After being less than impressed with “The Decision” (the first book in this series) I wasn’t all that keen to read this book, but when it came up on a Kindle sale I thought I would be a good opportunity to give Brunstetter a second chance. I don’t like to write an author off after one book and there are obviously many people who love her work, so I plunged in, hoping to discover what I had missed the first time.
Unfortunately, all of my previous impressions were simply reinforced. The characters in this book are like wooden actors reciting lines. We are told, told, told repeatedly, rather than shown. The prose is bland and unsophisticated. The dialogue is unnatural, often being used to inform the reader, or even more awkwardly, to repeat in English what another character has said using an Amish Dutch word. There are whole scenes where nothing happens except the character thinking. And if there was a heart monitor on the tension, it would be virtually flat-lining. There was one spike about three-quarters of the way through the book, but by then I had abandoned all hopes of permanent resuscitation.
If it’s romance you’re looking for, you’re not likely to be any more impressed. For the first three-quarters of the book Leah and Adam repeatedly convince themselves that they will never marry (me thinks they did protest too much!) and then all of a sudden they think, “Oh. I’ve fallen in love with him/her. I wonder whether he/she will ever feel the same.”
You also get random points-of-view from Eileen and Priscilla (Leah’s friends) and Sara Miller (who married Jonah in the previous book). These were obviously to keep their stories going in preparation for the third book in the series, but they really had nothing to do with Leah and Adam’s story, or if they did, could have been told just as effectively from Leah’s or Adam’s viewpoint. Then there was ‘Cora’, a character whose point-of-view seemed wholly unconnected to the story for the first half of the book. Her place became more obvious during the second half, but every time she came up before that I would think, “Who are you, and what are you doing in my story?” I really think her part could have been handled better.
The final book in this series will release next month, and I am seriously torn over whether or not to sacrifice the time to read it. I’ve really not had any resolution yet, despite being two books in to the series, and so in that sense I am keen to get some closure and move on, but I’m really not sure if I can put myself through it. It pains me to be so negative, and from the reviews it would seem I am definitely in the minority, but if this series is representative of Brunstetter's style, then she's definitely not an author for me.