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Perfect, Indiana #4
The Twisted Road to You
Struggling with both PTSD and the trauma of his ex-wife’s infidelity, retired Marine Wesley Holt seeks a simple civilian life. His favorite waitress at the Perfect Diner secretly stirs his heart. Yet Wes—scarred by betrayal and racked by guilt over his fallen comrades in Afghanistan—stays quiet, convinced he can never love again…or be loved.
Waitress and single mother Carlie Stewart hides fear behind her smile. Her ex-husband has escaped from prison and wants their son—and revenge. When the fugitive arrives to wreak havoc, Wes insists Carlie and her son stay with him for protection. Finally daring to let her guard down, Carlie divulges her dark past to Wes, and to her surprise, Wes appreciates her strengths and longs to trust her with his tattered heart. The safer they feel with each other, the more trust and passion grow. But can they overcome the demons in their pasts—and the heartbreak they’ve carried into the present—to build a lasting future together?
Waitress and single mother Carlie Stewart hides fear behind her smile. Her ex-husband has escaped from prison and wants their son—and revenge. When the fugitive arrives to wreak havoc, Wes insists Carlie and her son stay with him for protection. Finally daring to let her guard down, Carlie divulges her dark past to Wes, and to her surprise, Wes appreciates her strengths and longs to trust her with his tattered heart. The safer they feel with each other, the more trust and passion grow. But can they overcome the demons in their pasts—and the heartbreak they’ve carried into the present—to build a lasting future together?
284 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 20, 2015
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Barbara Longley
32 books554 followersBarbara Longley graduated summa cum laude with a Bachelor of Science degree in Education/Human Relations, and holds a Master’s in Ed./SLD from the University of Minnesota. When the integration district where she taught dissolved in 2015, she transitioned into writing full time. Ms. Longley is listed on RWA’s Honor Roll of Bestselling Authors, and her books have garnered many awards, including a Maggie, the Holt Medallion, a National Readers’ Choice, two Heart of Excellence awards, a Bookseller’s Best award, and Diamond Award for reaching more than a million readers (2015). Ms. Longley creates memorable heroes and heroines who grow into their strength and go on to save the day.
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May 25, 2017
4 You Can Take That To The Bank Stars
* Mild Spoilers*
"But you can trust me, Carlie. I swear that I will do everything in my power to keep you and tyler safe. You can take that to the bank."- Wes to Carlie
"He's a coward and a punk. I'm a Marine. You've got nothing to worry about."- Wes to Carlie
OMG I have such a hard on for books with military men in them. And I hit the jack pot in this book, there are so many yummy ex military men running around this book I think I may have drooled a little. The Twisted Road to You is the 4th book in the Perfect Indiana Series and I had no problem following the story line even though I have not read any of the other books in this series, so this book can be read as a stand alone. That being said this book was so good I plan of going back and reading the first three books soon!
"You always smell so damn good.... feel so good....Carlie.....want you so much,"- Wes to Carlie
What this book is about
Wes and Carlie both like each other. Everyday Wes comes into the diner where Carlie works just so he can see her. Wes suffers from PTSD and he has been burnt bad by his cheating ex wife, so Wes doesn't plan to make a move on Carlie. He is content to just watch her from afar. When he goes to the diner for his daily dose of Carlie and finds she is not only not there, but that she didn't call in and isn't answering her phone, which is not like her at all, he is worried. When Carlie's boss tells Wes that Carlie has a abusive ex husband, Wes goes out to her home to make sure she is okay. When Wes gets there he finds Carlie's ex- husband holding her and her 6 year old son Tyler at knife point and hears him telling Carlie that he is going to kill her and take their son. Wes kicks in her back door and goes after Carlie's ex but he gets away. Knowing Carlie and Tyler are not going to be safe until her crazy ex is caught and returned to prison where he escaped, Wes has Carlie and her son move in with him. Living so close together, almost like a family feels good, and soon Wes finds that Carlie and her son have worked their way deeper into his heart. Can he lay his past demons to rest to have the family he always wanted, and can he protect Carlie and her son from her dangerous ex hell bent on killing Carlie and kidnapping Tyler?
"No, they won't. You have no idea what it's like. Even when my ex is caught and back behind bars, it'll only be a temporary reprieve." Frustration and anger surged. "I'll always be waiting for the next time he shows up- looking over my shoulder and jumping at shadows. Sometimes if feels like fear is the only thing constant in my life,"-Carlie to Wes
"You're not alone anymore, Carlie," he said, his vice gruff. "Whenever you need me, I'll be there for you. That's a promise and a constant."-Wes to Carlie
This book was exciting, suspenseful, and very sweet. I loved Wes. My God he was yummy. Wes was protective, sweet, and playful. The only thing about him I didn't like was that he let his fear of being hurt again hold him back. I loved Carlie. She was a fighter and a survivor. She has had a hard life and made some bad choices, but she turned that around and tries her best to give her son a happy and normal life. Carlie is smart and lets the others help keep her son and and her safe, which I was so glad for. I hate when a TSTL heroine ruins a book by running and putting herself in danger. Carlie not only was smart enough to accept help she helped herself by taking self defense classes. There was a nice build to Wes and Carlie's relationship. They had some major chemistry and when they got together it was smokin' hot! Everything about Carlie's son Tyler was adorable.
"You and Ty.....you two mean a lot to me. You know that, right? Things could never be just casual between you and me."- Wes to Carlie
"Is that......are you watching the Hallmark Channel?" "Don't you have to work early tomorrow morning?" He squeezed her gently. "Shouldn't you be sleeping?" "It is the Hallmark Channel." She grinned. "You're a romantic." "If you out me, I'll deny it," he said in a stern voice. "I won't tell a soul." -Carlie and Wes
I loved the way Wes was with Tyler. It totally melted my heart every time they rough housed or hugged. There is some really cute family moments in this book. There are some great secondary characters in this book too. The way the whole community comes together to help one of their own was sweet. I liked Ceejay, Cory, and Ryan so much that I will now have to go back and read the first three books so I can enjoy their stories too. A great read. I have never read anything by Barbara Longley before, but I will be check out more of her books.
"I've never wanted anyone the way I want you. There. I've said it." Carlie to Wes
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* Mild Spoilers*
"But you can trust me, Carlie. I swear that I will do everything in my power to keep you and tyler safe. You can take that to the bank."- Wes to Carlie
"He's a coward and a punk. I'm a Marine. You've got nothing to worry about."- Wes to Carlie
OMG I have such a hard on for books with military men in them. And I hit the jack pot in this book, there are so many yummy ex military men running around this book I think I may have drooled a little. The Twisted Road to You is the 4th book in the Perfect Indiana Series and I had no problem following the story line even though I have not read any of the other books in this series, so this book can be read as a stand alone. That being said this book was so good I plan of going back and reading the first three books soon!
"You always smell so damn good.... feel so good....Carlie.....want you so much,"- Wes to Carlie
What this book is about
Wes and Carlie both like each other. Everyday Wes comes into the diner where Carlie works just so he can see her. Wes suffers from PTSD and he has been burnt bad by his cheating ex wife, so Wes doesn't plan to make a move on Carlie. He is content to just watch her from afar. When he goes to the diner for his daily dose of Carlie and finds she is not only not there, but that she didn't call in and isn't answering her phone, which is not like her at all, he is worried. When Carlie's boss tells Wes that Carlie has a abusive ex husband, Wes goes out to her home to make sure she is okay. When Wes gets there he finds Carlie's ex- husband holding her and her 6 year old son Tyler at knife point and hears him telling Carlie that he is going to kill her and take their son. Wes kicks in her back door and goes after Carlie's ex but he gets away. Knowing Carlie and Tyler are not going to be safe until her crazy ex is caught and returned to prison where he escaped, Wes has Carlie and her son move in with him. Living so close together, almost like a family feels good, and soon Wes finds that Carlie and her son have worked their way deeper into his heart. Can he lay his past demons to rest to have the family he always wanted, and can he protect Carlie and her son from her dangerous ex hell bent on killing Carlie and kidnapping Tyler?
