In the lush forests of Sakleshpura, a tribal man dies under mysterious circumstances, his body branded with words in an ancient Kannada script, and only the eerie silhouette of a young woman to be seen. Nearby, in modern-day Bangalore’s concrete jungle, Neel, young, handsome and till now carefree, uneasily wonders if his friends on the party circuit are playing a prank on him -- his penthouse reeks of charred flesh, and he thought he saw a young woman out of the corner of his eye. Meanwhile, at the other end of the Sakleshpura forest reserve, newly-married Shivaranjini experiences a devastating siezure, emerging with a terrifying new personality. What are the mysterious forces at work here and how are all these things related? How does an audacious kidnapping investigated by a svelte police officer fit in? Is it a case of paranormal activity, as believed by the beautiful Tara, or something much less sinister? Neel and his friends are caught up in the vortex of these seemingly unrelated events, until the day they unravel the truth — and discover the revenge of Kaivalya.
This is my first book in this genre. I was constantly scared while reading the book which is either my vivid imagination or the way Sumana Khan has written the book ( i strongly believe in the latter). The story was gripping and I could see it as a movie in my head. I loved it!! It is a full packed Indian masala paranormal thriller.
Okay I have a lot of thoughts on this one. I really really really liked this book-very very much- hence this review. Normally I'm not invested in any book enough that I can bother with a review. But, The Revenge of Kaivalya struck a chord with me and now I am unable to get it out of my head.
The narrative is beautiful, the story is gripping, the characters are decent, the plot and premise is interesting and it draws one in and keeps them hooked.
Fair warning: Mild spoilers ahead.
Things that did not make sense: 1. For a story titled Revenge of Kaivalya, hardly anything about her revenge is mentioned, especially the subject of the said revenge. Apart from one scary episode right at the start- which was very very promising, the intended victim spends his time in the entire book blithely unaware of everything associated to her, and instead angsts about his one sided love for a different character. Even the ending, where he and Kaivalya finally interact, is so rushed and confused and doesn't make the slightest sense. I mean I dont want a huge fanfare or anything, but shouldn't this moment i.e. the revenge be the highlight? Instead it is poor Shivaranjini and fam who ended up victimized.
2. What was the whole point of the Matchu/Shakti Rao storyline? I am soo confused. Shakti Rao's adult life was shaped by her experiences with M, right from the brush off from him while kidnapping her friend, to her best friend's suicide and ending with her burgeoning detective skills. She is presently the one that knows M's MO the best, and has been shown to be capable and smart enough to handle the ego-ridden, male dominated police force with utmost aplomb, and yet, having her just randomly quit? and Matchu gets away scot-free-it doesn't make sense at all. This could have been a smaller side plot that could have developed into its own book, because both Matchu and Shakti, as characters, are so interesting. And having them play cat-mouse and finally interact would have been so fulfilling. :(
3. Too many main players: Initially, I assumed the leads to be Dhruv, Kaivalya and Neel- not as a triangle, but just the main focal points. And everyone else would be the supporting cast. But Neel is sidelined from the main plot for a major part and Dhruv just randomly loses his coolness after meeting Tara and also sidelined- hello Bhats and Shivaranjini. It feels like the development had been started for all of them, but it was just left hanging. All the characters know each other? I actually dont mind this, most of the MCs are either related to each other or have known each other, and therefore they are connected. What could have been done was establish that right at the start and begin the different plot threads, not throw this little nugget of info at the last minute. And secondly, why are they connected? There is a statement made at the end, where one of the characters reckon that they were all involved because of some connection- what is it and why? This brings me to the next point-
4. The antagonist- The best antagonists are usually the ones that strike a cord with the audience, of course the way they go about what they need to do is twisted and hence: antagonists, but my point is they are relatable. For a good portion of the book- I got Kaivalya: she has been sinned against, probably had bad things happen to her and etc- there even is a section where we get into her head and see her disdain against the dregs of society; she even hesitates killing a person, expecting him to repent and genuinely feels bad for accidentally killing a character in the beginning. I loved this- she,I believed, was a very very good antagonist, and I could hardly wait for the MCs to get into her backstory. Until, they actually did, and I cannot tell you how disappointed I was. Sure loads of people do horrible stuff based on something they misheard or misunderstood or did not know enough about. But there is enough emphasis done on bringing that out and having a discussion on it and seeing how the antagonist deals with the fact that all these years of hatred was seeded by something so trivial. But Kaivalya's story isn't moving enough, nor has the necessary urgency or motivation to trigger something so massive. Sure she was different and sure people adored and avoided her with equal measure. And sure she liked the first boy who treated her with respect, but her entire hatred stemmed from the fact that he did not like her back- and this she heard from a third source- and also he 'allegedly' only wanted her money. Her mother dies looking for her and the boy realizes he does love her- but Kaivalya is done? and the burning smell that accompanies her is self inflicted?! and she suddenly hates God now? How is her personal story and the battle of Talikota related- sure she predicts the outcome, but that has zero impact on the story. Her characterization and back story could have been worked upon and expanded a bit more to have truly made her one of the best written antagonists ever.
