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City of Words
One word changes everything.
The all-powerful ruling authority, the Common, implants sensors into its citizens, sensors into the eyes and into the ears. They can see what you see and hear what you hear, and everything is monitored and recorded. One wrong word, or action, and you can lose your citizenship, which means death.
This is the world that Alpha has survived in for thirteen years, and he's good at it. At the School, he's an instructor rank, the highest ranking, which means almost no mistakes, for years. But now everything is unraveling. The Common has set their sights on him, systematically testing him to determine his allegiances. And what's worse, they're bringing Theta into this, the only person in the world that he cares about, and they might even kill her to get to him.
And the only way that this gets resolved, and the only way he can keep Theta safe, is if Alpha finds a way to escape the School. But how can you run from an enemy who can watch you at all times, an enemy who knows everything about you? When a single misspoken word can destroy you?
The all-powerful ruling authority, the Common, implants sensors into its citizens, sensors into the eyes and into the ears. They can see what you see and hear what you hear, and everything is monitored and recorded. One wrong word, or action, and you can lose your citizenship, which means death.
This is the world that Alpha has survived in for thirteen years, and he's good at it. At the School, he's an instructor rank, the highest ranking, which means almost no mistakes, for years. But now everything is unraveling. The Common has set their sights on him, systematically testing him to determine his allegiances. And what's worse, they're bringing Theta into this, the only person in the world that he cares about, and they might even kill her to get to him.
And the only way that this gets resolved, and the only way he can keep Theta safe, is if Alpha finds a way to escape the School. But how can you run from an enemy who can watch you at all times, an enemy who knows everything about you? When a single misspoken word can destroy you?
316 pages, Paperback
First published August 1, 2015
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Steven J. Carroll
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Hi, I'm Steven J. Carroll, a writer of fiction for young adults and pre-teens. I've also been an indie songwriter for many years, which was what honed my interests for writing.
My newest release is book two in a Young Adult, Sci-fi/Dystopian series called CITY OF WORDS. This novel follows the action-packed, suspense-filled journey of Alpha, as he tries to find a way to survive under the watchful eye of the all-powerful ruling authority, called the Common, and as he tries to save the life of the only person in the world that he truly cares about, a girl named Theta.
My fantasy, sci-fi series, THE HISTORIES OF EARTH, is a fast-paced, interstellar adventure. It's about a group of "Light Travelers", who must use their secret abilities to save far-off, distant worlds. These are books about knights and kingdoms, and monsters and epic battles, and mysterious inventions and long ago forgotten histories.
And if you happen to be a fan of Southern Americana fiction, you might like to read my book, THE ROAD TO JERICHO. This is a story about a lovable troublemaker, Ronny Gentry, and his dog, Lionel, and about their travels to Jericho, AR, a hubbub of wanton and reckless living, in the summer of 1949. It's a book about charity, and gratitude, and greed, and the choices that lead us there.
One more thing before I go, I need to give a shout out to my fellow SoCal author, Toby Hoff, who encouraged me to begin writing.
I currently live in Southern California with my wife.
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For more information, go to: stevenjcarroll.com
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September 10, 2016
Just won this on goodreads giveaway!!!! Super excited!!! Just gave 4.5 stars!!! LOVED THIS BOOK SO MUCH!
November 19, 2015
"City of Words" a chillingly exciting new novel by Steven J. Carroll begins in the oppressive world of the Common where implants monitor the senses and memories are recorded. Alpha (aka 7-40-3) a thirteen year old shipped to the School from the infantarium at six has only known life under the dictatorship of the Common. Ranked as an instructor, the highest level at the School and having stayed under the radar of those in-charge for years, Alpha's loyalty is suddenly tested because of a dream that held shades of rebellion.
In a school where Alpha is constantly being bullied by the Disciplinarian, beaten up by a militant squad, loses demerit points for the slightest infraction and faces being demoted in rank, he clings to his friendship with Theta, the only person he cares about and trusts. Together they rebel against the repressive system forging a secret code, and palm-writing to communicate until their lives are threatened. To save her Alpha decides to escape; only freedom comes with a cost that he must be willing to pay.
Set in a society where the location and senses of citizens are monitored to promote peace and harmony, a rank and credit system is used to facilitate cooperation. A violent, uncertain and unreal atmosphere in the School lays the foundation for a well-developed plot that's action-packed and fast-paced. Blindfolded to dull his implants, the locator cut out of his neck, Alpha escapes, his survival instincts tested as he stumbles across the landscape until smelling "drops of tears" and discovering a "golden path" to freedom. With Alpha's simple exchanges in dialogue, his lack of vocabulary and misunderstanding of words that are foreign to him, the author brings authenticity to a story where language is censored and the wrong word can mean loss of rank citizenship and even death.
With clever dexterity Steven J.Carroll builds intensity and suspense as Alpha struggles to find a safe haven only to be chased by a brutal militia, air drones with thermal scanners and wild dogs. Even after being injured and finding sanctuary the plot heats up again, never losing momentum when Alpha decides to rescue Theta from the Common's clutches. With every twist in the story emotions run high not only as Alpha struggles to survive his ordeal or when faced with a decision whether or not to kill a vicious adversary, but also in tender moments with his sister. Events flow quickly and smoothly to an explosive climax that begs for a sequel.
Steven J.Carroll creates strong characters in this story that are multi-faceted with all their imperfections. Alpha at thirteen is brave, clever and resourceful, but impulsive and naive. He finds it difficult to trust people, especially those that chuckle at his regurgitation of the Common's lies and his difficulty with language. In contrast Tau, a militant at the School and an expert with firearms is overconfident and smug, savoring revenge against the militia. Theta ( aka 87-40-1) Alpha's friend is strong-willed, self-sacrificing and sensible even when most vulnerable. Yet of all the personalities that blend high-energy, passion and excitement into this mesmerizing tale, antagonists like Delta and the Disciplinarian add a frightening chill with their heartlessness and cold-blooded cruelty.