"No, they won't. You have no idea what it's like. Even when my ex is caught and back behind bars, it'll only be a temporary reprieve." Frustration and anger surged. "I'll always be waiting for the next time he shows up- looking over my shoulder and jumping at shadows. Sometimes if feels like fear is the only thing constant in my life,"-Carlie to Wes
"You're not alone anymore, Carlie," he said, his vice gruff. "Whenever you need me, I'll be there for you. That's a promise and a constant."-Wes to Carlie
This book was exciting, suspenseful, and very sweet. I loved Wes. My God he was yummy. Wes was protective, sweet, and playful. The only thing about him I didn't like was that he let his fear of being hurt again hold him back. I loved Carlie. She was a fighter and a survivor. She has had a hard life and made some bad choices, but she turned that around and tries her best to give her son a happy and normal life. Carlie is smart and lets the others help keep her son and and her safe, which I was so glad for. I hate when a TSTL heroine ruins a book by running and putting herself in danger. Carlie not only was smart enough to accept help she helped herself by taking self defense classes. There was a nice build to Wes and Carlie's relationship. They had some major chemistry and when they got together it was smokin' hot! Everything about Carlie's son Tyler was adorable.
"You and Ty.....you two mean a lot to me. You know that, right? Things could never be just casual between you and me."- Wes to Carlie
"Is that......are you watching the Hallmark Channel?" "Don't you have to work early tomorrow morning?" He squeezed her gently. "Shouldn't you be sleeping?" "It is the Hallmark Channel." She grinned. "You're a romantic." "If you out me, I'll deny it," he said in a stern voice. "I won't tell a soul." -Carlie and Wes
I loved the way Wes was with Tyler. It totally melted my heart every time they rough housed or hugged. There is some really cute family moments in this book. There are some great secondary characters in this book too. The way the whole community comes together to help one of their own was sweet. I liked Ceejay, Cory, and Ryan so much that I will now have to go back and read the first three books so I can enjoy their stories too. A great read. I have never read anything by Barbara Longley before, but I will be check out more of her books.
"I've never wanted anyone the way I want you. There. I've said it." Carlie to Wes
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October 30, 2015
Fourth in the Perfect, Indiana series but can be read as a standalone.
This is a story about the boy and girl next door who got dealt a raw hand in life and lived through some really tough things before finding each other. Both the hero and heroine have some scary skeletons in their closet, and it was perhaps the most standout thing about this sweet love story...there was zero judgement from any of the main characters. It was all about learning to trust yourself and love yourself after hating your own mind for such a long time. Add in an uber protective, tough guy hero and a woman and her adorable son that need saving, and you get The Twisted Road to You by Barbara Longley.
A poignant, tender romance.
Advance copy provided for review.
This is a story about the boy and girl next door who got dealt a raw hand in life and lived through some really tough things before finding each other. Both the hero and heroine have some scary skeletons in their closet, and it was perhaps the most standout thing about this sweet love story...there was zero judgement from any of the main characters. It was all about learning to trust yourself and love yourself after hating your own mind for such a long time. Add in an uber protective, tough guy hero and a woman and her adorable son that need saving, and you get The Twisted Road to You by Barbara Longley.
A poignant, tender romance.
Advance copy provided for review.
October 20, 2015
Overall rating: 4.5 stars!
Triggers:
Cheating:
Love triangle:
Sex with om/ow:
Intimate pasts:
OM/OW drama:
Push/pull:
HEA:
This had to be the sweetest PTSD type story where our hero didn't feel he was worthy enough for love, but went after it anyway. Carlie, also felt she was unworthy of love because of her past. I loved how any secrets this couple had were revealed in a relatively good time frame.
I loved how even though Wesley didn't want to admit how strong his feelings were initially (even though everyone including the reader could see it) he cared for Carlie and her son so lovingly. He was absolutely amazing. He was there for protection no matter the cost.
I felt that both Wesley and Carlie's reasons for feeling unworthy were understandable. And I was VERY glad that That was such a change from other books I've read that were a little similar, but in such a good way! :)
Thanks for the recommendation Mandy! LOVED IT!
It's funny how everything happens for a reason and if it wasn't for her ex husband escaping jail and coming after Carlie and her son, neither her nor Wesley would have ever gotten the push they needed to finally be together.
This was truly a sweet story and I really loved it!
Triggers:
Cheating:
Love triangle:
Sex with om/ow:
Intimate pasts:
OM/OW drama:
Push/pull:
HEA:
This had to be the sweetest PTSD type story where our hero didn't feel he was worthy enough for love, but went after it anyway. Carlie, also felt she was unworthy of love because of her past. I loved how any secrets this couple had were revealed in a relatively good time frame.
I loved how even though Wesley didn't want to admit how strong his feelings were initially (even though everyone including the reader could see it) he cared for Carlie and her son so lovingly. He was absolutely amazing. He was there for protection no matter the cost.
I felt that both Wesley and Carlie's reasons for feeling unworthy were understandable. And I was VERY glad that That was such a change from other books I've read that were a little similar, but in such a good way! :)
Thanks for the recommendation Mandy! LOVED IT!
It's funny how everything happens for a reason and if it wasn't for her ex husband escaping jail and coming after Carlie and her son, neither her nor Wesley would have ever gotten the push they needed to finally be together.
This was truly a sweet story and I really loved it!
October 16, 2015
I LOVED this book! Wesley Holt is a former marine who suffers from PTSD. He was married to his high school sweetheart who cheated on him and left him while he was at war. He doesn't want to take a risk on love again so he keeps to himself. Wes goes to the local diner every morning to see his secret crush and favorite waitress, Carlie. Carlie is a single mom who moved to town 2 years ago. Carlie has secrets, she was in an abusive marriage and did things in her past that she's not proud of. When her past catches up with her and her ex-husband comes to town trying to steal their son, Wes will do everything he can to protect Carlie.
There is so much I loved about this book. Wes was the perfect hero - he's such a good guy. He's been hurt and is afraid to fall in love again. He's never done casual relationships, he's protective and he's really good with Carlie's son Tyler. I absolutely loved the connection between Wes and Tyler from the first moment they meet and that was the exact moment I fell in love with Wes. Carlie was a fantastic heroine - she's been through so much in her life but she never feels sorry for herself. She just wants to keep her son safe. I loved Carlie and Wes together and the chemistry between them. This was such a sweet romance but still had a little suspense and action. This is the first book I have read by this author but I can't wait to read more!
**ARC provided in exchange for an honest review**
There is so much I loved about this book. Wes was the perfect hero - he's such a good guy. He's been hurt and is afraid to fall in love again. He's never done casual relationships, he's protective and he's really good with Carlie's son Tyler. I absolutely loved the connection between Wes and Tyler from the first moment they meet and that was the exact moment I fell in love with Wes. Carlie was a fantastic heroine - she's been through so much in her life but she never feels sorry for herself. She just wants to keep her son safe. I loved Carlie and Wes together and the chemistry between them. This was such a sweet romance but still had a little suspense and action. This is the first book I have read by this author but I can't wait to read more!
**ARC provided in exchange for an honest review**
September 13, 2015
Perfect, Indiana, was Carlie' s home now. She'd testified against her abusive drug-dealing husband and put him behind bars, changed her name and taken off to make a new life for her and her son, Tyler. She works at the local diner and has a cute little house on the outskirts of town. Wes works at the local furniture store where all the employees are war vets who have been wounded in either mind, body, or both. He has an apartment over the store and works nights because he sleeps better during the day, relatively nightmare free. Most mornings he eats breakfast at the diner where he gets to see Carlie, a woman he's more than a little attracted to even though he knows he'll never ask her out. He'd been burned once by his ex-wife who dumped him while he was overseas, having gotten pregnant by another man. It was right after that his platoon was ambushed and his life had changed forever. Just like it does the morning he goes to the diner to discover Carlie never showed up for work.
Wes ends up going to her house to find her and her son being held against their will by her ex-husband. Wes saves them but the ex gets away. When Wes finds out how dangerous the guy is, he insists Carlie stay with him so he can protect her. A manhunt is underway for her ex but Carlie knows how cunning he is so she agrees to the protection. Of course, Wes' s friends step up to help as does local law enforcement and during their time together, Wes and Carlie develop serious feelings for one another.
Both are survivors with scars and while both fear getting hurt again, circumstances and their attraction draw them together. A really special love story between two special people. Loved it.
Wes ends up going to her house to find her and her son being held against their will by her ex-husband. Wes saves them but the ex gets away. When Wes finds out how dangerous the guy is, he insists Carlie stay with him so he can protect her. A manhunt is underway for her ex but Carlie knows how cunning he is so she agrees to the protection. Of course, Wes' s friends step up to help as does local law enforcement and during their time together, Wes and Carlie develop serious feelings for one another.
Both are survivors with scars and while both fear getting hurt again, circumstances and their attraction draw them together. A really special love story between two special people. Loved it.
July 2, 2016
December 2015 Prime borrow.
Really good book. Some great characters. Full review to come. My heart melted when Wes talked to Tyler. I will definitely read more by this author and recommend this book!