5. The climax- I did not understand at all. This left me so bereft. Its like my excitement and anticipation was being built up through the book and when it reached the crescendo, I was brutally jolted and told okay, that's it- nothing else is there here, bye bye. Come on!
Final thoughts: I really liked this book and I really want to know what happened- why did the MCs survive? what was the connect between them i.e. why these specific people? Could I have a larger flashback to the past, were these guys reincarnates? did they all have an impact on Kaivalya? Does modern day Neel ever understand the entire story? Did Kaivalya ever realize the truth? Does she finally rest in peace with Poorvamma? does Shakti ever get over her obsession with Matchu ? does she rejoin the police? So many questions! sigh!
I would recommend this to most people because the story is gripping enough(until the climax), the language is very good, the plot engages you and makes you want to learn more- be it about the Vijayanagara empire, Halegannada, the beautiful western ghats or the eeriness of the going-ons in those quiet forests.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
First 1/3rd of this book is super spooky and gave me a night full of nightmares but then the author loses the grip. The ending is super disappointing. This book has all the materials to be a movie!
'The Revenge of Kaivalya' by Suman Khan is a quick page-turner book and you get glued to it from the very first chapter. The story is quite interesting and it is difficult to find a flaw in the plot. The writer has used simple language, but at the same time, the narration is very vivid (especially the encounters with Kailvalya).
I felt the ending was a bit letdown and also at some places, I felt the narration was dragging (like that of Ved's background story).
The cover though simple, is attractive and gives an insight to what to expect inside. Wondering why ‘The Revenge of Kaivalya?’ Visit http://kaapizone.blogspot.co.uk/2013/... to know the story behind the name.
WHAT I FELT ABOUT THE BOOK?
HIGHS
Storyline – Interesting and intriguing with multiple plots. The author has been able to weave together events taking place at two different timelines and two different places beautifully. The transition from one place to another, from one timeline to another is smooth. What kept me hooked was the vividness of the descriptions especially those where nature was involved. In fact the reason why I took more than the usual time to finish the book was this aspect. I could not help reading over and over again the parts where Mother Nature was etched. I could clearly visualize her.
The local flavours add spice to the book. The suspense is maintained till the very end.
Language – Simple and engaging fast paced narrative. Flows freely and smoothly
Characters - Well etched with all their imperfections. One can relate to each one of them except maybe Kaivalya.Each of the characters contributes to the story.
Message – Now did I find a message here in a paranormal story? Yes. Never break a heart. The pain can be devastating.
LOWS
Nothing in particular. However, I must admit that I was disappointed with Matchu’s escape. Wished there was something else in store for him.
MY RATING/ RECOMMENDATION
Looking for a light read. Then, this is definitely one you can place your hands on. I know I would like to revist the book again. Hence I will give this 5/5
WINDING UP
A few parts that made me think/ kept me mesmerized-
Page 2 – “Deep within the forest, it was twilight – dark. The ground was moist because of the rain, but not wet. The leaves were rotting and dispersed a loamy smell, Kencha moved as silently and swiftly as a leopard…….Kencha lifted his face and sniffed the air like a wolf.”
Page 4 – “Daniel stood rooted to the spot. …….He seemed hypnotized by the swaying hood, the open fangs, and the ivory- cream underside of the snake that was now exposed. The cobra seemed to have an eyeball- to eyeball contact with him. Daniel felt the snake was imprinting his face in its memory. ‘I wonder if it is black or olive green on the other side,’ Daniel thought irrationally.”
