What do you think?
Rate this book
F.I.S.T.S #2
Murphy
Sometimes when it seems like it’s too late, the right person comes along and opens your eyes… Murphy is the continuing story of a D/s relationship between two Space Marines who found each other in the midst of hopelessness and misfortune. Sarge and his newly minted squad travel across the galaxy on a top-secret mission that could help win the war. However, to Murphy something about the mission stinks, and it’s not just the planet they’ve landed on.
59 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 1, 2015
7 people are currently reading
235 people want to read
About the author
Bey Deckard
29 books772 followersArtist, dog lover, and writer of very queer, very adult fiction.
Bey lives in Montréal, Canada where he spends most of his time writing, doing graphic work, painting portraits, speaking French, cooking tasty vegetarian eats, or watching more movies than is good for him. If you’re the curious type, www.beydeckard.com is where you’ll find art and free stories by Bey as well as information on his published works.
100% human-powered creator.
Bey lives in Montréal, Canada where he spends most of his time writing, doing graphic work, painting portraits, speaking French, cooking tasty vegetarian eats, or watching more movies than is good for him. If you’re the curious type, www.beydeckard.com is where you’ll find art and free stories by Bey as well as information on his published works.
100% human-powered creator.
Ratings & Reviews
Friends & Following
Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book!
Community Reviews
Displaying 1 - 30 of 92 reviews
June 7, 2015
4.5 Hearts (rounded up)
Cupcake doesn't get sappy often. I'm as surprised as the next person that an old curmudgeon like Sarge could get me there in so few words, but he did. Or maybe that was BeyBey. At any rate, it started with the dedication:
Such a simple thing to say but Sarge is a cranky old bastard who by all accounts should be too prickly for anyone to love let alone Murphy. He knows it and comes to realize how lucky he is to have a guy like Murphy so devoted to him.
Murphy and Sarge have spent the last few months together while they recover from the attack, but Sarge has kept Murphy at arm's length. Through a series of events during their mission Sarge's guard begins to crack and he finds himself lovestruck, smiling constantly and wanting to be near his boy all the time. He struggles against these feelings not liking to feel vulnerable which seemingly inspires an inverse reaction in Murphy.
Murphy is hard to resist with his blushing and complete obedience. Sarge doesn't stand a chance against those baby blues. Murphy isn't much of a talker, a trait many mistake for incompetence. He's actually very intelligent and has a secret weapon of sorts. And he dearly loves being Sarge's boy.
The edging, face fucking and cock drooling were enough to send me into twirls of delight, but when combined with Murphy being a big un... I thought I might faint. I might've bounced a little or maybe that was squirming or something. Sarge makes Murphy beg until he's incoherent. Often. There's only so much self-control once can ask of another. The cherry on top of this cake of kinky goodness is Sarge has a delightfully filthy mouth.
*groans*
Lest I forget, there are some VERY intriguing secondary characters introduced like some inordinately close brothers.
*cough*
Ditto what Sunny said about more installments. Cupcake needz.
An ARC was provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.
Cupcake doesn't get sappy often. I'm as surprised as the next person that an old curmudgeon like Sarge could get me there in so few words, but he did. Or maybe that was BeyBey. At any rate, it started with the dedication:
For those that think it's too late.
Such a simple thing to say but Sarge is a cranky old bastard who by all accounts should be too prickly for anyone to love let alone Murphy. He knows it and comes to realize how lucky he is to have a guy like Murphy so devoted to him.
As his grin gets a little wider, I'm struck with just how much trouble I'm in. My career has always come first. Always. What the hell are you supposed to do when something else becomes more important?
Murphy and Sarge have spent the last few months together while they recover from the attack, but Sarge has kept Murphy at arm's length. Through a series of events during their mission Sarge's guard begins to crack and he finds himself lovestruck, smiling constantly and wanting to be near his boy all the time. He struggles against these feelings not liking to feel vulnerable which seemingly inspires an inverse reaction in Murphy.
Murphy is hard to resist with his blushing and complete obedience. Sarge doesn't stand a chance against those baby blues. Murphy isn't much of a talker, a trait many mistake for incompetence. He's actually very intelligent and has a secret weapon of sorts. And he dearly loves being Sarge's boy.
Thinking back to the day I promised him I'd always obey, I smile. I remember how overwhelmed with relief I'd been over finally having found real freedom.