“PTSD stands for post-traumatic stress disorder. Severe trauma can change a person’s brain chemistry, and those of us who have PTSD need to learn how to cope.”
“Oh.” The kid’s face fell. “Do you think I’m gonna have it? You know, because of what happened . . .” His mouth turned down and his blue eyes grew huge and bright.
“You know what?” Wes crouched down in front of him. “You’re going to be all right, Ty, but I don’t think we ever get too big for a hug now and then. Do you?”
Tyler shrugged his shoulders again, and a lump formed in Wes’s throat. He held out his arms, and the little boy kind of collapsed into him. He hugged him close and ran his hands up and down Tyler’s back. “It’s going to be OK, partner. Me and the other guys here at Langford & Lovejoy are going to make sure you and your mom stay safe. You have my word; I won’t let anything happen to either of you.”
Tyler sniffed, and Wes’s T-shirt felt damp where the kid burrowed his face against his shoulder. “If you want, Rex can sleep with you on your bed.” He looked to Carlie for permission. Her own eyes had grown bright with the sheen of tears, and she nodded. “Rex is a retired military dog,” Wes said. “He’s a soldier, just like me. Did you know that?”
Tyler sucked in a few gulps of air and shook his head. “Do you think he’d do that—sleep on the bed, I mean?”
“I’m sure he would. I never let him on my bed, so sleeping on yours would be a special treat.” Wes gave the kid one more hug and let him go. He stood up and ran his hand over Tyler’s head. “Feel better?”
“Yeah.”
He put his arm around her shoulders and tucked her close to his side. “He’s a coward and a punk. I’m a Marine. You’ve got nothing to worry about.”
“I wanna be a Marine when I grow up.” Tyler puffed out his chest and lifted his chin. “Just like you.” His face scrunched again. “Wes, what is a Marine, anyway?”
Wesley’s chest expanded a few inches, and so did his heart. “A soldier. I’m a retired Marine, an elite branch of the US military. I’d be mighty proud if you followed that path, Tyler, but you have a lot of years to go before you decide.”
“I dreamed about him,” Tyler said, breaking the silence. “About the man who used to be my daddy.” He played with the hem of his pajama shirt. “Mommy said he lost the right to be my daddy, because he wasn’t fit for the job.”
The little guy’s chin quivered, and he took in a gulp of air. Wesley hugged him close and kept his mouth shut. “Toby and Micah have a good daddy. All the kids in my class have good daddies, too.” He lifted tear-filled eyes to Wes, effectively cracking his heart wide-open. “How come my daddy didn’t love me and Mommy enough to be a good daddy like the other kids have?”
“It has nothing to do with you, partner. I know that much for sure. Any dad I know would be proud to have a son like you.”
“Would you be proud to have a son like me, Wes?” Tyler’s big blue eyes looked up at him with such longing and hope that Wes could hardly speak past the lump that had formed in his throat.
“Hell, yes . . . and don’t tell your mother I said hell in front of you.” He hugged Ty again. “You know what, partner? I’m proud as can be just to know you.
And Wes and Carlie are made for each other.
“Why?” Her eyes stung again. “Why would you do so much for me, when we hardly know each other?”
“You’ve always been good to me.” He shrugged. “I appreciate the way you reserve that table in the corner of the diner for me every morning.” One side of his mouth tugged up in a wry grin. “I need to have my back against the wall. I have to face the door when I’m at the diner. You figured that out without a word from me. I”—he cleared his throat—“I enjoy seeing your smiling face every morning, Carlie. Makes my day,” he said, his face coloring. “I sleep better after my visits to the diner.”
Wow. Just . . . wow. Who’d have thought such a big, tough guy like Wesley Holt could be so sensitive? Who broke this wonderful man’s trust? What would she give to be loved by someone like Wesley Holt? She’d never be so lucky or worthy.
“I’ve always had a problem with bullies,” he said. “Can’t stand ’em, and it makes no difference whether they’re the playground type, the international terrorist kind or the wife and kid beaters.” His hands settled on her slender waist, and he placed his forehead against hers. “I don’t discriminate when it comes to an intense dislike for the group as a whole.” Lord, she smelled good. “Jared messed with you and Tyler, and that messed with me. I can’t allow that, Carlie.”
“You were having a bad dream, and I—”
“How’d you get . . . under me?” His expression changed from confusion to heated, and he pressed his hips against her.
“I . . . you—”
“Aw, who cares?” He nuzzled her neck and tangled his fingers in her hair. “You always smell so damn good . . . feel so good . . . Carlie . . . want you so much,” he whispered into her ear...
Laughing, she threw her arms around him and drew him close for a kiss. Wes took his time with her, as she did with him. Taking turns tasting and touching, they discovered what the other liked and needed. Sighing, lingering, they made love until they lay panting in each other’s arms. Carlie couldn’t remember a time when she’d felt this completely at ease and replete. Her gentle giant’s touch was so tender she turned to mush in his arms. Wes was not a man who took without giving in equal measure. He wasn’t one to see that his own needs were met, turning away once he reached the finish line. No. Wesley seemed to crave her touch as much as she craved his. He snuggled up to her, wrapped her in his arms and tucked her head under his chin before falling asleep.
Being around Carlie and Ty made Wes want to be a better man. Had his ex ever made him feel that way? Nope. Mostly Tina had made him feel inadequate. He’d never been able to please her, no matter what he did or how hard he tried.
Things are going to work out fine. You’ll see.” Carlie trembled in his arms. If anything happened to her . . . Wes tightened his hold. “I won’t let Jared hurt you, sweetheart, I swear, and—”
“And I can take that to the bank?” She huffed out a tremulous breath. Tilting her head back, she met his gaze. “I believe you, Wes. I just . . . I’ll be glad when this is behind us. I’m nervous but not afraid.”
“That’s my girl.”
His vision began to narrow, and he felt himself slipping out of consciousness. “No,” he groaned. “Not now . . .” Not when he had so much to live for. Everything about his life came into sharp focus then. He loved Carlie and Ty, dammit, and he wanted a lifetime with them. He wanted to grow old with Carlie and watch Ty turn into the fine young man he knew he would become. I’m a fool. He’d been too stubborn and afraid to grab the gift he’d been given, refusing to surrender completely, heart and soul. What he and Carlie had was worth far more than his fear and his stupid pride, and yet he’d refused to set aside his baggage for her. His breaths came in shallow, pain-filled gasps. Don’t let it be too late. Please, don’t let me bleed out before I tell Carlie I love her! She needs to know.
Really good book. Some great characters. Full review to come. My heart melted when Wes talked to Tyler. I will definitely read more by this author and recommend this book!
“PTSD stands for post-traumatic stress disorder. Severe trauma can change a person’s brain chemistry, and those of us who have PTSD need to learn how to cope.”
“Oh.” The kid’s face fell. “Do you think I’m gonna have it? You know, because of what happened . . .” His mouth turned down and his blue eyes grew huge and bright.
“You know what?” Wes crouched down in front of him. “You’re going to be all right, Ty, but I don’t think we ever get too big for a hug now and then. Do you?”
Tyler shrugged his shoulders again, and a lump formed in Wes’s throat. He held out his arms, and the little boy kind of collapsed into him. He hugged him close and ran his hands up and down Tyler’s back. “It’s going to be OK, partner. Me and the other guys here at Langford & Lovejoy are going to make sure you and your mom stay safe. You have my word; I won’t let anything happen to either of you.”
Tyler sniffed, and Wes’s T-shirt felt damp where the kid burrowed his face against his shoulder. “If you want, Rex can sleep with you on your bed.” He looked to Carlie for permission. Her own eyes had grown bright with the sheen of tears, and she nodded. “Rex is a retired military dog,” Wes said. “He’s a soldier, just like me. Did you know that?”
Tyler sucked in a few gulps of air and shook his head. “Do you think he’d do that—sleep on the bed, I mean?”
“I’m sure he would. I never let him on my bed, so sleeping on yours would be a special treat.” Wes gave the kid one more hug and let him go. He stood up and ran his hand over Tyler’s head. “Feel better?”
“Yeah.”
He put his arm around her shoulders and tucked her close to his side. “He’s a coward and a punk. I’m a Marine. You’ve got nothing to worry about.”
“I wanna be a Marine when I grow up.” Tyler puffed out his chest and lifted his chin. “Just like you.” His face scrunched again. “Wes, what is a Marine, anyway?”
Wesley’s chest expanded a few inches, and so did his heart. “A soldier. I’m a retired Marine, an elite branch of the US military. I’d be mighty proud if you followed that path, Tyler, but you have a lot of years to go before you decide.”
