Storyline: 2/5
Characters: 4/5
Writing Style: 4/5
World: 5/5
Ian McDonald continues to excel with so many of the components of a good story. He makes it interesting: Every McDonald book I have read has been situated in an exotic location which he calls forth vividly with an indisputable eye for detail, backed by thorough research. He makes it meaningful: Each of the near-future, cyperbunk books he has published between 2004 and 2010 offers a layered look at society. Every location is a site of contested culture - a hegemonic one overlaying an older, traditional one. In every instance the alien is strangling - though, importantly, not suffocating - the indigenous, and the contest is reshaping both. The author adds to this a layer of foretelling; he conjectures what that world with its mix of cultures will look like in the rapid, technology-advancing future. The results are definitely something that stimulate. McDonald also makes it believable: He gives himself a more difficult task than simply making the technology conceivable; McDonald delves into myths, rumors, and conspiracies and brings them to the realm of the real. He takes that which might otherwise be dismissed, forgotten, or relegated and shoves it to the forefront of his developing world, technological drama.
Despite the admiration I had for McDonald, this is the first book of his I enjoyed. River of Gods, Cyberabad Days, and Brasyl all shared those many strengths listed above, but they were also unapproachable. Each location was too bizarre, the cultures were too detailed, the technological future too distant. The large casts of characters added to the tumult and then there was his insistence on writing it in cyberpunk jargon. The Dervish House permitted me, for the first time, to deeply breathe in a McDonald story and experience it in full redolence. The series vision, I think, is a big reason for that. In interviews the author has referred to this as his "New World Order" series, though nothing in the books themselves identify them as part of a serial. There are no overlapping characters or events. The worlds, however, are consistent and McDonald has been moving backward from India in 2047 to nearer and nearer our present time. As he progresses backward, the technology is less advanced, the future more comprehensible. It might also have something to do with Istanbul and its being a mix of the European and the Asian, thereby halving the exoticism. The experience was better, too, because though technically a cyber (future built on the premise of the internet and its increasing integration into daily life) punk (society that has internalized and normalized delinquency - drugs, crime, etc) novel, this is not the writing style of a cyber punk artist. No more sentence fragments, street jargon, arrogance, and abruptness in word and tone. This was written by a poet. Written by someone infatuated by Istanbul and wanting to declare his love to the world. This was a story where every word had been weighed, every contrast and juxtaposition considered. This was a McDonald story in which to revel.
Though I found it a vast improvement over his other, then-recent books, not every sentence or development was perfected. McDonald continues with the wide cast of characters, and it doesn't appear to be a narrative choice that I appreciate. It kills momentum. With six main characters whom mostly lack clearly overlapping narratives, you get the storyline piecemeal. And it comes so slowly. Everytime I started to get interested and involved in a perspective, it would then shift to another's seemingly unrelated one. My enthusiasm and anticipation would have to start over anew. That was tiring. Also, even though the writing and content was beautiful, the density still made it difficult to absorb very much at one sitting. A chapter at a time was definitely pushing my limits; read much more than that at once, and I found I wasn't enjoying myself anymore. There were also a couple of character plot climaxes that came off as a little too hokey, too convenient or casual. These were unworthy of all the care and preparation that had come before, and they stood out starkly because the rest had been so precisely measured. Finally, there were a couple of "winners" among the character cast whom I had long since ceased cheering for. Not every scoundrel has to get his or her just desserts, but when they don't you hope there is some point or reason. McDonald seems like an author with points and reasons, but some of the resolutions were unsatisfactorily surprising for me. These were all minor nuisances though when considered against the bulwark solidly supporting The Dervish House.
I'm pleased to report, in the end, that not only was this one an accomplishment, it was a treat.