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Ella is an Edwardian Cinderella with an undead problem...

The flu pandemic of 1918 took millions of souls within a few short weeks.  Except it wasn't flu, and death gave them back.

Seventeen-year-old Ella copes the best she can; caring for her war-injured father, scrubbing the floors, and slaying the undead that attack the locals. Vermin they're called, like rats they spread pestilence with their bite. Ella's world collides with another when she nearly decapitates a handsome stranger, who is very much alive.

Seth deMage, the new Duke of Leithfield, has returned to his ancestral home with a mission from the War Office -- to control the plague of vermin in rural Somerset. He needs help; he just didn't expect to find it in a katana-wielding scullery maid.

Working alongside Seth blurs the line between their positions, and Ella glimpses a future she never dreamed was possible. But in overstepping society's boundaries, Ella could lose everything - home, head and her heart...

228 pages, Kindle Edition

First published June 6, 2015

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Profile Image for Melissa ♥ Dog/Wolf Lover ♥ Martin.
3,633 reviews11.6k followers
March 25, 2018
This was a fun book! I love Ella being bad @ssed!



Just as the nation planned armistice celebrations after the war came the most devastating attack. The flu pandemic of 1918 struck and in just a few short weeks from September to December, millions of people died. We all pulled together to nurse the sick and bury the fallen.

Except it wasn't the flu.

And they didn't stay dead.


Ella is of course a retelling of Cinderella. She is a maid to her stepmother and stepsisters. Ella's has some best friends that work with her. Ella is also the towns exterminator. They don't want to kill the dead so Ella does this herself with her fathers katana! Her father is home in a catatonic state after the war. But Ella does what has to be done and she does it well. She doesn't like it but it is what it is.

And she also meets Seth deMage while she is out riding the fence one day. He's the Duke of Leithfield and they hit off perfectly. He will be her Prince Charming of course. But he's a good guy that is still in the military and working to get rid of the zombies too.

Seth is with Ella on one of her missions and he finds out a little bit more about her.

Seth followed, his brow furrowed. "Why did he call you? Why did he not deal with it himself?"

"Because I am their exterminator." My position in the village was that simple. When you cannot face beheading the friend who turned up on your doorstep, even though they are salivating to take a bite from your succulent flesh, you summon the girl who carries the sword. The girl who was always different, the girl suspended between two worlds, neither servant nor gentry. Born a girl, but raised as a boy. Some called me Ella the Slayer, but it is not a compliment. I would give anything to not have to carry out the gruesome job that life had thrust upon me.


I loved the story and I'm glad it had the happy ending. Well, for the most part =)

Happy Reading!

Mel ♥

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Profile Image for Aj the Ravenous Reader.
1,168 reviews1,175 followers
August 10, 2016
When I saw this book on GR a few weeks ago, I was , “Wait, what? Cinderella and zombies? I have to read this!

Ella is the local zombie slayer in a town called Leithfield in 1918. A pandemic attacked the community and those infected are turned into what they called “vermins” or more commonly, zombies.

Ella is a likable character, a certified kick-ass, who always wielded a katana and preferred trousers over dresses. I was just bothered that despite her bad-ass status, she still cowered in front of her stepmom and dutifully submitted to her roles as a serving girl.



It was also quite disturbing that people went on with their lives, dressed up, went to parties, went on dates while the walking dead strolled along the streets. As the author said herself, it is a weird story. The story indeed has a lot of weird stuff going on. But then again, which zombie story isn’t weird anyway? Lol.

What I mainly enjoyed about the book is the writing which is really light and a bit humorous. A.W. Exley is a capable writer and very bold too. Writing this book is one very risky move considering that Cinderella is the most widely known fairy tale and somehow, the author managed to pull the retelling off.

The plot is predictable because it’s quite the same with that of the original story but without the insta-love and of course, the zombie incidents but it’s still an entertaining enough read and if you’re looking for something different as in weird and nasty different, you are looking at the right book.^^

Thanks to Paula's review for convincing me to read the book. Do check out Paige's awesome review too.

