017It's only part of a book. I do really dislike cliff-hangers.
There are some spelling/grammar mistakes, but the story is interesting enough so far that I'll look for the second book.
There are some spelling/grammar mistakes, but the story is interesting enough so far that I'll look for the second book.
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