The battle for Eastport is won, but a third of the waterfront lies in smoldering ruin. Forced to use sorcery and steel during the showdown with Holten Magus, Kevon's secret is revealed. He flees across the sea to the east, surrounded by the few people he can trust. He continues the mission before him - translating an ancient tome for a patron whose support he may have already lost. In a strange land, Kevon must fight to rejoin old companions and forge new alliances in a struggle that may be more than it seems…
Nope. Just nope. Story flow jumps constantly. Doesn't paint a picture just tells some bits and pieces. A lot of things are left unsaid. Not even half deceloped story. I am still wondering if Mirsa's child is of Bertus. And what about that sword? And Kevon fell and was suddenly too exausted and poisoned. And then we see the elves and the author starts telling what they are doing using the elves names without telling us who is who. Just terrible story telling. You are present with new characters without proper introduction even background to understand different clans or such. I could write a lot more how bad this book is but it's just not worthy.
I'm done, finished, can't take it anymore...there were bits and pieces from the first 3 that would have made a good read if author put the story together. He did not.
Background development was haphazard, Inconsistent and destroyed the plot, subplots. Along with 'winging it' -- whether a character, application of magic, species, action -- it was hard to follow and understand. Best characters were the support stereotypes.
It's an awful read that had some potential there somewhere. I don't want to waste anymore of my time, "hoping" that the author puts it all together in the next xx books of series.
This was a DNF. I struggled through the book after the first third...making it to 82% completion. The storyline kept running way off mark while the characters felt more and more 2D. The series started off with an interesting idea, which was left behind in the third book. I stopped reading about halfway through when the plot kept going through ridiculous turns. Oh and let's not forget about the "romance" with his childhood love.
I'm disappointed by this book. The series is continuing to go downhill starting from book 2. Reading through this installment grew into a slog by the time I was halfway done. There's a lack of focus in the plot that hardly explains anything, and a slew of new characters pop up with hardly any attempt at bringing them to life. A lot of potential that I held in this series has gone to waste due to the author's unimaginative and mechanical writing.
I enjoy the story, especially with all of the paranormal characters. However, the book is missing the "meat" in the story. It is lacking details that would make the book better and give it more substance. But I would like to read the next book because I would like to know how it ends, but the story could be a lot better.
In my opinion, each story further along is better than the one before it. Really can't wait to see what happens when they finally get back to the Myrnar. Ready for number four.