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Devereaux's Dime Store #5

Between a Book and a Hard Place

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The New York Times bestselling author of Dying for a Cupcake returns with a new mystery filled with lost family, hidden treasure, and long-buried secrets...

Five-and-dime store owner Devereaux “Dev” Sinclair moved to Shadow Bend for her family. But when her long-lost mother shows up in town, she realizes too much kin can be killer...

Shadow Bend’s library closed years ago because of budgetary problems, so when a wealthy benefactor offers to reopen it, everyone, including Dev, is thrilled. But Dev’s excitement wanes when she realizes the mysterious donor is actually her runaway mother Yvette’s latest husband, Jett Benedict.

Dev suspects that Yvette and Jett’s intentions aren’t as noble as they appear, but before she can discover what they’re really up to, Jett turns up dead—and all clues point to Yvette as the prime suspect.

Even though Dev has no loyalty to Yvette, she’s in a bind. Setting the record straight could prove her mother is a killer. But doing nothing might get her mother booked for a crime she didn’t commit...

272 pages, Mass Market Paperback

First published March 1, 2016

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Denise Swanson

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Denise Swanson lives in rural Illinois with her husband, classical composer David Stybr.

After 22 years as a practicing school psychologist, she's happiest sitting in her scree porch reading. However, when the weather turns too cold, she's willing to leave the Midwest to cruise the sunny Caribbean.

Denise is an animal lover, but her home is currently furless, since her kitty of 20 years passed away in August of 2016. Instead, she enjoys watching the wildlife out her office window.

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633 reviews15 followers
April 22, 2016
*Sigh* 5 books in and the love triangle is still going strong with Dev no closer to deciding which man she wants (And why the heck are they putting up with that crap??) As a result, I have to honestly say, I did not like this book. It might have pulled off a 2 or 3 star rating had the triangle been wrapped up. Instead it's actually kind of a love square now, with Jake's ex-wife living with him and all, which makes the entire thing even more absurd.

Plus, we have aliens, ghosts and a hypercritical mom (who has no room to criticize, since she abandoned her teen daughter years ago when the money dried up and her husband went to jail), yay.

This book was a huge disappointment to me. I hate love triangles, they make the woman look like an idiot who can't make up her mind. Oh yeah, that's right, that's exactly what Dev is. But it doesn't make the guys look much better, since they put up with it. The mystery was interesting, but I there were just too many distractions. Like, could Poppy maybe grow up a little and stop acting like such a brat about her dad, and then maybe he could stop being such a jerk too. Because really, they're getting old too.

Done with this series. I just don't care enough to wonder who Dev picks, if Poppy and her dad ever make up or if the damned aliens are going to take Nadine away.
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2,260 reviews102 followers
February 21, 2019
Between a Book and a Hard Place by Denise Swanson is the 5th book in the Devereaux's Dime Store Mystery series. Dime store owner Devereaux Sinclair's mother Yvette turns up in Shadoe Bend with her latest husband promising a large donation to the town library. When he is found murdered in the library the next day, Yvette becomes prime suspect. A nice, captivating mystery involving the town's history tat I enjoyed very much. The main drawback was the love triangle and Dev's inability to resolve this situation.
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2,866 reviews327 followers
March 4, 2016
Dollycas’s Thoughts

A tangled web, Dev’s mom returns to Shadow Bend and it is a complete surprise to Dev but not a surprise to everyone. Her mother, Yvette, moved on years ago leaving Dev behind. Why come back now? and with another new husband? Dev is on high alert, her mother is up to something. Her husband Jett has offered a huge amount of money to reopen and refurbish the town’s library. He says he is a history buff and all he asks is that he be able to do a little research in the library’s archives. Before he can delve too deeply someone kills him and Yvette is the prime suspect but Dev and her dad could be on the suspect list as well. Dev doesn’t really want to help her mom but she would do anything for her dad so she is going to track down the real killer and be sure he is booked for murder.

I whipped right through this story. Unlike the the last installment Noah and Jake are both back in town vying for Dev’s affection. Things get a little steamy with both of them but they both have their share of excess baggage. She is going to have to choose one or set them both free soon, but I certainly don’t know what I would do in her situation. It does make for fascinating reading.

