Rejections from agents and editors? Middling reviews on your work?
Maybe it's pacing, plot, narrative . . . what if it's what your characters say?.Outstanding dialogue is often the difference between a good book and a great book. How does yours stack up?No B.S. -- your dialogue has to rock to get attention from agents, editors, and readers.I'm an award-winning novelist and Bram Stoker Award finalist with nine novels published with imprints of Penguin Random House, Abrams, and Simon & Schuster, plus more than twenty years of experience as an actor, director, and artistic director. I'll guide you through everything you need to improve your writing, make your dialogue shine, and get your book noticed and talked about by readers, agents, and editors alike!Learn how to start with a great plot and conflict to form the foundation of awesome dialogueDiscover actors’ techniques to give your characters strength and purposeImprove on setting scenes and building relationships between charactersand more!Elevate your storytelling with a roadmap to creating dialogue that's vivid, authentic, and unforgettable. Your characters will resonate with readers and leave a lasting impact! What people are saying about Tom Leveen’s dialogue, voice, and Party“I must say that I’m absolutely in awe of Leveen’s ability to build such distinct and totally believable voice for eleven characters [protagonists] in one novel.”~ fortheloveofya.comZero“Well written, with a distinct and fantastically done voice, Zero is an unflinching must read.” ~ agoodaddiction.blogspot.com“[H]is voice is fresh and strong and consistent.” ~ scratchingcat.wordpress.com“Part of what makes the book, and the voice, believable is Leveen’s ability to channel a teenage girl and make her real. It’s all there—the insecurity, the bravado, the conflicting feelings about sex, the sense that your whole life is in front of you, which is both exhilarating and paralyzing.” ~ The Phoenix New Timesmanicpixiedreamgirl“[I]t’s the relationships between the novel’s teenage characters that are the real standouts. Tyler’s crass banter with his buddies, his snarky but supportive relationship with his sister, and his botched dealings with both Becky and Sydney are entirely realistic.” ~ Publisher’s Weekly“Tom Leveen has a unique voice and writes interesting male characters, so I was intrigued to check out his latest book manicpixiedreamgirl. Leveen’s characters are usually creative types and not the typical leading men you see in YA. . . . I thought the male voice in manicpixiedreamgirl was very strong and unique.” ~ thereadingdate.comRandom“Author Tom Leveen presents a powerful story with a plot so real, readers will be gripped from the very first page.” ~ readingjunky.blogspot.comSick“[Leveen] really nails the ‘guy’ dialogue as well—it is gross, colorful, and at times, downright funny.
Tom Leveen is the author of nine novels originally with imprints of Random House, Simon & Schuster, Abrams, and more. He has written with Todd McFarlane on SPAWN, the comic book series, and fiction for the TTRPG BattleTech for Topps, Inc.
Recently an early literacy specialist with Phoenix Public Library, Tom has twelve years of previous library work experience. He also has 22 years of theatre experience as an actor and director, and has been the Artistic Director for two different award-winning theatre companies.
Tom wrote his first story in second grade and has been writing and telling stories ever since. His first horror novel, SICK, won the Westchester Fiction Award and the Grand Canyon Reader Award. His novel ZERO was a Best Book of 2013 (American Library Association/Young Adult Library Services Association).
A frequent guest speaker and teacher, Tom has taught, paneled, and/or keynoted for SCBWI, RWA, Desert Nights Rising Stars, Phoenix ComiCon, AzLA, NCTE, TEDx, People of Color Network, Western New Mexico University, Arizona State University, Arizona Reading Association, Kennesaw State University, multiple schools and conferences throughout Germany, AETA, the Los Angeles Teen Book Fest, and many others.
In addition, apropos of absolutely nothing, Tom:
Finished a marathon (in six and half hours) and a triathalon sprint in 2 hours, earned a blue belt in Tae Kwon Do, co-hosted a public access comedy show, directed 30 plays and acted in 30 more, ran a theatre company out of his backyard, met almost all of his literary heroes except for Stephen King, played in a punk band live in front of actual people (once), prefers the Hero System but nevertheless runs a warlock minotaur and storm cleric elf when time permits, trained at the Utah Shakespeare Festival Actor Training program for five sessions, was Best Masque & Gavel Member in high school, lettered in Speech, has a rock in one finger from a pretty bad bail on his (now stolen) Tony Hawk, was the safari train driver for the Phoenix Zoo for a short time, worked in the stock room for Forever 21 for an even shorter time, completed a Spartan Sprint with three friends, and spent twenty years earning his Bachelor of Science degree. He is currently in an MFA program at a major international university.
Leveen shared some great tips to remember when writing dialogue. He kept it fun, light, and easily digestible. I liked his breakdown of movies in the back, allowing readers to see his tips played out on the screen.
🖍️ This was a good refresher for me, and I need to remember that “conflict is at the heart of every plot.” True, even in real life. Reading this fast-paced book was worth my time.
I simply cannot recommend this book enough for anybody looking to sharpen their writing skills. I will go back and use this as a guide time and again. Suitable for any skill level. Thank you, Tom!
Enjoyable and informative read with helpful suggestions for figuring out personality/dialogue for different characters in different situations. Neat perspective with the theater background.
I always pick these books up at my friend's place to see if there's anything new to learn. I was pleasantly surprised!
This has clear examples and covers character goals and conflict and why these things matter or how they interact. I got much more than I had expected. It has interesting and practical advice.