I had to take a day to reflect on exactly what I wanted to say about this book. First, I want to thank the author for providing me with an ARC and the opportunity to share my thoughts. MILD SPOILERS in this review ahead to fully understand my 3 star rating.
While I did not exactly dislike Of Bones and Lilac, I didn't love it either. That said, I genuinely think I could have loved it with some additional developments and polish.
One of the things that worked exceptionally well for me was the descriptive writing. The prose for the world around our characters is lush and vivid. The action scenes in particular were incredibly visceral and detailed, and I often felt completely immersed in what was happening. There is a real strength here in the author's ability to make the physical aspects of the story feel immediate and tangible.
I also absolutely adored the original artwork illustrated throughout the book. The illustrations added another layer of whimsy to the story and helped me visualize the characters and certain scenes in a way that complemented the writing beautifully. They were a lovely addition and gave the book a distinctive visual quality that I really appreciated.
Where I struggled more was with the dialogue and character development. The dialogue often felt stilted and didn't always have the depth necessary to make the characters feel fully developed. The group dynamic seemed to happen primarily off-page rather than through the characters' interactions with one another, which made it difficult for me to become invested in those relationships.
At one point early on, Lehlia openly tells Noxus that she doesn't like him and then a few pages later she is hurt and saying, "I thought we were friends." She often gets angry out of nowhere and it rarely explored as to why she has these explosive moments. Pavel suddenly asks her out at one point, but it didn't feel as though he was actually interested in her up until that point. The brother that started the journey feels like a throwaway character at the end as there's barely any interaction with him beyond being a mechanism to force her to leave her home.
I also felt that the worldbuilding needed more depth. It isn't absent, but I frequently found myself with questions about how certain aspects of the world worked. For example, I still don't fully understand what the Durain/Lurain are. I understand that they are some kind of zombie-like beings, but I was left wondering how they become familiars and how these animals suddenly acquire the ability to speak. These concepts felt like they needed more explanation for me to fully understand and appreciate the world.
Another issue for me was the marketing/genre label. This book is labeled as a "Dark Fantasy Romance," but I didn't find much darkness or romance in the story. To me, this felt much more like a straightforward fantasy. There is absolutely nothing wrong with that, but the label set up an expectation for a very different reading experience. I went into the book expecting a darker fantasy with a stronger romantic element, and that simply wasn't what I found.
There were also some developmental editing issues that occasionally made the story confusing. One example involved the FMC's cat familiar. On one page, she breaks her bond with the familiar, but a few pages later she is still hugging him and talking about him being wrapped around her arms. Then, a couple of pages later, Pavel asks where her familiar is, and she says that she set him free. I actually had to go back and reread those sections because I thought I had somehow missed the familiar returning (but he did not).
I also struggled to understand why the FMC had a familiar in the first place when she was so traumatized by and strongly opposed to the Durain/Lurain. Her familiar didn't ultimately seem to contribute much to the story beyond being the one character she consistently spent time talking to. I think there was an opportunity there to make the familiar much more meaningful to her character arc and to the larger story.
Interestingly, the character who felt the most developed to me was Noxus. I really appreciated his motives and backstory, and I found myself much more invested in understanding him than I was in some of the other characters. However, I also struggled with the ending. I don't personally consider this a HEA because Noxus ultimately returns to the Council that has essentially enslaved him, and there isn't a clear or satisfying plan established for his future with Lehlia. Given the book's classification as a romance, I expected more resolution in that relationship.
Overall, I would describe this as a sweet fantasy with a lot of potential. I could actually see recommending it to some of my high school students, particularly students who enjoy fantasy but aren't necessarily looking for a darker or romance-heavy story. I think a lot of them would enjoy the premise and action.
For adult fantasy readers, though, I think this story could become exceptional with more depth in the character development, worldbuilding, relationships, and overall developmental editing. There is a strong foundation here, and I would be interested to see what the story could become with another round of polishing and expansion.