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The Villain
A fall and crash
A violent journey through the doorways of time
A villain or hero in the making
Rosemary Mayfield teeters on the brink of ruin. With the murder of her parents she is left the sole guardian of her younger brother and sister. Once a wealthy socialite in New York City, she now finds herself stranded in the untamed wilderness of the American West. When a wounded man comes crashing through her roof, as rough as the savage land, it is against her better judgment to bring him into her home and her heart. But she soon discovers he holds a secret that shatters everything, and she must make a choice, unaware that often destiny hinges on a single moment.
Fresh from an unsavory past and a violent fall, Nicolas Ekkridon awakens to find himself cared for by three orphans ignorant of the role he played in their parents’ untimely death. They accept and embrace him, and a lifetime of hardened barriers begin to crumble. On the precipice between good and evil, only Rosemary and her spirited defiance stands between him and villainy. But time and space are against them. As its weaving tentacles envelop them in an indifferent grasp, they are swept into a shattering series of circumstances that threaten the very makeup of their lives. But when time can be bent, nothing is written in stone.
A violent journey through the doorways of time
A villain or hero in the making
Rosemary Mayfield teeters on the brink of ruin. With the murder of her parents she is left the sole guardian of her younger brother and sister. Once a wealthy socialite in New York City, she now finds herself stranded in the untamed wilderness of the American West. When a wounded man comes crashing through her roof, as rough as the savage land, it is against her better judgment to bring him into her home and her heart. But she soon discovers he holds a secret that shatters everything, and she must make a choice, unaware that often destiny hinges on a single moment.
Fresh from an unsavory past and a violent fall, Nicolas Ekkridon awakens to find himself cared for by three orphans ignorant of the role he played in their parents’ untimely death. They accept and embrace him, and a lifetime of hardened barriers begin to crumble. On the precipice between good and evil, only Rosemary and her spirited defiance stands between him and villainy. But time and space are against them. As its weaving tentacles envelop them in an indifferent grasp, they are swept into a shattering series of circumstances that threaten the very makeup of their lives. But when time can be bent, nothing is written in stone.
260 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 18, 2015
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May Nicole Abbey
7 books39 followersShawnette Delano and Caroline Gregory are the sister writing team under the pseudonym May Nicole Abbey. Their mutual love of romance and make-believe helped ease the troubles of childhood and cemented their relationship in adulthood. Together, they aim for thoughtful and wholesome exploration of human nature, adventurous intrigue, and happy endings in their romantic time-travel stories. Shawnette lives in Dallas with her husband and four children, and Caroline lives in Oklahoma City with her husband and four boys.
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June 17, 2015
The Villain, by May Nicole Abbey, is the fourth novel in The Fall series and takes place during a time, in American history, of westward expansion. A time when the majority of the states east of the Mississippi had become "modern" and "civilized" and there were some, who dreamed of seeking adventure or rebuilding their lives and fortunes in the untamed western half of the country.
Rosemary Mayfield's father, Daniel, is one of those people. He packs his family up and leaves New York for the western town of Dannock, where he plans to start a cattle ranch. Unfortunately, during the trip, their train is robbed by masked bandits and, not only do they lose their belongings, but Rosemary's parents are murdered, as well. A strong, family-oriented young woman, she has no other recourse than to continue the journey with her two younger siblings (Benjamin and Emily) and the assistance of the rough-edged Shannon O'Malley. Mrs. O'Malley has taken it upon herself to make sure that the remaining Mayfields arrive in Dannock safely, which is no problem for her, seeing as she takes no guff from anyone. And so the story begins...
The story flows in such rich and authentic prose that it is hard to believe that Caroline and Shawnette wrote twelve drafts before it took the right shape. It's true. Twelve drafts! And the time and care they took paid off because there are very few words that can describe what they've accomplished in The Villain. Here are a few that come to mind: magnificent, overwhelming, heart-stirring, and a bit frightening at times.
One of the biggest stand-out features in the book is the manner, in which they illustrate the vast difference in the life Rosemary led in New York and the one she has undertaken in Dannock. This is achieved by beginning each chapter with a quote concerning proper etiquette, of all types, which has no doubt been drilled into Rosemary's head since she was a child, but has no place out west. I, also, enjoyed the unexpected twists and turns within the story, such as the introduction of Nicholas and the appearance of a character from a previous book!
This author team writes some of the best characters I've ever read about and weaves them together in such a fascinating web. Each character has depth and an important role in the storyline (and possibly future storylines). Characters who didn't particularly interest me, at first, became very significant throughout the book. Rosemary grows into her role beautifully, throughout the story. By the book's conclusion she exemplifies the virtues of unconditional love and forgiveness. And Benjamin seems to learn to let go of his pain and grows into a trustworthy young man. But Emily... I just love dear, sweet Emily! She lives in her dream world at least half of the time and, although no one pays her any mind, you start to wonder if she possesses certain psychic gifts because not all of her ramblings are nonsensical. Nicholas, though, was tough for me to come to terms with. I was never completely sure what to make of him and was suspicious of him from the start. Now, I just loved Shannon O'Malley, who is a bit rough around the edges, but a kind soul. She has 7 of her own children and has just taken in her deceased sister's daughter, as well. She likes to drink a bit and beat the men, in the saloon, at cards from time to time. She is quite the spit-fire and always stands up for her beliefs. She ends up to be one of Rosemary's most valiant supporters and protectors, when needed.
Needless to say, I loved this addition to The Fall Series and can't wait for book 5!
Rosemary Mayfield's father, Daniel, is one of those people. He packs his family up and leaves New York for the western town of Dannock, where he plans to start a cattle ranch. Unfortunately, during the trip, their train is robbed by masked bandits and, not only do they lose their belongings, but Rosemary's parents are murdered, as well. A strong, family-oriented young woman, she has no other recourse than to continue the journey with her two younger siblings (Benjamin and Emily) and the assistance of the rough-edged Shannon O'Malley. Mrs. O'Malley has taken it upon herself to make sure that the remaining Mayfields arrive in Dannock safely, which is no problem for her, seeing as she takes no guff from anyone. And so the story begins...
The story flows in such rich and authentic prose that it is hard to believe that Caroline and Shawnette wrote twelve drafts before it took the right shape. It's true. Twelve drafts! And the time and care they took paid off because there are very few words that can describe what they've accomplished in The Villain. Here are a few that come to mind: magnificent, overwhelming, heart-stirring, and a bit frightening at times.
One of the biggest stand-out features in the book is the manner, in which they illustrate the vast difference in the life Rosemary led in New York and the one she has undertaken in Dannock. This is achieved by beginning each chapter with a quote concerning proper etiquette, of all types, which has no doubt been drilled into Rosemary's head since she was a child, but has no place out west. I, also, enjoyed the unexpected twists and turns within the story, such as the introduction of Nicholas and the appearance of a character from a previous book!