"City of Words" is a captivating and entertaining young adult dystopian novel in a series that can only get better with every challenge Alpha and his friends face. I thoroughly enjoyed it and highly recommend it.
In a school where Alpha is constantly being bullied by the Disciplinarian, beaten up by a militant squad, loses demerit points for the slightest infraction and faces being demoted in rank, he clings to his friendship with Theta, the only person he cares about and trusts. Together they rebel against the repressive system forging a secret code, and palm-writing to communicate until their lives are threatened. To save her Alpha decides to escape; only freedom comes with a cost that he must be willing to pay.
Set in a society where the location and senses of citizens are monitored to promote peace and harmony, a rank and credit system is used to facilitate cooperation. A violent, uncertain and unreal atmosphere in the School lays the foundation for a well-developed plot that's action-packed and fast-paced. Blindfolded to dull his implants, the locator cut out of his neck, Alpha escapes, his survival instincts tested as he stumbles across the landscape until smelling "drops of tears" and discovering a "golden path" to freedom. With Alpha's simple exchanges in dialogue, his lack of vocabulary and misunderstanding of words that are foreign to him, the author brings authenticity to a story where language is censored and the wrong word can mean loss of rank citizenship and even death.
With clever dexterity Steven J.Carroll builds intensity and suspense as Alpha struggles to find a safe haven only to be chased by a brutal militia, air drones with thermal scanners and wild dogs. Even after being injured and finding sanctuary the plot heats up again, never losing momentum when Alpha decides to rescue Theta from the Common's clutches. With every twist in the story emotions run high not only as Alpha struggles to survive his ordeal or when faced with a decision whether or not to kill a vicious adversary, but also in tender moments with his sister. Events flow quickly and smoothly to an explosive climax that begs for a sequel.
Steven J.Carroll creates strong characters in this story that are multi-faceted with all their imperfections. Alpha at thirteen is brave, clever and resourceful, but impulsive and naive. He finds it difficult to trust people, especially those that chuckle at his regurgitation of the Common's lies and his difficulty with language. In contrast Tau, a militant at the School and an expert with firearms is overconfident and smug, savoring revenge against the militia. Theta ( aka 87-40-1) Alpha's friend is strong-willed, self-sacrificing and sensible even when most vulnerable. Yet of all the personalities that blend high-energy, passion and excitement into this mesmerizing tale, antagonists like Delta and the Disciplinarian add a frightening chill with their heartlessness and cold-blooded cruelty.
"City of Words" is a captivating and entertaining young adult dystopian novel in a series that can only get better with every challenge Alpha and his friends face. I thoroughly enjoyed it and highly recommend it.
November 16, 2015
Full disclosure: I received this book for free as part of the Goodreads First Reads program.
Dystopia wins hearts, and at least few are going to be won over by City of Words, the first book in a series about an oppressive government that micromanages the daily lives and opinions of its citizens. The plot is soundly structured yet very raw, feeling more like a potentially promising concept in its early stages than a fully finished product. Frenzied fans of dystopian literature may not mind the lack of polish, however, as they tear through from page one to page three hundred sixteen. The basic elements are present for an action-packed, tenderly moving story, and most books can't say that.
Society under rule of the oligarchy known as the Common isn't fun, but it's all that thirteen-year-old Alpha and his peers at the School have known. Continuous audio and visual monitoring by the Leaders of the students' every action prevents the smallest hint of unrest in the ranks. Discontent is so hawkishly watched for that none have dared even discuss the possibility of an uprising as far back as Alpha can recall, but the winds of change begin to blow when a subversive outsider is brought before the community to receive punishment in the form of immediate execution. It turns out Alpha has ties to this modern-day Nathan Hale that go deeper than vaguely agreeing with him that the Common is abusing its power, and the man's death sets Alpha on course to join an underground revolutionary program in its nascent stages. With the assistance of a few secret sympathizers inside the School, Alpha escapes detention by the totalitarian government, but the Common hasn't lost its leverage over him: They have Theta, Alpha's closest friend and ally, and the Common leaves no doubt they will end her life if Alpha doesn't surrender himself. Alpha is tasting freedom for the first time, but is its sweetness worth losing Theta? To attempt a rescue, he'll have to disregard the rational advice of his freedom-fighting allies and return to confront the Common as a wanted man, a lone insurgent against an army of thousands. Is his mission doomed to failure from the outset?
City of Words probably would benefit from a few opening scenes that vividly demonstrate Alpha and Theta's feelings for each other. They obviously do care about each other, but there's no textual support to make their connection emotionally memorable for readers. That can be the difference between a novel that speaks to the soul and a decent action story that never touches us on that deep a level. There are sections of writing in City of Words that show Steven J. Carroll's promise as a storyteller, though, such as one character's description of what it means to have a friend. A friend "is someone to whom you can tell all your secrets, someone whom you can trust without reservation, a person who is not overawed when you are at your best, and is not turned away when you are at your worst." I like that definition, and I think I'll keep it close by should I need it. I admire the work the author must have put into City of Words—the sheer labor required to write any book this length is staggering—and I wish him the best in every literary project he undertakes. I also appreciate the nice personalized note he took the time to write me on the Acknowledgements page of the copy I was given of this book. Thanks for letting me read your story, Steven J. Carroll.
