When Church Is Over 2

by Shona

Church is still not over! What happened when Brad and Brian caught up with Derrick? Will Sharon survive her allergic reactions? Who got shot? Will the fall out from Derricks action make people change who they are?

While Amanda is helping her family deal with the mess that Derrick has caused she finds herself in the middle of church mess. Non-scripture messages being preached, hateful church members, and a controlling Pastor. Will she be able to deal with church mess as well as help her family pick up the pieces of their lives?

208 pages, Kindle Edition

First published May 30, 2015

Reviews

[Mahoghani 23 · Rating 4 out of 5]

Wicked, deceptive and will blow your mind. You Never mess with God's children. The storyline has built up towards the showdown between the families in the courtroom; evil versus good.

Sharon & her current boyfriend can't get Derrick to leave them alone. Derrick's family are determined to use every trick in the book to keep him out of jail. Is it in Derrick's best interest or the interest of the family?

[Jasmin Watson · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book was ok. It ending all of a sudden. It was some part that got confusing to me

[Audrey Williams · Rating 2 out of 5]

Errors Gallore

First, let me say the book has a good story line and many themes worthy of discussion. However, the grammar, spelling errors, run on words, lack of punctuation in places, wrong names in wrong places, poor use of paragraphs, and the inability of the author to distinguish who is speaking to the reader makes it difficult to read without getting frustrated. Book 1 was no better. It appears there was no editing done at all. If this approach was intentional, it was a bad choice. The whole series would actually be worthwhile if all the errors were corrected.

[Lakisha Johnson · Rating 4 out of 5]

The storyline is still great ...

I hope there will be a part 3 because this book leaves so unfinished! There are editing and layout issues that kept this book from being a 5 star however I would still recommend this book!

[Karen · Rating 4 out of 5]

When Church is Over 2 by Shona!!! This is a very entertaining book with a great plot. There are a few errors, but the errors do not take away from the plot. Waiting for the outcome on the court hearing…….Waiting for part 3!!!

[Tiffany · Rating 3 out of 5]

I have to say it again the plot is good and it's really going somewhere but it really needs a editor. It's hard to get past the errors so it takes longer to read it. I will read the next book because I want to know what happens lol.

[Pj · Rating 3 out of 5]

The book is good but the writing is really off. The book should have being edit before putting it out.