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Darcy and... A Pride and Prejudice Variations Collection #2
For Peace of Mind: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
He's running away. She's glad he's gone. But fate has other plans.
Elizabeth Bennet has thrown away her one and only chance at marriage, or so her mother laments over and over again until finally, to restore a measure of peace to his house, Elizabeth's father sends her to London to stay with relatives.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has fled Netherfield and its enchanting neighbour and is hoping to hide away in town until his heart is no longer in danger of being lost to Elizabeth.
Neither expects to see the other. In fact, after having been so harshly insulted at the Assembly, Elizabeth rather hopes that with Darcy's departure from Netherfield, she has seen the last of the arrogant man.
However, it is not to be.
When a chance meeting throws the tantalizing Elizabeth and haughty Darcy together, how will each respond to the other? Will her opinion change? Will Darcy get a second chance? Or will the plans and desires of others keep them apart forever?
For Peace of Mind is just one of Leenie Brown's numerous Pride and Prejudice inspired stories. If you like well-written, sweet romance where love is given a second chance and triumphs over opposition, then you will love this story about claiming and clinging to love at all costs.
So, put the kettle on, grab your copy of For Peace of Mind, and slip into a world of sweet romantic indulgence today.
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just over 58,800 words344 paperback pages
Elizabeth Bennet has thrown away her one and only chance at marriage, or so her mother laments over and over again until finally, to restore a measure of peace to his house, Elizabeth's father sends her to London to stay with relatives.
Fitzwilliam Darcy has fled Netherfield and its enchanting neighbour and is hoping to hide away in town until his heart is no longer in danger of being lost to Elizabeth.
Neither expects to see the other. In fact, after having been so harshly insulted at the Assembly, Elizabeth rather hopes that with Darcy's departure from Netherfield, she has seen the last of the arrogant man.
However, it is not to be.
When a chance meeting throws the tantalizing Elizabeth and haughty Darcy together, how will each respond to the other? Will her opinion change? Will Darcy get a second chance? Or will the plans and desires of others keep them apart forever?
For Peace of Mind is just one of Leenie Brown's numerous Pride and Prejudice inspired stories. If you like well-written, sweet romance where love is given a second chance and triumphs over opposition, then you will love this story about claiming and clinging to love at all costs.
So, put the kettle on, grab your copy of For Peace of Mind, and slip into a world of sweet romantic indulgence today.
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Book
just over 58,800 words344 paperback pages
345 pages, Kindle Edition
First published June 10, 2015
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About the author
Leenie Brown
95 books112 followersLeenie Brown has always been a girl with an active imagination, which, while growing up, was both an asset, providing many hours of fun as she played out stories, and a liability, when her older sister and aunt would tell her frightening tales. At one time, they had her convinced Dracula lived in the trunk at the end of the bed she slept in when visiting her grandparents!
Although it has been years since she cowered in her bed in her grandparents’ basement, she still has an imagination which occasionally runs away with her, and she feeds it now as she did then ─ by reading!
Her heroes, when growing up, were authors, and the worlds they painted with words were (and still are) her favourite playgrounds! Now, as an adult, she spends much of her time in the Regency world, playing with the characters from her favourite Jane Austen novels and those of her own creation.
When she is not traipsing down a trail in an attempt to keep up with her imagination, Leenie resides in the beautiful province of Nova Scotia with her two sons and her very own Mr. Brown (a wonderful mix of all the best of Darcy, Bingley, and Edmund with a healthy dose of the teasing Mr. Tilney and just a dash of the scolding Mr. Knightley).
Although it has been years since she cowered in her bed in her grandparents’ basement, she still has an imagination which occasionally runs away with her, and she feeds it now as she did then ─ by reading!
Her heroes, when growing up, were authors, and the worlds they painted with words were (and still are) her favourite playgrounds! Now, as an adult, she spends much of her time in the Regency world, playing with the characters from her favourite Jane Austen novels and those of her own creation.
When she is not traipsing down a trail in an attempt to keep up with her imagination, Leenie resides in the beautiful province of Nova Scotia with her two sons and her very own Mr. Brown (a wonderful mix of all the best of Darcy, Bingley, and Edmund with a healthy dose of the teasing Mr. Tilney and just a dash of the scolding Mr. Knightley).
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January 14, 2022
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For Peace of Mind: A Pride and Prejudice Variation begins with Elizabeth being sent, along with Jane, to London after the Netherfield ball and her rejection of Mr. Collins’ proposal “for her own good and her father’s peace of mind."
On a shopping excursion, the ladies stop at a tea shop for chocolate and scones. Unbeknownst to them, this particular establishment is frequented by just the men who left varying, yet lasting, impressions on the Bennet sisters while visiting their home county of Hertfordshire. Plans are made to meet again and Mr. Darcy gets his second chance at a first impression.
Leenie Brown’s variation of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice is delightful. Full of witty banter between…well EVERYONE really, the author’s portrayal of the Gardiner and Matlock Family (coincidental connections galore) surrounding the main characters love story was magnificently done. Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy were not the only couple to get their happily ever after. I might have actually lost count of all the brilliant matches.
I am a rather honest and severe critic, especially after reading more than 180+ books in this genre. I do not usually do the "*** Received an Advance Reader Copy in exchange for an honest review ***" thing, as I believe most authors would not benefit from my doing so. Despite having never read this author’s first book - this is her second variation published - I decided to give it a try. What a happy surprise for my first experience at it!
I would recommend this particular variation to all Jane Austen Fan Fiction lovers. Be prepared to grin like a fool throughout the entire read.
*** Received an Advance Reader Copy/Gift from author - provided with no expectation of, or promise of a review (favourable or otherwise). ***
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For Peace of Mind: A Pride and Prejudice Variation begins with Elizabeth being sent, along with Jane, to London after the Netherfield ball and her rejection of Mr. Collins’ proposal “for her own good and her father’s peace of mind."