This author team writes some of the best characters I've ever read about and weaves them together in such a fascinating web. Each character has depth and an important role in the storyline (and possibly future storylines). Characters who didn't particularly interest me, at first, became very significant throughout the book. Rosemary grows into her role beautifully, throughout the story. By the book's conclusion she exemplifies the virtues of unconditional love and forgiveness. And Benjamin seems to learn to let go of his pain and grows into a trustworthy young man. But Emily... I just love dear, sweet Emily! She lives in her dream world at least half of the time and, although no one pays her any mind, you start to wonder if she possesses certain psychic gifts because not all of her ramblings are nonsensical. Nicholas, though, was tough for me to come to terms with. I was never completely sure what to make of him and was suspicious of him from the start. Now, I just loved Shannon O'Malley, who is a bit rough around the edges, but a kind soul. She has 7 of her own children and has just taken in her deceased sister's daughter, as well. She likes to drink a bit and beat the men, in the saloon, at cards from time to time. She is quite the spit-fire and always stands up for her beliefs. She ends up to be one of Rosemary's most valiant supporters and protectors, when needed.
Needless to say, I loved this addition to The Fall Series and can't wait for book 5!
July 28, 2016
When I got the book in exchange for an honest review (and my opinions are my own) I had forgotten the blurb and just started reading it. I forgot that there was time travel involved or that this man, Nicolas, had anything to do with Rosemary’s parent’s death. In that aspect I think I fell for Nicolas as much as Rosemary did and was shocked and didn’t know what to think except that she should talk to Nicolas about it when she found out!
The story is very sweet and innocent. Rosemary and her young brother, Benjamin, and even younger sister, Emily, were left orphans while on the train heading west to begin a different life on a cattle ranch. Rosemary’s parents were rich but everything they had left was stolen by robbers and her parents were murdered on that train. So Rosemary decides to go to the cattle ranch her parents had already bought and try to take care of her siblings and her ranch.
With not much to eat and little knowledge of how to make fires or cook or survive, they do the best they can. Then Nicolas falls down on their roof. He is wounded badly and in and out of consciousness. Rosemary attempts to sew his wound together with Nicolas’s knowledge of how to do it. As he recovers, he discovers who they are and helps them learn how to live in the west. Meanwhile, Nicolas falls for Rosemary and she falls for him, knowing that he has lived a bad life. His face is scared and one eye has a white film over it. Nicolas helps Benjamin become a man and lets Emily tell him fantasy stories that she believes are true.
It isn’t till the end that you discover all of Nicolas’s transgressions but Rosemary and Benjamin and Emily still love him and hate him at the same time. What to do and what happens then keeps you on your feet because then it is nonstop action and drama to find out what will happen next! I loved it!
My only beef (yes cattle ranch pun intended) is that occasionally out of nowhere Rosemary would talk to the reader. It didn’t feel right and it would throw me off!
If you like time travel, hard work, living on a ranch, barn raising, family, guns, explosions, romance, forgiveness then this is for you!
4.5 stars
The story is very sweet and innocent. Rosemary and her young brother, Benjamin, and even younger sister, Emily, were left orphans while on the train heading west to begin a different life on a cattle ranch. Rosemary’s parents were rich but everything they had left was stolen by robbers and her parents were murdered on that train. So Rosemary decides to go to the cattle ranch her parents had already bought and try to take care of her siblings and her ranch.
With not much to eat and little knowledge of how to make fires or cook or survive, they do the best they can. Then Nicolas falls down on their roof. He is wounded badly and in and out of consciousness. Rosemary attempts to sew his wound together with Nicolas’s knowledge of how to do it. As he recovers, he discovers who they are and helps them learn how to live in the west. Meanwhile, Nicolas falls for Rosemary and she falls for him, knowing that he has lived a bad life. His face is scared and one eye has a white film over it. Nicolas helps Benjamin become a man and lets Emily tell him fantasy stories that she believes are true.
It isn’t till the end that you discover all of Nicolas’s transgressions but Rosemary and Benjamin and Emily still love him and hate him at the same time. What to do and what happens then keeps you on your feet because then it is nonstop action and drama to find out what will happen next! I loved it!
My only beef (yes cattle ranch pun intended) is that occasionally out of nowhere Rosemary would talk to the reader. It didn’t feel right and it would throw me off!
If you like time travel, hard work, living on a ranch, barn raising, family, guns, explosions, romance, forgiveness then this is for you!
4.5 stars
May 25, 2016
I received this book from the authors for an honest review.
May Nicole Abby has become an inspiring team with their exceptional writing and original story lines. The Villain is no exception to this and you are drawn into the mid-west where the west was wild, the men were brutal and the women plagued with what was acceptable for a woman when in society.
The stage was set with a young woman barely old enough to look after herself but with the responsibilities of two younger siblings, a trek to an unknown destination to end up in a desolate place without any family around them. When the hero fell through the roof the plot thickens and with the heroin you had to guess what this man's attention was. Who was he? Where did he fit in? But most of all could he be trusted?
Each character that was introduced to us brought a distinct flavor to the plot and you could not help but have this love hate relationship with each. Especially with the Villain - what an interesting fellow.
It is all about trust, intrigue, the simplicity of life, to put aside all thought of propriety to fit in, when to fight and the wonder of new things.
The plot takes you to interesting scenes and up to the end you had to be patient to really understand what it was all about. It is also about choices and what may follow if you choose wrong. The team really kept their secrets close to their hearts; until the very last chapter keeping you in suspense.
The dialogue and descriptions was beautifully written creating a wonderful story line that draws you with the unique story. Really enjoyed this book.
Thanks once again for the honor to read your book (sorry that you had to wait so long for the review... :) Wish you all the best.
May Nicole Abby has become an inspiring team with their exceptional writing and original story lines. The Villain is no exception to this and you are drawn into the mid-west where the west was wild, the men were brutal and the women plagued with what was acceptable for a woman when in society.
The stage was set with a young woman barely old enough to look after herself but with the responsibilities of two younger siblings, a trek to an unknown destination to end up in a desolate place without any family around them. When the hero fell through the roof the plot thickens and with the heroin you had to guess what this man's attention was. Who was he? Where did he fit in? But most of all could he be trusted?
Each character that was introduced to us brought a distinct flavor to the plot and you could not help but have this love hate relationship with each. Especially with the Villain - what an interesting fellow.
It is all about trust, intrigue, the simplicity of life, to put aside all thought of propriety to fit in, when to fight and the wonder of new things.
The plot takes you to interesting scenes and up to the end you had to be patient to really understand what it was all about. It is also about choices and what may follow if you choose wrong. The team really kept their secrets close to their hearts; until the very last chapter keeping you in suspense.
The dialogue and descriptions was beautifully written creating a wonderful story line that draws you with the unique story. Really enjoyed this book.
Thanks once again for the honor to read your book (sorry that you had to wait so long for the review... :) Wish you all the best.
July 1, 2015
I received this book from the author for an honest review.
The book started off with great descriptive passages. I became part of the scenes and the story rather quickly. I have read a number of books where the books start off with great promises and falls flat halfway through the book. It was definitely NOT the case with The Villian.
The book takes you on a trip through the Wild West into Montana and you learn about hardships and determination and for good measure there is a generous helping of romance flung into it. This book is not your normal predictable love story and it makes for interesting reading from start to finish.