Page 13 to 15 –“Deep within the Western Ghats,….. Lush green grass covers the plain, like an emerald carpet. In the middle of the plain, nearly a kilometer wide, the Hemavathi is like a mirror. Now and then, a whisper of wind caresses her surface, leaving light ripples in its wake. Flowers that are never seen on the surface of the earth bloom on Hemavathi’s banks and gently sway in the mysterious wind that is as rhythmic as breath…..But even He, The Destroyer in the Holy Trinity, the mighty Lord Shiva, has to wait for the right time.”
The Revenge Of Kaivalya opens with the story of Kencha, a forest dweller who tags cobras in the Western Ghats, when he dies under mysterious circumstances with some words branded on his skin in an ancient Kannada script. On the other hand, in modern-day Bangalore, young Neel wakes up from a nightmare and a sickening smell of charred flesh and realizes he has wet his bed. I felt the first pang of fear when I realized that the smell was not just in the nightmare; Neel’s servants and his friend VJ felt it too! Then comes Shivaranjini of the Kudala Sangama estate who ventures into the deepest parts of the Sakleshpura forest and comes back with a pendant. She soon experiences a devastating seizure and emerges with a dangerous new personality. Though she has a history of panic attacks, this one reads different; it’s almost like a possession!
Right from the first chapter, the author captured my interest as the story kept moving at a fast pace. Many simultaneous threads in this one but all culminate to a single point of contact – Kaivalya, who has risen from the dead on the eve of the Tsunami to seek revenge from someone. But who is that someone? It couldn’t be Kencha since he was the first one to fall as a victim. Is it Neel who saw her in the nightmare? Or is it Shivaranjini whose body the enraged soul has possessed? And the most important question of all – who is Kaivalya and why does she want revenge? You must pick up the book my dear friends to know the answers to these questions and believe me, you won’t be disappointed.
The author used immaculate language in this book and painted the scene in front of my eyes. I consider any story that can evoke an emotional reaction from the reader to be brilliant and The Revenge Of Kaivalya does just that. I devour horror and thriller stories and there’s not much I haven’t seen done but this book left my pulse racing and the fear factor was a definite turn-on. Not only did I read the story, I smelt the charred flesh, listened to the deafening silence or the howling winds and claps of thunder and tasted the rice idli with melting butter on top. The author has been successful in evoking all my senses as a reader and that’s brilliant.
The book does seem a little bit slack towards the middle and perhaps a bit more wordy than usual but the language is fresh and flowing and leaves a strong impression. The climax, however, left me a bit disillusioned. Without giving away any spoilers let me just say that I’d have liked it better if the protagonists had got rid of the spirit themselves without ‘divine intervention’.
Overall, This is a must-pickup-to-read book if you love the paranormal genre or if you are just looking to get a little (or a lot) spooked. I thoroughly enjoyed the book think that this is a brilliant effort for a debutante.
An amazing read in the paranormal genre. It is so well written that I could imagine the whole book playing in my head like a movie. There were a few pages which spooked me out and I stopped reading for a while to get a grip on myself. Cant wait to read the next book by Sumana Khan .
Thoughts from first reading, when it was self-published: It's a fast paced novel and a rank page turner, shades of Sidney Sheldon and Dan Brown in the unfolding of events. Easy to read, at no point did I feel to stop reading except for lack of time.
Thoughts from re-read, after the novel got published traditionally: Fast paced. Easy to read, and interesting events keep popping up almost every page. The setting spans multiple eras and all of them are nicely set-up. In between the two readings, I had trekked a lot and come to know Bangalore better, so I could relate to many landmarks in the book. They do enhance the experience. Flashbacks are interesting and help build characters - too many for my liking though.
It is not a whodunnit, but the suspense is palpable. Just like reaching the peak of a mountain is not all but the journey that is more interesting, here too, events and characters (seemingly unrelated) make it very difficult to put aside the book, even for a break or sleep. At times, one would feel that the author has slipped up, beware, something else is brewing up there! It felt like the author purposefully did it to tease the reader. Some particular numbers keep popping up frequently too.