Profile Image for Paula M.
587 reviews624 followers
August 15, 2015
"To escape from reality, I dream of a time when there was only one type of death."

Well, that's something you don't read everyday. Imagine Cinderella, but more badass, like killing-zombies-kind-of-badass and living in a Downton Abbey world. Can't visualize it? Well then you have to read this novel because surprisingly, Zombie killer Cinderella and Historical Fiction are a fit. And A.W Exley made it work.

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Ella, The Slayer is made of lovely writing, a slow burn romance and a well thought plot. I admit that I found it's pacing slow at the beginning but it picks up right at the middle and I found myself lost at Ella's world and I enjoyed her everyday adventures. Whether she's slaying zombies or just bringing tea to her wicked step mom. I was such a big fan of Exley's flawless writing.

I really like how appropriate the romance was. I mean, this is YA and Ella wasn't even 18. I enjoyed the slow burn romance between her and Seth. Although Seth have his own POV, I feel like there's still a lot to learn about him. I know that some readers are looking for a sequel and I'm one of those readers. I think that there's still a lot of loose ends that needs to be tackled.

Overall, I enjoyed this new take of Cinderella and like I mentioned above, I'm a big fan of the writing!
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Author 6 books2,120 followers
January 26, 2018
Cinderella and zombies? Sign me up! That was my first thought when I picked this book up back in 2016. Yes, I know, that's a long time ago. I'm trying to work through my tbr before buying new books. I digress.

Ella has a big problem on her hands. People are dying from the flu, only they're coming back to life. Ella is a scullery maid yet has the ability to control the undead by decapitating them. She runs into a Duke and they team up to save Somerset. Can Ella and Seth control the vermin while maintaining propriety or is it too later for both?

I loved this book! It's got all the things I love: an ass-kicking heroine, a down-to-earth hero, plenty of action and of course zombies! It's Pride and Prejudice meets The Walking Dead and I highly recommend!

My Rating: 5 stars
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3,051 reviews619 followers
November 18, 2022
2022 Review
Tackling all my kinda-sorta annual re-reads. I remember being horrified by the conclusion but this time found I appreciated how morally questionable it was. Not sure the rest of the book lived up to my memory. It is fast, easy, and entertaining. Didn't hit quite as hard as re-watching Pride and Prejudice and Zombies post-pandemic.

2020 Review
One of these days I will break down and buy the rest of the series. For now I'll just keep reading this one.

2019 Review
Did this book deserve a re-read? I'm not sure. Curiosity killed the cat, I guess. I remembered very little of the actual book and decided to see if held up to my oddly effusive (for a free Kindle book) 4 star review.
And I suppose...it did. The book didn't blow my mind, but at the same time, I found it appealing. I like Ella and I like the way the author handles the romance (though I found the kissing more eye-roll inducing than swoony). The ending is weird and I'm not sure I'm okay with it but it works. Action scenes still bored me. But plot still surprised me. So...I guess it remains 4 stars.

2018 Review
Pride and Prejudice and Zombies meets Cinderella...and it works.
This is actually a really fun book. I'd give the plot about 3 stars because the battle scenes bored me somewhat and there is a single chapter from the hero's POV (and that's it?) that doesn't really seem to fit with the rest of the book.
But I loved the way the author handled the romance. So many potential cliches and she just throws them out. So the extra star is as much for what didn't happen as for what did.
I can't say I'm inspired to read the rest of the series despite the many questions left unanswered. I do appreciate the fact that unanswered questions do not equate to a cliff hanger. Yet another reason this book went up in my estimation.
In conclusion? You could do worse.
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1,680 reviews
September 24, 2015
A Cinderella retelling where the heroine carries a sword and fights off the "undead".....that had me sold.