The book was delightful to read and throughout the reading I was willing the main characters to stand strong and have a happy ending.
The book started off with great descriptive passages. I became part of the scenes and the story rather quickly. I have read a number of books where the books start off with great promises and falls flat halfway through the book. It was definitely NOT the case with The Villian.
The book takes you on a trip through the Wild West into Montana and you learn about hardships and determination and for good measure there is a generous helping of romance flung into it. This book is not your normal predictable love story and it makes for interesting reading from start to finish.
The book was delightful to read and throughout the reading I was willing the main characters to stand strong and have a happy ending.
July 31, 2016
This is part of a series, but this is the first one I have read. I didn't feel like I was missing back story, but wouldn't mind reading the rest now that I have found the series! I had a hard time reading this story--but mostly because of the formatting. Since I received an advanced copy, I imagine it has been fixed in the final copy!
I was caught off guard when in the middle of a historical fiction story there was a time travel twist, but it was a good one! Train robbers kill Rosemary's parents on their train ride west. With no parents and no money, they continue on to their new home hoping for the best. What awaits them is little more than a hovel, but on their first night an unexpected visitor arrives that changes the course of their lives.
A good premise and well written.
I was caught off guard when in the middle of a historical fiction story there was a time travel twist, but it was a good one! Train robbers kill Rosemary's parents on their train ride west. With no parents and no money, they continue on to their new home hoping for the best. What awaits them is little more than a hovel, but on their first night an unexpected visitor arrives that changes the course of their lives.
A good premise and well written.
July 16, 2015
This was a thoroughly captivating story that drew you in and played with your mind as much as it did the fabric of time. Though a bit confusing at first, being plopped into the middle of a story, it kept you interested in figuring out what was going on. The romance was strong and sweet. The main characters were rich and deep with lovely side characters that folded you into a world of the wild west with a big of magic weaved in. Interesting twists and an enthralling, but somewhat less than explain super-naturalism, the author achieved an effective relate-ability. Overall, a very interesting read.
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June 20, 2015
The Villain is one of those books you pick up and read in one sitting. The kind that surprises you with its powerful and compelling characters and its poignant message. To say that I was surprised at how much the story touched my heart would be an understatement.
Our heroine, Rosemary, is faced with the daunting task of raising her little brother and sister in the wilds of the untamed west after her parents are killed while being robbed on a train heading west. Born and bred a genteel lady, she is ill equipped to deal with such an abrupt change in fortune, but her savior comes in the form of Nicholas Erikkdon when he crashes through the roof of their humble cabin.
Rosemary has been instilled with an uncompromising sense of right and wrong, what is proper and what is improper. It is difficult to throw everything she's learned out the window and recognize that social graces can have no place in the wilds of the west. I found her fierce desire to cling to those social graces rather amusing because the author did a really wonderful job of showing how Rosemary used it as more of a safety net in order to put on a brave face and deal with the certain knowledge that she was incapable of providing for her siblings. Her flaws are tempered with her kind heart and fierce protective nature where her siblings are concerned. She could have given up when her parents were killed, but she doesn't. She's a very strong, flawed, yet likable character.
Nicholas is riddled with guilt and tormented by some serious mistakes in his past. Though one would assume he must be the villain, I think the author took on a difficult theme by slowly changing Nicholas' archetype from that of villain to hero, and she only could have managed it if her character had some inherent good to begin with, but it can't be brought to the forefront without the necessary interactions between him, Rosemary, and her siblings. His heart begins to soften and a hero slowly emerges, though we find that the villain can easily return if certain choices are made and a different path is presented to him. The pacing of his character development was perfect. His slow acceptance of his love and dependence on Rosemary, Benjamin and Emily are perfectly plotted. He's scarred and imperfect with a heart of gold hidden beneath.
Benjamin and Emily are two characters that are as distinctive and essential to the story as the main characters are. One is trying to find his place in this world while the other lives between two worlds, locked in her own fairy tale which makes Emily wise beyond her years. I loved them both so very much.
This book is the fourth in the series, but can be read as a stand-alone due to the fact that each book deals with a different love story. I wasn't aware that it was the fourth book until I finished it, but it certainly helped me accept the idea of time travel within a Wild West romance a little easier after that. I think that was the only downside to reading the book out of order. The time travel thread combined with the Wild West felt a little strange. Now that you’ve been forewarned, you won’t think it strange at all.
These next two paragraphs are going to have some spoilers, which is something I don't usually do, but felt it necessary in order to express my feelings about the book. So just a heads up if you want to skip them.
I really wanted that first meeting between Nicholas and Rosemary to happen as the action unfolded and not in flashbacks. I think the reason I felt this way is because this moment when Nicholas is playing the villain and robbing her on the train plants an idea in his head that eventually leads him to her. It's just so darn important. Her fierce refusal to give him what he wants and her brave defiance touches a chord in his heart and then he ends up saving her and her siblings when the train explodes. I think this pivotal moment could have been the prologue. It's a personal preference as a reader, but to experience the scene as it is happening would have been great since it is the beginning of Nicholas' journey from villain to hero. It could even be written from Nicholas' point of view even though the rest of the story is told from the heroine's point of view. This also would have made his actions, reactions and interactions within the story that much more compelling because we’re then seeing everything through Rosmary’s POV, but we understand Nicholas’ motivation and internal conflict.
Also, even though I recognize that the time travel idea was established in the first novel, I think Nicholas' encounter with the lawmen and then his jump through that time travel portal could have be inserted into the book as part of the prologue as well as his last thoughts before going through the portal being that of Rosemary...and then he's crashing through planks of wood (the roof) and blacks out. Once again, these are also just my personal musings and the brainstorming of a fellow author who is enamored with another author's work. Creative license is part of the game, though, and I think this author has done an amazing job of developing and then writing such a touching story.
I honestly can't wait to start the series from the beginning. I highly recommend this book to fans of western romances, time travel and all of you hopeless romantics out there.
This review is posted on SDE Magazine http://sdemagazine.com and Author And Book Spotlights http://authorcjanaya.com/blog
Our heroine, Rosemary, is faced with the daunting task of raising her little brother and sister in the wilds of the untamed west after her parents are killed while being robbed on a train heading west. Born and bred a genteel lady, she is ill equipped to deal with such an abrupt change in fortune, but her savior comes in the form of Nicholas Erikkdon when he crashes through the roof of their humble cabin.
Rosemary has been instilled with an uncompromising sense of right and wrong, what is proper and what is improper. It is difficult to throw everything she's learned out the window and recognize that social graces can have no place in the wilds of the west. I found her fierce desire to cling to those social graces rather amusing because the author did a really wonderful job of showing how Rosemary used it as more of a safety net in order to put on a brave face and deal with the certain knowledge that she was incapable of providing for her siblings. Her flaws are tempered with her kind heart and fierce protective nature where her siblings are concerned. She could have given up when her parents were killed, but she doesn't. She's a very strong, flawed, yet likable character.
