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A new dark and spicy epic romantasy debut, perfect for fans of Shield of Sparrows and Rose in Chains.

Forced to partake in the deadly Mortal Trials, Lirah must keep a cool head, or she'll lose it. But the heart often has a way of complicating things...

Every decade, thirteen mortals are chosen to compete in the Mortal Trials for the ultimate immortality. But those who fail, die. For Lirah, survival is vital.

When Lirah is ripped from her bed in the middle of the night, she finds herself in the foreign land of the elven. Forced to participate in a series of challenges which will threaten her every survival instinct, Lirah’s been advised to guard her life, but with brooding instructor Kilian Valhan guiding her through the challenges, she should have been warned to shield her heart. Linked for the duration of the Trials, simply ignoring Kilian is not an option. He’s everywhere she goes. Even worse – he’s in her head. But as the Trials force Lirah and Kilian closer, it becomes harder to resist the undeniable chemistry sparking between them.

As Lirah competes for her life, she questions the motives behind the Mortal Trials – why is no mortal allowed to volunteer for the Trials, and why has there only been a single survivor in seven decades? The Gods are stirring and the truth surrounding the missing Goddess of War will challenge everything Lirah thought she knew about who – and what – she truly is.

An addictive and enthralling adventure for anyone who loves an enemies-to-lovers romantasy with high stakes and plenty of thrills!

298 pages, Hardcover

Published July 1, 2026

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Profile Image for Gabriela.
118 reviews72 followers
Review of advance copy received from NetGalley
July 1, 2026
The Mortal Trials has a combination of elements that I generally find intriguing, but unfortunately this was not my cup of tea. I don’t want to discourage anyone from checking this book out though, because we all have different preferences, and the tropes that didn’t work for me here may not be bothersome for others.

Lirah is an orphan, left on the doorstep of the governor’s house, and cared for since infancy by his cook Umma. Mistaken for another, she is snatched from her comfortable life and forced to compete in the once yearly Mortal Trials where she will have to fight for her life and the opportunity to become Elven.

While not ground breaking, this is one of those tried and true plots I can usually enjoy. I remember requesting this ARC after seeing a recommendation, although I can’t remember where, but I believe it was by another author. So I do think this will be enjoyable if you don’t share the same dislikes as I do.

To start with, I had a hard time connecting with Lirah. She is one of those FMC’s that struggles with seeing past her rage and the injustice of her situation. As a result, she has quite the snarky attitude. Now I’m all for feminine rage, but I personally want more depth behind it or more of a gradual arc to show growth. To be fair, there is a plot point that adds to her anger management issues (which I won’t spoil) and she does eventually feel more rational, but the adjustment is so abrupt that it didn’t feel earned enough for me.

The next part that I didn’t enjoy is the romantic relationship between Lirah and Kilian. This partly ties into Lirah’s rage. This is one of those situations where she holds him responsible for her circumstances, and her feelings toward him are simultaneously angry and lustful. This isn’t always a bad combination, but it is also tricky to get right. For me to believe this kind of attraction I at least want some undeniable chemistry, some sassy flirting, maybe a reluctant admission that the other person isn’t as bad as we were first led to believe. I didn’t find the jump from hate to love either gradual or authentic enough.

Aside from the rage and lust, the trials didn’t grip me or keep me on the edge of my seat in a way that made the book more enjoyable. The friendships, found family, and deadliness of the trials were interesting, but didn’t evoke the heightened emotions of fear or dread I would usually hope for. With all this combined, I was more relieved than awed by the cliffhanger at the end. I do think that this book has an audience that will find the story and characters more enjoyable, and I would encourage anyone who is interested to read some of the more highly rated reviews to gain a balanced perspective.

Thank you to NetGalley, Angry Robot, and the author for the ARC. All thoughts and opinions are my own.