Dystopia wins hearts, and at least few are going to be won over by City of Words, the first book in a series about an oppressive government that micromanages the daily lives and opinions of its citizens. The plot is soundly structured yet very raw, feeling more like a potentially promising concept in its early stages than a fully finished product. Frenzied fans of dystopian literature may not mind the lack of polish, however, as they tear through from page one to page three hundred sixteen. The basic elements are present for an action-packed, tenderly moving story, and most books can't say that.
Society under rule of the oligarchy known as the Common isn't fun, but it's all that thirteen-year-old Alpha and his peers at the School have known. Continuous audio and visual monitoring by the Leaders of the students' every action prevents the smallest hint of unrest in the ranks. Discontent is so hawkishly watched for that none have dared even discuss the possibility of an uprising as far back as Alpha can recall, but the winds of change begin to blow when a subversive outsider is brought before the community to receive punishment in the form of immediate execution. It turns out Alpha has ties to this modern-day Nathan Hale that go deeper than vaguely agreeing with him that the Common is abusing its power, and the man's death sets Alpha on course to join an underground revolutionary program in its nascent stages. With the assistance of a few secret sympathizers inside the School, Alpha escapes detention by the totalitarian government, but the Common hasn't lost its leverage over him: They have Theta, Alpha's closest friend and ally, and the Common leaves no doubt they will end her life if Alpha doesn't surrender himself. Alpha is tasting freedom for the first time, but is its sweetness worth losing Theta? To attempt a rescue, he'll have to disregard the rational advice of his freedom-fighting allies and return to confront the Common as a wanted man, a lone insurgent against an army of thousands. Is his mission doomed to failure from the outset?
City of Words probably would benefit from a few opening scenes that vividly demonstrate Alpha and Theta's feelings for each other. They obviously do care about each other, but there's no textual support to make their connection emotionally memorable for readers. That can be the difference between a novel that speaks to the soul and a decent action story that never touches us on that deep a level. There are sections of writing in City of Words that show Steven J. Carroll's promise as a storyteller, though, such as one character's description of what it means to have a friend. A friend "is someone to whom you can tell all your secrets, someone whom you can trust without reservation, a person who is not overawed when you are at your best, and is not turned away when you are at your worst." I like that definition, and I think I'll keep it close by should I need it. I admire the work the author must have put into City of Words—the sheer labor required to write any book this length is staggering—and I wish him the best in every literary project he undertakes. I also appreciate the nice personalized note he took the time to write me on the Acknowledgements page of the copy I was given of this book. Thanks for letting me read your story, Steven J. Carroll.
October 25, 2015
This was definitely a fast paced dystopian. It was engrossing and imaginative, maybe too imaginative. I overall really really enjoyed this book. The characters and world building were great. The author gave himself quite a bit of challenges and overcame them fairly well in the process.
But here are my problems (SPOILERS!!!)
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Ok so the fact that Alpha and Chi escaped the Common and walked for nearly 2000 miles blindfolded was quite a bit to accept. I found myself wondering if they ever removed the blindfolds because the world was described pretty well for 2 people who have never been outside the Common and who are completely blindfolded in fear out being recaptured. However I was able to overlook this bit.
So them Alpha makes it to his destination and after a few days is in a wheelchair because he can barely walk. That night him and 2 others plan to escape and head back to the Common in order to save someone. Alpha has to use a crutch to get out of Logos and then someone carries him to the transport, but then hours later he can walk.
Then not only that but as a reader I expected for Alpha to see the world that he traversed blindfolded, but the trip from the Common to Logos is very different on the way back to the Common. This time it is a desert, they are rationing their water, their lips are cracking, their skin is burning, and they often have to seek shade. This goes on and on about how sever the landscape is, but I didn't get the same feeling when he was blindfolded and I am assuming traversing the same terrain. Maybe they took different routes. Maybe Alpha took a northern route to get to Logos but now on the way back to the Common they are taking a southern route. I just wish this detail was paid attention to because it's details like these that start stacking up and making numerous things inconceivable.
Again I really enjoyed the book and with a few tweeks it could be wonderful. The overall premise and the characters make this book shine through the errors.
But here are my problems (SPOILERS!!!)
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Ok so the fact that Alpha and Chi escaped the Common and walked for nearly 2000 miles blindfolded was quite a bit to accept. I found myself wondering if they ever removed the blindfolds because the world was described pretty well for 2 people who have never been outside the Common and who are completely blindfolded in fear out being recaptured. However I was able to overlook this bit.
So them Alpha makes it to his destination and after a few days is in a wheelchair because he can barely walk. That night him and 2 others plan to escape and head back to the Common in order to save someone. Alpha has to use a crutch to get out of Logos and then someone carries him to the transport, but then hours later he can walk.
Then not only that but as a reader I expected for Alpha to see the world that he traversed blindfolded, but the trip from the Common to Logos is very different on the way back to the Common. This time it is a desert, they are rationing their water, their lips are cracking, their skin is burning, and they often have to seek shade. This goes on and on about how sever the landscape is, but I didn't get the same feeling when he was blindfolded and I am assuming traversing the same terrain. Maybe they took different routes. Maybe Alpha took a northern route to get to Logos but now on the way back to the Common they are taking a southern route. I just wish this detail was paid attention to because it's details like these that start stacking up and making numerous things inconceivable.
Again I really enjoyed the book and with a few tweeks it could be wonderful. The overall premise and the characters make this book shine through the errors.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 18, 2015
I received this book through a Goodreads giveaway.