Though the genre is paranormal, I'll stick with my earlier impression that the book is Dan Brown and Sidney Sheldon rolled into one. And by that, I don't mean to compare those authors with Sumana here, it's just a way to convey what kind of a book this is.
Coming to characters, many of them are memorable and atleast 1-2 distinctive personality that one would easily recall even after years. While rereading, I was surprised that I remembered small incidents and yet forgot some big plot lines.
Putting a critical eye during the second sitting meant that I did notice few short comings too. I won't go in depth with those, some are plot spoilers. Though some coincidences are very subtle - the way I like them, few of them were hard to digest. But then perhaps, fictional novel aren't supposed to follow normal life. Falling in love at first sight, stylish men and women, expressions like 'biggest in a decade', etc give a filmy touch, which I personally feel could have been toned down or completely avoided. One particular support character disappearing in the later half felt odd.
Engrossing. Gripping. Terrifying. Amazing plot. That’s ‘The Revenge of Kaivalya’!
The weaving in of the multiple storylines is handled quite well and keeps one on the edge wondering what’s happening in the other storyline at that moment! The only flipside of this was that the climax terminated quite rapidly than expected.
Must read for horror lovers! A spine chilling book in the paranormal genre. So many dots to connect and reach to the royale finale. Totally recommended.
It is a totally woman centric book with all the male characters playing supporting roles. These women have been portrayed as very strong characters dominating the story all through. It is eminently readable.
The book has good, coordinated writing and never loses sight of the plot or purpose. Transcending time, moving between the materialistic and the eerie, Ms. Khan's writing has managed a book the flows without any stoppages or lethargy.
For a first novel, Sumana Khan has done excellently well in authoring ‘Kaivalya’. Narration and language are excellent. The author just brings the locales of Sakleshpur and surroundings to life with her vivid descriptions. I was actually able to distinctly remember more than 10 characters, it is indeed an achievement on Ms Khan’s part! Overall the story moves at a good pace – hardly bringing any boring moments.
The book is a good paranormal thriller. However, I picked up the book thinking it could have some more information on vijaynagar era however was disappointed. Only new information i got from the book was about halegannada script.
Love the writing. The author has an ability to keep the reader in the suspense and grab the eye in her own writing skills. Though horror stories are really not my thing this particular book still gives me chills everytime I attempt to reread it.
The book is a good paranormal thriller. However, I picked up the book thinking it could have some more information on vijaynagar era however was disappointed. Only new information i got from the book was about halegannada script.
It’s about three and a half decades since I read a book belonging to the horror genre. I read The Exorcist and The Omen in the past and they kind of maimed me for life. I used to be fascinated by horror stories but not after those two. I even feared my own shadow for a long time.
I don’t quite know what came over me when I decided to review The Revenge of Kaivalya by Sumana Khan. I was fascinated with the blurb and said ‘yes’. Do I regret it? Not at all. Read on to find more.
To begin with, I must compliment the author on her flawless language. It was a pleasure reading excellent prose by an Indian author. I can’t say the same of all the books that I have read in the recent past.
The story begins with the murder of Kencha, who is an expert at tracking animals in the jungles of Karnataka. He’s offered a job with a foreign TV channel when he saves a firang TV journalist’s life after he’s bitten by a snake. Unfortunately for Kencha, he meets a terrible death in the forest.
Young and handsome Dhruv is a forest officer who inspires loyalty in those who work with him. Along with Dr. Bala and Dr. Nithya (husband-wife team of mobile doctors), Dhruv does his best to find out how Kencha was killed. What they uncover is too incredible and terrible for words.
Neel is the spoilt son of a rich diamond merchant. He wastes his life away living in a grand penthouse by himself. He is visited there by The Shadow that gives him the creeps. VJ is Neel’s best friend, who would not think twice about using his friend to make money. Neel meets Arundhati at the gym and falls for her unaware that she’s married to Ved and has a son to boot.
When VJ gets to know that Arundhati is filthy rich, he decides to have her son Momo kidnapped for a ransom as he is in urgent need of money. For this, he hires the unscrupulous Matchu who no one has seen. VJ loses courage midway and decides to call off the kidnapping. But will Matchu agree?
Then there is Tara, the 35-year-old para-psychologist. She knows a lot about paranormal activity – theoretically. But can she face a real possession of a spirit?