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Pre-read: I have a weakness for mortal trials, Gods, and elves.
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946 reviews156 followers
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July 1, 2026
I hope this is good because it'll be my first one from Alluriel
Profile Image for Mella aka Maron.
1,404 reviews1 follower
June 20, 2026
Thank you to Netgalley and Angry Robot for the eARC.

This was a decidedly average read overall. There were some good qualities and bad qualities but the majority of it was very middle of the road.

First, the good. I liked the writing style a lot. It was easy and refreshing. I also enjoyed the ending of the book. Without spoilers, we actually got a decent reveal! The reveal / ending put me solidly in the 3star range where before I was debating 2/3.

Next the average… most things. The world building was extremely basic. We got barely anything to go off of and thus when the reveal happened, it didn’t quite hit the same way. More lore should have been given to us so we could appreciate the ending to its fullest extent.

The plot itself has been done a million times. I don’t just mean deadly trials - I love trial books - but the whole thing. People taken to another realm so they can fight for the prize of immortality. The trials themselves… it was like Hunger Games for the first one, the second one was just honestly terrible. The third was frustrating and didn’t make much sense. 😅 it was all just so mediocre.

Our MMC was average. He’s a dark, brooding, exceptionally hot male obsessively in love with the FMC for no reason. 🤷‍♀️ Typical romantasy.

Now for the bad. Our FMC. She was a witch with a capital B. I’m not kidding, one of the worst FMCs in a book I have finished. And it’s not an “I hate her guts” thing. It’s just factual that she’s a terrible person. 😂 Every single thing she did just made me want to stab her. And the author kept trying to tell me she was working SO hard to beat the trials and protect her friends but then she would do something cocky and act like a butt for no reason.

The romance kind of sucked. There is zero reason for our MMC to like our FMC. (See above.) And what’s more: we never see our FMC fall for our MMC. We only see her lust for his body. And then suddenly, “I’m in loooove.” Ummm 🤨 These two make zero sense from my perspective because we aren’t SHOWN their falling. We are just told they love on another after they sex it up.

So… all in all, I landed at a 3. I think it’s a good attempt and I do think Megan has talent in her writing. I hope that her next book (after this series) is more original with better characters.

I’d only recommend this to readers who want a typical romantasy and don’t mind an FMC who is legit the worst person ever.
Profile Image for Shameez Papathanasiou.
Author 8 books160 followers
February 27, 2026
This book ticks everything off in the list of needs for a romantasy novel:

- High stakes
- ⁠Feisty heroine
- ⁠Dark, sexy love interest (whew!)
- ⁠A trio of friends that’ll warm your heart
- ⁠and so many plot twists!

Combined with the author’s easy-to-read writing style, it’s a quick, sexy and adventurous read.
Profile Image for Amanda Blanche.
481 reviews51 followers
May 28, 2026
Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for the e-ARC of this book releasing in July 2026.

Overall a fun time, good pacing. Great FMC character, lots of fight and sass. If you like a good romantasy with trials and challenges - this is it. The only downside for me was I found the MMC and the chemistry kind of awkward at times (for lack of a better way of saying it) - I didn’t connect with them. I found it a little stilted. Still a good stubborn, grumpy protective MMC though, he has all the criteria.

Every decade, the Elven go into the human/mortal world and take 13 humans back to their kingdom to compete in the mortal trials. If you make it through - you can win immortality. But winners are extremely rare. Lirah was unfortunately taken as a competitor in a case of mistaken identity - but now she has no choice but to fight to survive. And who better to help her than the elven hosting the trials in his kingdom and who also was a part of taking her - Kilian. So whether through spite or hope, Lirah continues to push and fight - but will it be enough to see her the victor where so many else have failed?
Profile Image for Emma Lovelady.
524 reviews13 followers
July 21, 2026
4.25- omfg another start to a series i was unaware is unfinished, now patiently waiting in line for book two i guess 😭😔

i love trials, gods, fae, IT’S EVERYTHING, and only 300 pages? very fast paced but so much fun. kinda gave the same vibes of empire of flame and thorns with the pacing and easy reading. def recommend 🤭
Profile Image for Alexis Lee.
82 reviews
July 15, 2026
Welp. I'm giving it two stars because that feels nicer than one.

