The author seems to have a theme going when it comes to the men in these, they’re rude, disrespectful and overly cocky. The women all eat it up and go along with whatever no matter how simple-minded they have to be in order to be with them. You can’t really connect with the characters and their relationships seem to just be on without too much of anything.
The mess with the son was just that, he just took off and they were playing detective to find him but no cops? No missing person, kidnapping nothing? You get nothing as far as the father's relationship so when she opens her doors like it’s not a problem that eight+ years have gone by the story just gets even worse. The ending was silly as heck, he pops up and then in walks Zeek with the two facing off and then it’s done.
Give me a break, how many informants turn into cops then head cases they were involved in personally? If you’re going to tell a story at least make sure it makes sense and has a bit of common sense with it. Hopefully, the author can iron out the kinks and actually tell the stories instead of jumping about and actually get you into what’s going on in the next one.