Nicholas is riddled with guilt and tormented by some serious mistakes in his past. Though one would assume he must be the villain, I think the author took on a difficult theme by slowly changing Nicholas' archetype from that of villain to hero, and she only could have managed it if her character had some inherent good to begin with, but it can't be brought to the forefront without the necessary interactions between him, Rosemary, and her siblings. His heart begins to soften and a hero slowly emerges, though we find that the villain can easily return if certain choices are made and a different path is presented to him. The pacing of his character development was perfect. His slow acceptance of his love and dependence on Rosemary, Benjamin and Emily are perfectly plotted. He's scarred and imperfect with a heart of gold hidden beneath.
Benjamin and Emily are two characters that are as distinctive and essential to the story as the main characters are. One is trying to find his place in this world while the other lives between two worlds, locked in her own fairy tale which makes Emily wise beyond her years. I loved them both so very much.
This book is the fourth in the series, but can be read as a stand-alone due to the fact that each book deals with a different love story. I wasn't aware that it was the fourth book until I finished it, but it certainly helped me accept the idea of time travel within a Wild West romance a little easier after that. I think that was the only downside to reading the book out of order. The time travel thread combined with the Wild West felt a little strange. Now that you’ve been forewarned, you won’t think it strange at all.
These next two paragraphs are going to have some spoilers, which is something I don't usually do, but felt it necessary in order to express my feelings about the book. So just a heads up if you want to skip them.
I really wanted that first meeting between Nicholas and Rosemary to happen as the action unfolded and not in flashbacks. I think the reason I felt this way is because this moment when Nicholas is playing the villain and robbing her on the train plants an idea in his head that eventually leads him to her. It's just so darn important. Her fierce refusal to give him what he wants and her brave defiance touches a chord in his heart and then he ends up saving her and her siblings when the train explodes. I think this pivotal moment could have been the prologue. It's a personal preference as a reader, but to experience the scene as it is happening would have been great since it is the beginning of Nicholas' journey from villain to hero. It could even be written from Nicholas' point of view even though the rest of the story is told from the heroine's point of view. This also would have made his actions, reactions and interactions within the story that much more compelling because we’re then seeing everything through Rosmary’s POV, but we understand Nicholas’ motivation and internal conflict.
Also, even though I recognize that the time travel idea was established in the first novel, I think Nicholas' encounter with the lawmen and then his jump through that time travel portal could have be inserted into the book as part of the prologue as well as his last thoughts before going through the portal being that of Rosemary...and then he's crashing through planks of wood (the roof) and blacks out. Once again, these are also just my personal musings and the brainstorming of a fellow author who is enamored with another author's work. Creative license is part of the game, though, and I think this author has done an amazing job of developing and then writing such a touching story.
I honestly can't wait to start the series from the beginning. I highly recommend this book to fans of western romances, time travel and all of you hopeless romantics out there.
This review is posted on SDE Magazine http://sdemagazine.com and Author And Book Spotlights http://authorcjanaya.com/blog
July 13, 2016
Note: I was given a complimentary copy for an honest review.
When I agreed to read this, I really didn't know much about the author or the fact that this is part of a larger series. Looking back at the descriptions of the previous books, it might have given me some background information, but I don't feel that I was ever hampered by not having read the other books.
This turned out to be a very different sort of read for me. Fortunately, I enjoy the various genres that this story ventured into. It can be categorized as a Western Romance, Time Travel Romance, as well as Inspirational Fiction.
Our main female character, Rosemary Mayfield, has just experienced a living nightmare and yet has to move forward assuming the care of her younger brother and sister. She has no other options since there's no more money to have another option. She simply has to make the best decisions possible that provide safety and security for herself and her siblings. Immediately after finding their way to their new home, they find themselves snowed in when suddenly a man seems to have fallen from the sky and through their porch roof. When they discover that he's bleeding and might die, they extend mercy upon him and save his life.
Nicolas Ekkridon can't understand why he was saved by the same girl he robbed on the train. And, how is it that he's here in their cabin? He realizes that they don't recognize him and tries to get away, but a force holds him back and he's powerless to leave. What will happen when they learn the truth? Will they hate him or forgive him?
When I began reading, it took me a bit to adjust to the different writing style. It's written completely from Rosemary's perspective as if she's writing her memoirs of what happened. More or less an autobiography style. However, the more I read, the more I found myself fully invested in the story.
The time travel element is different from other books I've read from that genre in that Rosemary is not the one doing the time travel. Also, she seems to accept it without too much concern. In fact, she approaches the subject more from curiosity than disbelief.
However, the element of this story that I find worthy of recommendation for others to read is the message within. It's a message of mercy and forgiveness. I also loved the message that each decision we make is important - decisions have consequences. It was all very profound to me, the incredible depth of the message presented.
So, even though this story took multiple unexpected turns and was written in a different format from what I'm used to, I appreciate the author having the courage to write a message much needed in today's world.
Romance - G rated
Language - nothing offensive
Violence - PG rated - a couple of fight scenes and reference to death
My rating - 5 stars.
When I agreed to read this, I really didn't know much about the author or the fact that this is part of a larger series. Looking back at the descriptions of the previous books, it might have given me some background information, but I don't feel that I was ever hampered by not having read the other books.
This turned out to be a very different sort of read for me. Fortunately, I enjoy the various genres that this story ventured into. It can be categorized as a Western Romance, Time Travel Romance, as well as Inspirational Fiction.
Our main female character, Rosemary Mayfield, has just experienced a living nightmare and yet has to move forward assuming the care of her younger brother and sister. She has no other options since there's no more money to have another option. She simply has to make the best decisions possible that provide safety and security for herself and her siblings. Immediately after finding their way to their new home, they find themselves snowed in when suddenly a man seems to have fallen from the sky and through their porch roof. When they discover that he's bleeding and might die, they extend mercy upon him and save his life.
Nicolas Ekkridon can't understand why he was saved by the same girl he robbed on the train. And, how is it that he's here in their cabin? He realizes that they don't recognize him and tries to get away, but a force holds him back and he's powerless to leave. What will happen when they learn the truth? Will they hate him or forgive him?
When I began reading, it took me a bit to adjust to the different writing style. It's written completely from Rosemary's perspective as if she's writing her memoirs of what happened. More or less an autobiography style. However, the more I read, the more I found myself fully invested in the story.
The time travel element is different from other books I've read from that genre in that Rosemary is not the one doing the time travel. Also, she seems to accept it without too much concern. In fact, she approaches the subject more from curiosity than disbelief.
However, the element of this story that I find worthy of recommendation for others to read is the message within. It's a message of mercy and forgiveness. I also loved the message that each decision we make is important - decisions have consequences. It was all very profound to me, the incredible depth of the message presented.
So, even though this story took multiple unexpected turns and was written in a different format from what I'm used to, I appreciate the author having the courage to write a message much needed in today's world.
Romance - G rated
Language - nothing offensive
Violence - PG rated - a couple of fight scenes and reference to death
My rating - 5 stars.