In today's society, individuals have freedom of speech whether it is in public or in the privacy of their own home. In Steven J. Carroll's novel, City of Words, there is no privacy. Set in the future, what you say can literally kill you. By placing implants into people's eyes and ears, the ruling class can monitor what everyone sees and hears. They can also invade your mind and show you false images and sounds. Alpha is a thirteen year old boy in the Instructor level at school. Holding onto his Instructor level, the highest level at school, he has led a normal life with no mistakes regarding what he says. Aloha goes about his life until one day when it seems that everyone is focused on him, putting him into situations that seem to target him. What follows in the story after Alpha decides to escape from school is an action packed ride, full of many twist plots. I have read other books by Carroll and was not disappointed in this one. I cannot wait to read the second book to find out what happens.
In today's society, individuals have freedom of speech whether it is in public or in the privacy of their own home. In Steven J. Carroll's novel, City of Words, there is no privacy. Set in the future, what you say can literally kill you. By placing implants into people's eyes and ears, the ruling class can monitor what everyone sees and hears. They can also invade your mind and show you false images and sounds. Alpha is a thirteen year old boy in the Instructor level at school. Holding onto his Instructor level, the highest level at school, he has led a normal life with no mistakes regarding what he says. Aloha goes about his life until one day when it seems that everyone is focused on him, putting him into situations that seem to target him. What follows in the story after Alpha decides to escape from school is an action packed ride, full of many twist plots. I have read other books by Carroll and was not disappointed in this one. I cannot wait to read the second book to find out what happens.
August 3, 2017
*I received a copy from the author in exchange for an honest review*
First Impression: Brilliant cover, and a dystopian/post-apocalyptic society? Yes please.
Characters: The children of the future have no parents. They are bred to serve a purpose, and are just as disposable. Alpha and Theta have a charming friendship with a hint at the possibility of blooming love.
World Building: Step into the future in a world that is immersive without being overly so. Sometimes it's nice to know enough about the scene to push the story along, and not get bogged down in pages of new science and inventions.
Writing Style: Carroll certainly has a voice for young adult fiction. My inner teenage girl was intrigued while my adult mind looked back with nostalgia to times of simple friendships and moral absolutes. I adore works that can turn back the clock on growing old.
What I Enjoyed: Moments of surprising insight will encourage young minds to think about the dangers of controlling society. Not just a tale for youth, I found the writing engaging enough for adult minds as well.
Deal Benders: City of Words was a solid first installment. I would have liked to see more back story on Alpha and Theta, to give their connection more feeling.
Overall Rating: 4 stars, and I look forward to reading the next book!
For Fans Of: Post-apocalyptic action, suspense, and a little mystery.
First Impression: Brilliant cover, and a dystopian/post-apocalyptic society? Yes please.
Characters: The children of the future have no parents. They are bred to serve a purpose, and are just as disposable. Alpha and Theta have a charming friendship with a hint at the possibility of blooming love.
World Building: Step into the future in a world that is immersive without being overly so. Sometimes it's nice to know enough about the scene to push the story along, and not get bogged down in pages of new science and inventions.
Writing Style: Carroll certainly has a voice for young adult fiction. My inner teenage girl was intrigued while my adult mind looked back with nostalgia to times of simple friendships and moral absolutes. I adore works that can turn back the clock on growing old.
What I Enjoyed: Moments of surprising insight will encourage young minds to think about the dangers of controlling society. Not just a tale for youth, I found the writing engaging enough for adult minds as well.
Deal Benders: City of Words was a solid first installment. I would have liked to see more back story on Alpha and Theta, to give their connection more feeling.
Overall Rating: 4 stars, and I look forward to reading the next book!
For Fans Of: Post-apocalyptic action, suspense, and a little mystery.
February 22, 2017
I won this book through a goodreads giveaway. My review is my own opinion of the book, not swayed by outside factors.
I enjoyed City of Words Steven J. Carroll did a good job creating characters and a story line that were interesting. I also thought that even though there are loose ends he did bring some resolution to the story which I like because sometimes in a series authors will leave huge cliffhangers which tends to annoy me. I look forward to reading the next book in this series so that I can find out more about Alpha, Theta, Sarah, and the rest of the characters. I recommend this book to readers of science fiction and especially those interested in novels that involve dystopian societies.
I enjoyed City of Words Steven J. Carroll did a good job creating characters and a story line that were interesting. I also thought that even though there are loose ends he did bring some resolution to the story which I like because sometimes in a series authors will leave huge cliffhangers which tends to annoy me. I look forward to reading the next book in this series so that I can find out more about Alpha, Theta, Sarah, and the rest of the characters. I recommend this book to readers of science fiction and especially those interested in novels that involve dystopian societies.
December 3, 2015
I received this book as a Goodreads Giveaway and I want to thank the author for taking the time to write a personal message inside as well.
The book begins with Alpha a young student who lives in a school ruled by the Common. Each citizen is implanted with an optical and audial sensors so that the Common can keep watch over them. Alpha is in the highest ranking but after a strange dream he begins to question things and is encouraged to escape the confines of the school. He soon realizes that their is a world bigger than the one that he has lived in for the past thirteen years and he finds himself making his way out of the school secretly. Soon the Common discover his disappearance and threaten his best friends Theta's life if he does not return.
I found this book a little hard to understand at the beginning. The reader is thrown into a strange world with little description of how and why things are the way they are. It slowly progresses and you start to understand how the school is ran but it never really highlights on why all the citizens are being monitored. Just that they are in a way trapped and are being controlled by a higher authority. I found some of the character development lacking for certain characters such as Chi and the Schoolmaster, as well as one of the main characters, Theta. And I felt as though Andrew was somewhat thrown into the story out of nowhere. I did enjoy the descriptiveness of the scenery and the technological aspect of the book. Overall it was a good read. I just wish there was more character development. I found it hard to relate to any of the characters.