This was a unique spin on the fairytale. While I found it to be an ok read, at times I felt as if the dialogue was overly detailed. I also would have liked more depth and more of a connection between the hero and heroine. their relationship just had a generic feel to it. I don't think it was worth its current price tag of $3.99 either. I will still likely check out more of this writer's work in the future though.
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1,462 reviews152 followers
July 19, 2015
Ella’s life has been rough turned into the scullery maid after her father returned from war brain dead her step-mother took full advantage of her. With her father an invalid it’s fallen on Ella to protect the farm from the vermin known as Zombies. She’s even become the town slayer keeping a log book of all that she’s had to dispatch. After disposing of her most recent kill Ella encounters Seth the Duke who is return from war to run the area. Not wanting to be known as a lowly scullery maid she omit’s who she really is and uses her formal name.

However Ella’s due to have many chance encounters as they both are fighting the war against the undead vermin who are roaming the countryside. Ella’s step sisters and step mother are sure that the Duke will want to marry her sister after all she’s the most beautiful girl. The more time Ella spends with Seth the more she doesn’t want to give him up. What will happen when her step mother finds out about their budding relationship? What about when he finds out the truth about who she really is? What about the zombies who seem to be organized?

I really like Ella she’s not your typical scullery maid after all she carries a katana and slays zombies to protect the town and those she loves. I like the way she and Seth find an unlikely friendship both doing something they are both doing something for the good of humanity. I also liked Henry and Alice in the story they are each unique.

I picked up Ella, The Slayer because it fit my reading challenge this week and I’ve had my eye on the cover. A unique spin on the Cinderella classic I love the idea of Ella as a zombie slayer. I’ve never been a big fan of the Cinderella story it wasn’t my favorite Disney growing which is sad because most kids face something like this every day. I really enjoyed how Ella was this kick-ass- heroine who risked her life to save the town, but she was also really smart and full of compassion. She stayed behind because of her friends and her father even putting up with her step mother’s abuse. This is a fast paced novel it’s easy to get lost in the story and short so just a few short hours I was able to read the whole book. I see a lot of potential for another book in the series and I would really another chance to read about Ella and Seth. Overall it’s a great spin of Cinderella and I bet growing up this would have been one of my favorites.
Profile Image for Paige  Bookdragon.
938 reviews645 followers
July 14, 2015
Such a weird weird book..

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I love weird books so when I saw the cover of this book, I immediately want to read it. I mean, Cinderella as a zombie hunter?! Count me in.

What I like about the book is that, it's unique.Ella, The Slayer is the type of book that will intrigue the hell out of you.Just imagine a Nikita type of Cinderella in the World War Z setting. I love that Ella is a badass sword wielding English girl and that this story doesn't have that silly love story Disney have.
This book doesn't have that idiotic "I'm going to marry you because the first time we saw each other, I knew you're the one" bullshit. Nooooo. Thank goodness the author has a good instinct to let the romance roll out between the H/H.

So if you want something different from your retelling shelve, I suggest you read the book about Ella the Slayer...
Profile Image for Laura Thomas.
1,552 reviews108 followers
August 21, 2015
I don’t read a lot of fairy tale retellings, so I figured it was time to do just that. And how could I resist a retelling of Cinderella, taking place after World War I, with zombies! Yep, zombies.

Now, the zombies don’t dominate the story. They are there, lurking in the background, threatening to burst onto the scene at any given time. Sometimes, they do. And that’s where Ella opens up a can of whoop ass.

Ella didn’t ask to be the town’s protector, executioner. She was kind of forced into it. Her and that katana she wielded so well. And that’s just one role she’d been forced into.

She didn’t blame her father for getting married again. She wanted him happy. She didn’t blame him when he came home from war catatonic. She hoped for and watched for him to recover.

She did blame her evil step-mother and two spoiled step-sisters. They relegated her to maid service, whipping her when she didn’t do something right or fast enough. Ella almost relished having to go slay a zombie or two.

Her world changes when she runs into tall, dark, and handsome. Seth, the Duke, is so far out of her league, but her heart wants what it wants. And that’s Seth.

