I’m cleaning up my TBR list and trying to get rid of all these cheesy cover books with husband betrayals. Most of them are quick reads.
This one started out interesting. If you’ve ever dealt with a loved one dying, then you will probably sympathize with the heroine in this book.
The heroine and hero have been married for 4 years. In the last 2 years, the hero’s mom became sick and basically the wife was dropped off and left to be the caregiver of the mother-in-law.
Anybody that’s been a caregiver to a dying person KNOWS how physically and mentally exhausting it is.
The heroine had no support. The hero hardly came and he was too busy flying all over the country with his pretty assistant, Nadia. He was going to parties and galas with Nadia. Look, he may not be cheating, but she was basically his girlfriend.
How could anybody forgive any man who was partying with an OW while ignoring his dying mother? Think about it for a second- the heroine cleaning his mom up after she soils herself…and he’s partying the night away with Nadia. THIS IS HORRIFIC
It actually sounds like the heroine and hero were not even intimate anymore. 🤷♀️
Anyway, the MIL dies. The hero, Nadia, and the hero’s 3 sisters gather after her death. Everybody is BIG SAD even though none of them could spare a moment to visit her when she was dying. 🥴 Then the hero has the audacity to stand up at the funeral and thank Nadia for being their support during this. Wut? Oh yeah, Nadia sat beside the hero during the funeral. The heroine sat in the second row. 🤡
I did laugh when the will was read and MIL gave everything to the heroine and left her family that letter which pointed out how trash they were. I also loved that she told the heroine “to leave her son” because she KNEW he treated her badly.
So the heroine did leave and then she found out she was pregnant. Huh? Earlier it said they were not intimate, so idk?
From the hero’s POV, we find out Nadia quit. That was it? She worked for him for 9 years, clearly she was hot for the hero, and she just quits? That was the most abrupt exit out of a book ever.
I ended up skimming the next few chapters and it just became too wordy. There was way too much self reflection going on. The hero wasn’t even going to “win” her back because he was going to self reflect instead. It was almost like the ABOVE plot was pushed into an AI machine and the prompt said make an ending where the couple gets back together BUT have the hero self reflect the whole way.
Random thought but why do these books always have a chipped coffee mug and tons of files, documents, and folders. 😜
I did skip to the end and see the HFN between the MCs. It just suddenly ends. It mentions that he visits on Tuesdays and Thursdays. He gives her a kiss on her cheek.
Quietly introspective, the beats will be most familiar to those who have spent large amounts of time caring for someone. Those silent hours spent waiting by the bedside, alone in the dark, with just the faltering breath of a loved one to break the silence.
And just like there was a slow, quiet abandonment by the son & husband, his return is equally quiet. There is no loud groveling, no grand gestures. Very different from most books covering this trope.
But that doesn't mean it's not powerful in its own way, and worth the read.
I must admit I bawled when I read the first 40% of this book. I loved the heroine and Marguerite. Their relationship really touched me. And the reading at the will was dynamic. It was so perfect. The husband was an idiot. He thanked everyone but the wife who stayed with his mom while she was dying for four years. And every night for the final months. But he said anyone would do it. And he thanked his assistant for keeping him together at the funeral. But not his wife. He sat next to his assistant and the wife sat in the second row. And the next thing is his assistant quite but we never learn why. She was totally better him too you could tell. This started out so good and there were such tremendous parts but the end felt sadly lacking. He did the work and made attempts at atonement but he didn't even contact her after she walked out after the will was read. He waited four months and went back and saw her but she didn't see him. and she was pregnant. There are so many tiny moments in this that were amazing. It is definitely my favorite of this series so far. And not because of the very dull romance. It was the bond of the two women. His wife and his Mother. The daughter she got to choose. So beautiful.
I liked the premise of the story but author’s way of writing didn't really worked for me. No enough dialogue. It was more tell than show. I would have liked a lot more condemnation for Whip and his 3 sisters that were nowhere to be seen while their mother was dying and they would only call. Never visit. And Sarah was the only one looking after their mother.No recognition. Also I didn't understand why the sisters were no talking to Whip. They did exactly as he . Ok read
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Sara takes care of her dying MIL for 4 years and asks and receives no credit from her husband Whit or his sisters. But her MIL saw it and let Sara a message in her will-leave her husband who did not take care of Sara. Sara is strong and resilient but not a doormat. Whit is the one who must learn to change.
This was good up till the 40ish% mark then it become very introspective and wordy and so I skipped read after that. 1.5 as the first half of the book stung.
A poignant story that some reviewers have stated is not for everyone. I agree. First off, to nurse a woman for 4 years all the way through death, you have to live through to appreciate. Otherwise it resonates as oppressive or even boring. This author did a superb job in handling that.
The husband was an enigma to me at first not understanding what his motives were in building a wall between him and his wife and then later thinking he could remove the wall and get back to married business upon the death of his mother. In the meantime, his neglect towards his wife and his mother who was on her deathbed became abandonment which bewildered him that he caused that.
While his wife nursed his mother for 4 YEARS!, he hardly ever came home and all of that responsibility and care landed on his wife. Then he patronized her with kind phone calls from overseas having no idea how much his wife really did for his own mother. His mother saw it and let him have it at the will reading. Along with his absence and neglect, he had an assistant who he continually praised for her outstanding work in helping him keep his calendar up to date. Man, was this guy out to lunch. Well, he was not only exposed through the will reading, but was savagely excoriated.
So the wife left him, good for her, and the rest of the story was the eyes of his understanding being enlightened as to the complete asshole he became and then began atoning. To me it was really emotional and heart rending. But there was a healthy HEA.
3 1/2 stars. The h and H have been married for 8 years. The H runs a company. For four years the h has cared for her MIL who has cancer. While one of the tropes was listed as an emotional affair, that aspect of the story received limited attention. The H excused the h from attending invitations saying that the OW/assistant could stand in for her. The h said thank you but wondered if the H was being considerate or making the h disappear. The amount of sacrifice that the h made in caring for the H's mother is described in detail yet the h receives no public acknowledgement in the funeral program or in the H's eulogy but the OW does. The OW sits beside the H at the funeral. There is no room in that row for the h. It didn't feel like a full blown emotional affair so much as the h stepping back from the public role of wife so it didn't feel too angsty. We don't have information about the marriage before the illness. Did they discuss having children? Did the h work? How long did the OW work for the H? Most of the book seemed to be about the H's realization and grovel. This part of the book felt repetitive.