3.7/5
very interesting and beautiful at points. i didn't quote it, but "It Was a Splendid Mind" is such an amazing poem. "Penance" as well.
poems & lines I did like:
Sea Foam Palace
I.
Pardon this frontal offensive,
dear chum. Forgive my word-
churn, my drift, the ways this
text message has gotten all frothy.
How was it you became holy
to me? Should I resist, furiously?
Is this your true vistage, shaken free,
glimpses of what underlies
the world we can see?Do not
forget me murmurs something
nibbled by fishes under the sea
II.
I love the way you wear
your face, how you ride this life.
I delight in the sight of your
nervous, inquisitive eyes,
though I try to act otherwise.
Being stoned out of thy mind
only amps up thy fearsome
brain wattage. After dark
you're quicksilvery: wet/
slick//glistening. Don't make
me chase you, dragging
my heavy caresses, a pair of
awkward serrated claws.
Some of us (but not you)
Kissing
Kissing occurs in skirmishes, wallops, or big gulps.
Pressing lips to lips or lips to objects jolts both souls.
Is kissing particular to mammals? Have you watched lizards or insects kiss?
The kiss delivers a long-awaited verdict.
Kissing maps a hazardous passage.
Kissing offers prayers on deliverance from danger, or a prelude to wounding.
Two people kiss at the bottom of a lake, silt swirling around them.
Kissing grips kissers as the coldest winter on record gripped Europe.
Kissing makes plain the body's resolve.
Kissing references a text that no longer exists, which we try to conjure back
into existence by kissing.
Extracts From The Consoler's Handbook
sleepless grief
rises quietly
twice a night
to change its soaked
pajamas
a first lodged in its throat
submissive grief
sips the offered broth
but spits in a napkin
the minute you look away
after fucking in the underbrush
jealous fury and voracious grief
walk slowly home
in opposite directions
their hair full of dead leaves
impatient grief
braids and unbraids
the tablecloth fringe
taps out Morse code
with its loafer toe
sending messages
to the newly dead
the body's a bear trap
while enduring the fat pastor's
kindly insights and pouring him
more coffee
On The Idea The Dead May Live Vicariously Through Us"
gravestones
that vanished
a century ago
now reappear
perpetual loneliness flows
from century to century
from mosque
to churchyard
to synagogue
the living ferment
what our dead were
before immersion
our dead remain forces
we believe ourselves
at the mercy of
today's
brain fizz
musty hungers
raw longing
as we plunge
from moral
or fiscal cliffs
our dead tumble
with us
In Search of Something to Worship,
My Eyes Lighted On You
Wizened was he, body and soul,
even in youth. I'm drawn to men
life has sledgehammered,
sucker punched, and their
faces' rocky topography.
From our first meeting his vistage
was familiar to me. Other faces
formed and burst behind his roughed-up
public one, surfacing like battered cargo
post-shipwreck, or like alternative verdicts
rising in the minds of a tired jury,
or like the stowaway radiance that shone
through his clothes—yes, I said radiance,
though he was mostly composed
of unbuffered fury and sorrow,
fermenting like moonshine within
his body's rickety still. Years later,
he needed to leap, throw himself
from some parapet into the arms
of a confident virgin. Now he's the
invisible guest at all my feasts.
Despite having built a cult around
that man, complete with amulets, altars,
censors, and shrines, despite
my swallowed knowledge, my compliant
defiance, I could not save him.