The book begins with Alpha a young student who lives in a school ruled by the Common. Each citizen is implanted with an optical and audial sensors so that the Common can keep watch over them. Alpha is in the highest ranking but after a strange dream he begins to question things and is encouraged to escape the confines of the school. He soon realizes that their is a world bigger than the one that he has lived in for the past thirteen years and he finds himself making his way out of the school secretly. Soon the Common discover his disappearance and threaten his best friends Theta's life if he does not return.
I found this book a little hard to understand at the beginning. The reader is thrown into a strange world with little description of how and why things are the way they are. It slowly progresses and you start to understand how the school is ran but it never really highlights on why all the citizens are being monitored. Just that they are in a way trapped and are being controlled by a higher authority. I found some of the character development lacking for certain characters such as Chi and the Schoolmaster, as well as one of the main characters, Theta. And I felt as though Andrew was somewhat thrown into the story out of nowhere. I did enjoy the descriptiveness of the scenery and the technological aspect of the book. Overall it was a good read. I just wish there was more character development. I found it hard to relate to any of the characters.
November 8, 2015
Fantastic start to a new dystopian series! (3.75/5 Stars)
City of Words features a dystopian society where citizens are implanted with sensors behind both their eyes and ears. These sensors allow the government, the Common, see and hear everything that the citizens hear and they are also able to control what they can see and hear. If someone uses a word that is banned or commits some action that is against the rules, they lose their citizenship which means death.
I was pleasantly surprised by this book! The general idea behind The Common and the sensors was really unique - totally different from the dystopian books that I am used to reading. I thought that it was gripping, I never wanted to put it down and I always had questions running through my mind.
The characters were really great and it was interesting watching Alpha figure things out and come to terms with all of the lies and truths in his life, both in the past and in the present. For me, there was a little bit of a disconnect with some of the side characters. But that didn't turn me off from the story at all.
I gave City of Words 3.75-4 stars because there were times when I felt like we were missing some important background information. Most of my questions were answered but there are still some blank spaces. But I am sure they will all be answered as the series continues.
The ending has me wanting more! I can't wait to see what comes next in this series. Highly recommend if you're interested in a new, unique YA Dystopian!
*I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
City of Words features a dystopian society where citizens are implanted with sensors behind both their eyes and ears. These sensors allow the government, the Common, see and hear everything that the citizens hear and they are also able to control what they can see and hear. If someone uses a word that is banned or commits some action that is against the rules, they lose their citizenship which means death.
I was pleasantly surprised by this book! The general idea behind The Common and the sensors was really unique - totally different from the dystopian books that I am used to reading. I thought that it was gripping, I never wanted to put it down and I always had questions running through my mind.
The characters were really great and it was interesting watching Alpha figure things out and come to terms with all of the lies and truths in his life, both in the past and in the present. For me, there was a little bit of a disconnect with some of the side characters. But that didn't turn me off from the story at all.
I gave City of Words 3.75-4 stars because there were times when I felt like we were missing some important background information. Most of my questions were answered but there are still some blank spaces. But I am sure they will all be answered as the series continues.
The ending has me wanting more! I can't wait to see what comes next in this series. Highly recommend if you're interested in a new, unique YA Dystopian!
*I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
June 11, 2016
I was intrigued by the premise of this book, just based on the blurb posted on goodreads. When I won a copy from goodreads and had a chance to read the story itself, I was pleasantly surprised. This is one of those rare books that the cover, and book blurb may actually turn people away from reading, what is a very good dystopian novel.
Alpha is raised in the Common, a futuristic society where the leaders have the ability to control your vision, and your hearing. Life is based on a system of demerits, and rules, that you simply follow without question, or are executed. Despite all of this he has befriended a young lady, Theta, and the two of them have established a series of codes that allows them to talk, not necessarily freely, but more openly without receiving demerits.
Through a series of interventions, Alpha is able to achieve a freedom outside of the Common that he never even dared imagine, but when the common uses Theta to try and get him back, he must choose whether or not to risk his freedom and his new friends lives to save her.
This book is incredibly well written for being a YA story. The author does a fabulous job of moving the story along, yet explaining Alpha's actions, and feelings. I would probably rate it a 4.5 out of 5 over all. My biggest disappointment is that when I reached the end I realized this is simply the first in a series and I have a personal rule about not reading books until the whole series is out because I'm too impatient.
Alpha is raised in the Common, a futuristic society where the leaders have the ability to control your vision, and your hearing. Life is based on a system of demerits, and rules, that you simply follow without question, or are executed. Despite all of this he has befriended a young lady, Theta, and the two of them have established a series of codes that allows them to talk, not necessarily freely, but more openly without receiving demerits.
Through a series of interventions, Alpha is able to achieve a freedom outside of the Common that he never even dared imagine, but when the common uses Theta to try and get him back, he must choose whether or not to risk his freedom and his new friends lives to save her.
This book is incredibly well written for being a YA story. The author does a fabulous job of moving the story along, yet explaining Alpha's actions, and feelings. I would probably rate it a 4.5 out of 5 over all. My biggest disappointment is that when I reached the end I realized this is simply the first in a series and I have a personal rule about not reading books until the whole series is out because I'm too impatient.
April 1, 2016
I won this book from a Goodreads giveaway. This reminded me of a combination of books, including The Giver- the structure of society, censorship on things... The society that Alpha and Theta are part of is rather frightening, considering what's exposed as the story progresses. I liked the author's descriptions of things from a blindfolded perspective and figuring out what the objects were. Determining the geographic locations based on the descriptions was a nice touch, although I'm not too sure where Primus is- maybe more clues will be offered in the next book for confirmation. Overall, good story- world building, characters, pace, action, plot.... Will continue to read the series.