Can Ella have a happy ever after? Or will her evil step family spoil her plans? Will Seth want a lowly maid ? Or will he want one of the snotty step-sisters? And can he see her as a protector, not a killer?

All of my questions are answered, and in such fun and delightful ways. Ella is no lightweight and she has some awesome friends who love and support her.

Seth, weighed down by responsibility, by proper appearances, steps into the shoes assigned to him with strength and fortitude.

And then there’s the zombie thing. The author offered a fresh take on them. I didn’t quite see where she was heading until the end. Very interesting.

I stayed up late and then got up early so I could finish this book and find out what happened. Such a fun retelling.

And did I mention zombies?

I received this book for my honest review.
612 reviews4 followers
June 22, 2018
I was really enjoying this book - it's like a cross between Buffy and Cinderella set after the Great War - but then the last couple of chapters absolutely ruined it for me...

It's kind of like author was so focused on the sequel, that they completely FUBAR'ed the characterisation of the current book:


Oh, it made me so cross I'm giving it a 1 star rather than the 4 I was going to give it up to that point. And as much as this series pings all of my secret cat-nip squee factor, I'm not picking up any more in this series.

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802 reviews69 followers
July 5, 2019
What a ride. I went into this not expecting much. I go through these indie retellings frequently and they're usually mediocre. But dang this was great. It was compellable readable. There was no insta love. And it was an interesting take on the Cinderella fairytale. I buddy read this with a friend and we both loved it so much we are gonna move onto the next book soon.

My one complaint was there was a one time random insert of the prince's POV. It felt random, out of place, and jarring.

Overall LOVED this and highly recommend.
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272 reviews166 followers
March 30, 2018
I highly disliked this book..

Who goes out to parties in fancy dresses where there is the walking dead just strolling around to bite you and become a “vermin” as well. And also Ella was so badass kicking vermins asses and when she gets back it is all yes and amen because she listens and obeys the commands of her stepsisters and stepmother.

Sorry this book wasn’t for me.

Hope you enjoy your reading tho 📚
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1,162 reviews6 followers
January 18, 2024
Audiobook narrated by
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I liked the idea, but the execution was confusing.

If the author wanted this to be a steam punk novel, Exley needs to read some of Gail Carrigers' work before he/she tries again.
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93 reviews4 followers
April 25, 2016
In the early 20th century, the flu epidemic tore through England killing many. As the people try to recover from such a huge loss, a new plague comes in to wreak havoc on the people. Those who died are coming home. Much like the pest that many blamed for spreading the flu, their bites are spreading this new plague. The country is overrun but their morals have many believing that killing these previously dead people will send their souls into damnation. When Ella kills one, she opens the door to being the one damned soul in her village that can kill the vermin and save everyone else. Until the duke returns to his family lands to lead the war on the undead. Spoilers will appear in this review

I was excited to read this book. A reinterpretation of Cinderella with zombies, it was right up my ally. It was pretty clear within the first couple of chapters this book was like someone took Pride and Prejudice and Zombies and combined it with Ever After: A Cinderella Story. Ella’s Mother died when she was young. Her father remarries a cruel woman only interested in money. He returns from the war in a near vegetative state leaving the stepmother to relegate Ella to a servants status. When Ella accidentally meets and nearly decapitates the Duke, she hides her real identity from him. Though of course it wouldn’t be much of a story if he didn’t pursue her. Fascinated by a woman willing to battle the undead he begins to attempt to court Ella. They bond over their love of fast cars and the ability to battle the vermin and eventually fall for each other.

Ella’s stepmother is of course scheming to have her eldest foul daughter marry the Duke and Ella must hide her forbidden love from her family. Typical Cinderella shenanigans ensue and in the end, of course Ella gets her man. Then they must race to battle the Undead herd and its hive-like queen. After the battle ends, a dirty and resolved Ella returns home to evict her evil stepmother and finds her trying to murder her father. She defends him and in the process infects her stepmother with queen zombie toxic blood. This is where the story really lost me. In what appears to be an attempt to lead into a sequel she lets her evil infected stepmother leave to go out and munch on random people and none of the soldiers or people who just eradicated the horde stop her.