Here's the thing - I liked the basic skeleton/outline of the plot. But...that's all it was, a skeleton.

I don't know if the publisher told her she only had 300 pages so she had to trim all the fat or what, but this book was lacking. Lacking in character details, lacking in motivation, lacking in plot details, lacking in an explanation of the world. I just feel like I read a sketch and nothing was colored in. Why do the FMC and MMC love each other so quickly? Why should I care about any of the side characters? Why does the FMC just accept the half-assed explanations given to her? Why is there a whiteboard randomly out of place in this fantasy world with fantasy tools? Why did the trials have to work that way and be so cruel if the MMC is literally the one responsible for them...

anyways. Might be someone else's cup of tea but I think this needed more work and editing.
Profile Image for Kate groot.
159 reviews9 followers
July 28, 2026
Ok this was definitely a 4⭐️ read. Was it super original? Maybe not but was it a good time? Yeah!!!! There is definitely a spicy raging FMC and they try to make the MC a “scary” guy but you kind of know he’s gunna be a cinnamon roll from the jump. I felt like some of the FMCs thoughts were a little immature during the “drama” portion of the book but her friend kind of calls her out on it and that redeems it for me. The trials aren’t the craziest thing I read but they were interesting enough and while I won’t give spoilers maybe don’t get attached to everyone you meet. There is a cliffhanger and I thinks it gives it a chance to open it up now that the world is built. I will continue this series :)
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332 reviews248 followers
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July 14, 2026
~Pre-Read~! DARK fantasy here I come! I am going into this blind, but fear not my dear friends, I'll give you all the juicy updates! hehe
Profile Image for Desiree Viruet.
60 reviews
July 23, 2026
The Mortal Trials by Megan Shunmugam was such an entertaining romantasy debut that had me hooked from the very first trial. The concept of thirteen mortals being forced into deadly challenges for the chance at immortality immediately grabbed my attention, and the tension never really let up.

Lirah was a heroine I genuinely enjoyed following. She’s thrown into a situation she never asked for, and instead of suddenly becoming unstoppable, she’s forced to rely on her determination, instincts, and resilience. Her growth throughout the story felt believable, and I appreciated that she remained vulnerable while learning to survive.

Then there’s Kilian Valhan… the brooding, intimidating mentor who absolutely delivers on the grumpy, morally gray energy. I loved the banter between him and Lirah. Their relationship develops through forced proximity and mutual distrust, making every small moment between them feel earned instead of rushed. The chemistry was definitely one of my favorite parts of the book, and I can’t wait to see where their relationship goes next.

I also found myself really enjoying the supporting cast. Characters like Calendula brought some warmth and humor to such a dangerous story, while the friendships and alliances that formed during the Trials added emotional weight. It wasn’t just about surviving the challenges—it became about learning who could actually be trusted in a world full of secrets.

The world-building was immersive, and I loved how the author slowly revealed more about the elven, the gods, and the mysteries surrounding the Trials instead of dumping everything on the reader at once. Every trial felt unique and dangerous, and I was constantly wondering who would survive.

The reason this wasn’t quite a five-star read for me is that there were a few moments where I wanted a little more character development and answers before the story ended. Some twists happened so quickly that I wished they’d been explored more deeply.

Overall, this was a fantastic debut with deadly trials, slow-burn romance, intriguing mysteries, and characters I genuinely cared about. If you love high-stakes romantasy with a grumpy mentor, found family, morally gray characters, and plenty of tension, I’d definitely recommend picking this one up. I’ll absolutely be reading the next book.
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197 reviews3 followers
July 16, 2026
So much potential, but lacking in depth. It’s actually quite frustrating as this could have been SO GOOD. This is a very fast-paced book, but unfortunately the speed sacrificed depth of characters for me.

