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Journey to Kaliant #1
Crystal Cavern
**WARNING 18+ This is a reverse mermaid erotica"
Through the years, I’ve heard women say “It’s a shame all the hot ones are gay,” I’m not gay. They’re not my type…because my type doesn’t exist. I can’t tell anyone that I’m sexually attracted to fish. I mean, honestly, how crazy would I sound? Little did I know that my dream was about to become my reality.
Through the years, I’ve heard women say “It’s a shame all the hot ones are gay,” I’m not gay. They’re not my type…because my type doesn’t exist. I can’t tell anyone that I’m sexually attracted to fish. I mean, honestly, how crazy would I sound? Little did I know that my dream was about to become my reality.
36 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 31, 2015
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November 7, 2015
Journey to Kaliant is a good concept. I've never read a book with a fish-like alien as the main love interest (aka not a mermaid). Definitely a book for monster erotica or alien erotica readers :)
A few tips for the writer: 1. Watch whether you want to speak in present tense or past tense. Sometimes you switch back and forth within the same paragraph and it doesn't read very smoothly. 2. Read your dialogues aloud to yourself or a friend. Most of the character interactions are awkward and distracts from the sexiness of the scenes. Once you smooth out their speech patterns, a large part of the awkwardness will also disappear I think.
All in all, a good start. A little editing and tweaking here and there will make it golden.
A few tips for the writer: 1. Watch whether you want to speak in present tense or past tense. Sometimes you switch back and forth within the same paragraph and it doesn't read very smoothly. 2. Read your dialogues aloud to yourself or a friend. Most of the character interactions are awkward and distracts from the sexiness of the scenes. Once you smooth out their speech patterns, a large part of the awkwardness will also disappear I think.
All in all, a good start. A little editing and tweaking here and there will make it golden.
November 12, 2019
The president of the Earth... Really? Was this written by a 16 year old boy? I'm being honest when I say this is some of the trashiest and most inept writing I've ever encountered and I've read Donald Trump's Twitter feed.
May 20, 2015
Cover: 2.5 stars
Story line: 3.5 stars
Characters: 3 stars
Personal rating: 4 stars
Did it give me a book hangover:
Yep because I need to know what's gonna happen!!
Is this a review book or personal read:
I was given this in exchange for my honest opinion.
What I liked about this book.
What I liked about this was that for one... there is different planets lol I love me anything Sci-Fi, it was well written and I love all things set to be in the future and two this is told in Evans pov and it was good because men don't hold back and in this he didn't... It was all cock this and cock that, you always read about chicks and with this it was refreshing to hear about the MC having such a high sex drive and no woman being able to keep up with him bwahaha.
I liked where this is going and look forward to how things are gonna turn out and also the sneak peak into the next part.
What I didn't like about this book.
I can honestly say that the main thing that stood out for me and bugged me was Evan saying that he isn't gay!!
I've never known a man to say that he isn't gay but loves the taste of seman when sucking a mans cock!!
At the very least admit to being bi curious instead of stating IM NOT GAY!
Would I read more from this author?
Of course I would :) I need the next Part.
Story line: 3.5 stars
Characters: 3 stars
Personal rating: 4 stars
Did it give me a book hangover:
Yep because I need to know what's gonna happen!!
Is this a review book or personal read:
I was given this in exchange for my honest opinion.
What I liked about this book.
What I liked about this was that for one... there is different planets lol I love me anything Sci-Fi, it was well written and I love all things set to be in the future and two this is told in Evans pov and it was good because men don't hold back and in this he didn't... It was all cock this and cock that, you always read about chicks and with this it was refreshing to hear about the MC having such a high sex drive and no woman being able to keep up with him bwahaha.
I liked where this is going and look forward to how things are gonna turn out and also the sneak peak into the next part.
What I didn't like about this book.
I can honestly say that the main thing that stood out for me and bugged me was Evan saying that he isn't gay!!
I've never known a man to say that he isn't gay but loves the taste of seman when sucking a mans cock!!
At the very least admit to being bi curious instead of stating IM NOT GAY!
Would I read more from this author?
Of course I would :) I need the next Part.
May 14, 2015
The wonderful fireball inspired me to write this after a night with the gal-pals. All praise to the fireball.
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