On a shopping excursion, the ladies stop at a tea shop for chocolate and scones. Unbeknownst to them, this particular establishment is frequented by just the men who left varying, yet lasting, impressions on the Bennet sisters while visiting their home county of Hertfordshire. Plans are made to meet again and Mr. Darcy gets his second chance at a first impression.
Leenie Brown’s variation of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice is delightful. Full of witty banter between…well EVERYONE really, the author’s portrayal of the Gardiner and Matlock Family (coincidental connections galore) surrounding the main characters love story was magnificently done. Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy were not the only couple to get their happily ever after. I might have actually lost count of all the brilliant matches.
I am a rather honest and severe critic, especially after reading more than 180+ books in this genre. I do not usually do the "*** Received an Advance Reader Copy in exchange for an honest review ***" thing, as I believe most authors would not benefit from my doing so. Despite having never read this author’s first book - this is her second variation published - I decided to give it a try. What a happy surprise for my first experience at it!
I would recommend this particular variation to all Jane Austen Fan Fiction lovers. Be prepared to grin like a fool throughout the entire read.
*** Received an Advance Reader Copy/Gift from author - provided with no expectation of, or promise of a review (favourable or otherwise). ***
My Library Notes:
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August 31, 2018
“There’s nothing more contagious than the laughter of young children; it doesn’t even have to matter what they’re laughing about.” Criss Jami, Killosophy
This was a delightful read, clean, quirky and with minimal angst. Although I enjoyed it, it did not have that staunch Regency feel that we are so accustomed to in our JAFF. As one reviewer stated, it sounded too modern. If you didn’t already know the time period, I think you would have trouble establishing the actual period by simply listening to the language and the interactions between the characters.
The Gardiner children stole the show and were the stars of the story. Anyone with a heart for children will simply adore these little people. Little Andrew and Michael Gardiner soon had Darcy [and the reader] wrapped around their little chubby fingers. Michael loved boats and Andrew was striving to be a young gentleman. His language was so sweet and cute as he attempted to pronounce a phrase, he had heard the grown-ups use, with his own literal interpretation. He and Elizabeth were caught in a scuffle with Wickham [that rat bastard] and they were injured. Master Andrew then came up with a new name for Wickham. Adorable. Darcy’s heart simply melted at the feet of the young Gardner girls. Oh, my, he will make a most excellent father. This part will simply melt you heart.
The camaraderie between the characters was really amusing. Everyone worked together to thwart Wickham, Caroline and Lady Catherine. They were all welcomed as friends, accepting of each other regardless of station or position in life, helped each other, shared back stories, plotted and planned together, laughed and joked, teased, and tormented each other as they would a brother or sister. It was like one big happy family. Only we know that is not real life.
Lord and Lady Matlock have not always been seen as the coolest parents on the block. They have been portrayed in every way possible in JAFF variations. In this story, all they wanted was for their two sons to be happy. Lord Matlock had to occasionally flex his ‘head of the family’ muscles where Lady Catherine was concerned, but he still was a most excellent father. He respected Mr. Gardiner, his work, his financial prowess and his wisdom in all things business. He understood that he would receive flak from his peers because Mr. Gardiner was in trade, even though, those same peers, benefited from Mr. Gardiner’s wisdom and financial advice.
Elizabeth, as it turns out, had been a tom-boy growing up. According to the stories, that everyone in Hertfordshire was familiar with, she played with the boys and was as good as, or better than most, at any game in which they played. Elizabeth was not alone in her playing as she had Jane and Charlotte as her side-kicks, or seconds, when there were challenges that had to be met. This rough house ability came in handy when a certain person, whose name-we-will-not-speak, decided to play rough.
All in all, I really enjoyed the touching moments. I liked the familiarity between the characters. If you have a heart for little kids, this will charm your socks off. These little guys were awesomely cute and adorable, and so brave. There is nothing that will grip your heart more than a child attempting to be brave and protective. Whew! That got me.
This was a delightful read, clean, quirky and with minimal angst. Although I enjoyed it, it did not have that staunch Regency feel that we are so accustomed to in our JAFF. As one reviewer stated, it sounded too modern. If you didn’t already know the time period, I think you would have trouble establishing the actual period by simply listening to the language and the interactions between the characters.
The Gardiner children stole the show and were the stars of the story. Anyone with a heart for children will simply adore these little people. Little Andrew and Michael Gardiner soon had Darcy [and the reader] wrapped around their little chubby fingers. Michael loved boats and Andrew was striving to be a young gentleman. His language was so sweet and cute as he attempted to pronounce a phrase, he had heard the grown-ups use, with his own literal interpretation. He and Elizabeth were caught in a scuffle with Wickham [that rat bastard] and they were injured. Master Andrew then came up with a new name for Wickham. Adorable. Darcy’s heart simply melted at the feet of the young Gardner girls. Oh, my, he will make a most excellent father. This part will simply melt you heart.
The camaraderie between the characters was really amusing. Everyone worked together to thwart Wickham, Caroline and Lady Catherine. They were all welcomed as friends, accepting of each other regardless of station or position in life, helped each other, shared back stories, plotted and planned together, laughed and joked, teased, and tormented each other as they would a brother or sister. It was like one big happy family. Only we know that is not real life.
Lord and Lady Matlock have not always been seen as the coolest parents on the block. They have been portrayed in every way possible in JAFF variations. In this story, all they wanted was for their two sons to be happy. Lord Matlock had to occasionally flex his ‘head of the family’ muscles where Lady Catherine was concerned, but he still was a most excellent father. He respected Mr. Gardiner, his work, his financial prowess and his wisdom in all things business. He understood that he would receive flak from his peers because Mr. Gardiner was in trade, even though, those same peers, benefited from Mr. Gardiner’s wisdom and financial advice.
Elizabeth, as it turns out, had been a tom-boy growing up. According to the stories, that everyone in Hertfordshire was familiar with, she played with the boys and was as good as, or better than most, at any game in which they played. Elizabeth was not alone in her playing as she had Jane and Charlotte as her side-kicks, or seconds, when there were challenges that had to be met. This rough house ability came in handy when a certain person, whose name-we-will-not-speak, decided to play rough.