August 2, 2016
I received this book for a honest review. I had not heard of this author and did not realize that this book was the 4th book in the series. However, I was able to follow along and this book could definitely be a stand alone. I am excited to go back and read the previous 3 books. This book is the story of unconditional love, survival, forgiveness, with humor, proper etiquette, and a little imagination presented by Emily. This book begins when Rosemary begins her journey as the head of her family and has to begin putting their lives in order after a tragedy. I felt that the writing was very intriguing and I could not put the book down. The love story is not the typical love story of boy meets girl and falls in love; however, it is certainly a story that involves unconditional love, protection, suspense, mercy, forgiveness, and so much more. I was able to imagine myself in the story with the description of the characters and the surroundings of the story. I truly felt like I was in the wild west from the presentation of the story. The main character, Rosemary, is full of etiquette that is not found anywhere in the west. Each chapter begins with a quote of proper etiquette. While Rosemary is a very young adult faced with many obstacles at a young age she uses the knowledge and etiquette that she knows and begins to not only change her life but all those who are placed in her path.
This book is written from Rosemary's point of view and you often feel as though you are reading her diary of her life. I think that helped me to feel like I was part of the story. There are many twist and turns throughout the book which totally kept me reading and wanting to finish. The characters in this book were entertaining and I love how the author provided a little more insight to each character throughout the book. I would love to read this story as a two folded story from Nicholas' point of view just to see how it would be different and from his perspective. This book is certainly an example of how each decision we make can cause our lives to go down different paths. The Villain can appear as easily as the hero can appear.
Some of my favorite quotes from the book are as follows:
"Samuel, ya good fer nutt'n swine! I told ya we was need'n more logs chopped, and I done ran out! My stoves a smokin' and foods gonna git all gimmied up 'lessin' I put it under some heat and I got none!"
"A girl grows into a woman. A boy's gotta decide to be a man."
"Ain't no union less'n it's blessed. Cain't get no bread to grow, less'n ya got some yeast. God's the yeast in a marriage. Less'n He's all mixed in, ain't gonna be no growin'!"
"Why you ungrateful beast! You've got the manners of a hippopotamus. I saved your life--!"
"Some lawman!" She snorted. "Givin' ya a gun without the bullets. Useless as tits on a boar hog."
This book is written from Rosemary's point of view and you often feel as though you are reading her diary of her life. I think that helped me to feel like I was part of the story. There are many twist and turns throughout the book which totally kept me reading and wanting to finish. The characters in this book were entertaining and I love how the author provided a little more insight to each character throughout the book. I would love to read this story as a two folded story from Nicholas' point of view just to see how it would be different and from his perspective. This book is certainly an example of how each decision we make can cause our lives to go down different paths. The Villain can appear as easily as the hero can appear.
Some of my favorite quotes from the book are as follows:
"Samuel, ya good fer nutt'n swine! I told ya we was need'n more logs chopped, and I done ran out! My stoves a smokin' and foods gonna git all gimmied up 'lessin' I put it under some heat and I got none!"
"A girl grows into a woman. A boy's gotta decide to be a man."
"Ain't no union less'n it's blessed. Cain't get no bread to grow, less'n ya got some yeast. God's the yeast in a marriage. Less'n He's all mixed in, ain't gonna be no growin'!"
"Why you ungrateful beast! You've got the manners of a hippopotamus. I saved your life--!"
"Some lawman!" She snorted. "Givin' ya a gun without the bullets. Useless as tits on a boar hog."
August 2, 2016
What if your hero was also your villain? Rosemary Mayfield has survived a terrifying journey from New York to the Montana Territory with her brother Benjamin and sister Emily in tow. Along the way their train was robbed by bandits and their parents killed. With nothing left to lose, 19 year old Rosemary follows the path that her father had set up to Dannock, Montana where he was planning on setting up a cattle ranch. With nothing to their name except the clothes on their back and a small cabin in the wilderness, Rosemary and her siblings try to make do. Struggling in their dangerous new surroundings, fate crudely crashes Nicolas through the Mayfield’s roof. Injured, Rosemary nurses the wild stranger back to health. Nicolas keeps telling them that he cannot be trusted, but his presence and knowledge is more of a comfort than a hazard. Striking a deal, Rosemary and Nicolas agree to marry for business purposes and keeping the cattle ranch afloat. However, Nicolas’ dangerous secret of his traveling ways and just how and why he crashed through the Mayfield’s roof might pull them apart.
I loved being taken back to the very wild and untamed West with Rosemary and her siblings. Rosemary put on an exceptionally strong front for the protection of her siblings, but showed true bravery, perseverance and kindheartedness in the face of adversity. When Nicolas came crashing into her life, Rosemary took a huge chance in trusting him, changing both of their lives. As with the other books in The Fall series, the romance was natural and sweet. I did figure out Nicolas' secret rather early, but it didn't take away from the suspense at all. The time travel element in this book isn't as prominent as with some of the others, but is subtly woven in with hints and glistens throughout. If you haven't read the other books, there might be slight confusion in the beginning, but most of the details are explained near the end. A big surprise for me was Rosemary's sister, Emily, she seemed to have her head lost in the clouds, but at the same time she knew more about what was really going on than anybody else. With a super-sweet ending, The Villain is a fast-paced, clean, time-travel romance, great for a quick summer read.
This book was received for free in return for an honest review.
I loved being taken back to the very wild and untamed West with Rosemary and her siblings. Rosemary put on an exceptionally strong front for the protection of her siblings, but showed true bravery, perseverance and kindheartedness in the face of adversity. When Nicolas came crashing into her life, Rosemary took a huge chance in trusting him, changing both of their lives. As with the other books in The Fall series, the romance was natural and sweet. I did figure out Nicolas' secret rather early, but it didn't take away from the suspense at all. The time travel element in this book isn't as prominent as with some of the others, but is subtly woven in with hints and glistens throughout. If you haven't read the other books, there might be slight confusion in the beginning, but most of the details are explained near the end. A big surprise for me was Rosemary's sister, Emily, she seemed to have her head lost in the clouds, but at the same time she knew more about what was really going on than anybody else. With a super-sweet ending, The Villain is a fast-paced, clean, time-travel romance, great for a quick summer read.
This book was received for free in return for an honest review.
July 30, 2016
This book tells the story of Rosemary, a young nineteen year old sister who is left alone to take care of her somewhat rebellious younger brother and sister who can’t seem to keep reality and fantasy clearly separated. Their parents were shot on the way to the west, while they were travelling from their luxury life in New York to settle in Montana to start a cattle ranch.
Then one night Nicholas literally drops into their home, wounded, and full of secrets. The siblings decide to nurse him to health, and due to a series of events, Rosemary and Nicholas end married to each other.
This story is all about growing up and forgiveness. Rosemary and her siblings have to grow up in the true sense of the word. They have to let go of the silly rules of society and learn to survive in the rough country out West. They have to learn to trust each other, and let each other grow up. Both not easy things to do when you have lived lives of wealth and protection all those years.
Then they have to let Nicholas in, and they soon learn that even though he clearly has a dark and tainted past, he is wants to take care of them all, and provide for them. Rosemary soon finds her heart opening up to him, and senses the marriage to not be one of mere convenience.
