Plodding. This is not a book one reads for fun. It’s not a page-turner. This is one you read for information, and for that it is excellent, well deserving its reputation. If you seek details on Gertrude Stein and her Charmed Circle, then you won’t be disappointed. The writing is direct & serviceable, but not vivid or engaging. The text could have benefitted from a tighter edit, especially the first half, and could have shaved off a hundred pages from the 477 that seems much longer – not that I’m adverse to lengthy reads, but it would seem less ponderous.
Otherwise, Charmed Circle: Gertrude Stein & Company suffers from a fault I’ve found common in other accounts of Stein, and this fault may lie with me: it never seems to come across to me why GS was so charismatic and popular. That is, what did her charmed circle find so attractive? She was pompous beyond comprehension, unbounded in appreciation of her own self-appraised genius. Although author James R. Mellow clearly communicates the nature of her personality, he fails to answer that question for me. Maybe there is no answer. Nevertheless, I persevere in this quest.
Charmed Circle would have been better as two volumes, and the text itself is divided into a Book One and Book Two. It’s in the latter half that Mellow hits his stride, perhaps because enough facts exist to make an interesting story. Overall, the circle reminds me of nothing so much as a high school literary magazine. As an Atlantic editor notes in a letter to GS rejecting one of her many submissions: “Here there is no group of literati or illuminati or cognoscenti or illustrissimi of any kind, who could agree upon interpretations of your poetry. More than this, you could not find a handful even of careful readers who would think that it was a serious effort.” (p. 347) Leo Stein, GS’s brother, summed up his impression thus: “Gertrude on the other hand hungers and thirsts for gloire…. This would not have been so bad if there had been any general recognition without; a prophet can support not being honored in his own country when other lands sufficiently acclaim him, but when the acclamation otherwhere is faint the absence of support at home is painful.” (p. 202) This is a reminder that it is easy to be creative & original, yet quite a different thing to be creative & original & good.
Ultimately, the most telling assessment of Stein’s work was offered by Gertrude Stein herself: “I sometime wonder how anybody can read my work when I look it over after a time. It seems quite meaningless to me at times. Of course, when I write it it seems luminous and fine and living….” (p. 290)