All in all, I really enjoyed the touching moments. I liked the familiarity between the characters. If you have a heart for little kids, this will charm your socks off. These little guys were awesomely cute and adorable, and so brave. There is nothing that will grip your heart more than a child attempting to be brave and protective. Whew! That got me.
August 26, 2019
A different path for ODC
A delightful novella.
My only suggestion would have to rewrite the incident in the park. Wickham would have been wary of Lizzy after what happened at the bookstore and not allow the time and conversation between Lizzy and Jane. I think I would have rather seen Jane use a rock or some knitting needles on W and have Lizzy finish Mr. Wickedman off.
Great read.
A delightful novella.
My only suggestion would have to rewrite the incident in the park. Wickham would have been wary of Lizzy after what happened at the bookstore and not allow the time and conversation between Lizzy and Jane. I think I would have rather seen Jane use a rock or some knitting needles on W and have Lizzy finish Mr. Wickedman off.
Great read.
July 3, 2015
3.5 stars
The language in this story is modern and I must say the characters and the repartee seemed much like a gathering at a fraternity party at times. Everyone was very open about their feelings and about their observations and then their plans. I found little angst, of which I like a lot. So, if you like a perfectly sweet and straight forward romance with few misunderstanding and little, if any, pitfalls on the way to HEA, then this is the story for you.
As we read in the book description or in the sample, Elizabeth and Jane are sent to London, by their father, after Elizabeth turns down Mr. Collins proposal and Mrs. Bennet cannot stop haranguing Elizabeth about her ungratefulness, etc. Charlotte and her sister, Mariah, soon follow as Lady Lucas is aware of that event and wants to protect Charlotte from those same advances. As another review stated, there are just too many chance connections and coincidences in this story. Darcy and Lord Matlock have business arrangements with Mr. Gardiner. The Gardiners are aware of Wickham's propensities due to a family circumstance. Elizabeth has "martial arts" skills and Jane stands as her "second". These are not characters from canon.
What I did like about this tale is the relationships described between Elizabeth and the four Gardiner children, especially Master Andrew and then Darcy very comfortably also entering into playful and teasing relationship with those same children. Loved “standing under the gauge at the end of a court”. Those moments of interaction were precious.
Now…"Who are you and what have you done with our Mary?” Mary and Anne was completely different people in this story…not that I didn’t like them, but they certainly acted out of turn. Good for them! One found her voice and the other her backbone…or maybe each found both.
Everyone liked everyone else it seemed except for "Wickedman" and Miss Bingley. But what else did you expect? I did like when Lady Matlock first met Elizabeth and was checking off the good qualities she observed against an internal list. Even standing up to the ladies in the ton met with approval as Lady Matlock observed Elizabeth handled Caroline’s barbs.
Everyone seems to find their mate, if not their soul mate.
Match the correct partners:
Jane.......... Col. Fitzwilliam
Elizabeth.......... Mr. Collins
Mary.......... Mr. Darcy
Anne.......... Mr. Bingley
Charlotte.......... Thaddeus Fitzwilliam, Viscount Bladen
The language in this story is modern and I must say the characters and the repartee seemed much like a gathering at a fraternity party at times. Everyone was very open about their feelings and about their observations and then their plans. I found little angst, of which I like a lot. So, if you like a perfectly sweet and straight forward romance with few misunderstanding and little, if any, pitfalls on the way to HEA, then this is the story for you.
As we read in the book description or in the sample, Elizabeth and Jane are sent to London, by their father, after Elizabeth turns down Mr. Collins proposal and Mrs. Bennet cannot stop haranguing Elizabeth about her ungratefulness, etc. Charlotte and her sister, Mariah, soon follow as Lady Lucas is aware of that event and wants to protect Charlotte from those same advances. As another review stated, there are just too many chance connections and coincidences in this story. Darcy and Lord Matlock have business arrangements with Mr. Gardiner. The Gardiners are aware of Wickham's propensities due to a family circumstance. Elizabeth has "martial arts" skills and Jane stands as her "second". These are not characters from canon.
What I did like about this tale is the relationships described between Elizabeth and the four Gardiner children, especially Master Andrew and then Darcy very comfortably also entering into playful and teasing relationship with those same children. Loved “standing under the gauge at the end of a court”. Those moments of interaction were precious.
Now…"Who are you and what have you done with our Mary?” Mary and Anne was completely different people in this story…not that I didn’t like them, but they certainly acted out of turn. Good for them! One found her voice and the other her backbone…or maybe each found both.
Everyone liked everyone else it seemed except for "Wickedman" and Miss Bingley. But what else did you expect? I did like when Lady Matlock first met Elizabeth and was checking off the good qualities she observed against an internal list. Even standing up to the ladies in the ton met with approval as Lady Matlock observed Elizabeth handled Caroline’s barbs.
Everyone seems to find their mate, if not their soul mate.
Match the correct partners:
Jane.......... Col. Fitzwilliam
Elizabeth.......... Mr. Collins
Mary.......... Mr. Darcy
Anne.......... Mr. Bingley
Charlotte.......... Thaddeus Fitzwilliam, Viscount Bladen
April 13, 2017
For Peace of Mind.
Very sweet, entertaining story by Leenie Brown who brought us that wonderful Oxford Cottage. This story starts when Lizzie is sent to London with Jane after she refuses Mr. Collins silly proposal. Aunt Gardiner, Jane and Lizzie fun into Mr. Darcy, Colonel Fitzwilliam, and Mr. Bingley in a coffee/sweet shop and it turns out the men are all familiar with Mr. Gardiner, as business associates. The romances all get on track with a lot of comic stories and some angst but really is a clever, Enjoyable Read.