September 30, 2015
I loved this book! It was very well written, very fast-paced. I love dystopian fiction, this is one of the best that I have read in a while. I found myself rooting for Alpha and Theta all the way. I can't wait for more from this author! Highly recommend for anyone who likes science fiction and dystopian!
January 6, 2017
Good YA dystopian novel. Interestingly, it pushes non-mortal ways to fight back against a tyrranical oppressor. It is a grim story and the first book in a series with mostly young protagonists. Good plot.
September 3, 2015
Absolutely loved this book! If you like Dystopian YA Lit this is the book for you.
October 26, 2019
I received this book from a giveaway. Dystopian futures aren't a new idea and writers will always need to explore them because just like 1984 and Brave New World, writers need to warn people of what could happen, but also create haunting worlds for readers to enjoy. That being said, City of Words doesn't live up to that challenge. The ideas presented are unique, but the execution is poor. This book needed a developmental editor and copy editor tame poorly constructed world building, descriptions, and grammar. It's tough to write from a character's perspective that literally has no concept of what something is but the reader does. It creates a very tense situation where I'm over here rolling my eyes at how the character's being handled. It also doesn't help that many of the characters don't get enough development for me to care about them. But even if the character is naive because of the world they've been raised in, the writing is supposed to make the reader go on a journey with the character, empathize with them, care, laugh, and worry. I shouldn't be sitting here confused over a poorly written description of sweat. When the writing itself is distracting me from the story, that's one of the many signs of an editor being needed. And *spoiler alert* at the end when one character is "temporarily blind" and the other is "temporarily deaf" comes across as too coincidental and a really bad use of a cliffhanger. Overall, this was a good first draft of a novel, but it needed serious editing before being published.
December 11, 2020
I enjoyed the book, but the ending did leave a bit to be desired, I assume due to a sequel. Will read the sequel
March 2, 2024
Quick read, I like the genre and enjoyed this one
November 13, 2015
Before I get to my review, I would like to start off by saying that I received this book for free as a giveaway winner via Goodreads.com (sponsored by the author/publisher/other individual or entity) and by no means does this impact my review. Although I am super grateful and excited for any opportunity at receiving a book for free, I am also very strict with being honest. And with that, I thank you!
Actual Rating: 3.5/5
This book was good. Not great, but good. It had it's moments where I was completely hooked and didn't want to put it down - but it also had it's moments where I was straight up bored. Not bored the "this book sucks, ugh, ermergerd" bored, but just the "I'm ready for you to do something, like 2 chapters ago" bored. It starts off strong; the first chapter had me hooked and that's always a good thing! It was intense and had me wondering what happens next. If you like dystopian/sci-fi genres, then I would definitely recommend this book for you, although I wouldn't recommend to anyone who dislikes younger reads. The only reason I say that is because I find Alpha to be a little too whiny, even for my taste. Not saying that every leading male character has to be brooding and strong willed and oh-so-dreamy, but Alpha was a little much to take sometimes.
The Enjoyable Things:
Can I talk about this cover first? It's great! I am a cover snob. I'm sorry, if you put effort in to your writing I feel like you need to put just as much into the appearance. I am a
"judge a book by it's cover" type of gal. It's what made me read the book description in the first place. It really captured my eye and I love the idea of holding a picture of a 'before world destruction' over the 'after math'. Kudos for the outer display!
Another thing I enjoyed in this book was Chapter 22 in particular! Without spoiling anything, I really enjoy who they introduced here. I, personally, did not see it coming and that always makes for a fun read :]
The Not So Enjoyable Things:
I really feel that this book should've been a "book 2" because I don't feel like there was much background info before things started falling apart. THAT or it should add a few more chapters to the beginning.
I did enjoy the scene where Alpha and Theta are thrown up against each other to fight - I got so excited reading about it but then it seemed to fall flat. I was really engulfed in this build up but felt like it went no where. Again, this is a scene where I feel like Alpha's whiny and unruliness comes in to play. He just needs to stop -_- .
All in all, I would recommend this book - and being at the end it quotes "End of Book One" I would definitely be interested in getting my hands on book 2 and seeing where this story goes!
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Actual Rating: 3.5/5
This book was good. Not great, but good. It had it's moments where I was completely hooked and didn't want to put it down - but it also had it's moments where I was straight up bored. Not bored the "this book sucks, ugh, ermergerd" bored, but just the "I'm ready for you to do something, like 2 chapters ago" bored. It starts off strong; the first chapter had me hooked and that's always a good thing! It was intense and had me wondering what happens next. If you like dystopian/sci-fi genres, then I would definitely recommend this book for you, although I wouldn't recommend to anyone who dislikes younger reads. The only reason I say that is because I find Alpha to be a little too whiny, even for my taste. Not saying that every leading male character has to be brooding and strong willed and oh-so-dreamy, but Alpha was a little much to take sometimes.
The Enjoyable Things:
Can I talk about this cover first? It's great! I am a cover snob. I'm sorry, if you put effort in to your writing I feel like you need to put just as much into the appearance. I am a
"judge a book by it's cover" type of gal. It's what made me read the book description in the first place. It really captured my eye and I love the idea of holding a picture of a 'before world destruction' over the 'after math'. Kudos for the outer display!
Another thing I enjoyed in this book was Chapter 22 in particular! Without spoiling anything, I really enjoy who they introduced here. I, personally, did not see it coming and that always makes for a fun read :]
The Not So Enjoyable Things:
I really feel that this book should've been a "book 2" because I don't feel like there was much background info before things started falling apart. THAT or it should add a few more chapters to the beginning.
I did enjoy the scene where Alpha and Theta are thrown up against each other to fight - I got so excited reading about it but then it seemed to fall flat. I was really engulfed in this build up but felt like it went no where. Again, this is a scene where I feel like Alpha's whiny and unruliness comes in to play. He just needs to stop -_- .