Shivaranjani is the unfortunate one. Her father’s Indian while her mother’s American. Having grown up in the USA, the young woman arrives in Karnataka to visit her parents-in-law along with her husband Ravikanth. Her holiday turns into hell on earth – so much so that her husband believes that’s she’s all set to take off to the other world.
Inspector Shakti Rao is a completely fascinating police officer who becomes a police woman by happenstance. How and why you will have to find out when you read the book.
There are loads more characters in the novel and believe me when I say that the author has penned them so well that there is no question of the reader getting confused or mixing up the people. Each character has a role to play and he/she does it well.
A thought came to me while I was reading the book – we are horrified of spirits, at least the bad ones. But what about the horrible human beings that roam the earth? I was fascinated by the way Sumana Khan weaves the story of Kaivalya’s ghost from the 16th century and terrible people like Matchu and Paramesha – sketching the way their horrible minds work.
The novel so reminded me of old books of fiction – many Tamil ones that I have read and some English too – where the story takes off at many points into brief tales that make short stories by themselves, like small rivulets going to meet the main river – a fascinating way to write. It does not detract from the main tale in any way, only enhances it.
What I liked best was the positive way the author has handled the horror fiction and brought about a lovely end that leaves the reader happy and in no way horrified.
I don’t want to say any more as I fear that I might let out spoilers. The Revenge of Kaivalya by Sumana Khan is a beautiful tale penned by an excellent author that is a must read if you are interested in peoples’ stories.
The Revenge of Kaivalya is one difficult book to review. Not because I don’t resonate with the story. I do. But it does not follow a linear story line. The Author keeps the reader busy following the plot changes, the POV shifts and small incidents forming the framework of the main event. Sumana Khan keeps us on our toes with this story.:)
I had heard great reviews about this book. Few of my friends even said that this book should not be read in the dark. It is a horror story in a true sense. I mocked at them. Put the kids to bed and under the warm glow of a 40watt bulb started my Kindle.
The story is of Kaivalya. A young orphan from the pages of history who comes to haunt our world due to a curse. For whom she comes is a mystery, but it does affect the lives of many. A forest officer – who loses a friend and whose life was thrown in the path of the wrath of Kaivalya since his newfound love, Tara held a piece of this mystery. One innocent couple whose wife is possessed by Kaivalya to seek her revenge. Why the wife is chosen is again a mystery or was it a random act of a deranged spirit? A young boy kidnapped and he somehow forms the link to this mystery. Many lives haunted, many lives destroyed. Parallel to this story is the story of a kidnapper, a psychopath. Strangely, a good psychopath :D.(I like him) There are many roads travelled in this story to reach a certain point. A point which starts from the beginning of the pages, creates a few nail biting moments and a few curses thrown when the story takes another tangent. A very difficult thing to do, but Sumana has managed to do this with a great flourish. ( I need to get a manicure done after reading this story btw. :) )
What I liked 1) The gripping tale was interwoven in a very interesting way. If you start this book, you wouldn’t want to keep it down.
2) Few shivers. Very difficult to create without the sound effects. (Fluffy, my little Pomeranian, helped. As soon as Kaivalya levitated.. he let out a chilling cry in the middle of the night. He never does that. (My heartbeat went through some major rhythm changes.:)
3) Research very well done. Being a Karnataka history student myself, I understand the digging Sumana had to do for this. (Though not one page of this story can be called a history lesson, which often many such stories end up as, but the history formed the backdrop of the story which answered many of the whys and hows.)
4) I wanted to know why the burning smell was there. I wanted to know why her eyes were depicted like that and I wanted to know who she really was after. A 300 page book becomes an easy read when so many ‘wants’ pushes you forward to reach the end.
5) The places and the food described in this story is very authentic. Felt damn homesick :( The Dosa’s with butter on top and filter coffee… JP Nagar and Malleshwaram were nostalgic moments.Thanks for those Sumana. Read the full review at http://rubinaramesh.blogspot.com/2014...
Intrigued by the name KAIVALYA and Sumana Khan’s writing, I hopped onto her blog yesterday. What made me smile in this post- http://kaapizone.blogspot.co.uk/2013/... was the line at the end where she writes about how even the good can cause harm, ironic but justifiable. I completed reading this book a while ago, and I must admit that it took me to a different world altogether, I will be there for the next couple of days. I was told how spooky some scenes are at places in this story, yes they are, and I did enjoy reading those parts but for me this book was something beyond that.