Nicholas is scarred, on the outside, but most definitely on the inside. His secrets lie deep, and he fears that once all is revealed he might lose this sense of family he has finally found. The willingness of all of these three to let him into their home, and into their hearts, softens his hard exterior and lets the true Nicholas out that has always been lurking beneath the surface.
This story is a fun read. It had me turning the pages at lightning speed to find out where this all would go. There are some very colorful characters in this book, and some very surprising elements. The time element (I will say no more about this) was an element in the book, but not such an overpowering one, that the essence of the story, Rosemary and Nicholas, was lost in all of it.
I loved the surprising greatness of this book. It is one of those geodes that you crack open to reveal a beautiful amethyst inside. Definitely worth taking a look, it will not disappoint!
Then one night Nicholas literally drops into their home, wounded, and full of secrets. The siblings decide to nurse him to health, and due to a series of events, Rosemary and Nicholas end married to each other.
This story is all about growing up and forgiveness. Rosemary and her siblings have to grow up in the true sense of the word. They have to let go of the silly rules of society and learn to survive in the rough country out West. They have to learn to trust each other, and let each other grow up. Both not easy things to do when you have lived lives of wealth and protection all those years.
Then they have to let Nicholas in, and they soon learn that even though he clearly has a dark and tainted past, he is wants to take care of them all, and provide for them. Rosemary soon finds her heart opening up to him, and senses the marriage to not be one of mere convenience.
Nicholas is scarred, on the outside, but most definitely on the inside. His secrets lie deep, and he fears that once all is revealed he might lose this sense of family he has finally found. The willingness of all of these three to let him into their home, and into their hearts, softens his hard exterior and lets the true Nicholas out that has always been lurking beneath the surface.
This story is a fun read. It had me turning the pages at lightning speed to find out where this all would go. There are some very colorful characters in this book, and some very surprising elements. The time element (I will say no more about this) was an element in the book, but not such an overpowering one, that the essence of the story, Rosemary and Nicholas, was lost in all of it.
I loved the surprising greatness of this book. It is one of those geodes that you crack open to reveal a beautiful amethyst inside. Definitely worth taking a look, it will not disappoint!
June 16, 2016
I was given this book in exchange for an honest review. I really enjoyed this book. The story is about a family moving from NY to the west. The family was well heeled at one point but that is gone. Their last refuge is a house and cattle ranch. On the way out west, their train is robbed and in the scuffle the parents are killed leaving three children: Rosemary, Benjamin, and Emily. Since they have no home other than the one waiting for them, they continue the journey. When they arrive they have no skills even though Rosemary is 17 she has been raised as a lady. Benjamin in his early teens has lived a rich lifestyle and never had to do much in the way of working. Emily is very young. They cannot even get the stove to light and they have few supplies. With winter setting in, it seems like starvation and freezing to death is going to be the end of the story. Then suddenly a man (Nicholas) falls through their porch roof. He won’t say how he managed to do that, but he quickly takes over, lights the fire and comes into their lives. He rough and surly and even though the kids are now warm they don’t believe they are safe. This story has many twists and turns and it’s hard to identify who is the villain. I like the fact that there was a little paranormal side of the story of the story too---I won’t give away just what it was as that would be SPOILER! Another really cool part of the book is that at the beginning of every chapter are the rules for being a lady that Rosemary cut her teeth on and now, in the west, finds herself breaking every day. My favorite is this: “Marriage should only take place between two individuals who are each other’s antipode. The tall should marry the short, the florid should marry the dark complected, very large should marry the fragile or delicate, the heartless should marry the warm and effervescent type.” And at the end Rosemary concludes that she fells uneasy about the rules they break. Her mother would not approve but she reminds herself that these arbitrary rules have so little to do with real life.
August 1, 2016
Left alone to care for her younger brother and sister, Rosemary Mayfield is determined to make a life for them out in the wilds of the west. With her parent’s death after a robbery gone badly, Rosemary takes Benjamin and Emily to the home where they were to live and starts a new life with them. A city girl from New York City couldn’t be more lost. However, fate seems to have a different plan in store for the little family when a very large and very hairy man falls injured through their roof. Deciding to care for the stranger may put the family at risk or might find them a guardian to help protect them and teach them the ways of the west.
When Nicolas Ekkridon wakes up to the sight of the three orphans, immediately he knows that no good can come of this, because he had a hand in the fateful robbery that killed their parents. As a time traveler Nicolas has lived many different lives and has been in several different eras and countries. He’s a tough man and has a past that would make rule living Rosemary shrink away. They are forced to live under one roof and make a life together in the Wild West.
This was a very different read for me, I received the book a while ago and I didn’t read the back synopsis so I was a little surprised when time travel came into the story. It was a very quick read and actually very entertaining, there was suspense and murder and mystery, and of course some time travel. May Nicole Abbey had a strong woman and an even stronger man as the main characters and they kept the story moving quickly. A very fun time travel story.
When Nicolas Ekkridon wakes up to the sight of the three orphans, immediately he knows that no good can come of this, because he had a hand in the fateful robbery that killed their parents. As a time traveler Nicolas has lived many different lives and has been in several different eras and countries. He’s a tough man and has a past that would make rule living Rosemary shrink away. They are forced to live under one roof and make a life together in the Wild West.
This was a very different read for me, I received the book a while ago and I didn’t read the back synopsis so I was a little surprised when time travel came into the story. It was a very quick read and actually very entertaining, there was suspense and murder and mystery, and of course some time travel. May Nicole Abbey had a strong woman and an even stronger man as the main characters and they kept the story moving quickly. A very fun time travel story.
August 16, 2016
Wow. That is my first impression of this book. I knew it was a time travel romance, but I was not expecting the way it played out. I even had a hard time figuring out who was time traveling at first. This book really had me thinking about choices, too. I loved the way the author drew me in and made me want to finish this book in one sitting (I didn’t, because I didn’t have time). Ms. Abbey stays true to the time period in which the story takes place, so that makes it easy to read and know where you are in the book.
Rosemary is a great heroine who care deeply for her family and is plunged into being the mother to her two younger siblings. She has no experience in the west and was essentially a spoiled heiress. She does a great job of trying to figure out how to survive and run a cattle ranch and take care of her teenage brother and mentally challenged little sister. Nicolas is the typical bad guy turned hero. He has a heart of gold and watching him change and become the hero Rosemary wants him to be is heartwarming. This book deals a lot with choices and forgiveness and change. It has a very good lesson buried in the fun and adventure of the wild American west. I loved how Rosemary was the only one who could save him and it was her choice to make. The supporting characters where superb and well written. This book is clean and has great lessons without being preachy. Great read, you will love it.