Very sweet, entertaining story by Leenie Brown who brought us that wonderful Oxford Cottage. This story starts when Lizzie is sent to London with Jane after she refuses Mr. Collins silly proposal. Aunt Gardiner, Jane and Lizzie fun into Mr. Darcy, Colonel Fitzwilliam, and Mr. Bingley in a coffee/sweet shop and it turns out the men are all familiar with Mr. Gardiner, as business associates. The romances all get on track with a lot of comic stories and some angst but really is a clever, Enjoyable Read.
November 13, 2016
A sweet story full of love and humour.
Elizabeth's refusal of Collins precipitates her being sent to London with Jane for her father's peace of mind. A chance encounter with Darcy and Colonel F has Elizabeth see Darcy in a new light, which continues to brighten for them both as time and events progess. There are also some rather interesting ties between the Fitzwilliams and the Gardiners, but most especially between the Bingley and Gardiners. But nothing can stop Darcy and Elizabeth this time, not Caroline nor Lady Catherine, not even Wickham.
The romance is everything sweet, but I especially love the humour in this book. All the characters, canon and original, participate fully, even one of the aforementioned detractors eventually. This book exemplifies that love, humour and loyalty are the true ties that bind.
Elizabeth's refusal of Collins precipitates her being sent to London with Jane for her father's peace of mind. A chance encounter with Darcy and Colonel F has Elizabeth see Darcy in a new light, which continues to brighten for them both as time and events progess. There are also some rather interesting ties between the Fitzwilliams and the Gardiners, but most especially between the Bingley and Gardiners. But nothing can stop Darcy and Elizabeth this time, not Caroline nor Lady Catherine, not even Wickham.
The romance is everything sweet, but I especially love the humour in this book. All the characters, canon and original, participate fully, even one of the aforementioned detractors eventually. This book exemplifies that love, humour and loyalty are the true ties that bind.
September 23, 2017
Just a Lovely Story
This book was the one that introduced me to the writing of Leenie Brown. It remains one of my all time favourites, and is one of my go to books when I need a lift. It starts with Lizzy being sent to town with her sister Jane after Mr Collins failed proposal. Lizzy, Jane and Aunt Gardiner meet Mr Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam by accident in a tea shop and the story progresses from there. The Gardiner children are much involved in the story and are delightful. There is much in this story that charms, but all is not just happiness. Wickham appears and is his usual nasty self. Overall, this is a delightful book and one I have read many times.
This book was the one that introduced me to the writing of Leenie Brown. It remains one of my all time favourites, and is one of my go to books when I need a lift. It starts with Lizzy being sent to town with her sister Jane after Mr Collins failed proposal. Lizzy, Jane and Aunt Gardiner meet Mr Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam by accident in a tea shop and the story progresses from there. The Gardiner children are much involved in the story and are delightful. There is much in this story that charms, but all is not just happiness. Wickham appears and is his usual nasty self. Overall, this is a delightful book and one I have read many times.
August 4, 2016
Love is in the air!! Love is all around!! John Paul John and Wet Wet Wet’s songs’ titles totally reflect this book. This book is about love and not only the love between Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet. There is a lot of love to share!
I received a Advance Reader Copy in exchange of an honest review. I got the book some time ago but I made the mistake of not passing the file to my kindle and it was still waiting on my email. Fortunately, I found it, read it and I had a great time:)
When Elizabeth refuses to marry Mr. Collins, her dad decides that it will be wise to send Elizabeth to London with Jane… for his peace of mind.
There she encounters Mr. Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam during a shopping outing with Jane and their aunts. Destiny comes to show that they actually know each other but maybe not in person as Darcy does businesses with Mr. Gardiner as well as Richard’s father, Lord Matlock. Mr. Gardiner is well esteemed and respected and he has a extremely important role on Mr. Bingley’s success…
Meetings come along and I will just point out that the encounters are lovely and endearing not only for the sparks but also for the presence of Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner’s offspring. There is a little gentleman who takes care of “his Lizzy” and does not allow anyone to approach her. Mr. Darcy has a powerful rival or adversary that he needs to prove his worth to in order to “be allowed” to court her.
However, although the vast majority of the book is about happiness, love, teasing, friendship and family, we need a baddie, and who will be a “better baddie” in this story than the scoundrel and blackguard of George Wickham?? He is despicable, I cannot even start describing his role in this story!! Even if the “length” of his part is not very long, it is more than enough!!
Back to a happy note, I mentioned teasing, happiness, family, love and friendship because you will find a lot from the very beginning. It is quite refreshing to read Richard and Charles teasing Darcy and Darcy not being all serious, he starts from the very beginning to be a bit more open and later on the book he can be fun with answers to comment. What we can see is three male friends who even share a laugh or can talk a bit about their hearts. In addition there are some stories about the eldest Bennet sisters when growing up and being a handful, always within reason but not letting others, mainly boys, to underestimate them.
I will just recommend you to read this charming book where love is essential and friendship and family are key.
I will leave you with a couple of teasers:
Lady Catherine can surprise you after being confronted by Elizabeth and being threaten to be loved against her will.
A short dialogue between Elizabeth and Darcy:
“Why Mr. Darcy, ” she said, colour staining her cheeks, “are you flirting with me, sir?”
“I believe I am, Miss Elizabeth.”
I received a Advance Reader Copy in exchange of an honest review. I got the book some time ago but I made the mistake of not passing the file to my kindle and it was still waiting on my email. Fortunately, I found it, read it and I had a great time:)
When Elizabeth refuses to marry Mr. Collins, her dad decides that it will be wise to send Elizabeth to London with Jane… for his peace of mind.
There she encounters Mr. Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam during a shopping outing with Jane and their aunts. Destiny comes to show that they actually know each other but maybe not in person as Darcy does businesses with Mr. Gardiner as well as Richard’s father, Lord Matlock. Mr. Gardiner is well esteemed and respected and he has a extremely important role on Mr. Bingley’s success…
Meetings come along and I will just point out that the encounters are lovely and endearing not only for the sparks but also for the presence of Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner’s offspring. There is a little gentleman who takes care of “his Lizzy” and does not allow anyone to approach her. Mr. Darcy has a powerful rival or adversary that he needs to prove his worth to in order to “be allowed” to court her.
