Ares' Anger

by James Womack

It was a routine mission outside the confines of the bio-habitat housing the first human colony on Mars. At least it was supposed to be routine. Which is why Dexter Arnold was outside alone despite policy which dictated a mandatory out-time partner. Routine departed when he wrecked his rover buggy. That was the least of his problems as the worse was yet to come. As a matter of fact, the worse was coming both fast and straight at Dexter.

40 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 16, 2015

Reviews

[Linda · Rating 5 out of 5]

This novelette is tense, engaging, and fast paced. Mr. Womack does an excellent job describing the terrain on his version of Mars surface, the bio-habitat, and outer space. As he introduces us to the characters, it’s easy to get a feel for their personalities and the comradery that has developed between the diverse crew members. Mr. Womack inserted a little subtle humor to break the tension, which was well placed and realistic.

I think any reader would enjoy this science fiction. My preferred genre is not Sci-Fi but I enjoyed this story. The scenario is futuristic and realistic. The crew members are believable and I felt their despair deeply. However, I can’t even imagine how it would actually feel to have to watch a tragedy unfold in front of my own eyes and not be able to do anything to help or keep it from happening.

FYI: **Originally written for "BigAl’s Books and Pals" book blog. May have received a free review copy.** December 24, 2015

[Eulis S. · Rating 3 out of 5]

This is a short story with an identity crisis. By attempting to alternate between technical details and a character-centric plot, it's like the son of Jules Verne married the daughter of H. G. Wells. And the introduction of the crew is so drawn out, it reminds me of "Incident at Oxbow". All the crew members aren't even necessary to the story. The writing felt a little disjointed in place. But the concept was good, the technical details interesting, and overall the story barely comes in as a satisfying read. It wouldn't take much for this short story to make the jump from just OK to great. I hope the author lets this story lay around a while and then comes back and takes another look at it. For now, save your $0.99.

[Debra Morris · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is an excellent short story. It leaves the reader wanting for more. It would make a great book/series or even TV show or Movie. People can relate to the story because of NASA plans. I would recommend to the author to turn this story into at least a book. I highly recommend this for readers who like fast paced well written short stories.

Note: I was given a copy to read from Story Cartel for an honest review.

[Boundless Book Reviews · Rating 3 out of 5]

I was asked to read Ares Anger and give an honest review. The book is currently available on Kindle Unlimited and also free on Amazon.

There is a lot of remarkable character and world building for such a short story. I feel that with as much work that was put into building the world and the characters more needs to be done. This should just be the start of a full length novel.

I would like more....Sara


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[latybug · Rating 5 out of 5]

I received a free download of this book from the author, thank you!
I really enjoyed this story. There was suspense throughout, and I was happy with the ending. Although the story is set in the future on Mars, you don't have to be a science fiction fan to enjoy it. I would recommend this book to anyone.
I will read more by this author.

[Sara]

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