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Love Me Harder #3
Sergey
On the world Sergey came from everything happened in birth order, as the second born he had been skipped and there would be no mate for him.
Lorali use to believed in sunshine and roses until her world came crashing down. With nothing left to do she enlisted, she might as well be all she could be. Then one day the military let her down also. Now she was damaged goods destined to live a long and lonely life.
What happens when the forgotten one meets a woman damaged physically and mentally? They will either heal each other or be killed.
This book contains adult content it is not recommended for readers under the age of 18.
Lorali use to believed in sunshine and roses until her world came crashing down. With nothing left to do she enlisted, she might as well be all she could be. Then one day the military let her down also. Now she was damaged goods destined to live a long and lonely life.
What happens when the forgotten one meets a woman damaged physically and mentally? They will either heal each other or be killed.
This book contains adult content it is not recommended for readers under the age of 18.
227 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 25, 2015
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August 15, 2015
Get an editor
I actually like this series. The premise is interesting, the storyline is decent, but there needs to be better character development and less grammatical errors. It's so frustrating to read a book and get into the story, only to run across a grammatical error a middle school child would make (I.e. there/their mistakes and an overuse of contractions that are inappropriate. Not every "I have" needs to be changed to "I've", it gets awkward). It destroys the flow of the story and makes the reader lose respect for the author. As I said, I like the concept, I just feel that the work should be edited or proofread by someone who received at least a "c" in English composition. I feel as though this author may not have.
I actually like this series. The premise is interesting, the storyline is decent, but there needs to be better character development and less grammatical errors. It's so frustrating to read a book and get into the story, only to run across a grammatical error a middle school child would make (I.e. there/their mistakes and an overuse of contractions that are inappropriate. Not every "I have" needs to be changed to "I've", it gets awkward). It destroys the flow of the story and makes the reader lose respect for the author. As I said, I like the concept, I just feel that the work should be edited or proofread by someone who received at least a "c" in English composition. I feel as though this author may not have.
June 5, 2015
I like the characters in this one more than the others. The heroine has more backstory than the hero--he was very one-dimensional.
Sadly, the only part that made sense was the mating/sex. The conflict was confusing and unbelievable. It was like we need a bad guy so plop here we go! There is a lot left unexplained.
Then it ends with approval beyond the grave. I hate that and it seemed out of place except to add warm fuzzies.
Sadly, the only part that made sense was the mating/sex. The conflict was confusing and unbelievable. It was like we need a bad guy so plop here we go! There is a lot left unexplained.
Then it ends with approval beyond the grave. I hate that and it seemed out of place except to add warm fuzzies.
November 19, 2017
Sergey
Yeah another created finds a worthy mate. In each book the mates become more interesting. Lorali is in the army when she meets Sergey. She knows about the created and wants to help Sergey rescue some kidnapped children. The action was very intense in this book and the romance is amazing.
Yeah another created finds a worthy mate. In each book the mates become more interesting. Lorali is in the army when she meets Sergey. She knows about the created and wants to help Sergey rescue some kidnapped children. The action was very intense in this book and the romance is amazing.
March 8, 2017
I absolutely loved this and and the previous two books in the series. This author knows what to do to make you feel apart of the story. A big thumbs up. If you like aliens then this is definitely for you.
December 24, 2017
Sergey and Lorali are wonderful together, I absolutely loved this book. Be sure to read the first two books in the series to follow along with everything that's happening. The bad guy is still on the loose, and the family of The Created continues to grow.
There are still some editing issues, that need to be fixed, but the overarching story is fabulous. I'm moving on to the next book by Serena Simpson.
There are still some editing issues, that need to be fixed, but the overarching story is fabulous. I'm moving on to the next book by Serena Simpson.
February 4, 2020
Great read. Love the brothers.
April 16, 2016
This may be my favorite of this series so far. Sergey and Lorali's story is beautiful. She has had a pretty crappy life dealt to her but instead of whining she makes herself carry on and has found something good in almost every part of her story. The night she meets Sergey she is trying to save the lives of young kids who have been abducted in a human trafficking ring.
She and Sergey both immediately are drawn to one another and she sees who he is from the beginning. What they do is go save the children anyway. What she doesn't realize is that he has made her able to feel things again, literally, after being numb for several years. She had been unlucky enough to have been used as an experiment for a weapon to exterminate the Created. When she was there though the ones with her gave her a shot and when she came out she could no longer feel things because her nerve endings were dead. That is how she knows what he is.
What she doesn't know is that she is his mate. Over the next month of first, finding out that once he has left to go back home she can no longer feel, she then helps find the kids good foster homes, and is finally taking him up on a job that he has offered her. Or at least she is standing outside, on the corner of the street across from the building trying to decide whether this was a mistake.
She finally decides to go check it out. She quickly learns that it wasn't a mistake and he did mean it when he said she would have a job waiting for her in a month. She also finds out that if she wants them, she has a new family. The question now is, does she want to be part of this family?