I wanted to love this book but it had so many similarities to the two stories I mentioned above and quite a few moments that made you question the characters and the author herself that I am not sure it will bring me back for a second book. The first half of the book was great but the second half left me with a lingering disappointment.
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774 reviews4 followers
April 24, 2018
Oh, book, I had such high hopes for you, but alas, you fell short of expectations. Way short.

Ella, our heroine, is quite frankly not likable. I just couldn't muster up enough empathy to feel for her plight. Seth, however, I did like. He's likable. I can't fathom why he was so drawn to Ella. It must be the katana. And beyond Ella just not connecting with me, she was the queen of bad decisions. Seriously, girl, the last part of the book was just a train wreck. You know the government needs something, and you choose to not deliver. Why? No clue. You could have dispatched the vermin with your trusty katana, or you could have captured the vermin as requested, and you choose to do C) none of the above? I'm all for setting up the next book in the series, but I can't stick with this one. Dumb. Dumb. Dumb. I would elaborate, but I don't want to spoil anyone. But when you get to this part of the story, you will know exactly what I am complaining about.

2 stars for Seth and Frank. Pretty much everyone who lives at the other house. They saved it from being a 1 star stinker.
Profile Image for Joana.
897 reviews22 followers
December 1, 2017
I really wasn't a fan of this book - it just wasn't for me...
Normally with Cinderella retellings it doesn't bother me as much, but now I still hated the 'evil stepmother' trope (which is definitely the trope I hate the most, but I normally forgive in this occasion...) Also I think I figured I don't really like books set in the Regency period - this one was definitely not set on it, one century after, but it still had the feeling of it - just no romances with Dukes and Lords for me, I think that's it...
You may like it, I just don't really like it...

(Free book from Google Play, through BookBub)
Profile Image for Reyes.
689 reviews
August 9, 2016
This is the second book I read during my holidays. Ella the Slayer was a confusing mix of Cinderella meets Downton Abbey meets The Walking Dead. I picked this up expecting it to be some kind of 'Pride and Prejudice and Zombies', which I liked a lot, but zombies are really not my cup of tea, and without the ridiculousness (and I mean this in the best possible way) that made me enjoy P&P&Z this turned out to be a disappointment. The book as a whole was ok and the twist at the end was cool, but it was not enough to make me want to read the rest of the series.
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Author 10 books90 followers
July 31, 2021
I picked this up because it was for free and I was looking for something a little less political, as I feel I've read a lot of ''literature'' this last week and I needed to let my mind rest. I was pleasantly surprised by the zombies and the characters, as well as the general retelling of Cinderella. Cinderella has never been my favorite, but this one was interesting, and I appreciated how it talked about PTSD and mental and physical abuse.

It was a very typical YA historical fiction book, however, despite the zombies. Ella was always the ''odd girl out'' that was raised like a son instead of a daughter and never learned how to behave as a propper lady.

The ''prince'' was OK, and the other characters were OK as well. I felt like the stepmother and sisters were very... overplayed, as I do not understand how anyone can be that delusional, but I guess that's only a sign of my own mentality than theirs. Maybe. I don't know. Especially what happened toward the end felt very strange to me.

I considered reading book 2 as well, but it has a male narrator that I couldn't stand, so I'm dropping it.
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Author 3 books111 followers
August 8, 2018
This was essentially Ever After with zombies. The Cinderella story felt a bit derivative, but the take on zombies was fresh and interesting. I really enjoyed most of the book (though the innuendo was tiresome), but the very ending drove me insane.
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310 reviews3 followers
September 4, 2021
I expected more zombies in a "zombie" book. I can also do without the obligatory "what do we call the zombies?” discussion. The fairy tale elements are lacking, the time period is forced, and there is no suspense.
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4,405 reviews180 followers
October 23, 2016
This is the story of Ella, a girl designated to be the slayer of the "turned", aka vermin, aka zombies, in her village, while also serving as a maid to her evil stepmother on a daily basis.