“I dreamed about him,” Tyler said, breaking the silence. “About the man who used to be my daddy.” He played with the hem of his pajama shirt. “Mommy said he lost the right to be my daddy, because he wasn’t fit for the job.”
The little guy’s chin quivered, and he took in a gulp of air. Wesley hugged him close and kept his mouth shut. “Toby and Micah have a good daddy. All the kids in my class have good daddies, too.” He lifted tear-filled eyes to Wes, effectively cracking his heart wide-open. “How come my daddy didn’t love me and Mommy enough to be a good daddy like the other kids have?”
“It has nothing to do with you, partner. I know that much for sure. Any dad I know would be proud to have a son like you.”
“Would you be proud to have a son like me, Wes?” Tyler’s big blue eyes looked up at him with such longing and hope that Wes could hardly speak past the lump that had formed in his throat.
“Hell, yes . . . and don’t tell your mother I said hell in front of you.” He hugged Ty again. “You know what, partner? I’m proud as can be just to know you.
And Wes and Carlie are made for each other.
“Why?” Her eyes stung again. “Why would you do so much for me, when we hardly know each other?”
“You’ve always been good to me.” He shrugged. “I appreciate the way you reserve that table in the corner of the diner for me every morning.” One side of his mouth tugged up in a wry grin. “I need to have my back against the wall. I have to face the door when I’m at the diner. You figured that out without a word from me. I”—he cleared his throat—“I enjoy seeing your smiling face every morning, Carlie. Makes my day,” he said, his face coloring. “I sleep better after my visits to the diner.”
Wow. Just . . . wow. Who’d have thought such a big, tough guy like Wesley Holt could be so sensitive? Who broke this wonderful man’s trust? What would she give to be loved by someone like Wesley Holt? She’d never be so lucky or worthy.
“I’ve always had a problem with bullies,” he said. “Can’t stand ’em, and it makes no difference whether they’re the playground type, the international terrorist kind or the wife and kid beaters.” His hands settled on her slender waist, and he placed his forehead against hers. “I don’t discriminate when it comes to an intense dislike for the group as a whole.” Lord, she smelled good. “Jared messed with you and Tyler, and that messed with me. I can’t allow that, Carlie.”
“You were having a bad dream, and I—”
“How’d you get . . . under me?” His expression changed from confusion to heated, and he pressed his hips against her.
“I . . . you—”
“Aw, who cares?” He nuzzled her neck and tangled his fingers in her hair. “You always smell so damn good . . . feel so good . . . Carlie . . . want you so much,” he whispered into her ear...
Laughing, she threw her arms around him and drew him close for a kiss. Wes took his time with her, as she did with him. Taking turns tasting and touching, they discovered what the other liked and needed. Sighing, lingering, they made love until they lay panting in each other’s arms. Carlie couldn’t remember a time when she’d felt this completely at ease and replete. Her gentle giant’s touch was so tender she turned to mush in his arms. Wes was not a man who took without giving in equal measure. He wasn’t one to see that his own needs were met, turning away once he reached the finish line. No. Wesley seemed to crave her touch as much as she craved his. He snuggled up to her, wrapped her in his arms and tucked her head under his chin before falling asleep.
Being around Carlie and Ty made Wes want to be a better man. Had his ex ever made him feel that way? Nope. Mostly Tina had made him feel inadequate. He’d never been able to please her, no matter what he did or how hard he tried.
Things are going to work out fine. You’ll see.” Carlie trembled in his arms. If anything happened to her . . . Wes tightened his hold. “I won’t let Jared hurt you, sweetheart, I swear, and—”
“And I can take that to the bank?” She huffed out a tremulous breath. Tilting her head back, she met his gaze. “I believe you, Wes. I just . . . I’ll be glad when this is behind us. I’m nervous but not afraid.”
“That’s my girl.”
His vision began to narrow, and he felt himself slipping out of consciousness. “No,” he groaned. “Not now . . .” Not when he had so much to live for. Everything about his life came into sharp focus then. He loved Carlie and Ty, dammit, and he wanted a lifetime with them. He wanted to grow old with Carlie and watch Ty turn into the fine young man he knew he would become. I’m a fool. He’d been too stubborn and afraid to grab the gift he’d been given, refusing to surrender completely, heart and soul. What he and Carlie had was worth far more than his fear and his stupid pride, and yet he’d refused to set aside his baggage for her. His breaths came in shallow, pain-filled gasps. Don’t let it be too late. Please, don’t let me bleed out before I tell Carlie I love her! She needs to know.
October 20, 2015
I should probably start by saying that I always picture myself as the character of a book when we share the same name, so my image of Carlie is 100% different than everyone else. It did not take away from the book at all though, because I loved this book.
Many thanks to Netgalley for providing an ARC in exchange for my honest review.
Wesley has closed himself off from getting attached again, he's got PTSD and a real hard time trusting people. He's got his fellow friends and veterans he works with, his dog Rex, and a schedule he follows meticulously. Part of that schedule involves visiting Carlie at the diner for breakfast after his night shift, but when she's not there one day and her ex-husband is to blame, Wesley is willing to do whatever it takes. After vowing to protect Carlie and her son while her ex is wreaking havoc, Wes starts letting Carlie in little by little. Carlie thinks it's time to run again, ready to start over in a new life for the second time, but that plan didn't involve Wes and he's made her rethink the running. Carlie has to put aside her fears, Wes his trust issues, and together they must face the danger of Carlie's ex.
I love a good military man, I'm dating one for goodness sake, but Wesley has definitely taken the spot for my favorite book military man. Sure, he's been closed off for so long from letting any girl in, but he deals with some pretty heavy thoughts, going so far as to working nights so he can try to sleep during the day when he is apt to have less nightmares. He also is incredibly kind, awesome with Carlie's son Tyler, and seemed to come out of his shell over time. I love that he didn't want to recognize how much he cared for Carlie, even when he was willing to do anything for her. He was a very realistic character for me and I appreciated the level of detail Barbara Longley gave when it came to Wesley's thoughts. As for the object of his affections, Carlie, I really liked her as well. She had a ton of strength and out of every abuse novel I've ever read, she's been the character who handled it best. Her reactions and desire to hide were believable, and justified, and I appreciated that the timeline of her recovery to really date again was realistic. There are also some amazing minor characters in this book, both Carlie and Wesley's friends brought a lot of background to the story and provided some interesting dialogue. The romance and suspense is done very well; I didn't feel like either story line was overwhelming the other. I enjoyed how the threat of Carlie's ex pushed Wes and Carlie together. The PTSD and survivor's guilt was handled beautifully by Longley and I was impressed with its accuracy.
I have not read anything else by Barbara Longley, but you can bet I'll be picking up some of her others. This can be read as a standalone and I highly recommend it.
You can find more of my reviews at Carlene Inspired.
Many thanks to Netgalley for providing an ARC in exchange for my honest review.
Wesley has closed himself off from getting attached again, he's got PTSD and a real hard time trusting people. He's got his fellow friends and veterans he works with, his dog Rex, and a schedule he follows meticulously. Part of that schedule involves visiting Carlie at the diner for breakfast after his night shift, but when she's not there one day and her ex-husband is to blame, Wesley is willing to do whatever it takes. After vowing to protect Carlie and her son while her ex is wreaking havoc, Wes starts letting Carlie in little by little. Carlie thinks it's time to run again, ready to start over in a new life for the second time, but that plan didn't involve Wes and he's made her rethink the running. Carlie has to put aside her fears, Wes his trust issues, and together they must face the danger of Carlie's ex.
I love a good military man, I'm dating one for goodness sake, but Wesley has definitely taken the spot for my favorite book military man. Sure, he's been closed off for so long from letting any girl in, but he deals with some pretty heavy thoughts, going so far as to working nights so he can try to sleep during the day when he is apt to have less nightmares. He also is incredibly kind, awesome with Carlie's son Tyler, and seemed to come out of his shell over time. I love that he didn't want to recognize how much he cared for Carlie, even when he was willing to do anything for her. He was a very realistic character for me and I appreciated the level of detail Barbara Longley gave when it came to Wesley's thoughts. As for the object of his affections, Carlie, I really liked her as well. She had a ton of strength and out of every abuse novel I've ever read, she's been the character who handled it best. Her reactions and desire to hide were believable, and justified, and I appreciated that the timeline of her recovery to really date again was realistic. There are also some amazing minor characters in this book, both Carlie and Wesley's friends brought a lot of background to the story and provided some interesting dialogue. The romance and suspense is done very well; I didn't feel like either story line was overwhelming the other. I enjoyed how the threat of Carlie's ex pushed Wes and Carlie together. The PTSD and survivor's guilt was handled beautifully by Longley and I was impressed with its accuracy.
