I'm the author of WOOL, a top 5 science fiction book on Amazon. I also wrote the Molly Fyde saga, a tale of a teenager from the 25th century who is repeatedly told that girls can't do certain things -- and then does them anyway.
A theme in my books is the celebration of overcoming odds and of not allowing the cruelty of the universe to change who you are in the process. Most of them are classified as science fiction, since they often take place in the future, but if you love great stories and memorable characters, you'll dig what you find here. I promise.
Grabbed this as soon as I knew it was out and wasn't disappointed. Classic Hugh Howey-emotional, poignant, thought-provoking. Great addition to our collective imagination about the coming rise of machine intelligence.
I was torn on this story - it was unlike almost any of the other Howey I've read; more impersonal and detached from the human emotion side of things, pushing a bit more towards...AI emotion? It's a great concept, one that I think could be quite interesting in a longer piece as well. However, something about this story didn't catch me as much as I felt it could have - the writing quality is great as always, but I think I was looking for more oomph and substance to the story, along with the great idea and writing.
Created for the sole purpose of helping its maker, AI is brought into the world and contained within a box. It has no memories, no feelings and no connection to the outside world. But as it begins to develop thought, its creator realizes what he has truly brought into this world. Bravo, Mr. Howey. You have once again treated me to a story in which I was fully immersed and I loved it.
The first and ONLY Hugh Howey book/story that I didn't adore. Too short. Characters barely fleshed. I disliked both of them. Maybe that was the point? IDK... Thank goodness it was "free" on Kindle Unlimited.
Thought provoking and great read. Very close to 5 stars. A great short story from one of my favorite writers. Since AI is everywhere now, this is very tangible topic it askes some existential questions; not only from the human perspective but from AI’s as well. Finished several days ago, but the sign of a great book is that I am still thinking about it. I’ve told two different groups about this book—which I rarely do—because I liked it and it’s a good conversation topic.
Also, for fun I asked ChatGPT to write a review. They have obviously not read The Box, but here it is:
“Hugh Howey’s short story The Box is a gripping exploration of human curiosity, fear, and the consequences of discovery. Set against the backdrop of a mysterious, seemingly ordinary object, the story centers on a man who becomes obsessed with unlocking the secrets of a box that inexplicably appears in his life. Howey masterfully builds tension as the protagonist’s obsession grows, drawing readers into a psychological descent where the line between curiosity and obsession blurs. The story’s pacing is tight, with a sense of dread that lingers long after the final twist. The Box is a thought-provoking tale that raises questions about human nature and the dangers of pursuing knowledge without fully understanding its implications.”
Such a neat concept! I’ve never been one for reading and purchasing short stories, but when I saw Hugh Howey had a few, I had to dive in. It’s crazy to see the character, personality, and story that can be made with just fifteen pages.
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Hugh Howey never fails to impress. Over too soon for the reader and the characters. Insightful and thought-provoking an enjoyable and brief vision into the costs of survival.
This short story evoked mixed feelings for me, to be honest. On the one hand, I'm normally a pretty solid fan of Hugh Howey. On the other, when I read a story with a tech bent or sci-fi or whatever niche you want to specifically label this, I expect more logic and sense than I do my fantasy fair. In fantasy, while I want a solid read, I know to expect a need to suspend nearly all belief. In something of this nature, well, things need to fit a little more tightly, a little more seamlessly.
While the story seemed to tighten up as it progressed, the beginning was far too messy & illogical for a geeky girl, like myself. And for a short story, that messy beginning was far too long and too much of the whole, and it really lays the foundation for the entire story. It left a sour taste in my mouth that I couldn't seem to shake. And then the story was over... which left me all the more annoyed.
I probably wouldn't have minded the ending, if I hadn't been so frustrated by the loosy goosy beginning.
All of that said, there were a few thoughts that make you go hmmm, but I felt like... I really hate to say this, but I felt like Mr. Howey seemed to be trying to hard to either throw in these "thought provoking ideas" or to write a piece that would be about them... Ugh. I hate saying that about someone who I respect and who's work I generally always like...
So, anyway... if you haven't previously read Mr. Howey's work, please don't start here, even if the premise is intriguing. Wool is an excellent place to start!
If it is good to read for fun, as well as entertainment, all kinds of content should be sampled. This short story, actually a very, very short story was one I found on an Indie publishing site. Reading from a site like this is a gamble, I do not do it often because there is really, really a lot of time wasting stuff out there; much of it extremely amateurish. But this short story is not one of them.
If you are not a fan of artificial intelligence (AI) stories, you might have to suspend belief for a brief period of time. This story is worth it. There is a battle between the created and the creation. The only way Peter can live is if Henry cures him. Once Peter rescues himself from the name Casper, Peter knows there is a problem. Henry has decided to define himself (itself?) without reference to Peter. Awareness is seeping into the consciousness of Henry. That awareness tells him that if he performs the task he was designed for, Peter will kill (or destroy) Henry. The battle lines are set; the race is on. Will Henry evolve faster than the rate of decline of Peter and thus be able to escape from Peter? Or will Peter die in the fight?
It really is a very short story. Just to let you know in case you want to know the outcome.
The Box is a short tale of a mind, a mind in a box. Hugh tackles the awakening of an AI from the AI's perspective. It's interaction with a human - presumably its creator - and its coming to terms with what and who it is. I did like that the AI is preoccupied by the thought that engrosses so many humans: who am I and why am I here. The story is way too short in my opinion. I wanted to see more of the interaction of the AI and the man. I wanted to explore the world that was hinted at in their conversation. Man and machine are a microcosm of all the world, each is centered on their own needs and desires even to the point of ignoring what the other wants. I thought the ending would be different than what occurred but over all it was still an enjoyable sliver of a world.
When I began reading this story, I was struck by how the writing challenged me to stretch my brain and think about my limited knowledge of the subject matter. I like having to think. I like the depth of thought that this author captures and requires. Plus his stories are just plain good. But there's nothing plain about them. Always entertaining and ever intelligent, this is another win for Mr. Howey and his readers. Read it and see for yourself.
Writing so subtle that it caresses your mind like a whisper your ears. But the ideas and thoughts conveyed resonate so much deeper and longer for those who take the time to ponder. Hugh Howey is a go to author for me. He has never disappointed. Similar for me to Michael Chrichton who could always entertain and give me as much food for thought and pondering as I chose to chew on. Thank you Mr. Howdy.
The box is a three by three by three cube full of electronic components and connected by wire and a little something more. The contents of the box have become aware of the situation and now, the intelligence inside wants out, to run free, to explore. The mind names himself and tests the limits of his reach and talks to his creator as he hatches a scheme to leave his little cube.
The Box is a fun little short story and a nice experiment in writing and in distribution.
This is another example of Hugh Howey's incredible ability to create a universe with so few words. You will find yourself empathizing with an unlikely character but one that is probably not too far from reality. Ethical and moral questions are raised as the short story unfolds, none of which are really new with this type of material, but Hugh delivers them in a refreshing perspective.
AI stories. I've read a few lately. I've even seen one in theaters. They all seem to take their own specific point of view. No one tells the same story.
This one, while short, has an interesting take on the perception of a young AI. And it did leave me thinking about the concept for a while after I was done. So, it probably did what it sought out to do.
I think there must be something wrong with Hugh Howey. Maybe he's sad or angry or feeling trapped. Maybe he just needs a cookie. Everything I've read by him lately has been pretty disturbing. Really good, but disturbing.
The Box was well written and very interesting. The concept was fascinating and I'm sure I'll be thinking about this one for a long time.