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SHARED: A Dark MMMM Passed Around Shared Romance
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July 25, 2026
Plot held potential. But that’s the only good thing that I could give this book and I only read 10% of it.
But the grammar and structure is so atrocious that I couldn’t keep reading. The author has somehow managed to make first person feel like I’m reading third person. There is no personality or perspective from that writing that feels like it is really happening from the perspective of a person and not an external entity.
For some reason the author doesn’t realise that rather than using the word and they can use a comma and it ruins the entire book. Or at least what I could stomach reading of it.
But the grammar and structure is so atrocious that I couldn’t keep reading. The author has somehow managed to make first person feel like I’m reading third person. There is no personality or perspective from that writing that feels like it is really happening from the perspective of a person and not an external entity.
For some reason the author doesn’t realise that rather than using the word and they can use a comma and it ruins the entire book. Or at least what I could stomach reading of it.
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