The overall idea of Lirah and the others being conscripted into these deadly trials for “reasons” is very interesting and the trials themselves were decent. However, the book literally jumps right into the action with zero lead up. We’re then thrown into training, but only sort off. We see Lirah learning how to block from Killian and then a little research session at the library and then BAM-first trial. Except (supposedly)it’s been a week.

I had so little time with the characters that I felt nothing when they died and I couldn’t connect with Lirah’s pain over these supposed “close friends” because there was no development. I didn’t even feel anything for her adopted mother as we were only given 3ish pages with her at the start.

This issue goes for the romance as well. It felt more like Lirah was trying to make Killian an enemy instead of him actually being an enemy and they fall in love so quickly. They’re basically in love after one discussion in the middle of the night. Even the dialogue felt a bit surface level. But then he’s gone for so much of the book. So, I honestly didn’t feel quite as much once they started hooking up. Had we had more interaction, I’m sure that would have been even stronger.

I still don’t really understand why so much had to be kept a secret. I definitely feel like the general premise of trying to safe the world could have been shared with anyone in the trials. It’s not like they could have run away and told any mortals. I’m also confused as to why we briefly get introduced to the merchant woman and Aaron. Also, what’s the deal with Echon?

And for goodness sakes, how did she not keel over from starvation? So much of the book is her taking a bite of food and then she “looses her appetite”. On top of her also continuously skipping several meals in a row for training that we rarely see.

Because of the lack of development, the ending ended up being pretty obvious. Though, I will say, the gods stuff was a fantastic twist that I appreciated. The ending intrigued me enough that I think I want to read the next book, but I’m not going to rush out for it.
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285 reviews6 followers
July 25, 2026
I actually enjoyed myself.. Didn't have high expectations but it was still a nice book. The plot was what drew me first. It intrigued me and made me want to continue.. Then we have the characters... I liked them, liked lirah and most of her personality, though there were times she got on my nerves.. Killian.. Killian was a shadow and lightning daddy and I got excited when I first met him.. until half of the book... Thats when things started to get a bit boring for me. Where it not for the plot I would´ve probably given up. I think the romance happened a bit too quickly.. At the beginning was chemistry, and I liked the banter, thats what kept me going, but then, they fell in love roughly after being in each others vacinity for like, 3 times.... I think it was to rushed.. same with the pace of the book. I usually love myself a fast paced book, but even I think this one was just a bit too fast.. and I think that's why the romance felt rushed... and consequently the writing at some point started lacking... I think the author tried to put as much information and wold building in the first book and I normally like it, but I think in this book, the execution lacked a bit. All that said, the plot still intrigued me, and so I cant wait to see what's gonna be the ending and whats gonna happen in book two!!!!! Definitely going to read it.
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5 reviews
November 11, 2025
I can’t begin to express how this book fundamentally changed my life. Get ready for an epic story
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3,047 reviews550 followers
July 19, 2026
Headlines:
Elven, fae, gods
Formulaic romantasy
Easy fun

The Mortal Trials was not a complex read, it was an easy romantasy read. The story focused on trials for mortals to resolve some elven problems. It seemed a selfish and fickle reason for trials but there was so much more to uncover. The FMC, Lirah was from humble beginnings, she was fiesty but she rose to bravery rather quickly, in an unlikely way.

The elven seemed like many fae I've read about and Killain, the MMC was angry, moody...and besotted with Lirah. The connection between these two happened too fast for my liking but I went along with it.

It was a fast-paced plot, with some convenience. The trials weren't overly drawn out which I appreciated and the twists in the final quarter were excellent.

While this is a 'typical' romantasy, it was easy to read and I'll be reading on, despite it's lack of uniqueness. Overall, a lot of fun with spice.

Thank you to Angry Robots for the review copy.

