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July 28, 2026
Needs an editor
The story line and the characters are good. It's unfortunate it has so many editorial mistakes. There are words and paragraphs that are left unfinished. There were weird paragraph breaks where they didn't belong. The author lost track of who was speaking when there was dialog. Occasionally, the names of the main characters changed (maybe a hold-over from a previous draft?). Rykers eyes were green in human form, red in wolf form, then out of nowhere, all of a sudden for one chapter, he had soulful brown eyes.
Again, the storyline and characters are good, but I truly wish I could have read this through my Kindle Unlimited subscription instead of spending money to actually purchase the book.
The story line and the characters are good. It's unfortunate it has so many editorial mistakes. There are words and paragraphs that are left unfinished. There were weird paragraph breaks where they didn't belong. The author lost track of who was speaking when there was dialog. Occasionally, the names of the main characters changed (maybe a hold-over from a previous draft?). Rykers eyes were green in human form, red in wolf form, then out of nowhere, all of a sudden for one chapter, he had soulful brown eyes.
Again, the storyline and characters are good, but I truly wish I could have read this through my Kindle Unlimited subscription instead of spending money to actually purchase the book.
July 29, 2026
I have issues with editing. Spelling, formatting and POV's are wonky. You're supposed to be in one person's POV, but it is clearly a different character entirely. Also, how did daddy Ryker's eyes go from emerald green, to chocolate brown and back to emerald green again? How did Kennedy become Hazel for a few paragraphs? How did Todd become Tyler? There are also some bits where sentences aren't completed and the dialog just jumps to a different subject than what is being described, so it's a bit confusing. Agghhhh. Anyway. Those annoying things aside, I still very much enjoyed the story. I laughed, I cried, I had a good time.
August 12, 2026
GREAT story, horrible editing
Loved the story of Ryker and Kennedy, and can’t wait for Finn and Greta. It was a little slow, but the descriptiveness was worth it. I wish there was more history on Kennedy’s parents and her life before she was living with Jeremiah’s family, and when she was getting acclimated to that new life. (That could be a short story). The build up for them was a little frustrating because they were just not getting on the same page. It took too much for him to “see” her for who she is, and not what he assumed. Their love story could have played better in the beginning, both once they found each other, it was GREAT!!! NOW, this editing is horrible. There are copyright lines in the middle of the page, there are missing sentences, whole sections missing, misspelled words, and then the ending. So editors, or even writers for that matter, not proofreading? Is that not a thing? This made the story frustrating, because you’re trying to fill in the blanks like you’re a contestant on Wheel of Fortune. It was rather annoying, and disappointing. I read the whole story, but this diminished the overall experience.
Loved the story of Ryker and Kennedy, and can’t wait for Finn and Greta. It was a little slow, but the descriptiveness was worth it. I wish there was more history on Kennedy’s parents and her life before she was living with Jeremiah’s family, and when she was getting acclimated to that new life. (That could be a short story). The build up for them was a little frustrating because they were just not getting on the same page. It took too much for him to “see” her for who she is, and not what he assumed. Their love story could have played better in the beginning, both once they found each other, it was GREAT!!! NOW, this editing is horrible. There are copyright lines in the middle of the page, there are missing sentences, whole sections missing, misspelled words, and then the ending. So editors, or even writers for that matter, not proofreading? Is that not a thing? This made the story frustrating, because you’re trying to fill in the blanks like you’re a contestant on Wheel of Fortune. It was rather annoying, and disappointing. I read the whole story, but this diminished the overall experience.
August 1, 2026
This is yet another shifter romantasy with the plot based on an alpha who discovers his mate is human. It has many of the same rinse and repeat themes you would expect to see with this plot line. There are a ton of grammatical errors and I’m not talking about a few missed commas or a misspelling here or there. There were many incomplete sentences and even quotes that began from one character’s perspective yet were end quoted with a completely different characters name. This could be a decent book if someone did some true editing.
August 10, 2026
Story line was really good and I really enjoyed the book. And am looking forward to reading book 2. The reason it was given 4 stars and not 5 is because of all the grammar/spelling errors. And at the beginning of the book the characters were described to look differently and then changed a few chapters later when she described them again. So besides those couple issues, which if she had an editor and publisher, would have been caught and corrected, it’s still a solid read. This was my first book with werewolves, and now I’m totally digging this genre.
August 13, 2026
editing
Great story. Heaps of factors up and down to make it worth the read. BUT
The edit of this book is appalling. Especially when it’s being paid for. It jumped characters without acknowledgment so confused some storyline’s.
