Four on One: Drilled by the Drill Sergeants

by Clara Wintersnow

When Jenny visits boot camp to do some investigative journalism, she meets the dominant and in charge drill sergeant.

But when Jenny interrupts his training, he sends his gang of sexy soldiers to teach her a lesson. The drill sergeant and his soldiers have no choice but to thoroughly drill their new recruit.

The soldiers want her body, and Jenny wants them to claim her, hard, fast, and with no protection.

Genres: Erotica, Short Stories

21 pages, Kindle Edition

First published June 1, 2015

Reviews

[Siobhan]

This is another of those totally unbelievable stories, but it really isn’t the worst one out there. If you’re okay dealing with the unbelievable aspects then it makes an okay story. Admittedly, it’s not the best you’re ever going to read, yet it is quick and easy enough to pass some time if you’re looking for something in the genre.

[Lizard And Wombat Romance Reviews]

Lizard: 2⋆.
Wombat: 2⋆.
Overall: 2⋆.

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Title: Drilled by the Drill Sergeants.
Author: Clara Wintersnow.
Series or Standalone: Part of a collection but works as a standalone.
Genre: Military erotica.
Romance Level: Low.
Smut Level: High.
Length: Short Story.
Perspective: First Person.
Happily Ever After: She seemed pretty happy with how things played out.

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Our favourite quote:
“I reach both hands out, and like magic they fill up with dicks.”

[Meleka Taylor]

Unbelievable

I am giving this story a 1.5 star rating. I know this is fiction but this is totally an unbelievable situation.

I want to first start off by saying that mixing work and pleasure is not always a bad thing. We are following the story of Jenny who is working as a journalist. She is given an assignment to go to a military base and take notes to do an article on boot camp.

The first thing I notice about Jenny is that she is sexually frustrated. Once she gets on the base all she sees are hot guys all around. She is already on ten.

The first person she meets is a hot cadet and he has to escort her to Sir (they never divulge his real name; the author wanted to keep him in the power of authority at all times). When she meets Sir Jenny states that he is twice as old as her and the other 3 cadets he is training to be drill sergeants, which Jenny thinks they are all hot. They all end up having sex with her. End of story.

There were some stopping points in this story for me. Number one: Sir is too old for her to be having any sexual contract with. That's gross. Once a person is twice your age he/she is having sex with someone his/her parent's s age. That would be a no on that front. Number two: Sir is too demeaning to Jenny and he is encouraging the other men to be that way towards her. When Sir called her a b.... it was game over. Nothing wrong with wanting to be controlled and dominating, but it's not ok to demean her to the point of disrespect. Sir would have gotten any sex from me. Number three: they had sex without a condom. These men were so ready to put themselves in her and get her pregnant. What's up with that? They don't even know this broad. She could be riddled with disease and be a bad mother.

This story was just weird. There was no form of foreplay. Jenny is a whore and she didn't need any coaxing to have sex with any of these men. Not a developed story at all.

[Jamie Teixeira]

Gross

This short story was disgusting. I love a hardcore story, but this felt more like rape than anything else. Also, when eyelids can't open because they are coated with bodily fluid, I want to throw up. If you are into one woman being gang raped by 4 brutal men, this story is for you.

[Andi]

It was a...

Lot unbelievable but it had a nice bit of dominance going on in it. It's a teaser story so I have no idea where the author will go with this. It could be good or bad.

[Annemarie]

Reporter, Jenny is there to do an interview on military training. 3 drill sergeant trainees, Tank, Bareback and Rivers and their mentor, drill sergeant that they all call, Sir. Sir gets upset that Jenny is asking questions while he is trying to train the men. He instructs them to take her and have sex with her. I did not like this. It was not a story, but basically a scene. It shows military men in a dominant, aggressive, arrogant manner.

[Sam Koumi]

Nice fantasy

I liked the fantasy, but the way the dudes talked and how they were so demanding kinda turned me off

[Amanda Williams]

Love the shorts

What a way to escape from everyday life! To immerse yourself in another’s mind. Thanks Clara for a window into another form of freedom.

[Caroline]

A hot short read

[Gareth Williams]

Good Read

This is exactly what I expected of this book.
The characters are well written and described.
I'm sure the author could easily expand this short story.

[stuart hellier]

I know it’s fantasy but this is so far beyond reality it comical.

[Katherine Claus]

I enjoyed it all.



It was a good story
It showed the girl being taught a lesson by not to interrupt the training of the recruits

[Nyssy]

Unbelievable, unrealistic and irl legal problems haha 😆

[Linda]

Very enjoyable

Quick, fast, hot easy read.
Really enjoy the writer. She covers all bases.
Can't wait to read more from her

[Megan Riverina Romantics]

While the sex was good in this shorty there were a few things that I didn't like about this read. Like I said, the sex was hot but the pain aspect in the scene was a little more than I prefer in my stories. The lead in to the sex wasn't cool IMO. While I liked the way her "please, no" was said the drill sergeant initiating the sex without provocation and with so much command begged me.

Pet peeve alert: Editing mistakes

[S.]

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[Mimi]

Quick, hot & heavy.