However, although the vast majority of the book is about happiness, love, teasing, friendship and family, we need a baddie, and who will be a “better baddie” in this story than the scoundrel and blackguard of George Wickham?? He is despicable, I cannot even start describing his role in this story!! Even if the “length” of his part is not very long, it is more than enough!!
Back to a happy note, I mentioned teasing, happiness, family, love and friendship because you will find a lot from the very beginning. It is quite refreshing to read Richard and Charles teasing Darcy and Darcy not being all serious, he starts from the very beginning to be a bit more open and later on the book he can be fun with answers to comment. What we can see is three male friends who even share a laugh or can talk a bit about their hearts. In addition there are some stories about the eldest Bennet sisters when growing up and being a handful, always within reason but not letting others, mainly boys, to underestimate them.
I will just recommend you to read this charming book where love is essential and friendship and family are key.
I will leave you with a couple of teasers:
Lady Catherine can surprise you after being confronted by Elizabeth and being threaten to be loved against her will.
A short dialogue between Elizabeth and Darcy:
“Why Mr. Darcy, ” she said, colour staining her cheeks, “are you flirting with me, sir?”
“I believe I am, Miss Elizabeth.”
February 4, 2023
Where do I begin. How about here: period books like this one have a difficult task when it comes to keeping the authenticity of the period. It’s pretty much impossible because there are so many customs, traditions and a specific way of looking at life and the world that is so different from current times. Read Servants by Lucy Lethbridge and you’ll see why books, movies and shows (like Downton Abbey, for example) could never be truly authentic if they wish to draw in large audiences/readers. Having said that, I appreciate it when authors make as many attempts as possible to keep the story believable, if not authentic to the time period. This book does none of that. In fact, it borders on being a stereotypical “romance novel”. It’s so filled with inappropriate comments, double entendre, inappropriate language that would never have happened in that time.
Mr. Bennet sends Elizabeth and Jane to stay with the Gardeners because Mrs. Bennet is driving him crazy complaining about Elizabeth having turned down Mrs. Collins. In a very strange series of coincidences, it is early on discovered that Gardener bought out his former partner some years back, making his partner very rich and causing him to move his family (the partner) from trade into the life of a landed gentleman. The partner dies at some point before the book starts and passes his estate on to his son wishing that he become a gentleman of leisure. Sound familiar? The son is Bingley. So Gardener is good friends with Bingley, a fact neither of the Bennet sisters know until the evening they arrive in town and Bingley comes to dinner at the Gardeners. Mrs. and Mr. Gardener didn’t know either and further divulge that they (surprise) know Lord Matlock and, subsequently Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam! Neither the Matlocks nor the Darcys have any aversion to trade; they are, uncharacteristically of the period, happy to stand in the face of censure from the ton because of their great friendship with the Gardeners. So everyone is acquainted and Darcy and Bingley begin anew their courtships of Elizabeth and Jane, respectively. It’s obvious that the author loves children and familial scenes, because the Gardener children (again, uncharacteristically of the period) play a huge role in this book. They are constantly being brought in by (or escaping from) Nanny, and all of the inhabitants of this book are continuously thrilled to see them and happy to spend a great deal of time devoted to their happiness. I mention this here because it’s quite distracting to the story; long pages with getting sweets for the children, buying them presents, Darcy having to gain the male children’s “approval” before he courts Lizzy (because one in particular is very protective of her), on and on. Sheesh!
The story progresses with the courtings of Darcy and Elizabeth, Bingley and Jane, Ann and Thadeus (the eldest Matlock son), Fitzwilliam and Charlotte and Mary and Mr. Collins. The author fit quite of lot of different pairings in an extremely short amount of time. We are to believe that these couples have met, fallen in love and married all in less than a year, most within a couple of months.
The final thing that made this book difficult for me was how Elizabeth is portrayed as a woman who has learned to physically defend herself against villains like Wickham. She throws herself in front of a bullet when Wickham attempts to kidnap her and he fires his gun hitting her arm and grazing her young cousin. But that doesn’t stop her from deftly throwing a large book at his head, rendering him unconscious. Later he escapes prison and attempts to kidnap her again, only to find that both Lizzy and Jane calmly and efficiently physically subdue him and have him on the ground and bound by the time Darcy and Fitz arrive. What?!
The writing style was strange as well. For example, Lizzy and Georgiana are in a room embroidering, I have no idea what house they’re in because there is no explanation of neither the surroundings nor which room they’re in. They continue talking and, all of a sudden, they’re in a carriage with no segue. This happens all the time throughout the book. I’m sorry to write such a bad review, I’m sure it was hard work for the author. But this book had no redeeming qualities about it.
Mr. Bennet sends Elizabeth and Jane to stay with the Gardeners because Mrs. Bennet is driving him crazy complaining about Elizabeth having turned down Mrs. Collins. In a very strange series of coincidences, it is early on discovered that Gardener bought out his former partner some years back, making his partner very rich and causing him to move his family (the partner) from trade into the life of a landed gentleman. The partner dies at some point before the book starts and passes his estate on to his son wishing that he become a gentleman of leisure. Sound familiar? The son is Bingley. So Gardener is good friends with Bingley, a fact neither of the Bennet sisters know until the evening they arrive in town and Bingley comes to dinner at the Gardeners. Mrs. and Mr. Gardener didn’t know either and further divulge that they (surprise) know Lord Matlock and, subsequently Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam! Neither the Matlocks nor the Darcys have any aversion to trade; they are, uncharacteristically of the period, happy to stand in the face of censure from the ton because of their great friendship with the Gardeners. So everyone is acquainted and Darcy and Bingley begin anew their courtships of Elizabeth and Jane, respectively. It’s obvious that the author loves children and familial scenes, because the Gardener children (again, uncharacteristically of the period) play a huge role in this book. They are constantly being brought in by (or escaping from) Nanny, and all of the inhabitants of this book are continuously thrilled to see them and happy to spend a great deal of time devoted to their happiness. I mention this here because it’s quite distracting to the story; long pages with getting sweets for the children, buying them presents, Darcy having to gain the male children’s “approval” before he courts Lizzy (because one in particular is very protective of her), on and on. Sheesh!