3.5 stars rounded up.
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550 reviews129 followers
July 18, 2026
4.5 stars

This was such a good read. It has a lot of tropes I love, like deadly trials and enemies to lovers, and the sexual tension between Lirah and Kilian was well done. I found their relationship and the way their romance unfolded believable and I was definitely invested in them, even if they could both be a little too stubborn at times.

I was also really interested in the story itself and the reasoning behind the mortal trials. Even the side characters were enjoyable, although I do wish they had been developed a bit more. The pacing was good and the climax and ending were fantastic. I had a few theories about where the story was going, but there were still several surprising reveals. Overall, this was very entertaining and I can’t wait to read the next book in the series.
Profile Image for Katie.
856 reviews52 followers
July 30, 2026
I could not put this book down! I was flying through the pages from the very beginning because I was completely hooked. The trials were so interesting, but it was the overall premise and mystery that really pulled me in. I was constantly trying to figure out what was going on, and every new reveal kept me wanting more.

I also have to give a shoutout to the FMC’s best friend because I absolutely adored them. They added so much to the story, and I found myself just as invested in their moments as I was in the main plot.

I completely devoured this book and now I’m desperately hoping there’s a sequel because I need more. It was everything I wanted it to be and then some!
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1,606 reviews409 followers
July 17, 2026
This was such a fun read and fun to read from a new author. This book definitely held my interest throughout the whole book and I love a good trials- enemies to lovers fantasy book. They always hook me in. The challenges they had to face were exciting. All the characters were enjoyable and definitely loved who Lirah had to link with, Killian. Of course we are going to love him! Lirah and Killian def started off rough but then started getting closer and you could see the chemistry build between the two which I loved.
So yeah if you love, trials, enemies to lovers, romantasy, fantasy genre, this one would be the one to try out next!
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180 reviews11 followers
June 8, 2026
Holy shit!!! I don’t know what crack was put into this book, but I absolutely devoured it in one sitting. I was hooked from start to finish and fell asleep the second I finished the last page, clutching my kindle like a precious pillow.

This was a fast-paced read for me with an amazing plot line and characters. I absolutely LOVED Lirah and Kilian! The push and pull, the banter and the chemistry was just sooo good. I laughed so hard at Lirahs own delusions and that she was fooling absolutely no one ahahah. Lana and Septimus were also so precious and I absolutely have a lil girl crush on Lana.

I did guess like 80% of the plot twist, but even the small parts that were unknown to me kept me wholly invested and I was dying to confirm my theories. Sooo good! I NEED book 2, like just right now!

Tropes:
✨ Slow burn
✨ Found family
✨ Deadly trials
✨ Gods & Goddesses
✨ Fae & Elven
✨ Amazing female friendships
✨ “He’d burn down the world for her”
✨ Forced Proximity
✨ Touch her & die

This was an absolutely phenomenal debut novel and I cannot wait to continue this duology. If you enjoy fast paced romantasy books with a great plot line, ALL the banter, tons of chemistry and an amazing found family, I would highly recommend this one!

Thank you to Angry Robot Books and NetGalley for the ARC.
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734 reviews62 followers
May 18, 2026
HOLY CRAP, the chokehold this book had on me from the very beginning… it needs to be studied. I absolutely ate this up! The only bad thing about reading books before they’re released is already dying for book two when book one hasn’t officially released yet lmao, and I NEED BOOK TWO!

Kilian & Lirah are PERFECTION. all of the characters are, really. Lana & Septimus were adorable, too & I really just loved Lana’s character. But Kilian & Lirah… man, this romance will have you thirsty. their constant push and pull, the tug-of-war, the way you wanna sometimes slap Lirah upside her head because she’s not fooling anyone, not even herself was insane.

But mostly, I just really loved the plot! if the epic, slow burn romance won’t keep you, the unique plot will, like it kept me up way past my bedtime because I NEEDED answers. & while I somewhat guessed the big plot twist, it was no less such a great time reading!