I received a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review
Rosemary is a great heroine who care deeply for her family and is plunged into being the mother to her two younger siblings. She has no experience in the west and was essentially a spoiled heiress. She does a great job of trying to figure out how to survive and run a cattle ranch and take care of her teenage brother and mentally challenged little sister. Nicolas is the typical bad guy turned hero. He has a heart of gold and watching him change and become the hero Rosemary wants him to be is heartwarming. This book deals a lot with choices and forgiveness and change. It has a very good lesson buried in the fun and adventure of the wild American west. I loved how Rosemary was the only one who could save him and it was her choice to make. The supporting characters where superb and well written. This book is clean and has great lessons without being preachy. Great read, you will love it.
I received a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review
June 22, 2016
Wow. This is not the kind of book I tend to read, because I normally stick with young adult or fantasy books, but it was wonderful, and the kind of book that you read in one sitting.
I was given this book in exchange for an honest review and I absolutely loved it.
"The Villain" is an exquisite novel, packed with plot twists and action as well as sarcasm and some unexpected sort of fantasy. I have to say that it was difficult for me at first, as a foreigner, to understand some of the dialogue going on between the western people in particular.
Furthermore, all the witty dialogue constantly going on between Rosemary and Nicolas made my day, and also forced me, in a way, to care for them. No character in this book is perfect, actually they're all far from perfection, but that makes them more realistic somehow and easier to relate to.
Another thing I really enjoyed about "The Villain" was the underlying message beneath the novel, about forgiveness and the importance of decisions and having faith.
"That it may not seem so as we live it, but our decisions are magnificently important. That these seemingly small decisions appear of no great significance, but they, are keys of transcendent power".
In conclusion, I believe this book is worth a read.
And remember: Not everything is what it seems
I was given this book in exchange for an honest review and I absolutely loved it.
"The Villain" is an exquisite novel, packed with plot twists and action as well as sarcasm and some unexpected sort of fantasy. I have to say that it was difficult for me at first, as a foreigner, to understand some of the dialogue going on between the western people in particular.
Furthermore, all the witty dialogue constantly going on between Rosemary and Nicolas made my day, and also forced me, in a way, to care for them. No character in this book is perfect, actually they're all far from perfection, but that makes them more realistic somehow and easier to relate to.
Another thing I really enjoyed about "The Villain" was the underlying message beneath the novel, about forgiveness and the importance of decisions and having faith.
"That it may not seem so as we live it, but our decisions are magnificently important. That these seemingly small decisions appear of no great significance, but they, are keys of transcendent power".
In conclusion, I believe this book is worth a read.
And remember: Not everything is what it seems
June 28, 2015
Reading this book reminded me of the television shows I used to watch when I was a kid. “Little House of the prairie” and “Dr Quinn Medicine Woman”. I can confidently say if you enjoyed those shows, you will enjoy this novel.
Yes, this is the fourth novel in a series. But it is the first one I have read. And honestly, I had no problem with joining the storyline. The book is told from one point of view, and she is a new character. Unlike the first three books in the series, which are told from the time traveler’s perspective, this book is told from a local woman, she doesn’t know of time travel and even at the end of the book, she is uncertain.
I was surprised at how “clean” the book is. One would not expect a western romance to be devoid of drunkedness and foul language, but this one is. There is some brutality, and death, but it is done in an artful way.
The characters are very well developed, and although there are a lot of characters involved, I was never confused about who was who. They were all given very distinct personalities which made them memorable.
So if you are down for a good old, bad guy turned good, story with a wild west setting, this is the book for you!
Yes, this is the fourth novel in a series. But it is the first one I have read. And honestly, I had no problem with joining the storyline. The book is told from one point of view, and she is a new character. Unlike the first three books in the series, which are told from the time traveler’s perspective, this book is told from a local woman, she doesn’t know of time travel and even at the end of the book, she is uncertain.
I was surprised at how “clean” the book is. One would not expect a western romance to be devoid of drunkedness and foul language, but this one is. There is some brutality, and death, but it is done in an artful way.
The characters are very well developed, and although there are a lot of characters involved, I was never confused about who was who. They were all given very distinct personalities which made them memorable.
So if you are down for a good old, bad guy turned good, story with a wild west setting, this is the book for you!
October 4, 2016
The Villain by May Nicole Abbey is the fourth book in her series and has a solid foundation as a stand-alone story. Although I read this from the series first, I'll need to start on the earlier books simply because of her fun, descriptive, engaging writing style. It was effortless to glide through her story with great anticipation to find out what was next in store.
When The Villain became available I quickly could not wait to get my hands on it. Then life happened and 2 months went by and I forgot the entire premise! Thankfully, it was there on my Kindle drawing me in when life slowed down to read it. How grateful I am now for that cloud of memory because after only a short time into the story the most surprisingly amazing things started happening! I'll not divulge any secrets.
If you are a fan of whisking an unsuspecting individual to a time most foreign....Well then, most definitely, place this book at the top of your to-read list.
I was given a copy of this book in return for my honest review.
When The Villain became available I quickly could not wait to get my hands on it. Then life happened and 2 months went by and I forgot the entire premise! Thankfully, it was there on my Kindle drawing me in when life slowed down to read it. How grateful I am now for that cloud of memory because after only a short time into the story the most surprisingly amazing things started happening! I'll not divulge any secrets.
If you are a fan of whisking an unsuspecting individual to a time most foreign....Well then, most definitely, place this book at the top of your to-read list.
I was given a copy of this book in return for my honest review.
July 5, 2016
I can honestly say that I was not expecting the twist in this book. It was so well paced and set out, and the author was very descriptive and set the scene extremely well. It is a beautiful story, with family being a key theme. This historical fiction novel is a clean romance, with a western setting. The story is so engrossing, and I loved the characters so much. It was heartwarming to see these two characters put the pieces of their family together, with some help from the lovely neighbours and townspeople. I will definitely be purchasing the rest of the author's works.
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August 1, 2016
I just stayed up until after 1:00 am to finish this book! It was great but the review will have to wait until I'm more alert.
When I began reading The Villain I had forgotten about the preview I’d read beforehand. This was great because then I had to piece together what was going on. This was a really fun story! It was well-written with great dialogue and terrific descriptions. Rosemary was the main character and was trying so hard to be proper as she was taught by her mother but things just weren’t working out in her favor. I believe all of the characters were written and very true to life, especially Benjamin as the teenage brother. (If you have encountered one in your home, you’ll understand.) Some of my favorite things about the book were the little How To Be A Lady headers at the beginning of every chapter. I know those actually existed in the past and they can be quite funny paired with what’s happening in the Wild West.
4 ½ Stars. Clean. Great, quick read.
When I began reading The Villain I had forgotten about the preview I’d read beforehand. This was great because then I had to piece together what was going on. This was a really fun story! It was well-written with great dialogue and terrific descriptions. Rosemary was the main character and was trying so hard to be proper as she was taught by her mother but things just weren’t working out in her favor. I believe all of the characters were written and very true to life, especially Benjamin as the teenage brother. (If you have encountered one in your home, you’ll understand.) Some of my favorite things about the book were the little How To Be A Lady headers at the beginning of every chapter. I know those actually existed in the past and they can be quite funny paired with what’s happening in the Wild West.
4 ½ Stars. Clean. Great, quick read.