The author gives us a fun mystery to solve too. One that takes us visiting all over Shadow Bend and searching back in history too. You know Missouri was kind of split during the Civil War and Shadow Bend families were also affected. I loved tagging along following the clues and putting the pieces together.

Denise Swanson writes a fantastic story with characters I have grown to care about. She fills the story with mystery, mayhem, suspense, and a liberal dose of romance and romantic tension. Seriously, those guys are going to come to blows one day :)
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842 reviews139 followers
February 28, 2016
Another great installment to the Devereaux’s Dime Store Mystery series!

Author Denise Swanson once again pens a mystery that will delight her fans. She knows exactly they want, and she delivers.

My favorite part of this series is time spent with Dev in her store. I really enjoy reading about the gift baskets she puts together.

Skilled writing, and a love of her craft are very apparent in Ms. Swanson’s books. BETWEEN A BOOK AND A HARD PLACE was a wonderfully paced story with just the right amount of mystery and suspense to keep the reader quickly turning the pages from the beginning, straight through to the exciting reveal.

Rather you’re new to this series, or a returning fan, BETWEEN A BOOK AND A HARD PLACE will make the mystery reader in you extremely happy.

At the back of the book you’ll find a sneak peek of Denise Swanson’s newest Scumble River Mystery, MURDER OF A CRANKY CATNAPPER!
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922 reviews64 followers
May 18, 2017
Definitely didn't like this book as much as the books that I've read from Scumble River

Swanson also writes romance novels and it shows more in the book.

The beginning was a bit slow but it picked up after the murder.

Will probably check out the other books in the series to see if I like the characters more when their lives aren't as complicated
840 reviews2 followers
February 10, 2019
2.5 stars. The conclusion felt like too much a reach, and the love triangle is getting old.
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4,990 reviews77 followers
August 16, 2024
Buyer's remorse? I have it. I bought three of these at the same time after not having read this series in a while. I like the other long series from this author, but they seem to be coming out REALLY slowly. This is the second of those three and I'm just not liking them. I'm not sure what it is about it. The Confederate stuff is just...off-putting in the characters feelings about it? And please. Southerners. Tell me a time when you've heard a real life person unironically use the term "War of Northern Aggression." 😒 The mystery part here was fine. The love triangle is tired and annoying. I own the next book but honestly I'm not sure if I'm going to read it.
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2,497 reviews25 followers
October 12, 2018
I like Dev, her friends and family. Just when things seem to be getting better, she is thrown for a loop when her mother shows up after 13 years. Everything goes down hill from there. Her mother and father are getting cozy, her mother's husband is murdered, her mother is a suspect and her father could be if Dev doesn't do something. So, Dev and her friends try to figure out who murdered Dev's step-father.
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4,054 reviews83 followers
March 5, 2016
Between a Book and Hard Place by Denise Swanson is the fifth book in A Devereaux's Dime Store Mystery series. Devereaux Sinclair owns Devereaux's Dime Store and Gift Baskets in Shadow Bend, Missouri. Devereaux is getting used to having her father back in her life. Kern Sinclair was recently paroled (even though he was innocent). Things are going well until Devereaux's mother returns to town with her latest husband, Jett Benedict. Jett has offered money (financing for three years) to the town for the library which has been closed (for quite some time). He only asks for access to the libraries archives immediately. The town, of course, agrees. While Jett is busy in the archives, Yvette (Devereaux's mother) is busy flirting with Kern (Devereaux's father). Then Devereaux gets an urgent call to come to the library. Jett Benedict is dead with Kern and Yvette at the scene of the crime. Devereaux quickly comes up with a plan (she does not want her father to violate his parole). Devereaux gathers up her friends and set out to find who wanted Jett dead and why did Jett want access to the towns archives. Devereaux also has her two love interests vying for her attention as well as dealing with Jake's ex-wife, Meg and Noah's crazy mother, Nadine (who swears that aliens are invading the town).