It starts out well, with Ella going about her business, when she unexpectedly meets, Seth, the elusive and newly returned Duke of Leithfield. Knowing full well the difference between their stations she quickly hurries off, but she's made an impression. In a village as small as theirs, and with well-meaning meddling friends like theirs, they inevitably meet again, becoming more interested in each other every time.

Life goes on, with chores, a few vermin dispached and a number of encounters between the two, interspersed with some insightful revelations, , until eventually a big blowout with the stepmother and a big battle with the vermins that confirms their theories.

There are a number of things I was less than convinced about, .

All in all an enjoyable enough story, that, for me, didn't reach its full potential.

I'm not sure if I'll read the next book in the series where the story continues, Alice, The Player, or the novella with Henry's story, Henry, The Gaoler.
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1,170 reviews11 followers
August 20, 2017
"You shouldn't be out in the woods alone. There are undead about, but I suspect you know that."
What gave it away? Maybe the piece of red matter stuck to my boot. Was that spinal column? I snorted back a giggle.


I picked this story up because of its author. Not because Exley has proven to be a such a competent and intriguing writer in the past that I couldn't pass on the opportunity to read another of her books but, on the contrary, because I thought Nefertiti's Heart was so, quote unquote, bad it was funny. Combining the awkward fun I had with said book and the concept of a zombie-slaying Cinderella? Well, needless to say, I was intrigued.

But, ultimately, this was a disappointment. It was neither funny nor particularly interesting. Basically, it was a slightly below-average story with maybe slightly below-average characters – and it had a definite below-average impact on me. In other words: I was bored. Very bored. You know those kinds of books you start reading and immediately wish you had picked something else? Well, this one belongs to that category.

Exley seems to have a tendency to write about "strong female characters" (you know, those that kick-ass to some capacity) but not only did Ella fail to even fulfil said description (shrinking from her step-mother, shrinking from her "duty" as slayer just as Seth arrives) there also isn't much more to her character than that. In Nefertiti's Heart the protagonist had additional stuff to work through besides being a bad-ass (it wasn't done well but at least there was something), Ella, however, was simply Ella-who-sometimes-kills-zombies-with-a-katana.

Lots of elements in this book played out similarly. The zombies were very boring – although the whole "the church doesn't know yet whether killing zombies is bad or not" concept was mildly interesting it was never explored in a satisfying way. The Cinderella plot was nothing but dull and stereotypical (retellings can be fun if you play around with the concept enough to create something truly new out of it). The setting (time-wise) fell flat. The romance happened way to fast and was so cheesily see-through that it put me to sleep. I could go on but I think you've got the gist of it.

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"Such a glorious spot to grow up. You must have had so many adventures around here." I know I did. I doubt there's a tree I hadn't climbed in the district, or a river that I hadn't stripped down to my chemise and swam in.
He shook his head. "I gaze at it and see only a procession of sad memories."
"Oh." Well, that drained some of the magic out of the sight.
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1,899 reviews154 followers
March 1, 2016
A.W. Exley’s series Artifact Hunters is one of my favorite steampunk romances. When I heard that she was doing a Cinderella retelling, I was veeeery excited.

LIKES

* Atmosphere. Downtown Abbey is one of my favorite historical series. Ella, The Slayer has the same background of English countryside and nobility that is trying to adapt to the modern world.

* Ella was not a pushover. One of the reasons why I do not like retellings of Cinderella so much, is cause she was such a Mary Sue. Why did she stay in her own house to work as a servant? In Ella, The Slayer A.W. Exley gave me a valid explanation that only added bonus point to the awesomeness of Ella’s character.

* Kick-ass heroine. Ella wields a katana and dispatches pesky zombies.