The stories towards the end seemed rushed. Conclusions quickly added. As if word count is a factor.
The author needed someone to help finalise the book and be trustworthy.
Disappointed. I’m not sure if I’ll read second if it’s going to be a puzzle book of writing
Great story. Heaps of factors up and down to make it worth the read. BUT
The edit of this book is appalling. Especially when it’s being paid for. It jumped characters without acknowledgment so confused some storyline’s.
The stories towards the end seemed rushed. Conclusions quickly added. As if word count is a factor.
The author needed someone to help finalise the book and be trustworthy.
Disappointed. I’m not sure if I’ll read second if it’s going to be a puzzle book of writing
July 30, 2026
Terribly written with many mistakes. Sentences unfinished or weird paragraph shifts, names of main characters randomly changed or swapped and inconsistencies.The dialog was immature. The idea and story line were good but it desperately needs an editor. At times it felt like AI was involved in the writing, but after reflecting maybe AI would help the editing. It’s only getting 2 stars because the idea kept me reading.
August 2, 2026
so many typos, errors and missing text. VERY ANNOYING!
The storyline is great and keeps your attention, but there are so many typos, errors and missing text. Calling someone a she when it’s referring to a male character, at one point the main character was called Hazel when he name is Kennedy, and several sentences are only half there so you don’t know what was actually said. I’ve never read a book with so many errors. Very annoying!
The storyline is great and keeps your attention, but there are so many typos, errors and missing text. Calling someone a she when it’s referring to a male character, at one point the main character was called Hazel when he name is Kennedy, and several sentences are only half there so you don’t know what was actually said. I’ve never read a book with so many errors. Very annoying!
July 31, 2026
Needs editing, but overall good story
Cute story with decent character development, but it needs an editor. The kindle version has so many typos, paragraph skips, missing ends of sentences it was hard at times piecing things together. But at the core is a good story that like I said, just needs good editing.
Cute story with decent character development, but it needs an editor. The kindle version has so many typos, paragraph skips, missing ends of sentences it was hard at times piecing things together. But at the core is a good story that like I said, just needs good editing.
August 12, 2026
ugh this book needs an editor and formatting.
Story is great, but wading through the formatting errors, sentences that are cut off in the middle of a word and never continue, misspellings and missing punctuation…I kept reading because the story hooked me. I can’t believe I paid for something this poorly constructed though.
Story is great, but wading through the formatting errors, sentences that are cut off in the middle of a word and never continue, misspellings and missing punctuation…I kept reading because the story hooked me. I can’t believe I paid for something this poorly constructed though.
July 26, 2026
Good Read
Really good story, quite a few parts where characters names/sexes switched but easy to figure out who was who. Would be rated a 4-star, but the story line was too good not to give it a 5
Really good story, quite a few parts where characters names/sexes switched but easy to figure out who was who. Would be rated a 4-star, but the story line was too good not to give it a 5
July 27, 2026
Needs editing
The story line is great, however the book is destroyed by the extremely bad/lack of editing. Incomplete sentences, incorrect use of who is speaking and getting names wrong from the previous parts of the story.
Very disappointing
The story line is great, however the book is destroyed by the extremely bad/lack of editing. Incomplete sentences, incorrect use of who is speaking and getting names wrong from the previous parts of the story.
Very disappointing
August 9, 2026
Great reading!
Really enjoyed this book , one of the best , it proved that the Moon Goddess was a game changer. The Alpha’s Unwanted Luna shows how 2 different life’s journey became so special. The love story of this book you need to read , author of this book well written. 💕
Really enjoyed this book , one of the best , it proved that the Moon Goddess was a game changer. The Alpha’s Unwanted Luna shows how 2 different life’s journey became so special. The love story of this book you need to read , author of this book well written. 💕
July 29, 2026
Good Read
It's not drawn out. The storyline flows smoothly. I loved the humor thrown in throughout the story. Defining a good read for those who love werewolf romance!
It's not drawn out. The storyline flows smoothly. I loved the humor thrown in throughout the story. Defining a good read for those who love werewolf romance!
August 6, 2026
So many typos, character name changes mid book, and parts where I really had no idea who was talking for a while. But overall I liked the character development and it kept me interested.
August 12, 2026
The editing on this book is awful. Chunks missing - unfinished sentence…
Really poor
Really poor
August 14, 2026
Edits
This book is good but it needs editing badly. I paid for this book which made it more disappointing. I started it on a free app.
This book is good but it needs editing badly. I paid for this book which made it more disappointing. I started it on a free app.
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