It seems unanimous that Muriel Barbery shocked us all with this new novel, which is already set as a first in a series of two books. A deviation from her first two beloved books; so much so that most of us can hardly believe it is from the same woman. I have not found anyone declaring this better than her first two novels; barely anyone that does not hint toward it being worse.
The story is magical, whimsical, confusing, mysterious, otherworldly. Barbery's prose is lyrical, poetic. As was evident in her other novels, she has a talent for exposing intricate details in a beautiful way. But rather than use this in her favor, her descriptions and vignettes in this novel do not end. They go on endlessly, reaching a point of incomprehensibility. It has taken me so long to read this because eighty percent of the time I had to immediately reread because I did not understand what was being described, what supposedly happened. Barbery lapses into abstraction and obscurity without notice and the reader is left even more lost. Much of this is further complicated by the suspension of disbelief inherently required by fantasy stories. Most of the universe is not very well explained; rather, the ways of the elfin world are set in place and discussed already expecting a reader's full understanding.
The most significant error I feel that was made was Barbery's choice to use an omniscient third person point of view. This "omniscience" did not make anything less puzzling. What it did do was removed the possibility of really getting to know either of the girls. Readers will find it difficult to connect to any of the characters. Barbery writes in a manner that is shrouded in mystery, leaving one feeling detached from the story; as if watching from a long distance, struggling to decipher images and words.
A second point that I feel should be made far more clear to readers before they begin reading is that this is only Part I/II. Note that this is not like other series where each book can stand alone. "The Life of Elves" is not a book with a beginning, middle, and end. In fact, the end is a beginning. So if you are looking to read this, be prepared to read the second title (forthcoming?). Otherwise, you will be left with an incomplete story.
It requires a two page cast of characters, and readers will likely spend most of their time only vaguely understanding what is going on, even with constant references to this list. Our heroines are two girls, born at the same time, one in France, one Italy. Both are impossibilities and therefore deemed to have been born for the purpose of fighting the imminent war of the worlds, the war of good and evil, the war of the humans and the elves, the humans against nature. Clara Centi is the daughter of a human and her elfin lover. Not even The Inner Elfin Council knows this, for all other marriages between humans and elves have been sterile. She is a musical prodigy, playing masterpieces on the piano with an innate, effortless talent. She also has the ability to see into the elfin world (particularly from Maria's perspective). Her visions are very strong, descriptive, and when "shared" with others can have outstanding influence. Maria Faure is an elf child who was inexplicably born looking exactly like a human. She has great powers to communicate with nature and to heal. It seems no one knows how powerful she is; all they know is that they are great and need to be nurtured and not underestimated. These two girls, not yet thirteen years old, are to be our saviors.
Various other characters, all coming into play here and there, confusingly. The Governor of Rome works for Aelius, leader of the enemy forces. Their purpose? To end our kind. In the fight against them are a dozen random characters, led by The Maestro (an elf having crossed over into the human world), who is instructing Clara's piano playing and lessons on clairvoyance in France; and André, Maria's adoptive father.
The battle scenes in this war are confusing to say the least. Barbery uses phrases like "the mists", "unseen forces", the sky opening up to give messages that are "not in French or Italian but the language of stories and dreams", images and detailed messages being translated through touch, mystical creatures appearing from thin air.
Added to the omniscient third person choice, the overall confusing and incomprehensible nature of the writing, the fact that there is a necessary Part II, I would be amiss not to mention the significant theme and number of references to religion. Not my thing.
Barbery's masterful user of language and picturesque prose makes this all a little more bearable. I am really sad to have to give such a mediocre rating to one of my (hitherto?) favorite authors, but this novel really seems like something she may have written before her other novels? Something that was not good enough to be published then, but had new potential following the success?
This might be my first time saying this: I want a film to be made of this book. And with the right direction, I am confident It will be better. Things like not knowing whose perspective we are seeing things from would not be a problem. I could see the battle scenes being something epic, but difficult to interpret from Barbery's writing. I imagine something like The Lord of the Rings with a touch of Hayao Miyazaki. Elves, unicorns, talking to nature; snow and rain, mists and wind personified. Music as a character; shadows, dreams, supernatural powers. Good and bad, other worlds. It is all here. But thrown together and disorganized, beautiful, lyrical language wasted because readers can hardly grasp what is going on.
Alas, I was not aware of the necessary Part II before I began this. Yes, I will read it. With excitement? Probably not. But I do still have respect and admiration for Muriel Barbery for her other two novels and will therefore be more forgiving. I have to express, again, how disappointing this was. I implore you, Muriel, to write a different novel as soon as possible. Something closer in style and genre to "The Elegance of the Hedgehog" and"Gourmet Rhapsody" this time if at all possible?