Between a Book and Hard Place has interesting characters, a good setting, and an intriguing mystery. I am disappointed, though, by the lack of character development (they have not changed much since the first book). I was hoping that the love triangle would be resolved in this book, but it is still alive and strong. This book does contain some humor (it will have you laughing). Unlike other cozy mysteries, this book does contain foul language and some sex related scenes (steaming up the windows of Jake's truck). The mystery was easy to solve (there were not many suspects), but I liked following the clues to the end. I give Between a Book and Hard Place 3.5 out of 5 stars. I hope the next A Devereaux's Dime Store Mystery will have more mystery and less on the love triangle (or maybe it can be resolved).

I received a complimentary copy of Between a Book and Hard Place in exchange for an honest review of the novel.

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1,338 reviews266 followers
February 21, 2016
In this fifth book of “A Devereaux’s Dime Store Mystery” series, Devereaux “Dev” Sinclair has her hands full. She has two sexy men fighting for her attention and now her long-lost mother, Yvette, has returned to Shadow Bend. Dev is determined to ignore her mother, the same way her mother has ignored her all these years but nothing is ever that simple.

When Shadow Bend’s library receives a monetary donation so that it can re-open its doors, Dev is stunned to learn that Yvette and her new husband, Jett, are the donors. However, Dev can’t help being suspicious of their intentions. When Jett turns up dead, Yvette is the number one suspect. Dev isn’t all that concerned about her mother but the evidence not only points towards Yvette, but towards Dev and her father as well. She has no choice but to track down the real killer. She asks for a little help from her friends, which include the two men fighting for her.

I’ve been a fan of Denise Swanson’s Scumble River cozy mystery series for years. So, I was thrilled when she started a new series. I read the first book, which I loved, but as usual I fell behind on my series reading and missed the next couple of books. I have them, just haven’t had a chance to read them. When the latest book came out, I skipped ahead and I don’t feel like I’ve missed anything. Although, rest assured, I will be going back and read the ones I missed.

As for this one, I was so engrossed in it that I was shocked to discover I was nearly finished reading the book. Talk about moving at a fast-pace, this one certainly did. I ended up devouring this one in just a couple of days. The characters are likeable from Dev down to her supporting cast of friends. I loved how they stood by each other.

I’m not sure how I feel about the two men in Dev’s life. Both Noah and Jake are good guys with much baggage attached to them. I don’t know how Dev can choose, I couldn’t and I’m going to feel bad if she leaves one out in the cold. I almost wish there was only one clear choice for Dev’s affections. We’ll have to see how this plays out.

Overall, intriguing story with interesting characters. I can’t ask for more than that.



Disclosure: The publisher and Edelweiss provided me with a copy of this book to review. This did not influence my thoughts and opinions in any way. All opinions expressed are my own.
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1,553 reviews61 followers
March 12, 2016
Dev's mother is back in town along with her new rich husband, much to Dev's dismay. The woman dropped Dev off 15 years ago to be raised by her grandmother and then went off to find her fortune elsewhere. To say Dev is still angry about being abandoned would be putting mildly. That said, her mother is a complete bitch and why anyone would give her more than a few seconds of his/her time is beyond me. The constant criticism and nasty, obnoxious comments usually aimed at Dev are really hard to read.

The ploy is that her mother's new husband is donating a huge amount of money to refurbish an old building and make it into a library. The reality is that the new husband is flat broke and is looking for the "hidden" treasure rumored to be stored in the old building.

Meanwhile Dev is dating two men at the same time. Nobody seems the least bothered by this. Personally, I hate romantic triangles in a book, especially when the woman takes both people for granted.

I read the first book in the series some time ago and didn't like it much and I don't like this one much better. The writing is improved, but the characters are still annoying and unlikable.

