Overall, I found Primal Cut OK. The desolate vibe came across well, and I especially liked the depiction of Garrod, who had some real character to him. Main character Alison Dexter, however, felt completely flat. Attempts to give her some personality felt forced and detracted more than they added. Didn't especially enjoy the ending of the main plot, felt cliche/predictable.
The prose style is quick and enjoyable, though I'm not a big fan of the constant repetition of first and last name, sentence after sentence.