The edging, face fucking and cock drooling were enough to send me into twirls of delight, but when combined with Murphy being a big un... I thought I might faint. I might've bounced a little or maybe that was squirming or something. Sarge makes Murphy beg until he's incoherent. Often. There's only so much self-control once can ask of another. The cherry on top of this cake of kinky goodness is Sarge has a delightfully filthy mouth.
*groans*
Lest I forget, there are some VERY intriguing secondary characters introduced like some inordinately close brothers.
*cough*
Ditto what Sunny said about more installments. Cupcake needz.
An ARC was provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.
November 8, 2015
Spoiler: Murphy makes it out of the cave they were in at the end of Sarge! Good thing too since the title of the sequel is Murphy.
Sarge and Murphy find themselves finally off the god-forsaken alien planet they were on in Sarge and are now healing and resting comfortably on a military ship with better medical resources, comfortable temperatures and unlimited hot water. They are considered heroes and have both been promoted and are closer than ever after having survived hell together. The reader can easily see that Sarge is slowly but surely opening up about his strong emotions for Murphy, but with Murphy's heightened sight and is ability to tell a person's emotional status by the color waves that come off of them, he is able to see what Sarge feels without any vocalization. Sarge was downright warm and fuzzy at times! He is absolutely gone for Murphy and turns into a marshmallow with concern for Murph. For example (keep in mind that the men share an extreme D/s relationship, one where both get off on authority and humiliation):
Oh god. Just the thought of sucking cock right now is going to make me puke. I press my lips together and give a little headshake.
Sarge goes still, his eyes searing into me. “No?” he asks. “No.” It’s just a whisper, but at the sound of it, the outrage on his face blinks out like a light. What it’s replaced by is a wide look of concern. The air is almost crackling around him, and I wince. The vivid hues hurt my eyes.
“What’s wrong?” Then he remembers where I said I was. "Vaccine?"
After some kick-ass hurt/healing/comfort and some awesome, kinky sex, the boys find themselves on another mission and we get ANOTHER big dose of hurt/healing/comfort along with beautiful conversation between the two that lets their love for one another very obvious to the reader.
And, once again, how can the kinkiness, raunchiest, dirtiest sex I have ever read also turn into a mind melting love story? Without either of them even expressing their feelings out loud? Well, however Bey Deckard did it, it is an astounding success.
HIGHLY, HIGHLY recommended!
This review is also posted at Gay Book Reviews
August 12, 2018
My! I teared up in the end. 😭 But I guarantee you! Those were happy tears! 💙 I loved the unique and comfortable relationship between Sarge and Murphy from book 1 but I fucking fell in love with these two in this sequel! OMG! I didn’t see that coming about Sarge! 😱 My, our old grumpy bear actually has a loving heart of gold. It was so satisfying to see their relationship blossomed into a bosom friendship, unwavering loyalty and tender affection and above all, a budding love! 😍 It was so sweet! ❤️ I actually want more adventures of these two gallivanting around space with their own spaceship. Thank you Bey Deckard and Nick J. Russo for such a fun, heartwarming and sweet, sexy listen! 👏 Loved it! 😍
5 Only yours Sarge, only yours stars
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Audio rating
Story 5 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Narration 5 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Performance 5 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Overall 5 big fat stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
5 Only yours Sarge, only yours stars
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Audio rating
Story 5 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Narration 5 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Performance 5 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Overall 5 big fat stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
June 6, 2015
Welcome to the swamp...
impatiently waiting for the followup. I'm pleased to say that the sequel was even better than the debut!
Sarge ended in a shamelessly dramatic cliffhanger. Murphy was on the edge of death as a result of wounds sustained during battle. The story ended as he and his Sergeant were waiting to be airlifted to safety.
I'm rubbish at cliffhangers.
Doesn't matter what author, genre, or series...
That's probably why I prefer to binge read series rather than subject myself to what seems like an endless wait for subsequent releases. Ah, but the the great thing about the F.I.S.T.S. series is that the stories are short enough to do a quick re-read to refresh my memory before diving into the next book :)
Bey Deckard is taking advantage of the serial format to layer in fabulous detail and interesting military plot-lines. The relationship between Sarge and Murphy is still evolving. There is an emotional attachment which is increasing, plus all of the lovely D/s elements from book one are still being explored.
Murphy
In addition to his new leg, Murphy also earned himself a new rank - Private First Class Andrew Murphy is now Sargent Murphy. His new rank as officer means nobody batts and eye at him sharing a room with his commanding officer...