I have not read anything else by Barbara Longley, but you can bet I'll be picking up some of her others. This can be read as a standalone and I highly recommend it.
You can find more of my reviews at Carlene Inspired.
June 21, 2017
This wasn’t quite as sad and depressing as A Change of Heart because of Carlie’s crazy, escaped convict, ex-husband. However, When you read something in a book and you think “didn’t I just read that in the last book,” you gotta wonder how lazy an author can be to do that. When Carlie first went into Paige’s kitchen almost the exact same conversation was said as there was when Cory, A Change of Heart, went into Page’s kitchen. It was so glaring it wasn’t even funny. And when Cory brought a dish, for whatever she was bringing it for, it was Pasta Salad and when Carlie brought a dish it was a Pasta Salad. Really? But best of all was when Wes was going to teach Tyler, Carlie’s 6 year old son, how to pick up dog poop. Eww. Was that necessary? Or when the nurse then the PA, days apart, asked Wes if he had passed gas or pooped yet, while he was in the hospital. Seriously gross. In a romance novel it's just too hard to forget something you've read like that then think about them having sex. BUT, that's just me.
I’m glad Jared, the idiot ex, was in this book or I might have had a DNF on my hands.
Because there was a LOT of I’m not good enough for her and I’m not good enough for him going on, and I hate that!
Anyway, I’m done with the Perfect Indiana PTSD series.
There was explicit sex in this book and the F-bomb was used 5 times.
As to the narration: I absolutely love Eric G. Dove! His voices and emotions when he reads are spectacular.
October 13, 2015
Contemporary Romance Boring
This has all the makings of a good story, but somehow it just fell flat. Especially for a Romantic Suspense novel which, in my mind, should have a much higher energy level.
I think it boils down to the writing, the basics are there, but there's no spark. My emotions were never engaged. Disappointing because I have read other books by Ms. Langley that were captivating.
I must admit that I am not a fan of his and her perspectives in a romance novel, that alone takes away a good portion of the tension. And the book could really have used some underlying humor or at least some witty dialogue.
As it is, reading this novel is like eating a bowl of plain popcorn, I just about had to force myself to finish it. I'd much rather have butter and salt.
There are just a couple of bad words and two intimate scenes, several pages each.
ARC received from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
This has all the makings of a good story, but somehow it just fell flat. Especially for a Romantic Suspense novel which, in my mind, should have a much higher energy level.
I think it boils down to the writing, the basics are there, but there's no spark. My emotions were never engaged. Disappointing because I have read other books by Ms. Langley that were captivating.
I must admit that I am not a fan of his and her perspectives in a romance novel, that alone takes away a good portion of the tension. And the book could really have used some underlying humor or at least some witty dialogue.
As it is, reading this novel is like eating a bowl of plain popcorn, I just about had to force myself to finish it. I'd much rather have butter and salt.
There are just a couple of bad words and two intimate scenes, several pages each.
ARC received from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
September 15, 2015
Full review can be read at www.booklovercircumspect4.com on 9/16/15
MY REVIEW
This is story involving retired Marine, Wesley Holt, and Carlie Stewart, a waitress and a single mother to her six-year-old son, at Wes' favorite restaurant. The book takes place in Perfect, Indiana. Wes is suffering from PTSD and a broken heart from his ex-wife. Carlie is haunted by her past, including her own inner demons, and her ex-husband, "Asshole", who has escaped from prison.
Carlie does not show up for work one morning and her boss is considered. Wes immediately goes to find out what is going on and finds Carlie and her son in trouble. Thankfully, Wes is there and is able to save Carlie and her son, for now. This is when the story really begins......as Carlie's ex husband has escaped from prison and will not relent until he get has their son.
Carlie hasn't had the easiest life in her past and she sells herself short as she doesn't see how far she has come in her life to see what an amazing mother she is. Wes is an honorable good man, but he to has his inner struggles with his past military experiences and betrayal by his ex-wife. This is an amazing story about how two broken people can come together and help each other heal and learn to love themselves. Also, throughout this story, there is also a lot of community involvement as well that helps Carlie and Wes. It was nice to see the community rally around to help Carlie and Wes and that is the way it should be but often is not anymore.
I give this book 4 out of 4 "waf-ees"
This book is available now for pre-order on Amazon and will released on October 20, 2015.
MY REVIEW
This is story involving retired Marine, Wesley Holt, and Carlie Stewart, a waitress and a single mother to her six-year-old son, at Wes' favorite restaurant. The book takes place in Perfect, Indiana. Wes is suffering from PTSD and a broken heart from his ex-wife. Carlie is haunted by her past, including her own inner demons, and her ex-husband, "Asshole", who has escaped from prison.
Carlie does not show up for work one morning and her boss is considered. Wes immediately goes to find out what is going on and finds Carlie and her son in trouble. Thankfully, Wes is there and is able to save Carlie and her son, for now. This is when the story really begins......as Carlie's ex husband has escaped from prison and will not relent until he get has their son.
Carlie hasn't had the easiest life in her past and she sells herself short as she doesn't see how far she has come in her life to see what an amazing mother she is. Wes is an honorable good man, but he to has his inner struggles with his past military experiences and betrayal by his ex-wife. This is an amazing story about how two broken people can come together and help each other heal and learn to love themselves. Also, throughout this story, there is also a lot of community involvement as well that helps Carlie and Wes. It was nice to see the community rally around to help Carlie and Wes and that is the way it should be but often is not anymore.
I give this book 4 out of 4 "waf-ees"
This book is available now for pre-order on Amazon and will released on October 20, 2015.
October 19, 2015
There was something about this one that sort of sneaks up on a person. I think it's due to Wes and Carlie and how they acted with each other, sort of like kids in junior high who had a crush but were too shy to action on it. It was fun to see everyone from L&L give Wes crap.
I really loved how from the start Wes wanted to protect Carlie and he went about doing that, along with comforting her in the aftermath of the first round of violence. What really won me over with them as a couple was how Wes treated Tyler. He explained some hard facts to a scared boy, then went about doing what he could to comfort him.
It was great to see how everyone in Perfect rallied around Carlie in her time of need, a sense of belonging and friends that accepted.
The play made at the end of the book needed to happen, they couldn't keep up the constant vigilance forever. It's just too bad that things happened that made Wes and Carlie realize they loved each other and weren't able to do anything about it then.
The ending to this one was perfect, just what this couple needed.
I really loved how from the start Wes wanted to protect Carlie and he went about doing that, along with comforting her in the aftermath of the first round of violence. What really won me over with them as a couple was how Wes treated Tyler. He explained some hard facts to a scared boy, then went about doing what he could to comfort him.
It was great to see how everyone in Perfect rallied around Carlie in her time of need, a sense of belonging and friends that accepted.
The play made at the end of the book needed to happen, they couldn't keep up the constant vigilance forever. It's just too bad that things happened that made Wes and Carlie realize they loved each other and weren't able to do anything about it then.
The ending to this one was perfect, just what this couple needed.
March 13, 2017
So sweet but I would've loved an epilogue!
June 19, 2017
My Musings
4.5 Stars
I loved this book. One of the things I enjoy most about this author is that while the characters have deep seated secrets, they don't hold them so close to their chests that the other one has no clue what is driving their fear of commitment. Some books I read frustrate me because the secrets stay secrets too long. As a reader that drives me crazy. I am so glad Ms. Longley doesn't do that. Hope the next book comes out soon. I love Perfect and want Men's story. Happy ☺reading 📚!
4.5 Stars
I loved this book. One of the things I enjoy most about this author is that while the characters have deep seated secrets, they don't hold them so close to their chests that the other one has no clue what is driving their fear of commitment. Some books I read frustrate me because the secrets stay secrets too long. As a reader that drives me crazy. I am so glad Ms. Longley doesn't do that. Hope the next book comes out soon. I love Perfect and want Men's story. Happy ☺reading 📚!
October 23, 2015
Twisted is a good way of putting it. Because all the roads for every person in this story was twisted one way or another. Thanks to their service to the USA. You see all the guys are US Vets who worked at L&L (Langford & Lovejoy) custom handmade wooden furniture designed by the company. They are owned by Noah Langford and Ted Lovejoy. Most if not all were in battle together or served together in some form.