“It is a much better world than ours”
Dhruv, one of the characters, an Indian Forest Service officer says so speaking about the wild and why he chose to become an officer, well this opinion is going to stay with me stronger after this reinforcement. That particular scene brought tears in my eyes, it is something beyond the writing which is so endearing in this work. Sumana’s admirable choice of words for a debutante at writing novels is what touched me. The way she describes two extremes- beauty and horror with equal regards is what that makes a reader like me believe that there is power in every creation. All what we do has an implication somewhere, we all are like ripples in the sea, connected and crossing each other.
The paranormal sections are as relatable as the spell binding description of the Western Ghats. River Himavathi and Lord Shiva’s scene in the initial part of the story blew me away. Imagine writing about the protagonist, Kaivalya as a beautiful fourteen year old young girl singing kirthanas and Kaivalya in a terrifying form causing blisters, all in one thread in the story with such fine balance must have been such a hard task, according to me this is commendable. The other characters Kencha, Daniel, Steve, Tara, Shakti, Matchu, Dr.Bala, Nithya, Professor Dikshit, Neel, Shivaranjini, Ravikanth, Arundathi, Ved, Momo, VJ, Tony and so on are portrayed with a very pragmatic perspective, everyone in the story gets their due. Gods and ghosts are all within us. Kaivalya is just one of those forms.
The only pinch I had was when Tara describes Kaivalya from her notes, the entire section in is the narrative form of the author. After reading this part it took me sometime to realize that it was being told by Tara to the others. Another interesting aspect is the use of Kannada words here and there like ‘mallige’ for jasmine, thumbs up for that brave and sweet attempt. Places in and around Bangalore also are in the story line which eases and pleases a native reader like me. Thank you for a wonderful book Sumana, and for making me love the place where I live and come from all the more.
There are multiple plots in the story line, but they all have a common link and converge at Kaivalya. Kaivalya has nurtured hatred and rage for centuries for the injustice done to her, to return in a terrible form with a power that even Shiva Himself would not be able to confront her. So, Kencha, Neel, Shivranjini and Paramesha bear the brunt of her revenge. Who is Kaivalya and why she wanted to take revenge after years, well, my lips are sealed and you need to read the book to know that! The Revenge of Kaivalya is not a perplexing whodunit rather it is like a jigsaw puzzles where various different pieces are brought together so that they all fit well and snugly as the story progresses. There’s not a dull moment in the 384 paged book and you keep flipping through the pages, one after the other and putting it down is simply difficult.
What I liked about the book is the vividness with which the scenes came live in front of my eyes. The characterization is exceptional and all the characters are well developed and there are quite a lot of them in the book. The language is impeccable and flows smoothly. The narrative style is pretty evocative, though I feel that at times it was a bit more wordy and certain parts were superfluous. The suspense and chills are palpable and that’s simply commendable in a thriller.
The climax was a bit of let-down. I wish the concepts / aspects/experiments from Parapsychology were used since Tara had ‘done her research in Parapsychology at UK and travelled to the remotest corners of the world, investigating paranormal phenomenon’. Love at first sight for 2 couples is a bit dramatic but I am not complaining about that!
The Revenge of Kaivalya is highly recommended for its fast paced narrative and a story that will thrill and chill you.
For a first novel, Sumana Khan has done excellently well in authoring ‘Kaivalya’. I had read it first time in 2010 when it was published by Cinnamon Teal. It has now been published by Westland. Being the Halloween season I was inspired to reread this book and I did. It had the same effect on me as it had the first time. Despite reading it for the second time, it still gripped me with its amazing plot and hair raising passages. Of course this book would be berated by all the rationalists because of the paranormal content that is at the core of the tale woven. But it is a work of fiction and the mastery over the English language and a fertile imagination of the author is what puts this work in a class of its own. It has the ability to enthral the reader for a massive 1392 pages in its present avatar! If you have visited Hampi, you will be able to connect with the narrative as it revolves around the Vijayanagar kingdom hence the locations would sound familiar. Even if you have not visited Hampi, the vivid description of the various locations will get you there virtually. It is a totally woman centric book with all the male characters playing supporting roles. And these women have been portrayed as very strong characters dominating the story all through. I found that very refreshing. So whether you are a feminist, rationalist, spiritualist or just a plain thrill seeker this book is a must read. It is eminently readable.