But that doesn't stop the gossip around the base. Everyone seems to know what's happening between Murphy and Wilkes. Not just the relationship, but also the kinky nature of their sexual exploits as well...
Wilkes
Good ol' Sargent Wilkes earned himself a promotion between books; he's now Master Sargent. In addition to the new rank Sarge also earned himself a bit of a military prison sentence. He's serving his time piecemeal for crimes committed during the final battle in the last book.
Wilkes' punishment isn't the only thing rubbing him the wrong way about his military service. It seems the powers that be are making top secret plans to send Sarge's unit back into battle against the alien enemy.
It's all very hush-hush, and even though Sarge doesn't know the details of the mission, he's more than certain that his unit is underprepared for battle - budget cutbacks, and poor equipment have Sarge cursing the day the military became privatized.
The universe seems to be falling to hell all around them, but Wilkes and Murphy are snatching moments of peace where they can. Usually with each other, and usually involving Murphy on his knees and begging.
We retained the dual POV aspect from the previous book, and I'm loving the insight into these men. Wilkes is an especially entertaining character to read - one of those 'still waters run deep' type of men. He's tight lipped about his emotions, but his internal monologue has no such filter.
Bey Deckard was kind enough to spare us from the emotional trauma of another cliffhanger, but there is endless potential in this series. I'm looking forward to meeting up with Wilkes and Murphy again in the future!
He rescued me, my boy. From myself, mostly. And, you can bet your ass that from now until forever, I'm going to make every single goddamn second count.Murphy continues the story of two Space Marines who forged a relationship in the trenches of a distant planet. I loved the first book, and I've been
Sarge ended in a shamelessly dramatic cliffhanger. Murphy was on the edge of death as a result of wounds sustained during battle. The story ended as he and his Sergeant were waiting to be airlifted to safety.
I'm rubbish at cliffhangers.
Doesn't matter what author, genre, or series...
That's probably why I prefer to binge read series rather than subject myself to what seems like an endless wait for subsequent releases. Ah, but the the great thing about the F.I.S.T.S. series is that the stories are short enough to do a quick re-read to refresh my memory before diving into the next book :)
Bey Deckard is taking advantage of the serial format to layer in fabulous detail and interesting military plot-lines. The relationship between Sarge and Murphy is still evolving. There is an emotional attachment which is increasing, plus all of the lovely D/s elements from book one are still being explored.
Murphy
Happy? Hell, I've never been happier or felt more at peace than the months I've spent at Sarge's side.Murphy survived the battle at the end of Sarge - Obviously. I mean, the book's named after him... - Murphy got to keep his life, but he lost his leg. Luckily for everyone, the cybernetic prostheses in this universe are top notch, so the loss hasn't slowed the big guy down.
In addition to his new leg, Murphy also earned himself a new rank - Private First Class Andrew Murphy is now Sargent Murphy. His new rank as officer means nobody batts and eye at him sharing a room with his commanding officer...
But that doesn't stop the gossip around the base. Everyone seems to know what's happening between Murphy and Wilkes. Not just the relationship, but also the kinky nature of their sexual exploits as well...
Wilkes
As his grin gets a little wider, I'm struck with just how much trouble I'm in. My career has always come first. Always. What the hell are you supposed to do when something else becomes more important..There's something supremely satisfying about watching a tough man fall hard, and that's precisely what we're seeing in Sarge.
Good ol' Sargent Wilkes earned himself a promotion between books; he's now Master Sargent. In addition to the new rank Sarge also earned himself a bit of a military prison sentence. He's serving his time piecemeal for crimes committed during the final battle in the last book.
Wilkes' punishment isn't the only thing rubbing him the wrong way about his military service. It seems the powers that be are making top secret plans to send Sarge's unit back into battle against the alien enemy.
It's all very hush-hush, and even though Sarge doesn't know the details of the mission, he's more than certain that his unit is underprepared for battle - budget cutbacks, and poor equipment have Sarge cursing the day the military became privatized.
The universe seems to be falling to hell all around them, but Wilkes and Murphy are snatching moments of peace where they can. Usually with each other, and usually involving Murphy on his knees and begging.
We retained the dual POV aspect from the previous book, and I'm loving the insight into these men. Wilkes is an especially entertaining character to read - one of those 'still waters run deep' type of men. He's tight lipped about his emotions, but his internal monologue has no such filter.
