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One more take

201 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 22, 2026

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A.V LENNOX

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2 reviews
September 8, 2026
waste of time

I’m genuinely upset I spent $13 on this. The dialogue is so painfully unnatural that it constantly pulled me out of the story. Almost every interaction is reduced to these clipped, one-word exchanges that no actual human being would have unless they were communicating exclusively through a series of grunts. It’s not atmospheric or minimalist it’s just bad writing. I kept waiting for the dialogue to start sounding like people talking, and it never did. $13 I will never see again.
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Author 1 book365 followers
September 2, 2026
I love supporting debut authors! This was such a pleasant read from start to finish, i don’t usually review new sapphic books but when they are self published and THIS GOOD? I have to. I definitely recommend, this gives tshoeh but with way more spice!
2 reviews
September 2, 2026
I love this book so much, the yearning is incomparable. The characters genuinely do hold this special bond that’s unbreakable. I love all the themes in this book that made me think twice about my life, it was just so beautiful!
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8 reviews
October 4, 2026
I truly don’t think the author read through this book before publishing it. The grammatical and formatting errors are more than enough to take anyone out of this story. The premise isn’t bad, the execution needs work
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