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5,950 reviews67 followers
March 13, 2016
I feel that I read this book under false pretenses: Dev's long-lost mother returns to their small town with her new, rich husband who is going to bankroll reopening the library. I thought it was another library book. Actually, the library--though the scene of the crime--has little to do with things; it's never reopened; nobody works there. Okay, just my personal preference. At any rate, when a body is found, Dev and her two suitors, plus her long-time buddies, work at finding the murderer to clear Dev's father and mother, who are both suspects. I don't mind some romance in mysteries, but this series is too rom-com for me. Also, the pride most of the characters take--in 2016!--in their Confederate ancestry is rather distasteful.
77 reviews1 follower
July 21, 2017
I didn't like this book as well as the others. It was a little slow getting started. Aliens, the murder of Dev's stepfather felt like there were several different things going on but I enjoyed the ending when everything came together. I love that her mother made an appearance in this book. I'm really getting bored with Dev's love life. It feels like this has gone on forever. I am ready for her to choose and move on. Her life feel like its in neutral and not going anywhere. I plan to read the next book in the series and hope that this is straightened out soon.
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731 reviews145 followers
July 26, 2016
Novel received courtesy of Goodreads.com First Reads Give Away

This was my first "cozy" mystery. I had a difficult time getting into the book, not because of this book, but because the last one I read was so good! The characters were pretty well-rounded and the plot was enough to keep me interested. I understand now why they're called "cozy" mysteries and I know I'll need to have a different mindset when I start the next one.
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769 reviews13 followers
March 7, 2016
A great cozy mystery series that I have enjoyed so far. This one was a little different - there seemed to be more focus on the romance aspect than the mystery aspect, which is fine as I usually like a little romance with my cozies. What I didn't like about this book was the love triangle - I don't personally get much out of a love triangle, so this aspect didn't appeal to me. Overall, however, a cozy that I would recommend to fans of the genre.
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501 reviews8 followers
March 30, 2016
Now that Dev's dad is working at her Dime Store, the cast of characters in this series is even more interesting to read! One of the things I especially enjoyed reading about were the Civil War stories, since I do not live anywhere near Missouri and only know about my state. Those tidbits were easily part of the whole story. Throw in some UFOs and ETs with Dev and her friends and time is enjoyably spent reading! I am looking forward to Book 6--what did happen to the gold?
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2,062 reviews97 followers
July 30, 2017
Another romance hiding behind the cozy genre. I like romance, I really do. And I like cozy mysteries. But I like them separate and having an entire cozy series based on a love triangle is really disappointing. Swanson tells a good story when she sticks with her mysteries.
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462 reviews20 followers
September 13, 2017
I was enjoying this series but this one did not
work for me. It starts with the town suddenly worried about an alien invasion. It felt too far fetched. I may try the next one in the series hoping it gets better.
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596 reviews19 followers
October 1, 2018
Devereaux “Dev” Sinclair moved to Shadow Bend to be with her family (grandma and ex-con dad) and now runs the local five-and-dime store. The local library closed down a number of years ago due to budget problems, so when a wealthy benefactor offers to reopen it, Dev is more than a little thrilled. Her happiness wanes when she realizes the benefactor is her new step-dad who brings wayward mom Yvette back into Dev’s life.

Dev doesn’t have the greatest relationship with her mom who abandoned her 13 years ago and hadn’t seen since. She begins to have suspicious feelings that Yvette and her husband Jett are not on the up-and-up about their intentions. Yvette also appears to be flirting with her ex-husband (Dev’s dad) which has Dev on edge. If that isn’t bad enough, strange lights have appeared and the town is up in arms with a UFO expert causing problems in town. When Jett is found murdered, fingers point to Dev’s parents and she finds herself on the case to prove that neither can be the killer.

There are actually two stories playing out (a murder and UFO sightings) that somehow all come together in the end with a big bang. Dev seems to have her hands full with her love life (her boyfriend’s mom hates her), the antics of her parents, a murder, and a UFO expert who is always in the way. This is an enjoyable cozy mystery with just the right amount of humor, wacky characters, mystery, and a bit of romance.
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1,844 reviews21 followers
September 25, 2023
Quirky, fun, and gee, I will read anything that this author writes. The mystery is linked to the old history of this tiny town in Missouri. Civil War or the War Between the States depending on your geographical viewpoint.