⚔️ in this, you’ll see:
✧.* true enemies to lovers
✧.* deadly trials
✧.* found family
✧.* slow burn
✧.* touch her & die
✧.* “who did this to you?”
✧.* he’d burn the world down for her
✧.* strong female friendships
✧.* forced proximity
✧.* gods, fae, elven
✧.* complex magic
✧.* hidden identity

5⭐️
2🌶️

🫶🏼 huge thank you to @angryrobotbooks for this #gifted copy!
Profile Image for Cecilia.
540 reviews65 followers
Did Not Finish
July 17, 2026
DNF @42%
This isnt bad. The writing is good but it lacks any real substance. Its fast paced but sacrifices emotional depth and character development..I didn't care about any of the characters. The premise is good but the execution fell flat for me.
Profile Image for Maya Delgado.
80 reviews4 followers
July 26, 2026
4.5 ☆

"While the challenges could break my body, they would not take my humanity."

Thank you, Angry Robot & Megan Shunmugam, for an ARC copy in exchange for an honest review.

This book was excellent. I could not put it down. Every time I turned the page, I was met with new information or a new challenge to read about. The book made me livid, excited, sad, and needy for more. (I need book 2 stat!!)

The writing was so easy to follow along with, in a way that painted each scene in my head without struggle. I was obsessed with the world building and the magic system—not to mention the concept of the story itself. It was captivating, and I kept asking the pages questions that were answered in ways I hadn't expected them to be.

The relationships in the book were so incredibly loving. The friendship between Lirah, Lana, and Moric was so beautiful and genuine. They went through so much together, and I'm glad they found each other, even with the horrible circumstances they were in. The same goes for Lirah and Killian, the amount of quotes I got from them... aughhh, so good. Both of them had such amazing banter, and nothing about their relationship felt repetitive. I felt like I was always learning something new and watching their relationship grow stronger in different aspects.

I can't say more or else I'd be spoiling it, but just know that I'm heavily invested, and I will be counting down the days until I can read the next book. (No pressure, Megan.)
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603 reviews92 followers
June 25, 2026
Thank you Angry Robot for the ARC!

Okay so I ate this UP. If you're looking for a trials based romantasy that's packed with action from the beginning (I'm talking near death experience in chapter 2), you're going to want to read this one!

This was super-fast paced--almost to a fault. When I say there's no info dump/world building, I mean it. World building is pretty nonexistent. You get exactly as much information as you need to understand what's happening in the moment, and not a single thing more. If that's the style you love, you're going to be THRIVING reading this book.

The main thing that didn't work for me was the romance aspect. Because this is so short, and the worldbuilding is so nonexistent, I just didn't buy how quickly it happened. We went from "I hate you on principle for forcing my people to do this " to "I actually super like you" SO fast. I really wouldn't classify this as enemies to lovers given how quickly everything progressed--this is really star crossed lovers at MOST.

HOWEVER. Did I devour this in one sitting? Yes. Did I have a good time? Yes. I think this is definitely a fun romantasy read and a good slump buster for folks who need one!
Profile Image for Gemma.
69 reviews39 followers
August 30, 2026
⭐️4.5

What an amazing debut!! The Mortal Trials had the perfect mix of action, magic, friendship, and romance that kept me coming back to read more.
I loved the world building and the way the trials were set up. It created something new and unexpected every time. I really enjoyed seeing the different dynamics between the characters and the enemies to lovers was just top tier. The plot twists were great, and that ending!?! I need book 2 like right now!!
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657 reviews62 followers
June 30, 2026
I had a lot of fun with this one. It’s a quick, fast paced romantasy that kept me turning the pages, and I flew through it in no time. If you’re looking for something with deadly trials, action, and a broody MMC, this is an easy one to binge.

Was it perfect? No. I would have loved a little more world building and I didn’t completely connect with the romance. But honestly, I still had a good time reading it.