Bey Deckard was kind enough to spare us from the emotional trauma of another cliffhanger, but there is endless potential in this series. I'm looking forward to meeting up with Wilkes and Murphy again in the future!
August 1, 2024
It felt good being back with Murphy and Sarge. They make me smile.
Murph, a big, brick wall of muscle with the sweetest dimpled smile in space, has finally found peace in his head and body with his commanding officer--Sarge. But will this new mission jeopardize that and them?
I have to say Sarge’s vulnerable “what the hell is happening to me” voice can make me laugh one minute and pull on my heart strings the next. He’s such a softie. ;) The care and concern he shows his Boy is sweet and sexy. You can hear it in every growl and catch in his voice. Very sexy! These two men may not express their feelings out loud in words a lot, but you will feel and see their huge, thumping hearts in everything they do for and to each other.
”Words can never do justice to this, so I don’t even try.”
We get a look at a few other F.I.S.T.S. soldiers here as well. I’m logging my request for more about the brothers right now. :D Can’t wait for more!
Recommended read.
p.s. I loved the ending of this story. Those last few lines really made my smile shine.
Murph, a big, brick wall of muscle with the sweetest dimpled smile in space, has finally found peace in his head and body with his commanding officer--Sarge. But will this new mission jeopardize that and them?
I have to say Sarge’s vulnerable “what the hell is happening to me” voice can make me laugh one minute and pull on my heart strings the next. He’s such a softie. ;) The care and concern he shows his Boy is sweet and sexy. You can hear it in every growl and catch in his voice. Very sexy! These two men may not express their feelings out loud in words a lot, but you will feel and see their huge, thumping hearts in everything they do for and to each other.
”Words can never do justice to this, so I don’t even try.”
We get a look at a few other F.I.S.T.S. soldiers here as well. I’m logging my request for more about the brothers right now. :D Can’t wait for more!
Recommended read.
p.s. I loved the ending of this story. Those last few lines really made my smile shine.
July 27, 2016
This space is for gifs and fun. Please, if you want to read the substance of it all, I mean, my words forming an opinion, I've written about both novellas in Sarge. So this review of Murphy will be just to release some of my fangirling and swooning.
Sarge
Murphy
Before you ask, no, I truly wasn't expecting I'd use my crush on Baird for my own selfish purposes. I don't know what my brothers would think if they knew I'm using their videogames for gay stories. I guess the same thing they thought when I kidnapped their Action Men to play on my own.
I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed looking for their gifs!
Again?
Sarge
Hard and tough!
With the scar on his face!
Murphy
Taciturn and gorgeous.
This reminds me of a moment in book #2:
Sarge noticing something important:
Murphy obeying Sarge's rules:
(Although it shouldn't be in a such a cocky way, but nothing is perfect!)
Thank you so much for allowing me to use your faces,
Marcus Fenix
Damon Baird
Together (but not against each other):
Sarge
Murphy
Before you ask, no, I truly wasn't expecting I'd use my crush on Baird for my own selfish purposes. I don't know what my brothers would think if they knew I'm using their videogames for gay stories. I guess the same thing they thought when I kidnapped their Action Men to play on my own.
I hope you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed looking for their gifs!
Again?
Sarge
Hard and tough!
With the scar on his face!
Murphy
Taciturn and gorgeous.
This reminds me of a moment in book #2:
Sarge noticing something important:
Murphy obeying Sarge's rules:
(Although it shouldn't be in a such a cocky way, but nothing is perfect!)
Thank you so much for allowing me to use your faces,
Marcus Fenix
Damon Baird
Together (but not against each other):
April 10, 2017
A Double Tag Team Review with Ann!
4 HEARTS--
Excuse me as I melt. Murphy and Sarge could have melted my e-reader.
Established couples aren't my go to. I think it might be why I didn't rush to read this book. Because Murphy and Sarge's initial scenes are that special.
But I am so happy I finally got to it. This time around I listened on audiobook and read along to the second book in the F.I.S.T.S. series. It's months later after that last battle scene in Sarge. Murphy and his Sarge both go through some changes, moving up the ranks, more erotic D/s scenes.
Murphy and Sarge already had a connection, this book was a deeper exploration of their bond. It was hot. There were a tender moment here and there. But overall, the two are made for each other.
And did I mention hot?
Because it continued the scorch from book #1.