Dev has a dimestore and lives with her Granny and her father who is out on parole. She is not fond of her mother who abandoned her with Granny to chase after rich men whom she married. Many of this mystery's discoveries are by accident and some by sleuthing. She has two men romantically inclined towards her so there is competition and she has not made up her mind yet about who she wants to choose. One is currently living with a mentally unstable ex-wife who he is a caretaker and the other has a mother who disapproves of Dev.

Pour yourself a cup of tea and enjoy the tale.
343 reviews
November 17, 2023
The love triangle is quickly becoming a very irritating part of this series. Dev comes across as extremely selfish. If either of the 2 men were to do what she’s doing, they would be portrayed as complete jerks. Why is it ok for her? Adding Meg to the mix, with her faux psychological issues (which really is quite odd too), and hinting that Cooper, who is dating someone else, still wants her, is bordering on the ridiculous. Also I found it very odd that she continually called him her stepfather, and accepted condolences, when she’d never even met him, much less talked to him (other than that brief moment at the town hall meeting). It would have been more natural to call him by his first name, it was very awkward. This series still requires a lot of suspension of disbelief and there’s several inconsistencies with previous books. However, I still like it enough to keep reading.
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1,513 reviews
August 13, 2019
Dev is tricked by two friends into showing up at a community meeting where her mother makes a surprise appearance. Apparently, Dev's latest step-father has agreed to finance the library IF he is allowed access to its records before it opens. Dev is suspicious of her mother's appearance in town and in particular with the amount of time she is spending with Dev's father. Then Dev's step-father, Jett, is discovered murdered and her parents are the prime suspects. In the meantime, why are locals talking about alien lights and the takeover of teenagers by the aliens?
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443 reviews1 follower
March 3, 2024
This was a fun read. Several plot lines occur in this murder mystery, but the main one is the murder of a man who wants to do research in the now closed library. Trouble is that he is the current husband of Deveraux, the main character. To complicate matters, two men are interested in dating Dev. Thus, she is blusy, trying to solve the murder and trying to decide between the two men. My favorite line is the book is this: "I was silent only because this was one of those situations where my supply of profanity was insufficient to meet my demands."
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March 17, 2016
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Between a Book and a Hard Place
A Devereaux’s Dime Store Mystery, Book #5
By Denise Swanson
ISBN 9780451477767
Author’s website: www.deniseswanson.com
Brought to you by OBS Reviewer Jeanie

Synopsis:

Five-and-dime store owner Devereaux “Dev” Sinclair moved to Shadow Bend for her family. But when her long-lost mother shows up in town, she realizes too much kin can be killer…

Shadow Bend’s library closed years ago because of budgetary problems, so when a wealthy benefactor offers to reopen it, everyone, including Dev, is thrilled. But Dev’s excitement wanes when she realizes the mysterious donor is actually her runaway mother Yvette’s latest husband, Jett Benedict.

Dev suspects that Yvette and Jett’s intentions aren’t as noble as they appear, but before she can discover what they’re really up to, Jett turns up dead—and all clues point to Yvette as the prime suspect.

Even though Dev has no loyalty to Yvette, she’s in a bind. Setting the record straight could prove her mother is a killer. But doing nothing might get her mother booked for a crime she didn’t commit.

Review:

This is a must-read for fans of humorous cozy mysteries with quirky characters! ‘Between a Book and a Hard Place’ has fun characters, cozy romance, and intriguing mystery. Fifth in ‘A Devereaux’ Dime Store Mystery’ series, it can be read as a stand-alone. The author very adeptly includes any necessary information about characters or circumstances to get a full picture – and if you haven’t already, you will want to enjoy the others in the series.

Devereaux had purchased the vacant dime store after leaving her six-figure career behind to care for Birdie, her grandmother, who had raised her. While Devereaux’ Dime Store won’t make her financially wealthy, the love between her and her grandmother and her father is worth more than any six-figure-income career. Poppy and Boone have been besties with Dev since grade school, while other friends lead and attend various groups that meet at the store. She has even gained two suitors to decide between.