All in all, I would recommend this book - and being at the end it quotes "End of Book One" I would definitely be interested in getting my hands on book 2 and seeing where this story goes!
**To see my FULL review, visit: The Nerdy Bookmark - A Not-So-Serious Book Review Blog **
June 4, 2016
I received this book from the author as part of a Goodreads giveaway. This hasn't influenced my opinion about the book.
City of Words was unique and frightening and really interesting. It's crazy to imagine a society that has total and complete control over your eyes and your ears making you see and hear what they want and them seeing and hearing everything you do. Alpha is young - younger than I keep expecting him to be. He has grown up in this society his whole life and it's all he has known. Until someone helps him escape. Except he has to leave behind Theta, his best friend.
Alpha and Theta's relationship was kind of boring. The only history they have is the story about how they met and various signs they've made up in the years they've known each other. I feel like their relationship didn't have very much substance even though they were bestest friends for life.
None of the relationships in this book held very much weight with me: Chi, Tau. Only his relationship with Sarah did I feel something for.
There were a few things that bothered me:
-When they started writing on each others hands as communication it seemed incredibly tedious because they would have had to spend minutes writing sentences. And I thought about this All. The. Time. Like when they would explain something in palm writing and I would be like, why would you say those words? You could've said this shorter thing that would have taken less time, etc, etc. And I was constantly aware of that.
-Alpha is young, 13, (again, I bring this up, sorry) and the things he manages to do on his own are crazy.
-Things are incredibly convenient for the main characters and they never get caught even though the bad guys are literally right at their doorstep or feet away.
-Delta is freaking EVERYWHERE. Like, ok, he's the bad guy embodiment of the Common, lovely. But seriously, whenever they need to fight a bad guy its always Delta, even if it's hundreds of miles away from where he should still be training and then hundreds of miles in the opposite direction after that.
But it wasn't all bad! Things I liked:
-The concept in the beginning with the Common and their powers. I haven't read a dystopian quite like it before.
-How simple things have to be explained like "family". It really puts into perspective how different and isolated and dystopian it really was.
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I'm definitely going to read the second book.
City of Words was unique and frightening and really interesting. It's crazy to imagine a society that has total and complete control over your eyes and your ears making you see and hear what they want and them seeing and hearing everything you do. Alpha is young - younger than I keep expecting him to be. He has grown up in this society his whole life and it's all he has known. Until someone helps him escape. Except he has to leave behind Theta, his best friend.
Alpha and Theta's relationship was kind of boring. The only history they have is the story about how they met and various signs they've made up in the years they've known each other. I feel like their relationship didn't have very much substance even though they were bestest friends for life.
None of the relationships in this book held very much weight with me: Chi, Tau. Only his relationship with Sarah did I feel something for.
There were a few things that bothered me:
-When they started writing on each others hands as communication it seemed incredibly tedious because they would have had to spend minutes writing sentences. And I thought about this All. The. Time. Like when they would explain something in palm writing and I would be like, why would you say those words? You could've said this shorter thing that would have taken less time, etc, etc. And I was constantly aware of that.
-Alpha is young, 13, (again, I bring this up, sorry) and the things he manages to do on his own are crazy.
-Things are incredibly convenient for the main characters and they never get caught even though the bad guys are literally right at their doorstep or feet away.
-Delta is freaking EVERYWHERE. Like, ok, he's the bad guy embodiment of the Common, lovely. But seriously, whenever they need to fight a bad guy its always Delta, even if it's hundreds of miles away from where he should still be training and then hundreds of miles in the opposite direction after that.
But it wasn't all bad! Things I liked:
-The concept in the beginning with the Common and their powers. I haven't read a dystopian quite like it before.
-How simple things have to be explained like "family". It really puts into perspective how different and isolated and dystopian it really was.
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I'm definitely going to read the second book.
December 13, 2016
Alpha 7-40-3 is a 13-year-old boy growing up in a dystopian world. Children are raised in an infantarium until they are six when they are sent to school. They know nothing of parents, family, friendship, only that they have a set amount of credits which are deducted for infractions, and as you lose credits, your standing and job opportunities dwindle, from instructor, to militant, to medical, and finally to laborer. Alpha's world starts to fall apart after a man accused of treason is executed, and the man looks so familiar until Theta, a girl Alpha is friends with, notes the executed man had Alpha's eyes. It turns out the man was Alpha's male progenitor (father). This sets everything into motion. They story was an interesting take on a dystopian society where the masses are treated as less than human and brainwashed to the point they can barely think for themselves, and how far individuals will go, and how much they will risk, for something they believe in.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
March 23, 2016
The Common is all powerful; they can see and hear everything.
Life is how they dictate it to be until one word appears to the masses...Revolution.
I won this book as a Goodreads giveaway.
Alpha is a student of the School, where all children of the Common are forced to "study" and earn rankings. Theta is his friend and with a system of coded language, they begin to decipher what this revolution they witnessed could possibly mean to their way of life, with the help of a few allies.
I couldn't put this book down and found myself frustrated and anxious while reading it. Some of it is pretty far fetched (characters roaming around for miles blindfolded is pretty ambitious and unlikely to be successful).
I'm assuming this is a series and would definitely be interested in seeing how the story continues to unfold.
Life is how they dictate it to be until one word appears to the masses...Revolution.
I won this book as a Goodreads giveaway.
Alpha is a student of the School, where all children of the Common are forced to "study" and earn rankings. Theta is his friend and with a system of coded language, they begin to decipher what this revolution they witnessed could possibly mean to their way of life, with the help of a few allies.