Someone is possessive and demanding. I'm all about that. And in between the molten D/s times, there was a little suspense added. The men are sent to a swampy alien world and everything is not how it seems. Murphy's synesthesia comes back into play in this story. I thought it added a nice touch.
A little action, a lot sexy and an easy read. The series left on a note with a possible revolution, or possible attack on the leaders? There's room for more in the series should the author pursue but the couple is definitely solid. I liked the narration in Murphy more. I agree with Ann, if you go the audiobook route, listen to them back to back. It helps and I finished it with a smile. So maybe the narrator is growing on me. His Sarge voice was still consistent, gruff and growly.
I definitely recommend this series if sci-fi erotica is your type of read.
A copy provided for an honest review.
4 HEARTS--
"Well, well, well... What the fuck's got you so damn worked up, son?" he says, and flicks the head of my cock hard; I wince but manage not to make a sound. "Have you been a bad boy and touched something that doesn't belong to you? And don't you goddamn lie to me."
Excuse me as I melt. Murphy and Sarge could have melted my e-reader.
Established couples aren't my go to. I think it might be why I didn't rush to read this book. Because Murphy and Sarge's initial scenes are that special.
But I am so happy I finally got to it. This time around I listened on audiobook and read along to the second book in the F.I.S.T.S. series. It's months later after that last battle scene in Sarge. Murphy and his Sarge both go through some changes, moving up the ranks, more erotic D/s scenes.
Murphy and Sarge already had a connection, this book was a deeper exploration of their bond. It was hot. There were a tender moment here and there. But overall, the two are made for each other.
And did I mention hot?
"Will you look at the mess you've made of yourself? How long's your cock been drooling all over you?"
"All day, Sarge. Like you wanted."
Because it continued the scorch from book #1.
Someone is possessive and demanding. I'm all about that. And in between the molten D/s times, there was a little suspense added. The men are sent to a swampy alien world and everything is not how it seems. Murphy's synesthesia comes back into play in this story. I thought it added a nice touch.
A little action, a lot sexy and an easy read. The series left on a note with a possible revolution, or possible attack on the leaders? There's room for more in the series should the author pursue but the couple is definitely solid. I liked the narration in Murphy more. I agree with Ann, if you go the audiobook route, listen to them back to back. It helps and I finished it with a smile. So maybe the narrator is growing on me. His Sarge voice was still consistent, gruff and growly.
I definitely recommend this series if sci-fi erotica is your type of read.
A copy provided for an honest review.
July 27, 2024
Why haven't I written a review for my favorite dude not on earth?! Shame on me.
This is FREE until the end of July, go get it!!
This is FREE until the end of July, go get it!!
June 4, 2015
4.5
Another punch to the gut. After reading the first book, 'Sarge', I should have been prepared for all the emotions this author can pull from me with so few words.
Oh, man, I love these two guys.
Sarge, tough, possessive, demanding, with a touch of vulnerability.
Murphy, just as tough, but eager to please, with some sweet kinks perfectly met by Sarge.
Oh, yeah, Sarge knew how to take care of his boy. So much so, that his moments of uncertainty provided a nice contrast and gave him more depth as a character. Their relationship appeared harsh at times, but there was obvious respect and caring. In fact, other than the steamy bits, my favorite parts were the moments of sweet tenderness that showed us the love they haven't yet admitted to.
I'll be waiting impatiently for the next installment of their story.
...there better be more installments.
Note: A copy of this book was provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.
Reviewed with Optimist on
Another punch to the gut. After reading the first book, 'Sarge', I should have been prepared for all the emotions this author can pull from me with so few words.
Oh, man, I love these two guys.
Sarge, tough, possessive, demanding, with a touch of vulnerability.
Murphy, just as tough, but eager to please, with some sweet kinks perfectly met by Sarge.
Oh, yeah, Sarge knew how to take care of his boy. So much so, that his moments of uncertainty provided a nice contrast and gave him more depth as a character. Their relationship appeared harsh at times, but there was obvious respect and caring. In fact, other than the steamy bits, my favorite parts were the moments of sweet tenderness that showed us the love they haven't yet admitted to.
I'll be waiting impatiently for the next installment of their story.
...there better be more installments.
Note: A copy of this book was provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.
Reviewed with Optimist on
Read
February 19, 2016I keep coming back here, wanting to write some kind of review the way I normally do for my books, but all I can think of is this:
I managed to kick myself hard in the feels at one point while writing this one, and that doesn't happen often.