The story progresses with the courtings of Darcy and Elizabeth, Bingley and Jane, Ann and Thadeus (the eldest Matlock son), Fitzwilliam and Charlotte and Mary and Mr. Collins. The author fit quite of lot of different pairings in an extremely short amount of time. We are to believe that these couples have met, fallen in love and married all in less than a year, most within a couple of months.
The final thing that made this book difficult for me was how Elizabeth is portrayed as a woman who has learned to physically defend herself against villains like Wickham. She throws herself in front of a bullet when Wickham attempts to kidnap her and he fires his gun hitting her arm and grazing her young cousin. But that doesn’t stop her from deftly throwing a large book at his head, rendering him unconscious. Later he escapes prison and attempts to kidnap her again, only to find that both Lizzy and Jane calmly and efficiently physically subdue him and have him on the ground and bound by the time Darcy and Fitz arrive. What?!
The writing style was strange as well. For example, Lizzy and Georgiana are in a room embroidering, I have no idea what house they’re in because there is no explanation of neither the surroundings nor which room they’re in. They continue talking and, all of a sudden, they’re in a carriage with no segue. This happens all the time throughout the book. I’m sorry to write such a bad review, I’m sure it was hard work for the author. But this book had no redeeming qualities about it.
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November 9, 2019
Avid Reader
How long have I had this book in my Kindle without realizing it? That's what happens when you purchase more books than you have time to read. Hopefully, upon retirement,, I will be able to catch up. Bingley had every intention of returning to Netherfield. Jane and Elizabeth run into Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam in a sweets shop in London. Darcy finds out that he knows Mr. Gardenier, along with most of the ton who have invested with him. The Matlocks approve of Elizabeth and Jane, so Caroline doesn't have a leg to stand on. Wickham is dispatched, and Lady Catherine eventually warns to Elizabeth during a five-year period. Four matches develop in Hertfordshire leading to four happy marriages.
How long have I had this book in my Kindle without realizing it? That's what happens when you purchase more books than you have time to read. Hopefully, upon retirement,, I will be able to catch up. Bingley had every intention of returning to Netherfield. Jane and Elizabeth run into Darcy and Colonel Fitzwilliam in a sweets shop in London. Darcy finds out that he knows Mr. Gardenier, along with most of the ton who have invested with him. The Matlocks approve of Elizabeth and Jane, so Caroline doesn't have a leg to stand on. Wickham is dispatched, and Lady Catherine eventually warns to Elizabeth during a five-year period. Four matches develop in Hertfordshire leading to four happy marriages.
March 17, 2024
This variation had some nice surprises I've not seen before. That made it more fun to read. The book is definitely longer than Darcy & Elizabeth's relationship being established. Why? Because there are 5 match-ups in this story. Everyone is getting a happily-ever-after. Except Wickham. He doesn't get one but he doesn't deserve one either as we all know.
There was lots of teasing, much of it innuendo which was perhaps inappropriate for them but also on the amusing side.
In this story Wickham is well known to be evil from the onset of the story. Hilariously, Mrs. B's nerves are kinda the catalyst for D & E to get their second chance at love instead of one of the things that moved to pull them apart.
It was an enjoyable read.
Sex: innuendo
Language: no
Violence: yes
There was lots of teasing, much of it innuendo which was perhaps inappropriate for them but also on the amusing side.
In this story Wickham is well known to be evil from the onset of the story. Hilariously, Mrs. B's nerves are kinda the catalyst for D & E to get their second chance at love instead of one of the things that moved to pull them apart.
It was an enjoyable read.
Sex: innuendo
Language: no
Violence: yes
February 8, 2023
Jane is heartbroken, and for their father's peace of mind, Elizabeth is sent with her to town.
A chance meeting with Mr. Darcy and a new acquaintance, in the form of Darcy's cousin, Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, will answer some of Elizabeth's questions about both Mr. Darcy and Wickham. In this story ,we find out about Elizabeth's and Darcy's families and childhoods. We are also given more insight into the profidery of Wickham. There's danger , laughter ,and intrigue . Finally, Wickham gets his comeuppance from a surprising source. I found myself reading furiously because I just had to know what would happen. I'm sure you'll enjoy this wonderful story.
A chance meeting with Mr. Darcy and a new acquaintance, in the form of Darcy's cousin, Colonel Richard Fitzwilliam, will answer some of Elizabeth's questions about both Mr. Darcy and Wickham. In this story ,we find out about Elizabeth's and Darcy's families and childhoods. We are also given more insight into the profidery of Wickham. There's danger , laughter ,and intrigue . Finally, Wickham gets his comeuppance from a surprising source. I found myself reading furiously because I just had to know what would happen. I'm sure you'll enjoy this wonderful story.
September 1, 2023
Well.
To me this books characters were incredibly OOC. And their language and conversations were far too modern for that time era. That being said, I still liked it alright. It was refreshing for the characters to all be more open and forward with each other. I still think that could have been accomplished within the language/conversations of that time vs now. The time jumps with no indication of time jumps were a little jarring. The Wickham stuff seemed forced. And Lizzy/Darcy went from standoffish to hearteyes-ILY and openly "dating" in front of everyone FAR too fast (like within the first couple chapters which only covered like 2 days total).