One of the reasons for this type of crew is that one, it’s hard for guys coming out of service to get jobs but if you are visibly injured or have PTSD forget about it no one wants to touch you. In this they all encourage each other to make it to PTSD meetings etc… They not only have this brother in arms bond but now it is a real type friendship of choice.
One of the men that works there is an ex-Major in the Marines. Due to not only injury which was minor to his PTSD but also stemming from first, losing his wife to another man by a Dear John letter. Second, soon after like hours later he was deployed to missions where he felt his mind was more on what was going on at home than what was in front of him. His team was ambushed and a guy was shot dead in the middle of it he could see the surprised expression of shock on his face as he died. Major Wesley Holt felt if he was paying better attention he would have been able to tell him to get down that the Taliban set them up it was a trap and to take cover.
The only relief he has had over the last year or so is at the end of his day, which is everyone else’s breakfast, because he works graveyard to keep the nightmares and flashbacks at bay. He walks to the diner down the way from his work and where he lives above L&L so he can see Carlie Stewart. Carlie is a single mother who works the morning shift. She is gorgeous. A voluptuous full figured young woman. From the day he saw her he could not take his eyes off her. Every time he even thought of her as anything other than his kind waitress or in his fantasy dream he would start to lose it. Relationships and love was wrapped up in his PTSD. All due to his ex.
Carlie had ended up in Perfect, Indiana a little over 2 years ago. Yet, no one really knew her. Then one day he goes into the diner for his breakfast and the table that Carlie usually saved for him had someone in it. She was nowhere to be seen.
The owners see him and direct him over. They know he had eyes for her well as everyone else does, and they ask for his help to check on her. At that moment his heart take on extra beats. The owner not only an ex-Marine but the retired Sheriff for Perfect had a bad feeling and so did Wes.
After a look between husband and wife he gets the nod and tells Wes that Carlie had moved to Perfect after her husband was put in prison for putting her in the hospital after he beat her halfway to death. That’s all he needed and directions and he ran back to L&L where his apartment is on the 3rd floor pulls out his gun and ammo from the safe. The guys at L&L are on alert by the short arrival back from the diner, his abrupt actions, him retrieving his gun, and his 3 legged ex-military dog, Rex. They block his departure to get the 411. Asked if he needed back up he says no and they said call if he needs them.
When he gets close he sees all the open field where her ex could hide in waiting. And where he can park to hike in on foot. He and Rex do, they see her, and Tyler hunched on the couch in fear. There is a man with a knife yelling at them. He does notice bruises and black eye on Carlie. He sneaks around back to the hope it’s unlocked like everyone else’s in Perfect but it’s locked. When he hears him threaten to kill her he kicks in the door and…
Sorry you will have to read it and see. You will not regret it. This writer has a great way of making your emotions go in so many directions. There’s suspense, humor, romance, sadness, fear, and hope in this 274 pages. I give this 5 ++++ stars. Provided by Netgalley.com.
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One of the reasons for this type of crew is that one, it’s hard for guys coming out of service to get jobs but if you are visibly injured or have PTSD forget about it no one wants to touch you. In this they all encourage each other to make it to PTSD meetings etc… They not only have this brother in arms bond but now it is a real type friendship of choice.
One of the men that works there is an ex-Major in the Marines. Due to not only injury which was minor to his PTSD but also stemming from first, losing his wife to another man by a Dear John letter. Second, soon after like hours later he was deployed to missions where he felt his mind was more on what was going on at home than what was in front of him. His team was ambushed and a guy was shot dead in the middle of it he could see the surprised expression of shock on his face as he died. Major Wesley Holt felt if he was paying better attention he would have been able to tell him to get down that the Taliban set them up it was a trap and to take cover.
The only relief he has had over the last year or so is at the end of his day, which is everyone else’s breakfast, because he works graveyard to keep the nightmares and flashbacks at bay. He walks to the diner down the way from his work and where he lives above L&L so he can see Carlie Stewart. Carlie is a single mother who works the morning shift. She is gorgeous. A voluptuous full figured young woman. From the day he saw her he could not take his eyes off her. Every time he even thought of her as anything other than his kind waitress or in his fantasy dream he would start to lose it. Relationships and love was wrapped up in his PTSD. All due to his ex.
Carlie had ended up in Perfect, Indiana a little over 2 years ago. Yet, no one really knew her. Then one day he goes into the diner for his breakfast and the table that Carlie usually saved for him had someone in it. She was nowhere to be seen.
The owners see him and direct him over. They know he had eyes for her well as everyone else does, and they ask for his help to check on her. At that moment his heart take on extra beats. The owner not only an ex-Marine but the retired Sheriff for Perfect had a bad feeling and so did Wes.
After a look between husband and wife he gets the nod and tells Wes that Carlie had moved to Perfect after her husband was put in prison for putting her in the hospital after he beat her halfway to death. That’s all he needed and directions and he ran back to L&L where his apartment is on the 3rd floor pulls out his gun and ammo from the safe. The guys at L&L are on alert by the short arrival back from the diner, his abrupt actions, him retrieving his gun, and his 3 legged ex-military dog, Rex. They block his departure to get the 411. Asked if he needed back up he says no and they said call if he needs them.
When he gets close he sees all the open field where her ex could hide in waiting. And where he can park to hike in on foot. He and Rex do, they see her, and Tyler hunched on the couch in fear. There is a man with a knife yelling at them. He does notice bruises and black eye on Carlie. He sneaks around back to the hope it’s unlocked like everyone else’s in Perfect but it’s locked. When he hears him threaten to kill her he kicks in the door and…
Sorry you will have to read it and see. You will not regret it. This writer has a great way of making your emotions go in so many directions. There’s suspense, humor, romance, sadness, fear, and hope in this 274 pages. I give this 5 ++++ stars. Provided by Netgalley.com.
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June 21, 2016
4 alpha-protector-hotness Stars
Carlie is the single mom of 6-year-old cutie Tyler. They had been in town for a little while but kept mostly to themselves. She works at a distant relative’s dinner and the highlight of each day is drooling after Wes Holt when he comes in for breakfast after his shift at work. Carlie came to this little nowhere town to get away from a very abusive and violent ex-husband, so she only admires Wes from afar.
Wes, retired marine (totally drool worthy by the way) is struggling with PTSD that is severely mixed up with his relationship issues due to his skank of an ex-wife. He too has been mooning after Carlie since she started at the dinner, but he knows he has nothing to offer her and her boy, so he settled on ogling her from a distance whenever he has a chance.
Unfortunately, Carlie’s whacko ex-husband escapes from prison and finds them, unknowingly setting in motion Carlie and Wes’s future by awakening Wes’s protective side. Soon enough he has Carlie and Tyler in his secured apartment, driving them everywhere and acting like the family he always wanted but had given up on.
Carlie’s past is not very pretty and she doesn’t feel worthy of a good guy like Wes. Wes has given up hope and buried the dream of being a family man. They’ll have to overcome their deepest fears to get the chance at something beautiful.
I really enjoyed The Twisted Road to You, it was sweet, it had some suspense and some very steamy scenes. Wes was just too hot when he was interacting with Tyler.
It was very well written, easy to read and I’m going to have to get my hands on the previous books in this series.
*I received a complimentary copy of this book*
Carlie is the single mom of 6-year-old cutie Tyler. They had been in town for a little while but kept mostly to themselves. She works at a distant relative’s dinner and the highlight of each day is drooling after Wes Holt when he comes in for breakfast after his shift at work. Carlie came to this little nowhere town to get away from a very abusive and violent ex-husband, so she only admires Wes from afar.
Wes, retired marine (totally drool worthy by the way) is struggling with PTSD that is severely mixed up with his relationship issues due to his skank of an ex-wife. He too has been mooning after Carlie since she started at the dinner, but he knows he has nothing to offer her and her boy, so he settled on ogling her from a distance whenever he has a chance.
Unfortunately, Carlie’s whacko ex-husband escapes from prison and finds them, unknowingly setting in motion Carlie and Wes’s future by awakening Wes’s protective side. Soon enough he has Carlie and Tyler in his secured apartment, driving them everywhere and acting like the family he always wanted but had given up on.
Carlie’s past is not very pretty and she doesn’t feel worthy of a good guy like Wes. Wes has given up hope and buried the dream of being a family man. They’ll have to overcome their deepest fears to get the chance at something beautiful.
I really enjoyed The Twisted Road to You, it was sweet, it had some suspense and some very steamy scenes. Wes was just too hot when he was interacting with Tyler.
It was very well written, easy to read and I’m going to have to get my hands on the previous books in this series.