Dev’s mother Yvette and current husband Jett Benedict come into town completely by surprise to Dev. After all, her mother had left her with her grandmother without looking back when Dev was barely a teen and her father falsely imprisoned for a crime he hadn’t committed. Jett Benedict offered to put up the funds to open and maintain for a couple years the library that had long been closed. His only stipulation is that he be allowed to do some research in the local archives as a ‘scholar’ instead of the millionaire he is thought to be. Unfortunately only a couple days after their arrival, Jett is found murdered by Yvette in the library archives. Yvette and possibly Dev’s father are the only potential suspects so far. Just to stir the pot and add comic relief, an alientologist is in town to lead the UFO believers in waiting for the landing of extra-terrestrials.

I really like Dev, her father, her BFF’s and even both of her beaus! These characters are brought to life by the author with the possible exception of her dad, who is a bit more of an enigma. Dev’s friends are the heart of Shadow Bend, Missouri, the kind of younger people who are the future of small towns. The country club set of older ladies still carry the old Southern values, and sadly wear their old wealth as if it were their personal badge of honor. We see conversations and activities through Dev’s eyes; her wit, charm and talents exemplify why this series is successful.The plot is intricate, and the twists and turns kept me riveted to the book. Dev and her friends have been fondly compared to the Scooby Doo gang because of their past efforts to solve mysteries, especially murders, in the eighteen months since she purchased the Dime Store. Dev, Poppy, and Boone, as well as beau hopefuls Noah and Jake have proven their unique skills in aiding and abetting the police in capturing the men and or women who wreaked havoc in their town. And they are on the hunt for Benedict’s murderer. The author has outdone herself with the layers of duplicity in this novel; it was impossible for this reader to see far enough back or forward to identify who the bad guy or gal might be.

The plot is intricate, and the twists and turns kept me riveted to the book. Dev and her friends have been fondly compared to the Scooby Doo gang because of their past efforts to solve mysteries, especially murders, in the eighteen months since she purchased the Dime Store. Dev, Poppy, and Boone, as well as beau hopefuls Noah and Jake have proven their unique skills in aiding and abetting the police in capturing the men and or women who wreaked havoc in their town. And they are on the hunt for Benedict’s murderer. The author has outdone herself with the layers of duplicity in this novel; it was impossible for this reader to see far enough back or forward to identify who the bad guy or gal might be.

Shadow Bend is a great place to visit! I highly recommend that you visit Dev, her family and friends in their latest adventure. Adults of all ages who are fans of cozy mysteries with Civil War era roots and Southern elegance will delight in Between a Book and a Hard Place!

*OBS would like to thank the publisher for supplying a free copy of this title in exchange for an honest review*
196 reviews
June 24, 2022
I had no clue who the murderer was. Luckily, no one got killed figured it out, but three people came close.

On the other hand, "Community Reviewer" Sarah said, "Sigh* 5 books in and the love triangle is still going strong with Dev no closer to deciding which man she wants (And why the heck are they putting up with that crap??)" That makes me wonder whether I really want to continue reading this series. Make up your mind, already!!
844 reviews40 followers
February 14, 2018
What an interesting life Dev leads. Hmmm, who to pick. A mother, a step-father, and an ex-wife, who will cause the most trouble? What great BFF’s she has. We should all be so lucky! A great story with some great characters. Depending on your age, you may remember those times when you saw those funny lights out over a field.😊

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1,165 reviews
November 13, 2018
Dev is a Nancy Drew type. She is currently dating both Noah and Jake. She and her friends, Boone and Poppy, work out the mystery surrounding Dev's stepfather's murder. Both her mother and father are suspects and Dev wants to find the real killer. The killer was the one who was trying to throw off suspicion by raising havoc about aliens.
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1,897 reviews4 followers
July 28, 2020
I really enjoy this series however I wish the author would quit repeating so much of the information from previous installments. In each book she goes into the same stories about the past and her beliefs and it gets a little repetitive. In this installment we get to meet the mother and stepfather. Overall little far-fetched but entertaining nonetheless.
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107 reviews
November 3, 2020
Wow. I really, really hated this book. Normally I don't expect a lot out of "cozies" but I had to make myself finish this one. The narrator changes from first person to third person in some places - which is just strange and really threw me off. And the "heroine" spent all her time basically making her two boyfriends jealous and they acted like 12 year olds around each other.
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