It takes a lot for me to give a 5 star rating in for a book. I don't give out 5 unless it is close to perfection for me. Does that mean I won't? No, I hold back because of lulls, too many errors, things of that nature. What gets me about this series is you know what the purpose is but how the author will take you there is to be determined. So far, I am really impressed with the change from one book to the next and each individual story, while even having components of the others in them, remain different. Each time they are getting closer to finding the ones who hunt them but the journey of the couple is different. It's on to Nicolas.
This book was provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.
She and Sergey both immediately are drawn to one another and she sees who he is from the beginning. What they do is go save the children anyway. What she doesn't realize is that he has made her able to feel things again, literally, after being numb for several years. She had been unlucky enough to have been used as an experiment for a weapon to exterminate the Created. When she was there though the ones with her gave her a shot and when she came out she could no longer feel things because her nerve endings were dead. That is how she knows what he is.
What she doesn't know is that she is his mate. Over the next month of first, finding out that once he has left to go back home she can no longer feel, she then helps find the kids good foster homes, and is finally taking him up on a job that he has offered her. Or at least she is standing outside, on the corner of the street across from the building trying to decide whether this was a mistake.
She finally decides to go check it out. She quickly learns that it wasn't a mistake and he did mean it when he said she would have a job waiting for her in a month. She also finds out that if she wants them, she has a new family. The question now is, does she want to be part of this family?
It takes a lot for me to give a 5 star rating in for a book. I don't give out 5 unless it is close to perfection for me. Does that mean I won't? No, I hold back because of lulls, too many errors, things of that nature. What gets me about this series is you know what the purpose is but how the author will take you there is to be determined. So far, I am really impressed with the change from one book to the next and each individual story, while even having components of the others in them, remain different. Each time they are getting closer to finding the ones who hunt them but the journey of the couple is different. It's on to Nicolas.
This book was provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.
November 9, 2015
Absolutely freaking Amazing
This was one of the best series I have read in a while!! Sexy, hot, totally make your panties wet, aliens, who are on earth and looking for love with their only true mates. Then throw in a twisted bad guy who could be human....or not, hmmmm the adventure and suspense, action and adventure, along with all the smoking hot love scenes.... let's just say I was instantly hooked and had to keep reading from the first page of book one, and Ill be buying every SINGLE book by this author as long as they are all this amazingly great!! Totally worth your time and money to add to your library. I will read over, and over, and over, and over, and over... lol!! :)
This was one of the best series I have read in a while!! Sexy, hot, totally make your panties wet, aliens, who are on earth and looking for love with their only true mates. Then throw in a twisted bad guy who could be human....or not, hmmmm the adventure and suspense, action and adventure, along with all the smoking hot love scenes.... let's just say I was instantly hooked and had to keep reading from the first page of book one, and Ill be buying every SINGLE book by this author as long as they are all this amazingly great!! Totally worth your time and money to add to your library. I will read over, and over, and over, and over, and over... lol!! :)
August 7, 2016
Sergey the quiet one
So far, I have read each one of the series and not been disappointed. The storyline integrates characters from the other stories, giving you a context to understand the characters in this story. Sergey comes from a planet where birth order plays a major role in their lives. When his younger brother finds his mate before he does, Sergey fears that there may never be someone for him. But life throws him a curve ball when he meets his mate in unusual circumstances. And so the adventures begin.
This is a standalone series,so when you read one,you get the ending as well a good story with ties to the other books. So, try it and then, go get the series.
So far, I have read each one of the series and not been disappointed. The storyline integrates characters from the other stories, giving you a context to understand the characters in this story. Sergey comes from a planet where birth order plays a major role in their lives. When his younger brother finds his mate before he does, Sergey fears that there may never be someone for him. But life throws him a curve ball when he meets his mate in unusual circumstances. And so the adventures begin.
This is a standalone series,so when you read one,you get the ending as well a good story with ties to the other books. So, try it and then, go get the series.
January 17, 2016
In my opinion not as good as the first two. (Aran and Niko). This story lacked the element of surprise from the heroine of the story as the first two. As a reader I like to visualize the reaction of the when she finds the man that she is interested in is not what he seems. In Sergey there was no surprise.
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June 10, 2015book 3 of this series. like the characters. dialogue a bit stiff. should have included more of the general's psychological problems. obsession and murder never mix well
July 17, 2015
Intriguing book
I am reading this out of order but enjoyed it. Now I need to go back and read the first two! Looking forward to the next one also!
I am reading this out of order but enjoyed it. Now I need to go back and read the first two! Looking forward to the next one also!
August 4, 2015
Love these brothers and the mates they are finding. Glad the General wont be a problem any more though, and REALLY waiting to see the enemy Created being sorted too.
September 13, 2015
Wow
Loved this book very much, I recommend to all adults to read, love the series hope there are many more
Loved this book very much, I recommend to all adults to read, love the series hope there are many more
June 4, 2015
Loved it just as much as the first two!
February 5, 2016
loved the concept of these fellows and all their power. Ultimate super beings.
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