Sometimes you don’t need a book to reinvent the genre. Sometimes you just want a fun, entertaining read, and this one delivered exactly that.
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145 reviews875 followers
July 24, 2026
3.5 ⭐️ loved the eleven aspect to this. and ofc the trials bc I will eat it up every time.

I would’ve bumped this up a star if it were more cut throat when it came to getting rid of characters during the trials
Profile Image for Taylor Young .
87 reviews
August 13, 2026
Well that was disappointing. Might be in a huge romantacy reading slump because everything is reading exactly the same.

We start with our FMC being an orphan, who gets kidnapped by the big scary broody MMC. FMC is the angriest person and that’s basically her whole personality, she acts like she’s the only one that’s been kidnapped and forced into these trials.

The 3 trials were the least high stakes trials ever, not sure how any of them were supposed to decided if you were strong enough to pass the Rite. Especially the last one, we learn that almost all of them didn’t even actually participate in said trail. But yet they still allowed to participate in the Rite. Like how does that work.

The romance….. if you wanna call it that. Didn’t exist. Lirah and Kilian literally have a few conversations, which include Lirah being angry at him because he kidnapped her and is forcing her to do these trials. They never actually get to know each other or spend time together outside like 2 training days. So like the love confession between the two made absolutely no sense.

Lirah the FMC was not likable. She was not a good friend. Judged Lana for liking Septimus (who she actually spent tons of time with, so we are told) even though Lirah is over here lusting after Kilian.

The whole book annoyed me honestly. But the ending really irritated me.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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Author 1 book80 followers
July 24, 2026
A must read romantasy that has everything you could ever want in a book!
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86 reviews1 follower
August 1, 2026
𝕋𝕙𝕖 𝕄𝕠𝕣𝕥𝕒𝕝 𝕋𝕣𝕚𝕒𝕝𝕤 - ℝ𝕖𝕧𝕚𝕖𝕨

I purchased this book through the Allurial options in July 2026, and I was enticed by the pull of trials and life and death games promised through the blurb. While I was initially nervous about the length of the book only being around 300 pages in a Romantasy book, I was proven wrong by this no-fluff and full action fast paced trials chaos!

Let’s get into this review and talk about what worked and what didn't!

> Lirah, ( last name not given in book) a scullery maid in the governor's home is ripped from her bed in the middle of the night by Elven in an every decade tradition take mortals to partake in the “Mortal Trials” which only one mortal has ever survived. A sure death sentence if chosen, Lirah is immediately aware of her circumstances and is determined to beat the odds put in front of her as she meets her mentor and instructor Kilian Valhan- a dark and brooding Elven that is forced to guide her through the trials ahead. With little to no information about the trials, Lirah has to work through the different trials without even understanding what happens if she survives.

>The plot for this book is in no way groundbreaking but it had some really unique standout moments. I loved the addition of one of the side characters being like a familiar, rather than an animal companion. All of the contenders received a “Sprite” to aid them and guide them. All with varying personalities, her sprite Calendula, was full of personality and was my favorite part of the book. I also think while I could tell the world building wasn’t necessarily the most unique, the actual outcomes at the end of the book were not something I saw coming. Without spoiling it, I am super excited for the next book due to the world building the author put into “The Mortal Trials”.


>The characters, while not necessarily unique or different, still hold their own immensely. I enjoyed the banter that Lirah and Killian possessed, I found their interactions interesting because this book had a lot of omitting information from all sides and I found myself trying to piece together the story just as much as Lirah.

>The pacing was extremely fast in a wonderful way, this was TRIALS book- where I always love a “Grand Ball” or “Dance” I found them not having celebrations in between was a refreshing surprise, as well as it being centered around the Elven rather than the Fae. As much as I love Fae Romantasy, I found the cultural difference really refreshing and new! Culturally I felt the way they held themselves in this book was very unique, sharp with no fluff and I loved the change of pace! They got right down to business while still taking time to train, or encounter other obstacles.