* Cute secondary characters. A.W. Exley always has quirky and hilarious characters. I loved all the cast of Ella, The Slayer.

* That ending. If i had any doubts Ella was my girl they were lost in that last chapter. I am not referring to how she dealt with her stepmother, but that last romance scene…

DISLIKES

* Why do zombie novels have to be gross?
"Maggots burrowed through his dead flesh, tiny writhing white bodies filling a hollow in his leg. The hair had peeled away from the scalp, and the bone was coated in dirt and mud as though he had tried to disguise his baldness by painting on hair. Very little flesh clung to his form, the white showing through where skin and bone had parted company. Tendons moved as he flexed and struggled against the barbwire digging into his back."

* Romance happens a bit too quick. A.W. Exley added the realism to the love story and Ella meets her ‘prince’ more than once. But, I still think they fell in love too fast…

* A bit open ended. Ella, The Slayer does not end with a cliffhanger but some things are not resolved.
Obviously we need more books about this subject! *hopeful look at A.W. Exley* Maybe another novel set in the same time period with different main character? Another fairy tale retelling for example…

IN THE END…

Ella, The Slayer is everything I hoped it would be: a great retelling of Cinderella with kick-ass heroine and wonderful setting. It’s like someone (who knew what she was doing) mixed Downtown Abbey and The Walking Dead.

Disclaimer: I received this ebook from CBB Book Promotions in exchange for a fair and honest review. This text is also posted on my blog Bookworm Dreams in a little bit more styled edition.
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170 reviews18 followers
July 17, 2015
I'm going to start out by saying I really enjoyed this book. That being said, I also had some issues with it.

The setting and the premise were ideal -- they went hand in hand in a way I never would have expected, but somehow worked very well. However, the setting also irked me -- possibly because I didn't feel it in a way I'm used to feeling it in historicals. I didn't get a good feel of the time period. I don't know if this is from a lack of my deep inside knowledge of the time (I'm admittedly much more familiar with the Regency era), but it didn't seem like there was a huge depth of research there, though I know from reading the bio that the author is something of a historian, so I really don't know what to think. Perhaps it's the transitory nature of the time period. I do think the use of a little more slang might have helped a little.

I loved Ella. I found her to be very keen and very smart, with flaws and self doubt. I could believe how her father raised her, though . However, the insta-lust thing for the male protagonist was a bit much for me. A little too incredible for such a self possessed person as Ella. I also loved Seth, in his own right, and the forthright treatment of PTSD in an era where they didn't know what to call it other than that the war changed the men who were involved in it. The background characters were also pretty well rounded, I thought, though part of me wants to know more about a couple of them.

I also had qualms about the ending, and how Ella handled not only her step-mother but her step-sisters. Especially the nicer of the two. It also left the zombie problem very open-ended, and I didn't like that. Perhaps if there is a sequel, it could be wrapped up? It was a bit of a disappointment when it could have been neatly wrapped. I don't really agree with some of the characterization of Ella here.

And a personal bother of mine was the commas. Please, dear author, you write a good story -- please have someone correct your commas so you have enough of them. I had a twitch by the end of the book. (Yes, I'm aware this is a personal thing, but it's so easily fixed!)

Overall, it was a good, engaging story, and I would read more by this author. I do feel it could have done with one more thorough edit, though, for a few story quirks as well as punctuation. These things are why I bumped it down to 3 stars.
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August 22, 2015
"We all pulled together to nurse the sick and bury the fallen.

Except it wasn't the flu.

And they didn't stay dead."

Zombies? Sign me up. Ella, The Slayer was such a fun, unique retelling of the Cinderella story many know and love. Set soon after the outbreak of the Spanish Influenza, Ella is caring for her father, taking care of her home, living with a monster of a step mother and all the while, clearing the town of the "vermin."