I couldn't put this book down and found myself frustrated and anxious while reading it. Some of it is pretty far fetched (characters roaming around for miles blindfolded is pretty ambitious and unlikely to be successful).
I'm assuming this is a series and would definitely be interested in seeing how the story continues to unfold.
July 21, 2017
I got this book in a Goodreads giveaway
I enjoyed the basic concepts of this book such as the Common and the idea of audial and vision sensors. Alpha's connection with each of their other characters are so pure and genuine, especially as he tries to learn new words and concepts. This book is a dystopian novel and had some aspects of other dystopian novels. Alpha ran away from the school similar to the end of The Giver as well as fighting against the central "power" force, which happens in other novels too. Of course, this book had its own components as well and the general idea of the School and the Common were unique ideas. For me, the book was a little slow and predictable, which I don't really enjoy. This is one of those books where I will most likely read the sequel, but I won't be in a rush when it come out.
I enjoyed the basic concepts of this book such as the Common and the idea of audial and vision sensors. Alpha's connection with each of their other characters are so pure and genuine, especially as he tries to learn new words and concepts. This book is a dystopian novel and had some aspects of other dystopian novels. Alpha ran away from the school similar to the end of The Giver as well as fighting against the central "power" force, which happens in other novels too. Of course, this book had its own components as well and the general idea of the School and the Common were unique ideas. For me, the book was a little slow and predictable, which I don't really enjoy. This is one of those books where I will most likely read the sequel, but I won't be in a rush when it come out.
June 11, 2016
3.5 stars
I received this book through a giveaway the author had. But that does not affect the honesty of this review. I thought overall that this book was okay. The beginning was fairly confusing and jumbled. However, the middle of book did help clear up some of the confusion I had in the beginning of the story. The titles everything had and the vocabulary this society used was the most confusing part for me. I didn't really get into the story until the last few chapters. The characters were too underdeveloped for my liking. I did however really like the ending of this book. When I began this book I thought for sure I would not be interested in the second one, but the ending was actually really good. I definitely will consider getting the second book now.
I received this book through a giveaway the author had. But that does not affect the honesty of this review. I thought overall that this book was okay. The beginning was fairly confusing and jumbled. However, the middle of book did help clear up some of the confusion I had in the beginning of the story. The titles everything had and the vocabulary this society used was the most confusing part for me. I didn't really get into the story until the last few chapters. The characters were too underdeveloped for my liking. I did however really like the ending of this book. When I began this book I thought for sure I would not be interested in the second one, but the ending was actually really good. I definitely will consider getting the second book now.
March 11, 2016
Alpha is a 13-year-old who lives in a dystopian world where sensors are implanted by the government to monitor what you see and hear. One day he sees something he shouldn’t and his world changes. As he questions his world and things around him, his friendships become more important.
Steven has great characters and he has excellently described his world and political atmosphere.
However, there was a small portion of the novel that dragged a bit for me.
I don’t want to give too much of the story away as he has provided a perfect description on his Amazon page and I have added a link on the More Info link to a video he has made!
FTC Disclaimer:
"I received this book for free from “Goodreads.Com” for an honest review."
Steven has great characters and he has excellently described his world and political atmosphere.
However, there was a small portion of the novel that dragged a bit for me.
I don’t want to give too much of the story away as he has provided a perfect description on his Amazon page and I have added a link on the More Info link to a video he has made!
FTC Disclaimer:
"I received this book for free from “Goodreads.Com” for an honest review."
June 8, 2016
I won a copy of this book on a Goodreads giveaway. I thought it was a very average book. The plot was pretty good and it was east reading, but the characters just did not interest or grab my attention.What really killed the book for me and dropped it to a couple stars, was the non-ending which was-end of book one. In other words, this is a series. What is it with all these series ? Can't a writer just write one story, end it, and then write a new story with new characters ? I for one am not awaiting the sequel.
April 17, 2016
I received a copy of this for free through Goodreads First Reads
I flat out do not like dystopian novels, and I keep reading new ones in the hope that I will find one that I like. It finally happened! The commons is terrifying, Alpha is heartbreaking, and all the other characters are just rounded out enough to make you care about them too. There are a few rough edges in the book, but in my opinion that made it more believable. Very much looking forward to more from Alpha and Theta.
I flat out do not like dystopian novels, and I keep reading new ones in the hope that I will find one that I like. It finally happened! The commons is terrifying, Alpha is heartbreaking, and all the other characters are just rounded out enough to make you care about them too. There are a few rough edges in the book, but in my opinion that made it more believable. Very much looking forward to more from Alpha and Theta.
February 27, 2016
This book had great ideas for the story but some parts dragged out too long for me and some parts seemed like they didn't fit at all. I enjoyed the simple thing such as needing to be taught "English" because the Common left their citizens without words. Having no control over you own eyes or ears and forbidden to speak some things out loud is no way to live but how can one know better unless he takes the change. There is a tragic twist ending that makes me wonder what will happen next.
April 18, 2016
I enjoyed the book and with a few changes it could be wonderful. It had great ideas for the story but some parts just dragged out. This is a fast paced dystopian. The characters were great. Steven J.Carroll creates such strong characters but I think it needs to be cut just a little bit.
Overall it's a good story, one I would like to see what happens.
Overall it's a good story, one I would like to see what happens.
April 24, 2016
A suspenseful story about a world when one wrong word or action could cost you your life. A teacher who has been good for 13 years, is being tested. They even bring in the love of his life and it could cost her her life. What should he do?
September 19, 2016
Absolutely great book. At first, I thought I wasn't going to be that into it, but once I started, I could not put it down. Great dystopian book, and I cannot wait for the next in the series to come out!
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