I managed to kick myself hard in the feels at one point while writing this one, and that doesn't happen often.
July 23, 2023
Murphy was a great read. I enjoyed it even more than the first book Sarge. Murphy and Sarge's d/s relationship dynamic was perfect, and I know this book came out in 2015 but I'm hoping for another book with them.
Also the scifi setting and the plot was really interesting. For such a short page count, it managed to pack in a lot in and do it well.
Also the scifi setting and the plot was really interesting. For such a short page count, it managed to pack in a lot in and do it well.
December 1, 2023
This is some excellent science fiction with smut and story. I read the story this time but I recommend the audio with Nick J Russo as narrator. It makes it even better
Wrote this review for Sarge (F.I.S.T.S. #1) but for me they are an item
Wrote this review for Sarge (F.I.S.T.S. #1) but for me they are an item
January 25, 2018
Incredible - I love this story, The only way it could ever have been improved upon was to have Nick J. Russo perform it - absolutely the best!
October 10, 2016
Updated to add audio review - 10/2016
A review by The Blogger Girls.
I just love when I read a follow up story and hearing the characters’ voices brings back all the memories of what I loved from the first book. Murphy and Sarge definitely did that for me here.
Aside from a new leg and some upgraded parts, it is the same Murphy and the same Sarge, doing what they do best, in all their glory. This is classified as BDSM, but they really have more of a DS and power exchange than any kind of traditional BDSM relationship. At this point, they are even more comfortable in their relationship as they now prepare for their next mission. The chapters switch between each character so that we get to see things from both perspectives. I absolutely love their dialog and the way they each speak. I smiled so many times at little things they said that make each stand out so distinctly.
I don’t think I’ve ever thought a sci-fi story felt so real as this one does. Or maybe I just like to think there is a Murph and Sarge out there fighting the good fight. Either way, this story is so descriptive and colorful, I couldn’t help but feel as though I was seeing things from their eyes – the landscape, the ship and other settings, as well as the colors Murph sees. It’s all very vivid and one of the things I enjoy most about this series.
Things are not all as they appear, and Sarge has a bad feeling from the get go. There are some twists and interesting advancements to the story which make it quite interesting. Murph and Sarge push forward, side-by-side, doing their duty and getting things done, making do when needed. Through it all, you can easily feel how perfect these two are for each other, and they both realize it as well.
This, as well as the first, are short stories, but they are not lacking in any department. If you have any misgivings about reading short story series, sci-fi, or first-person, throw them out the window and jump into these as fast as you can. You will not be disappointed and will surely be left jonesing for the next, just as I am.
Audio: There isn’t much more to say about this series that hasn’t already been said. It is rough and tumble, yet heartwarming and full of feels. Mr. Russo again brings Murph and Sarge alive, adding more color to an already abundant kaleidoscope that makes up this world.
I would not recommend reading or listening to this story without having read or listened to the first one, Sarge. But, if you are already sucked in, do not hesitate to grab this as well. It is a wonderful story that, while it contains some elements outside of the norm, the fundamentals shine through, even when they aren’t spoken. It has fabulous world building, exceptional descriptiveness and will surely captivate you as it did me. I can very easily highly recommend both the print and audio versions of this gripping tale.
June 22, 2018
I really liked this follow up to Sarge. I loooooved Sarge, and wasn’t sure what to expect here. What I got was Sarge in love and that’s quite a thing to witness! Yup, it’s never too late!
Fantastic narration by Nick J. Russo....does he nail Sarge or what?
Fantastic narration by Nick J. Russo....does he nail Sarge or what?
April 22, 2017
I love these guys!
March 10, 2017
Overall book rating: 4
Audio Book: Nick J Russo – 4.5
Book Cover: 2
So book one left me with “not so positive” feelings towards Sarge and a whole lot of “Bring it On I Love him” for our boy Murphy.
Starting number two I kinda wanted to do bad things to Sarge...again. The whole “redemption” thing at the end of book one went flying out the window after the sick bay incedent . But then...then...
“Hey Murphy!” I call out.
“Yes Sarge?”
“Tell me about your favourite food son.”
And that, as they say, is all she wrote. I am so glad that I didn’t stop at the first one I would have missed the magic. ♥
Audio Book: Nick J Russo – 4.5
Book Cover: 2
So book one left me with “not so positive” feelings towards Sarge and a whole lot of “Bring it On I Love him” for our boy Murphy.