Ella, The Slayer is a masterfully written retelling that is engaging, fun, gory and with a slow burn romance that I loved. Ella is not your average girl. Is is a katana welding, badass girl that bears the burden of ridding her town of the vermin. She is strong, spunky and has her wits about her. She has a vulnerable side too. Her deep desire to be mothered and wanted by her step mother but never getting it. And not to mention, taking on the task that was necessary but others condemned her for. I admire the fact that she stayed behind to care for everyone. Her compassion knows no bounds.

While the romance played a major part in the book, I loved that it didn't overshadow the main plot as a whole. It's slow burn, one that had me smiling often. I loved their deep conversations as they were getting to know each other and how the war has changed them both, but in different ways. They work well together in their fight against the vermin and Seth always treated her like his equal.

There were some parts that for me, were left open-ended. I actually liked this -- because it leaves me to my imagination on where the story can/will go. I am hoping for a sequel because I would love to revisit the world A.W. Exley created.

Overall -- I loved Ella The Slayer. It's engaging, fun with a dash of gore and a romance that I truly adored. If you are looking for a unique retelling, this is IT. Highly recommend.

I received this book for free from The Publisher via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
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Author 4 books248 followers
August 19, 2015
I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review

Ella the Slayer was a fun twist on the Cinderella fairy tale. Cinderella was never one of my favorites because as a character, she's rather weak. Ella isn't weak-- a definite improvement in my opinion. Add in zombies and you have all the makings for an imaginative retelling.

Ella was a well-written, strong character. Not only did she wait hand and foot on her stepmother and two stepsisters, but she also patroled her land, slaying any undead who make it past the perimeter fence with her trusty katana. And she did it with a good attitude. Ella had good friends, namely Alice and Henry who helped make her a decent person.

The romance between Ella and Seth, the new duke, was slow to build. No insta-love here, though Ella is attracted to him from the start. I thought the story moved along a tad slow, especially the beginning. But it is a rather short story and things picked up quickly. I enjoyed the budding relationship between Ella and Seth.

The ending-- well, I wasn't a huge fan. It was left somewhat open-ended, perhaps for a sequel? I also was at odds with the way some things turned out- but of course that's just my feelings. My favorite thing about this story was the imagination present throughout. It was definitely a fun retelling-- I think it may be true that zombies make everything better :)
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759 reviews112 followers
June 18, 2015
Review to come! Thoroughly enjoyable twist on Cinderella.
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See what happens when I don't review immediately? Time slips away from me. I'd blame the chemo, but really, it's just me.

SO! This was quite the twist on Cinderella. Ella is the Slayer because everyone else is such a chickenshit and are willing to let this young girl do the dirty work for them. And the Duke is a soldier returning from war to pick up the helm of the family seat...why would he ever want a simpering twit as a partner in life?

Ella is of course mistreated by her nasty stepmother and ugly stepsisters and this is where Ella pissed me off. She just TOOK it. Here she is saving lives and she just took getting smacked around and bossed around, etc. It set my teeth on edge, but it all works out PERFECTLY in the end. I mean really...perfect.

If you like zombies and fairy tale retellings, don't miss this one!
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52 reviews5 followers
December 15, 2017
This is a silly, fun and light read. The series isn't amazing but it does pass the time and all of the books in the series are quick reads. It is a different take on Cinderella and I did have fun reading this book although it is lacking in a lot of areas. I gave it a 2 star rating because the story and the characters just feel unfinished. Even though I wasn't bored I didn't particularly think it was anything but a 2 star read. I didn't hate it but I didn't much care either way. I would still recommend it as the price of the books are decent, and if you are looking for something quick and light just don't put too much stock in the story.
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June 20, 2016
The ending ruined whatever small good-will I had toward this book. While I was reading it, there was a lot of little things that I found annoying (it felt poorly researched; scenes or ideas seemed to come directly from other media, such as Downton Abby; the editing wasn't that great; there was a lot of repetition of lines or ideas), but overall, it was charming enough and I liked Ella enough to be favorable. I like the idea. But the ending left me with a really bad taste in my mouth for many reasons. I definitely don't recommend it and won't read any sequels that might happen.
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