To me this books characters were incredibly OOC. And their language and conversations were far too modern for that time era. That being said, I still liked it alright. It was refreshing for the characters to all be more open and forward with each other. I still think that could have been accomplished within the language/conversations of that time vs now. The time jumps with no indication of time jumps were a little jarring. The Wickham stuff seemed forced. And Lizzy/Darcy went from standoffish to hearteyes-ILY and openly "dating" in front of everyone FAR too fast (like within the first couple chapters which only covered like 2 days total).
June 22, 2020
A Sugary Sweet Variation
After Elizabeth rejects Mr. Collins’ proposal and to avoid Mrs. Bennet’s vexations, Mr. Bennet sends Elizabeth to London along with Jane. They eventually encounter Darcy and Bingley and this sweet story goes from there. A couple of Wickham encounters are quickly resolved. It’s very hard not to enjoy a Leenie Brown variation. Always a pleasure to read, this one especially delighted me with the teasing banter among the primary male characters. All the couples get their happy ending. If you enjoy a very low angst, happy story, this one’s for you.
After Elizabeth rejects Mr. Collins’ proposal and to avoid Mrs. Bennet’s vexations, Mr. Bennet sends Elizabeth to London along with Jane. They eventually encounter Darcy and Bingley and this sweet story goes from there. A couple of Wickham encounters are quickly resolved. It’s very hard not to enjoy a Leenie Brown variation. Always a pleasure to read, this one especially delighted me with the teasing banter among the primary male characters. All the couples get their happy ending. If you enjoy a very low angst, happy story, this one’s for you.
August 10, 2023
This is one of my favorite books written by Leenie Brown. I love the beginning in London. How they meet again and are falling more and more in love. There are so many sweet moments! I love how the Gardiner-children are put in the plot. I think you all will love them!
If you want a sweet story with a brave Elizabeth and wonderful Darcy, this is it! They clear all misunderstanding pretty early. There are some problems caused by Wickham and Lady Catherine, but they are dealt with masterly.
If you want a sweet story with a brave Elizabeth and wonderful Darcy, this is it! They clear all misunderstanding pretty early. There are some problems caused by Wickham and Lady Catherine, but they are dealt with masterly.
March 18, 2023
so sweet!
I enjoyed this book very much! I have enjoyed every Leenie Brown book I have read, though this one, several times, did not quite hit the high notes. Never enough to even think of stopping, just not quite as enjoyable. I loved Darcy and the others, but Lizzy was just a bit too… much?
I still finished feeling lifted and happy, though.
I enjoyed this book very much! I have enjoyed every Leenie Brown book I have read, though this one, several times, did not quite hit the high notes. Never enough to even think of stopping, just not quite as enjoyable. I loved Darcy and the others, but Lizzy was just a bit too… much?
I still finished feeling lifted and happy, though.
September 17, 2023
This was a delightful variant as Elizabeth becomes a hero, Jane is her second. Love prevails and we get all the happy endings we wished for despite some of the angst of either Miss Bingley Or Mr Wickedman - but not too much angst. The witty dialogues between some of the sharp-tongued female antagonists was very creative.
April 21, 2024
Great Darcy and Lizzy “fix”
I really enjoyed this variation-with so much focus on Darcy and Lizzy in different sorts of ways. Watching so many familiar characters have much more intimate connections revealed was very satisfying. Themes of family and making sacrifices to protect others just made the HEA in the future all the sweeter.
I really enjoyed this variation-with so much focus on Darcy and Lizzy in different sorts of ways. Watching so many familiar characters have much more intimate connections revealed was very satisfying. Themes of family and making sacrifices to protect others just made the HEA in the future all the sweeter.
March 10, 2020
Truly remarkable
I don't even know where to begin.. This was truly an amazing variation. Elizabeth was terrific, Darcy was strong and amazing. This is one you definitely have to read. Loved this.
I don't even know where to begin.. This was truly an amazing variation. Elizabeth was terrific, Darcy was strong and amazing. This is one you definitely have to read. Loved this.
December 14, 2022
Delightful
Engaging variation. Well written and thought through storyline. Some characters seemed to receive less attention than others, but the main characters progressed nicely. Enjoy.
Engaging variation. Well written and thought through storyline. Some characters seemed to receive less attention than others, but the main characters progressed nicely. Enjoy.
July 29, 2020
Charming
I find this author charming and her sense of humor delightful. I enjoy the way that she fleshes out the characters created by Jane Austin.
I find this author charming and her sense of humor delightful. I enjoy the way that she fleshes out the characters created by Jane Austin.
March 21, 2022
This book's peppy tone grated on my nerves.
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January 6, 2023dnf -- 49%
Not a fan of the author's style: imo it's unwitty, plain, and kind of cheesy.
It is a waste of time continuing to read.
Not a fan of the author's style: imo it's unwitty, plain, and kind of cheesy.
It is a waste of time continuing to read.
March 19, 2023
Lots of fun
Some good battles, lots of romance, quite a few weddings. A feel good story, family felicity abounds. Think I need to add the paper back to my small collection.
Some good battles, lots of romance, quite a few weddings. A feel good story, family felicity abounds. Think I need to add the paper back to my small collection.
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March 18, 2017Uncle Gardiner Bought Out the Bingleys!
This is perhaps my favorite P&P variation. It is clean and yet contains excitement in dealing with Wickham and Lady Catherine. Ms Brown knows how to engage you in the plotline and keep your interest throughout.
This is perhaps my favorite P&P variation. It is clean and yet contains excitement in dealing with Wickham and Lady Catherine. Ms Brown knows how to engage you in the plotline and keep your interest throughout.
