OutLaw

by Ashley Cole

344 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 19, 2026

Reviews

[Vicki]

I enjoyed the story. The format was a bit hard to read, though. I'm not sure if it was how the author submitted it to Amazon Kindle Unlimited, or if it had to do with the publishing of it, but the conversation flow was very strange. Every sentence was a separate line, even if they were from the same speaker, making it hard sometimes to figure out who was speaking. A little bit of editing/proofreading for readability and this would have gotten 4 stars from me.

[Fluent in Romance]

I really wanted to like this, but the execution just wasn't there for me. The main issue was the writing style itself—the sentence structure, pacing, and overall flow felt disjointed and unnatural.
I'm not usually one to throw in the towel on a book, but by the 40% mark, reading it felt like work rather than an enjoyable escape. Life is too short for books that don't click! DNFing this one and moving on to something better.

[Jodie Warner]

The story line itself was good, in my opinion, however, the way it was written made it impossible for me to finish. Characters were talking, and instead of it being on one line, it was a separate line for each sentence with quotations. Just made it extremely hard to read and the flow was not there. If it could be reformatted, I would try to read again.

[April]

Great book

Great book but the ending sucked..leaving us hanging like that. Hopefully there's a 2nd book or added ending ?? Not really into some books where the ending ends up like if its about Caleb and Hannah and we find the ending there

[Emma]

Unstoppable

Literally didn't put it down and read in one sitting I was glued from start to finish and loved the characters the family vibes the love vibes was just magical and blended oh so well onto book 2

[Shell’s shelf]

Not for me

I've read many MC romance books and I'm sure some will enjoy this, but unfortunately it's not for me. I ended up skipping across chapters struggling with the flow of the book.

[Erin Hunter]

Good story, terrible formatting!

I really like the storyline. The characters are so cute and I enjoyed the read. But the formatting - single lines - is terrible and the ending was kind of an abrupt bummer.

[Tammy Vermilye]

Great story

The story is great. The author needs to learn how to use quotation marks. She used them after each sentence instead of when the speaker changed. It made it difficult to determine who was talking.

[Lesley Bradley]

was okay

It was an okay story, but just felt too many characters had their say instead of saving it for this own book. The story lacked suspense and no real depth. Hopefully the rest of the series will improve.