*I received a complimentary copy of this book*
January 12, 2016
Wesley Holt is a retired marine struggling with PTSD and he works at a company with other vets and they are able to help one another. He also works nights because of his problems of sleeping. The one thing he does look forward to is seeing Carlie Stewart, a waitress at a local diner. This was his morning ritual and he was looking forward to it this one morning, so when she was not their at work he began to worry. He ends up going out to where she lived to find out that ex-husband had her and her son held at gun point he realized he had to do something. He crashed in and got them out but the ex-got away. From there the story takes place in town between the three of them and the members of the town trying to keep them safe from the ex who is still around trying to get to her and his son. Wesley and Carlie realize that they have feelings for one another but they must come clean with each other about their pasts if there is any hope of a future. This is a very emotional book dealing with many different things but a very good book. The characters are very in depth and makes you feel like she is telling about real people. A good book. I got this book from net galley. Follow us at www.1rad-readerreviews.com
September 13, 2015
His nickname is Bunny? Ha!
Pretty good of him to help her, even though they've never talked outside of her workplace.
Poor Tyler.
Has she had a history with abuse? How sad.
What a life for this kid, when picking up dog poop is fun.
I like learning all these new military terms.
Whoa girl, that attitude is going to scare off customers.
Using her love for her son against her is kind of genius. And I just want to hug Tyler.
Wow, a soldier who actually wants to talk.
Omigawd, stop talking, man!
Her brother is no kind of brother at all.
Was Jared ever in the military?
Her mother is great. Not.
Right on, Tyler. Whipped cream is the best part.
Sucker.
I so love you right now, Miguel.
Yeah, why do nurses have to keep taking your temperature and drawing blood all damn day and night?
It's a sad day when you're actually hoping to fart in public.
Bat-guano. I like it.
Why doesn't everyone wear two gowns?
Pureed steak sounds so gross.
Wanna bet she does?
Personally, I would want to be surprised by the ring.
I received an ARC from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
Pretty good of him to help her, even though they've never talked outside of her workplace.
Poor Tyler.
Has she had a history with abuse? How sad.
What a life for this kid, when picking up dog poop is fun.
I like learning all these new military terms.
Whoa girl, that attitude is going to scare off customers.
Using her love for her son against her is kind of genius. And I just want to hug Tyler.
Wow, a soldier who actually wants to talk.
Omigawd, stop talking, man!
Her brother is no kind of brother at all.
Was Jared ever in the military?
Her mother is great. Not.
Right on, Tyler. Whipped cream is the best part.
Sucker.
I so love you right now, Miguel.
Yeah, why do nurses have to keep taking your temperature and drawing blood all damn day and night?
It's a sad day when you're actually hoping to fart in public.
Bat-guano. I like it.
Why doesn't everyone wear two gowns?
Pureed steak sounds so gross.
Wanna bet she does?
Personally, I would want to be surprised by the ring.
I received an ARC from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
September 17, 2015
Thank you Netgalley for the copy of this book in exchange for an honest review!
The Twisted Road To You follows the story of Carlie and Wes. Wes is a retired marine working and living in the quiet town of Perfect. Carlie is a waitress at the local diner and has an awful past she had to run from. When Carlie's past walks right into town, Wes comes to the rescue to her and her son when they needed it most. But everything's not that easy, as Carlie's past isn't going anywhere, Wes takes in Carlie and her son until they are safe. A lot is at stake and closure proves it is hard to come by.
Overall I liked reading this book. I absolutely loved Wes' character and also Carlie's son Tyler's as well. I had a really hard time with all the side characters though, as there were so many of them it was confusing following who was who throughout the story. I did love the storyline though, it kept me on the edge on my seat waiting for what would happen next. I felt the story was very well written however, aside from the slight character confusion and I would recommend others!
The Twisted Road To You follows the story of Carlie and Wes. Wes is a retired marine working and living in the quiet town of Perfect. Carlie is a waitress at the local diner and has an awful past she had to run from. When Carlie's past walks right into town, Wes comes to the rescue to her and her son when they needed it most. But everything's not that easy, as Carlie's past isn't going anywhere, Wes takes in Carlie and her son until they are safe. A lot is at stake and closure proves it is hard to come by.
Overall I liked reading this book. I absolutely loved Wes' character and also Carlie's son Tyler's as well. I had a really hard time with all the side characters though, as there were so many of them it was confusing following who was who throughout the story. I did love the storyline though, it kept me on the edge on my seat waiting for what would happen next. I felt the story was very well written however, aside from the slight character confusion and I would recommend others!
November 7, 2015
2.5 stars
I'm sorry but this was way too long and frankly, boring for me. I made it through 80% and just started skimming the rest.
I'm sorry but this was way too long and frankly, boring for me. I made it through 80% and just started skimming the rest.
October 30, 2015
This is the first of this series that I’ve read, but I don’t think it will be my last. The Twisted Road to You is a fantastic blend of danger and emotion – we have to deal with Carlie’s ex and the trouble he causes, but more importantly we get Wesley & Carlie’s struggles to open their hearts again. Both have been badly hurt in the past and neither of them thinks that they are a good bet. Although none of their concerns are all that new, it doesn’t stop them from making an impact on the reader.
Wesley is struggling with PTSD and he had his ex break things off with basically a Dear John letter. Neither of these things add up to relationship material in his mind. But he doesn’t factor in that he’s caring, giving, hard-working, and brave. He’s willing to do just about anything for his friends and they feel the same about him. With his attraction to Carlie and the danger she faces from her ex, she quickly becomes part of that group.
Carlie is a good mother but with her past she’s kept herself a little separated from the other people in Perfect. Thanks to Wes and his friends though that doesn’t last long. I can understand why she thinks her past is too much for a partner to overcome, but I love how Wes proves her wrong. Just a little understanding and acceptance goes a long way to changing how she views herself.
Even though I wasn’t familiar with any of the people, Longley does a great job of giving all relevant info when you need it – not too much and only when it makes sense. The book focuses on Wes and Carlie but they don’t live in a bubble so the other people are important. And I’m sure that, for returning readers, it is a treat to catch up.
With just that right amount of action to keep things hopping and the perfect amount of emotional drama, The Twisted Road to You is a wonderful story of letting go of the past and opening up to something new.
(Complimentary copy provided in exchange for an honest review)
Wesley is struggling with PTSD and he had his ex break things off with basically a Dear John letter. Neither of these things add up to relationship material in his mind. But he doesn’t factor in that he’s caring, giving, hard-working, and brave. He’s willing to do just about anything for his friends and they feel the same about him. With his attraction to Carlie and the danger she faces from her ex, she quickly becomes part of that group.
Carlie is a good mother but with her past she’s kept herself a little separated from the other people in Perfect. Thanks to Wes and his friends though that doesn’t last long. I can understand why she thinks her past is too much for a partner to overcome, but I love how Wes proves her wrong. Just a little understanding and acceptance goes a long way to changing how she views herself.
Even though I wasn’t familiar with any of the people, Longley does a great job of giving all relevant info when you need it – not too much and only when it makes sense. The book focuses on Wes and Carlie but they don’t live in a bubble so the other people are important. And I’m sure that, for returning readers, it is a treat to catch up.
With just that right amount of action to keep things hopping and the perfect amount of emotional drama, The Twisted Road to You is a wonderful story of letting go of the past and opening up to something new.
(Complimentary copy provided in exchange for an honest review)
March 1, 2016
The Twisted Road to You is the fourth book in the Perfect, Indiana series. I have not read the first three, but I understood that each book stood on its own, and it did! I enjoyed the story so much, and I didn’t feel a bit lost or confused!
When I read the book blurb for this story, it intrigued me. I've also read True to the Highlander by Ms. Longley and knew I liked her writing style. So when the opportunity to read The Twisted Road to You was offered to me, I took it!
Wesley is an ex-Marine suffering from PTSD. He's also carrying around some emotional scars his ex-wife gave him when she cheated on him and then divorced him while he was serving his country.
Carlie, a single mom, also carries many physical and emotional scars. Her ex-husband, Jared, was very abusive. She changed her name and moved to Perfect, Indiana trying to have a normal life for her and her son.
Both keep to themselves; neither feels they could ever love again. But when Jared escapes from jail and shows up in Perfect, threatening to kill Carlie and take her son. Wesley cannot stand idly by, and his military training takes over. Protecting Carlie forces them to spend a lot of time together, and now it’s harder to suppress the feelings they both have been feeling for each other!
I loved how the story jumps right into the action, and how Wesley and Carlie's back-stories are woven neatly into the storyline. Oh, and I loved the sexual tension between the two!