June 13, 2015
I received an advanced copy in exchange for an honest review. Anything you read here is solely my opinion based upon reading this book. I’m going to start off by saying this is the first book that I have read by this author and it was the best choice I ever made. I thoroughly enjoyed this book. Ms. Brown takes P&P and makes it in a way her own. For Peace of Mind starts off with Elizabeth and Jane Bennet heading off to London. What could chase these ladies away after the Netherfield ball you may ask? One word: Collins. Mr. Collins has proposed to Elizabeth and she rejects him. She and Jane are sent off to London for Lizzy’s own good and Mr. Bennet’s peace of mind. Once the ladies become settled at the Gardiner’s they go on a shopping trip. On this particular shopping excursion, the ladies stop at a tea shop for chocolate and scones. Unbeknownst to them, this particular establishment is frequented by Mr. Darcy and Col. Fitzwilliam. Elizabeth talked to her aunt and agreed to let the past be the past and give Mr. Darcy a second chance. Plans are made to meet again and Mr. Darcy gets his second chance at a first impression. During that same day Mr. Wickham is mentioned and Mrs. Gardiner tells her nieces that he is not a very good man. Mr. Gardiner writes to Mr. Bennet about Wickham and the danger that they may be in if her does not take care. Of course no one ever bothers to check Lydia runs her mouth in front of Mr. Wickham. She mentions how Darcy and Lizzy are such good friends, and continues to insult Darcy. This one event starts off a whole chain of events, both fortunate and very unfortunate. I’m going to stop myself right here before I give away the rest of the story. If I give away the plot, that would give the whole book away and then what's the point of reading it? Let’s just say I couldn’t put it put and burnt some of my dinner in the process. Opps! Also there were some absolutely brilliant matches made in this book. I am very glad I read this book and I’m eagerly looking forward to reading her future works as well as reading her debut novel: Oxford Cottage.
June 1, 2015
Received an advanced copy in exchange for an honest review
So to begin with this is not a very long variation at all. It is less than 200 pages. I believe my kindle said it was 190 pages all together. So this story starts with the Gardiners, Jane and Lizzy traveling to London because Elizabeth refused Mr. Collins offer of marriage and her mother is very vexed with her. Mr. Bennet writes to the Gardiners and asks them to up their visit and take the two oldest back to London with them. During a shopping trip they run across Darcy at a tea shop along with Colonel Fitzwilliam. During that same day Mr. Wickham is mentioned and Mrs. Gardiner tells her nieces that he is not a very good man. Mr. Bennet receives a letter about him and Lydia runs her mouth in front of him. This starts off a whole chain of events. But I'm not going to say anymore about the plot as that would give the whole book away and then what's the point of reading it?
I will admit that I started this book as soon as I received it and I couldn't put it down. Which accounts for me writing a review for it the same day I got it. I enjoyed this book as much as I enjoyed Ms. Brown's debut novel. This time I didn't find any typos or missing words. lol. Any self respecting JAFF fan should add this book to their collection. I'm eagerly awaiting any more books Ms. Brown decides to write.
Rating: ★★★★★
You can preorder this book on amazon.
So to begin with this is not a very long variation at all. It is less than 200 pages. I believe my kindle said it was 190 pages all together. So this story starts with the Gardiners, Jane and Lizzy traveling to London because Elizabeth refused Mr. Collins offer of marriage and her mother is very vexed with her. Mr. Bennet writes to the Gardiners and asks them to up their visit and take the two oldest back to London with them. During a shopping trip they run across Darcy at a tea shop along with Colonel Fitzwilliam. During that same day Mr. Wickham is mentioned and Mrs. Gardiner tells her nieces that he is not a very good man. Mr. Bennet receives a letter about him and Lydia runs her mouth in front of him. This starts off a whole chain of events. But I'm not going to say anymore about the plot as that would give the whole book away and then what's the point of reading it?
I will admit that I started this book as soon as I received it and I couldn't put it down. Which accounts for me writing a review for it the same day I got it. I enjoyed this book as much as I enjoyed Ms. Brown's debut novel. This time I didn't find any typos or missing words. lol. Any self respecting JAFF fan should add this book to their collection. I'm eagerly awaiting any more books Ms. Brown decides to write.
Rating: ★★★★★
You can preorder this book on amazon.
July 19, 2015
In this version Elizabeth and Jane are sent to London to stay with the Gardiners after Elizabeth turns down Collins proposal of marriage. Darcy does much business with Mr Gardiner and Bingleys business associate is Mr Gardiner , therefore, the Gardiners hold high opinions of both men. Mrs Gardiner convinces Elizabeth to give Darcy a fresh start and forgive his impertinent remark on her beauty. Darcy and Bingley quickly meet the Bennet ladies again in London and realizing their cheapside relations are the Gardiners, their opinion on their relatives changes. I'm,over the relationship and banter between Darcy, Bingley and Colonel Fitzwilliam throughout this novel - it was the highlight for me and would have given this book a higher rating. However, the lack of conversation between Darcy and Elizabeth before forming a courtship seemed wrong. Their relationship was too easy to begin with and then suddenly danger causes them both to realize they don't want to lose each other. Mary's character is very different also. Elizabeth is a little too Tom-boyish with Jane as her second (you'll understand the reference once you've read the story) and there was too much Wickham drama. But I still thoroughly enjoyed the novel and mostly for the banter and teasing between the 3 friends - Darcy, Bingley and the Colonel.
February 9, 2017
I have read a lot of Pride and Prejudice variations and this one just seemed a little too full of fan service for me. It was rushing to get to relationships and rushing to change the tone of loved characters with no lead up or explaination. I felt like too much was trying to happen too quickly
July 5, 2015
For Peace of Mind: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
Enjoyable story. Mild angst with Wickham and Lady Catherine around. Happy marriages occur when love comes to London and Herefordshire. Lizzy, Jane, Charlotte, Anne, and Mary all find a match. The business connections in this story helped make this extra enjoyable, plus the Gardiner children's affections for Lizzy. Darcy may be called out by her loving nephew! Everybody is against Caroline which made this extra special. Good read.
Enjoyable story. Mild angst with Wickham and Lady Catherine around. Happy marriages occur when love comes to London and Herefordshire. Lizzy, Jane, Charlotte, Anne, and Mary all find a match. The business connections in this story helped make this extra enjoyable, plus the Gardiner children's affections for Lizzy. Darcy may be called out by her loving nephew! Everybody is against Caroline which made this extra special. Good read.
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