After a very long time have I sat through a fiction book in two sittings! The book is captivating to say the least. The context and environment is realistically recreated - so much so that the very mention of a smell in the book makes one feel it! Having been in Bangalore for many years, it was close to heart to read of many locations, food items and other things that I personally experienced. The author's casual use of branded items in the text was very unusual, but I liked it! The weaving in of the multiple storylines are handled quite well and kept one on the edge wondering whats happening in the other storyline at that moment! The only flipside of this was that the climax terminated quite rapidly than expected. While reading towards the end you find that there are only few pages left and apparently so much more may need to be done. That buildup was not maintained and was a let down. A must read for horror lovers
A spine chilling book in the paranormal genre. Or is it just that? Very well written. The book keeps the reader on the edge at almost the turn of every page. It is very rare that I feel the need to stop every other thing and finish reading any book.
So many dots to connect with and make the royale finale. All characters are alive and leave a lingering after taste with the reader. That is sweet.
The book has good, coordinated writing and never loses sight of the plot or purpose. Transcending time, moving between the materialistic and the eerie, Ms. Khan's writing has managed a book the flows without any stoppages or lethargy.
The only thing I would probably change about the book would be the title. It should have read "कैवल्य" and nothing else. I am sure many readers would agree.
Genuinely spooky and a whopping read to boot, managing to tie up a paranormal thriller and a spectacular crime and lead it to a cliff-hanging finale along with an engaging cast of characters - some of which it must be said seem a little too stereotypical... On the other hands, some loose threads remain to plague the discerning reader - how come an IPS office is made a SI, the origin of the eponymous character is never explained and also the link between the intent for revenge and the fall of the empire in tenuous at best, and though there is a literal deus ex machina in the denouement, the agency behind some actions which help the team is never explained as is the fate of some characters, like the possessed woman's son...
Very rarely does one read a book which is so well written and the narrative so well constructed, the one literally cannot find any faults at all with it. The Revenge of Kaivalya is one such book in which the author, in her debut outing simply manages to take readers' breath away with the sheer depth and breadth with which she has dealt with the plot.
While the first half will surely manage to scare each and every reader with a strong emphasis on the paranormal, the second half will leave us all breathless with the race against time as the action races towards its climactic ending. The setting, the narrative, the characters, their emotions, all of these leave absolutely no doubt in my mind that Sumana Khan is somebody who knows how to weave a yarn, and a damn good one at that.
After many days I stumbled upon a horror genre read and much to my delight I am absolutely thrilled through out the book. There are certain moments in the book where a literal chill ran down my spine,especially in the first half of the book,regarding the appearances of Kaivalya. The scene describing Siva at the beginning of the book is too good.
I sincerely hoped it was Matchu who's actual Neelakantha Raya. The moment when I completed Kaivalya flahsback episode, Neel is too much to give away. I hoped n hoped this will be Matchu. Except this I am too impressed with the narrative and fell in love with the book..
This book gave me absolute chills n I am quite happy for that!!!
A gripping read. An enjoyable paranormal story set in Indian locales. Narration and language are excellent. The author just brings the locales of Sakleshpur and surroundings to life with her vivid descriptions. The book is also filled with lot of interesting characters. When a reader is able to distinctly remember more than 10 characters in a book, it is indeed an achievement on the author's part. Overall the story moves at a good pace - hardly any boring moments. A good light read for a train journey.
Awesome work By Sumana....the book gets you hooked from start till end... once you start reading its just unputdownable....great work ...loved the book.... loved the characters the way each character has been portrayed and developed. how all the incidences are interlinked and reach the end at climax is totally mind blowing...
Good narration. Few scary moments. But a predictable story-line. The reason for the revenge is not strong enough (not even logical) , which was a let down. The backstories which link the main characters were nicely scripted.
Full fledged characters, an intriguing plot with an in-depth and lucid writing, gripping horror and terrific creative writing that makes the pages turn to a live environment engulfing you into it.
thoroughly enjoyed this nearabout 400 pages. a must read for horror lovers...