June 28, 2016
I started reading this book not really knowing what to expect. I must not have read the book description very well because the time travel was a surprise to me -- but a good surprise. I really liked the different twists and turns the books took.
I hadn't read any of the other books in this series and this book definitely works well as a standalone, but now I'm curious to go back and read Ammon's story (even though his appearance in this story was brief).
I thought Rosemary was a very likable heroine; she's lived a pampered life and then recently her life has taken some very difficult turns. I love how feisty she is - she really brings out the best in Nicolas and never backs down from him. It was also interesting to see some time bending and see how strongly one particular decision can influence future outcomes.
Content: Clean; some violence
Source: Review copy (opinion is 100% my own)
I hadn't read any of the other books in this series and this book definitely works well as a standalone, but now I'm curious to go back and read Ammon's story (even though his appearance in this story was brief).
I thought Rosemary was a very likable heroine; she's lived a pampered life and then recently her life has taken some very difficult turns. I love how feisty she is - she really brings out the best in Nicolas and never backs down from him. It was also interesting to see some time bending and see how strongly one particular decision can influence future outcomes.
Content: Clean; some violence
Source: Review copy (opinion is 100% my own)
July 12, 2015
I have read the previous books in The Fall series, and while I found them enjoyable, I have to say that The Villain is my favorite. I do have a soft spot for historical western settings. This story is about three siblings left orphaned after their parents were killed on a train out west. Rosemary, the oldest, takes it upon herself to continue to build a homestead and survive. Then Nicolas drops in and everything changes.
While Shannon O'Malley isn't one of the main characters, she is one of my favorites. I love her fierce and feisty attitude. I also adore the imaginative younger sister, Emily. I found there to be a message of forgiveness in this book - how we shouldn't dwell so much on the past story; instead focus on the present. There is action, love, and thoughtfulness behind the writing! 5 stars.
While Shannon O'Malley isn't one of the main characters, she is one of my favorites. I love her fierce and feisty attitude. I also adore the imaginative younger sister, Emily. I found there to be a message of forgiveness in this book - how we shouldn't dwell so much on the past story; instead focus on the present. There is action, love, and thoughtfulness behind the writing! 5 stars.
June 13, 2016
Rosemary Mayfield has at last arrived at the place her father bought for them to raise cattle. Unfortunately her parents were killed in a train robbery. Now she and her two younger siblings have only what they stand up in. Rosemary has no idea how she is going to pay for the cattle that are coming or how to survive in this wild west.
Nickolas appears, badly wounded on the doorstep in the middle of a snowstorm. He is a bad man with many secrets. He is also what the little family need.
This is quite the wild west adventure romance, with a little paranormal mixed in. There is some violence but we are left outside the bedroom. (No sex) There are some wonderful characters that I would love to meet again. You might need the tissues. This will keep you glued to the pages until the end. I loved it.
Nickolas appears, badly wounded on the doorstep in the middle of a snowstorm. He is a bad man with many secrets. He is also what the little family need.
This is quite the wild west adventure romance, with a little paranormal mixed in. There is some violence but we are left outside the bedroom. (No sex) There are some wonderful characters that I would love to meet again. You might need the tissues. This will keep you glued to the pages until the end. I loved it.
August 17, 2016
The Villain is book four in the Fall Series. I have not read any of the other books in the series but I really enjoyed reading this one. It grabbed me from the first page. Rosemary, Emily, and Benjamin were traveling to Montana with their parents when the train they were on was robbed by masked men. When they demanded their mothers’ jewelry, she refused and both father and mother were shot, leaving 19 year old Rosemary to care for her younger siblings with no money. Once they arrived at their new homestead, the New Yorkers were stunned by the humble hovel. The first night in their new home, an early blizzard hit and a hulking bear of a man literally fell through their porch roof, bleeding from several wounds. Well written and intriguing with a touch of time travel.
Read
August 17, 2016Have you ever wondered how those proper well brought up women would fare way out west? Each chapter begins with some snippet of etiquette, but the occurrences within the chapter make these more implausible. As the story develops the attitude of the heroine changes. This is very apparent as the book is written in the first person.
Themes involve courage, determination in the face of disaster, family relationships and the kindness of strangers.
Although it is a love story, there are some unusual twists that will keep you re adding until the end.
Explanation of Nicolas falling through the roof is not as clear as I'd like.
Themes involve courage, determination in the face of disaster, family relationships and the kindness of strangers.
Although it is a love story, there are some unusual twists that will keep you re adding until the end.
Explanation of Nicolas falling through the roof is not as clear as I'd like.
Want to read
July 31, 2016The villain was a fun, rather short story, set in the wild west. Book 4 in a series, and I enjoyed this without having read the other 3 instalments. If time allows, I will definitely read other parts of this series. Although the start of the story was somewhat confusing for me, the romance was strong and sweet, which kept my interest throughout. Especially considering the trials faced by women in that time in that setting, the story had an admirable amount of depth. Recommended as a strong, short read with clean romance and an interesting setting. Four strong stars!
August 2, 2016
I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
This book was not what I expected, but in a wonderful way. The special way of travelling is rather interesting, I’d be interested in reading more books in this universe for sure. Apart from that, I enjoyed the characters and thought that the narrative progressed well. I especially admire Rosemary’s strength; I cannot imagine how difficult it would have been to have to take care of two younger siblings in a new and unknown place after having your parents taken from you.
This book was not what I expected, but in a wonderful way. The special way of travelling is rather interesting, I’d be interested in reading more books in this universe for sure. Apart from that, I enjoyed the characters and thought that the narrative progressed well. I especially admire Rosemary’s strength; I cannot imagine how difficult it would have been to have to take care of two younger siblings in a new and unknown place after having your parents taken from you.
August 2, 2016
This book, wow. I'm not even sure where to start. I loved it. There had BEST be more books to come! Nicolas and Rosemary end up in quiet the situation. Maybe I am super slow, but I didn't catch on that there was a twist until it actually happened, but for me that's also the sign of a well written book. I loved the story and the twists and the kindness and forgiveness. The way the author wove the story and how, when I least expected it, there was yet another twist. FABULOUSLY written! Fabulous read!! Can't wait for more of the story!!
February 14, 2017
The reason why I gave this book 4 stars and not 5, was because in my opinion the book had high and low moments. The beginning was a bit slow for me. After that it became more interesting. Than I felt that too much was happening without much details which made the book confusing (the book is 166 pages long) and the ending was awesome. The characters were well built, but a bit stereotypical. I would recommend reading this book, as it had a nice message to it.
August 21, 2016
The book offers great characters and a little romance. The plot is well developed and is entertaining. The main female character is strong, and independent. I liked this book, but it was confusing starting the book in the middle of the story and trying to figure out what was going on. I have never been one for time travel books, but I would be interested in reading the beginning of this series.
August 17, 2016
I love love love the Wild West and Cowboys and things of that nature! I'm also a sucker for romance. Put those together, you have a great read! You easily fell in love with the characters, especially Nicolas! The story is mysterious, and seems to be tied with destiny and coincidence. I love how clean it is and the romance is adorable! Very good book!
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