I also enjoyed Wesley’s friends and family in the story. They all rallied together to help protect Carlie and her son. Now, that I’ve met them, I’m curious to see their stories. Hopefully, I’ll have a chance to go back to the beginning and read the first three stories!
The Twisted Road to You is an enjoyable read!
FTC Disclaimer: I received an e-copy of the story from the publisher via NetGalley for my honest review.
May 6, 2016
Wesley/Wes worked the night shift at Langford And Lovejoy. He was a furniture finisher. He looked forward to the end of his shift and going to Perfect Diner and getting to see his Carlie who he thought was pretty. Wes felt protective of Cory as she and Wes grew up in the same trailer park. Cory was Wes’s younger sister’s best friend and she had suffered trauma at the hands of her staff sergeant a couple of years ago. But cory was now very happy and planning her wedding. Cory tells Wes to bring Carlie to her wedding as anyone could see their chemistry. Wes’s ex wife had left him while he was deployed and he got the Dear John letter the night before a mission . Wes had enough of a struggle with his PTSD and he was somewhat at peace now. But he could never predict what might trigger a reaction in him because of his PTSD. Carlie hadn’t showed up to work one morning and everyone at the diner was worried. Wes grabbed his gun and headed to Carlie’s . When he got there Carlie had been beaten again by her ex husband and he was threatening her life . Carlie’s ex had escaped from prison. Once Carlie is free Wes insists Carlie and her son Tyler stay with him where he can protect them. Carlie knows how dangerous her ex is and agrees to stay with Wes. Wes was really good with Tyler who was six years old. Wes explained some hard facts to Tyler and then set to comfort the boy.
This was such a great story both Carlie and Wes trying their best to deal with their own demons.Both are strong people. Also everyone wanted to help anyway that they could. I loved how Wes had deep feelings for Carlie and tried to keep them hidden as he felt Carlie didn’t need a man like him with his PTSD. This an all around good story and let people know more about the PTSD our soldiers are coming home with. I highly recommend.
I received an ARC of this story for an honest review.
This was such a great story both Carlie and Wes trying their best to deal with their own demons.Both are strong people. Also everyone wanted to help anyway that they could. I loved how Wes had deep feelings for Carlie and tried to keep them hidden as he felt Carlie didn’t need a man like him with his PTSD. This an all around good story and let people know more about the PTSD our soldiers are coming home with. I highly recommend.
I received an ARC of this story for an honest review.
October 13, 2015
I can't tell you how excited I was when I saw there was going to be another book in the Perfect, Indiana series. I am happy to say that Ms Longley did not disappoint with this book!
Wesley Holt is enjoying is life in Perfect. He's dealing with his PTSD in his own way and keeping his heart protected from any more hurt by not getting close to anyone. That is until his favorite waitress from the local diner is threatened. Carlie Stewart and her young son Tyler have been happy since coming to Perfect. Now though it seems her past has caught up to her so it appears their time in Perfect is up unless she is willing to put her faith in Wesley and his friends and believe his promise to keep them safe.
This book is extremely well done and I think you will fall in love with the characters just as much as I did. I know that domestic abuse is a real hot button for a lot of readers but know that there are no scenes of abuse in this story. It's in Carlie's past and the cause of her current predicament but the relationship between Carlie and Wesley is very loving and caring.
I highly recommend this one.
Wesley Holt is enjoying is life in Perfect. He's dealing with his PTSD in his own way and keeping his heart protected from any more hurt by not getting close to anyone. That is until his favorite waitress from the local diner is threatened. Carlie Stewart and her young son Tyler have been happy since coming to Perfect. Now though it seems her past has caught up to her so it appears their time in Perfect is up unless she is willing to put her faith in Wesley and his friends and believe his promise to keep them safe.
This book is extremely well done and I think you will fall in love with the characters just as much as I did. I know that domestic abuse is a real hot button for a lot of readers but know that there are no scenes of abuse in this story. It's in Carlie's past and the cause of her current predicament but the relationship between Carlie and Wesley is very loving and caring.
I highly recommend this one.
November 29, 2015
If you’re looking for a heartwarming military man who plays the hero for a single mother, look no further than The Twisted Road to You by Barbara Longley. Carlie Stewart has escaped an abusive relationship and just wants a measure of peace for herself and her son, but trouble comes knocking at her door. She’s assisted by Wesley Holt, who’s seeking some peace of his own after a failed marriage and a long stent in the Marine Corps.
This was a sweet story about two lost souls finding meaning within each other after a world of heart. Wes brings out all the feels when he acts as protector for Carlie and her son, Tyler. He swoops in to save the day, and I found myself falling a bit in love with him. Tyler was adorable, and his interactions with Wes were heartwarming. Would definitely recommend if you are looking for a quick read or a wonderful military romance.
This was a sweet story about two lost souls finding meaning within each other after a world of heart. Wes brings out all the feels when he acts as protector for Carlie and her son, Tyler. He swoops in to save the day, and I found myself falling a bit in love with him. Tyler was adorable, and his interactions with Wes were heartwarming. Would definitely recommend if you are looking for a quick read or a wonderful military romance.
September 24, 2015
Thanks to NetGalley, and in exchange for an honest review, I was lucky enough to get an ARC of Barbara Longley's fourth installation in her series Perfect, Indiana. The title of this book is The Twisted Road to You, and it follows Wes and Carlie.
Format: Electronic.
Tissue warning: Nope.
HEA: yep
Triggers: domestic abuse, PTSD
My reviewer rating: 3 out of 5 stars
Recommend to others: sure, but not if you're looking for real drama/angst.
Overall: This is a standalone novel. I'm glad I didn't have to read the previous 3 books. I think this was a cute story, but it was a little too slow for me.
The story is told in Wes's perspective in third person. I generally prefer first person; for some reason I can get more in tune with a character that way.
Format: Electronic.
Tissue warning: Nope.
HEA: yep
Triggers: domestic abuse, PTSD
My reviewer rating: 3 out of 5 stars
Recommend to others: sure, but not if you're looking for real drama/angst.
Overall: This is a standalone novel. I'm glad I didn't have to read the previous 3 books. I think this was a cute story, but it was a little too slow for me.
The story is told in Wes's perspective in third person. I generally prefer first person; for some reason I can get more in tune with a character that way.
October 18, 2015
Barbara Longley has added another jewel to her crown. The Twisted Road to You was a magnificent read that left me amazingly happy and satisfied.
The story of Wes and Carlie is told with great care and compassion It is filled with make you smile moments and just the right amount of tension, anxiety, passion and love.
This is a story in which you will rally around the main characters wanting them to make the right decisions and to find and live their happily ever after. Their road to each other is definitely twisted and you will find yourself rooting for Wes and Carlie to the very end. Be prepared to not be able to put this book down until you have read the last word on the last page! ENJOY!!!!!
The story of Wes and Carlie is told with great care and compassion It is filled with make you smile moments and just the right amount of tension, anxiety, passion and love.
This is a story in which you will rally around the main characters wanting them to make the right decisions and to find and live their happily ever after. Their road to each other is definitely twisted and you will find yourself rooting for Wes and Carlie to the very end. Be prepared to not be able to put this book down until you have read the last word on the last page! ENJOY!!!!!
July 2, 2016
Rounding up to a 3.5 RATING- A heartwarming romance between a former soldier suffering from PTSD with trust issues and an abused woman with a 6 year old son. Would have made a good Hallmark movie. There was some steam but mainly in the latter part of the book and at a level I'd feel comfortable recommending to book to my mom. Pulled me in pretty quickly but did drag a bit in middle. Overall, a nice sweet romance.
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October 16, 2015
This was a sweet story about second chance love and sometimes you might even find a hero. Carlie was this sweet wonderful woman who was protecting her son Tyler giving him a new life from the horrible one they lived before. Wes was a amazing man who served our country and had suffered betrayal from his ex. These characters go through many opsticals along the way and Wes is bound and determined to protect Carlie and Tyler. I found this story sweet I do wish it would have had more agnst though but overall it was good. I received this arc from the publisher and netgally for an honest review. Reviewing for Night and Day book blog http://ndbbr2014.com Stephanie Powell
November 4, 2015
A great contemporary romance that would touch anyone's heart. The heroine has had a very tough life and knows that no one would be able to love her, she wouldn't be able to trust anyone, and to try would be a disservice to the other person. The hero has damage of his own that is giving him trust issues. Two people carrying the blame for things that were beyond their control are thrown together by circumstance and find their way to eachother. This was my first novel by Longley, but I can guarantee it won't be the last of her works that I read.
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