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Second Lieutenant Bonita Knox loves surprises but she is not prepared for this
The Federal Galaxy's space warship is captured and now she is in the hands of Zaak V’Sevolid, the ruthless conqueror of ALL the universes.
His body is monstrous but too scorching hot to resist.
She falls in love with him but says "no" when he asks her to be his woman.
Why? And what's going to happen next?
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This is a stand-alone, Happily Ever After story, NOT a cliffhanger.
It's the first story of The Alien Tyrant's Prey series.
The second story is The Frozen Planet - another stand-alone sci-fi romance adventure of Bonita and Zaak on an icy planet full of intelligent but vicious dinosaurs.
Third person but mixes present and past tense. Title is overkill.
"Her slow chill ran down her spine." "After twelve hours on duty, Bonita decides that she needs to leave the bridge for a break."
These are samples of the kind of writing in this story. I struggled through it so I could leave a full review.
The heroine goes back and forth from yelling adult profanity to middle school taunts(cheater!). It's like a teenager pretending to be mature. She is supposed to be a competent member of the bridge but does a lot of screaming and running around hoping to find what she needs. This chic is stupid. And continues to be.
I had to take a break.
Oh no! Now this story is crass as well as silly. This reads like bad erotica, not a romance.