*includes slight spoilers*
Yeah. Okay. So I won this book aaagggeeesss ago(?) through a Goodreads giveaway, picked it up, read the first chapter…and put it back down. I've only just wiped the dust off and am now trying to read it again.
At least I'm not the only person who thought there was something completely wrong with this book.
And I haven't even finished it.
As a 15yr old avid reader I may enjoy this more than others but let's see if I can hold my tongue at the awkwardness of Kyia and Neleik for any longer.
So why didn't I like this book? Well, let me say this in three words. And in BOLD.
I.WANT.DESCRIPTION.
Based on other reviews I've read, I'm not gonna be too repetitive but seriously…where on earth is the description!?!?!?
Does Neleik even have emotions? Is he human? Is he just some monotone alien without a heart? Please! Explain!!!
The cliché-ness didn't bother me too much. I could handle that. But the character development *facepalm* was…can I even say this nicely…? Weak. VERY WEAK. The boys didn't seem scared, nervous, sad or anxious over anything. And everything happened soooooooooo fast! One chapter Skye would be kidnapped. The next they were halfway on their journey to Sularm. You could easily stretch that out into at least two chapters with some decent-sounding 'unawkward' speech. I'm not even going to mention the awkwardness of Kyia's entrance into the story. Ugh.
Not just the description bothered me -- but even how the sentences were phrased. Some words just didn't need to be there. And whenever the sentence structure was great, it would be describing unimportant things that weren't essential.
Even the speech was so dull that I had to read over and over to understand what they had said.
Time for some pros? Yeah, I may have a few.
I may be 15yrs old but I have the brain of a 30yr old and I can say that this book is definitely for the 10-12 age group. Thinking that way also helps me cope (funnily enough :P) with the descriptive issues. But hey! It definitely does have some great aspects of adventure and I'm already starting to enjoy this book more as I read it. Hopefully it'll just keep improving from there.