Starting number two I kinda wanted to do bad things to Sarge...again. The whole “redemption” thing at the end of book one went flying out the window after the sick bay incedent . But then...then...
“Hey Murphy!” I call out.
“Yes Sarge?”
“Tell me about your favourite food son.”
And that, as they say, is all she wrote. I am so glad that I didn’t stop at the first one I would have missed the magic. ♥
April 3, 2020
A solid conclusion to the duo of novellas (although I'd totally read more about these guys.) The author has the ability to make love between two very inarticulate and gruff men shine through without words. And the SciFi plot was effective and not without bearing on modern life. Well done.
April 4, 2017
So, hopefully you have taken my suggestion to heart and just bought both stories at the same time because you need to have the full tale to appreciate the relationship between these two plus get the full story of their universe.
While Sarge introduced these two and gave the setup, Murphy starts getting further into the emotion the characters feel, especially Sarge. At first he has a lot of frustration at actually having feelings and he has a tendency to take those frustrations out on Murphy. Of course, Murphy digs on it so there is a bit of emotional wrangling, but it’s not overdone and works at Sarge’s pace which flows perfectly for the story. I liked the narrator’s voice as Sarge talked himself through his new found feelings and I loved how in tune Murphy was with Sarge’s thoughts. Those two didn’t need to say a lot of words to be on the same emotional plane, but they spared no words when it came to kink time and I appreciated all those moments muchly. Sure, those moments were decadently fun to listen to, but as the story went on and the two became closer emotionally you can hear it in the sex. It gets more verbal and each has learned the others hot buttons perfectly.
The author gives more than just a memorable D/s relationship, there’s military intrigue and subterfuge aplenty giving the story more depth than what you’d expect for a couple of novelettes. He also gives Murphy a condition that sets him apart from others and it’s another dimension into Murphy that was really intriguing to read. Murphy has synesthesia and sees colors within others emotions. The technology of their time allows him to share that with Sarge when it’s called for and gave the two of them another connection. Now, I’ve always seen numbers as colors and while it’s nothing like what Murphy sees, I loved listening to what Murphy experienced.
These two characters are perfectly formed for each other, they are both incredibly strong men in their own ways, and Sarge’s possessive and protective attitude towards Murphy is balanced with Murphy’s need to please the man who gives him everything he needs made me melt for these guys. There’s nothing better than listening to two guys with complementary kinks coming together. Especially when you know, that without the other, the chances of finding someone so perfect for them would be pretty slim, so not only is it a great tale of sci-fi erotica, it’s a unique romance that was just really moving to listen to.
Buddy Listen with SRAL!
**a copy of this story was provided for an honest review**
While Sarge introduced these two and gave the setup, Murphy starts getting further into the emotion the characters feel, especially Sarge. At first he has a lot of frustration at actually having feelings and he has a tendency to take those frustrations out on Murphy. Of course, Murphy digs on it so there is a bit of emotional wrangling, but it’s not overdone and works at Sarge’s pace which flows perfectly for the story. I liked the narrator’s voice as Sarge talked himself through his new found feelings and I loved how in tune Murphy was with Sarge’s thoughts. Those two didn’t need to say a lot of words to be on the same emotional plane, but they spared no words when it came to kink time and I appreciated all those moments muchly. Sure, those moments were decadently fun to listen to, but as the story went on and the two became closer emotionally you can hear it in the sex. It gets more verbal and each has learned the others hot buttons perfectly.
The author gives more than just a memorable D/s relationship, there’s military intrigue and subterfuge aplenty giving the story more depth than what you’d expect for a couple of novelettes. He also gives Murphy a condition that sets him apart from others and it’s another dimension into Murphy that was really intriguing to read. Murphy has synesthesia and sees colors within others emotions. The technology of their time allows him to share that with Sarge when it’s called for and gave the two of them another connection. Now, I’ve always seen numbers as colors and while it’s nothing like what Murphy sees, I loved listening to what Murphy experienced.
These two characters are perfectly formed for each other, they are both incredibly strong men in their own ways, and Sarge’s possessive and protective attitude towards Murphy is balanced with Murphy’s need to please the man who gives him everything he needs made me melt for these guys. There’s nothing better than listening to two guys with complementary kinks coming together. Especially when you know, that without the other, the chances of finding someone so perfect for them would be pretty slim, so not only is it a great tale of sci-fi erotica, it’s a unique romance that was just really moving to listen to.
Buddy Listen with SRAL!