>Favorite quote:

“ℑ𝔣 ℑ 𝔥𝔞𝔳𝔢 𝔱𝔬 𝔟𝔲𝔯𝔫 𝔱𝔥𝔢 𝔴𝔬𝔯𝔩𝔡 𝔱𝔬 𝔰𝔞𝔳𝔢 𝔶𝔬𝔲, ℑ 𝔴𝔦𝔩𝔩."

>Conclusions & Thoughts:
This is an excellent debut novel and I would say to any reader looking to read this to ignore the reviews saying this is middle of the road. Is it completely unique in every power? No. Does it have unique trials and a unique end? Yes. I think you should give it your time, there's no fluff, characters and ideas that I haven’t seen explored before by using omission of information. Three hundred pages of well put together plot, an enjoyable romance and a great first book in a series I look forward to continuing!
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October 9, 2026
Mir wurde dieses Buch zum Lesen zur Verfügung gestellt.
Ich teile hier ausschliesslich und freiwillig meine Meinung.

Okay, was bitte war das?! I’m high! 😭

Um ganz ehrlich zu sein, verrät der Klappentext eigentlich kaum etwas über die Geschichte. 13 Sterbliche. Tödliche Prüfungen. Götter. That’s it.

Und eigentlich liebe ich genau solche Bücher – wenn man vorher nicht wirklich weiss, was einen erwartet.

Lucky me: Dieses Buch hat mich sowas von geflasht! 😭 Ich konnte kaum aufhören zu lesen und habe es innerhalb von zwei Tagen regelrecht inhaliert.

Lirah mochte ich von Anfang an. Sie hat diesen richtigen Badass-FMC-Vibe und ich musste oft über ihre Sprüche und ihren sturen Kopf lachen. Zugegeben, manchmal war sie ein bisschen kindisch – aber selbst das hat mich eher zum Lachen gebracht als genervt. 😹

Und dann wären da Kilian und seine Buddies… na ja. Ich habe mich wirklich bemüht, sie nicht zu mögen. 😒 Ich wollte von Anfang an skeptisch sein – schliesslich verschleppen sie Menschen, damit diese an tödlichen Prüfungen teilnehmen. Wtf?! Rude! Nur hat das mit dem Nichtmögen überhaupt nicht funktioniert. Ich mochte sie von Beginn an und das hat sich im Verlauf der Geschichte nur noch verstärkt.

Auch die Story hat mich komplett gepackt: 13 Sterbliche werden verschleppt und müssen an tödlichen Prüfungen teilnehmen, um die Möglichkeit zu bekommen, zu Fae zu werden – obwohl das eigentlich niemand von ihnen will.

Und genau da habe ich mir die ganze Zeit eine Frage gestellt: Warum machen die das? 👀

Einige Plots habe ich vorhergesehen, andere konnten mich überraschen. Aber selbst wenn ich eine Vermutung hatte, hat das meiner Lesegier null geschadet. Ich wollte einfach wissen, ob ich recht habe – und vor allem, was hinter dem Ganzen steckt.

Mein Fazit:

Mortal Trials ist eine spannende, witzige, düstere und spicige Romantasy, die mich sehr positiv überrascht hat. Ich habe das Buch innerhalb von zwei Tagen inhaliert und hatte richtig viel Spass damit.

Einen klitzekleinen Abzug gibt es für mich trotzdem – wenn ich es in Sternen ausdrücken müsste, vielleicht einen halben. Ein Teil der Gefühle entstand mir etwas zu schnell und ich hätte mir hier ein bisschen mehr Reifezeit gewünscht. Die Chemie zwischen den beiden habe ich trotzdem geliebt. 🥹

Ich freue mich sehr auf Band 2 und hoffe, dass er bald erscheint. 👀

tropes:

deadly competition · mistaken identity · enemies to lovers · grumpy x feisty · mentor x student · forced proximity · magical bond
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