All telling, no showing
In a refreshing twist, the rating is NOT because of poor grammar, spelling, editing or typos. The actual writing structure was nice, I didn't have to all but arm wrestle my way through paragraphs like most indie (and even many traditional) published novels.
I gave 3 stars because characters are not developed, they're cardboard cutouts. There were some big ideas in the book, but they weren't fleshed out enough for my liking. The plot was a straight line. It didn't have hills or valleys, peaks and crescendos, no suspense. It was mainly a rote telling of an idea the author was trying to share, but didn't, quite.
I do want to give props to the author, because he's done way, way more than most people with an idea they'd to share, do. He put pen to paper (fingertips to keyboard), and WROTE.
Sadly characters are tragically stupid. One might say, terminally so. By 45% through the book, I had yet to run into one good decision, either survival or tactical. I would have settled for an accidentally reached good decision. Even rock, paper, scissors should have elicited at least one good outcome.
I don't think I've ever cheered when an opening "good guy, patriot" character has been killed due to his own tragic stupidity. But, if Steven lived beyond the opening chapters and was somehow a main character, this book would have been irredeemable. As it was, I was slightly hopeful that the story and characters would get better. They didn't.
The main problem was the zero thought shown to be put into ANY decisions. No logic, nothing, by anyone. The "patriots" are caricatures of non-thinking inaction, especially among the cowardice-laden higher governmental and military officer ranks, whose "fear" kept them silent and frozen, allowing tyranny such a choke hold. Because everyone knows tyranny is easier and less dangerous to root out the tighter and longer the hold it is allowed.
There was no survival based methodology by what passes as a prepping community, Southern Illinois Home Guard. I assume they basically had some meetings for a few years, agreed the country was hell and heading worse, and SOMEDAY, when worse inevitably were to arrive, they all wanted to do, well, something. Like, maybe make plans.
Until then, well, I'm not exactly sure what they did or planned or even discussed, because the author never deigns to show us.
That's the main theme, he tells us a recitation of the barest details of both plot and characters. He does it with refreshingly few actual writing/editing errors, compared to this genre as a whole. Or, I was too mad at terminally stupid decision making to note many errors. Regardless, telling and not showing is the main flaw of this novel.
One last note, whether it is real life America in 2020 or this author's vision of near to medium term America, the downfall of liberty is not strictly educational failure. It's laziness. It's excess that has led to laziness, which has led to turning a blind eye to the dumbing down of at least 3 generations. Each less literate in the things that really matter.
The author posits that taking cursive out of schools led to Americans in his novel not being able to read the Constitution, since it was written in cursive (and King's English, but let's forget that, for now).
The Constitution has been available in mass publication, printed form for an extremely long time. If the author had claimed a tyrannical government burned all books and only the original Constitution remained in hiding somewhere, he'd maybe have a case for why his version of America was the government's fault and not the people's. I doubt it, though.
In fact, in real life 2020's and this novel's Americas, the people ARE to blame. They got lazy and have willfully denied history and wish to blame anyone and anything else for why America needs to be either restored or reinvented, depending on the party.
This was always inevitable, because we, the people, allowed comfort to trounce liberty. Tyranny always follows, when citizens abdicate responsibility to government.