**a copy of this story was provided for an honest review**
June 15, 2015
This was my second reading and it was just as amazing as the first time through.
There's no way I can put into words how much I enjoy Mr. Deckard's brilliance...so I'll leave it to my status updates and, thus, his words.
Thanks SO MUCH for another enjoyable ride, Bey! I can't wait for the next one!
JLT =)
There's no way I can put into words how much I enjoy Mr. Deckard's brilliance...so I'll leave it to my status updates and, thus, his words.
Thanks SO MUCH for another enjoyable ride, Bey! I can't wait for the next one!
JLT =)
February 5, 2016
4,5 stars.
Bey Deckard... fuck! He did it again...
Loved to meet Sarge and Murphy again, they are SO hot together!
My only complaint is the shortness of the story… would like to read a full length novel about those two.
September 29, 2016
Nick J. Russo narrates this short story beautifully. The character voices, the conveyed emotion, and the passion are all expertly projected.
Russo's excellent narration elevates the story from a simple one-dimensional tale to bright, multi-dimensional life.
This novella has a lot packed into it from disloyalty, betrayal and utmost treachery, to the sensually explicit scenes of domination.
Sometimes violent, but thoroughly carnal, tough, intense, and passionate...Fans of Sarge will not be left disappointed with this conclusion.
This is not a standalone - you really should read/listen to Sarge before starting.
Audio copy of Murphy (F.I.S.T.S #2) provided by author in exchange of an honest review.
This review has been cross-posted at Gay Book Reviews.
March 13, 2025
Even better than the first one! It was great to see Sarge being tender and Murphy learning to ask for what he wanted (even if Sarge had to nudge him a little).
Expect
- Age gap
- Edging and orgasm denial
- Light humiliation
- Grumpy x sunshine (-ish)
- Co-workers to lovers
Smashwords freebie: 29.12.24
Expect
- Age gap
- Edging and orgasm denial
- Light humiliation
- Grumpy x sunshine (-ish)
- Co-workers to lovers
The smile Murphy gives me brings back the ache for a second, and for the millionth time, I thank whatever the fuck it was that put us in each other’s path.
Smashwords freebie: 29.12.24
May 19, 2017
Both Sarge and Murphy are on par in terms of how I rate them, both are 4.5 stars.
Dual POV. Erotic. Military. Kind of sci-fi. Interesting writing and good reading.
Nice follow up to book #1 and I read them back to back.
Dual POV. Erotic. Military. Kind of sci-fi. Interesting writing and good reading.
Nice follow up to book #1 and I read them back to back.
May 11, 2016
Such a small book but wow does it deliver! Murphy and Sarge are the absolute best as far as I'm concerned. Sarge makes me chuckle, I loved seeing things from his POV, all his little insecurities and doubts about his relationship with Murphy and how much he was beginning to care about him. I couldn't help but smile when Murphy started to henpeck him a little over the fitting of his uniform before their secret mission, and Sarge slapped him away....only to let him back again to adjust his straps. Love it!
May 26, 2017
Loved this book so I did a re-read
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...
my review of the audio version - https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...
https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...
my review of the audio version - https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...
June 8, 2015
This was lovely. Sweet story in a space military setting. If you think self doubt is only for the young you are mistaken. Some times it takes years to build those barricades, but a little love can show the cracks in the facade.
This is actually a very tender story full of hope that there is someone out there for you, it just may take a little longer than expected to find them.
Some excellent world building and a legit jab at military and warfare as a business.
This is actually a very tender story full of hope that there is someone out there for you, it just may take a little longer than expected to find them.
Some excellent world building and a legit jab at military and warfare as a business.
October 13, 2015
I enjoyed this sequel, not as much as the first book though. It had more military talk and less sexy scenes. Obviously it still had sexy scenes, which were just as hot as the first.
It also had Murphy and Sarges relationship deepening, which was beautiful to read.
Much less stressful ending as well ;-)
It also had Murphy and Sarges relationship deepening, which was beautiful to read.
Much less stressful ending as well ;-)
February 22, 2024
Murphy and Sarge are in a relationship now. Murphy gets promoted (unlimited water for showers hell yeah). Here we have snippets of their life in battles, including a short term on the can for Sarge (it’s not as dramatic as it seems).
It’s a sin that this story is so short. I could read much more about them.
It’s a sin that this story is so short. I could read much more about them.
Displaying 1 - 30 of 92 reviews