Visitor

by E.B. Sullivan

Visitor” tells the tale of a retired schoolteacher who meets a surprise visitor while watching her four-year grandniece at a cabin hidden deep in the woods.

24 pages, Kindle Edition

First published June 21, 2015

About the author

E.B. Sullivan is a clinical psychologist who loves to write fictional tales. She lives in California with her husband, dogs, cats, and horses. Elizabeth describes her life as a continuous and exciting adventure.

Reviews

[P.S. Winn · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow, I had to read the ending a couple of times before believing it. When Betty's nephew Joe is planning on getting married he asks her to stay with his fiance's daughter, Jennifer. Betty is delighted and the woman and the four year old girl are having fun getting to know each other. The story is precious and done with a heart felt touch, I won't talk about the ending, you have to read that to believe it. Well done.

[S.A. Krishnan · Rating 5 out of 5]

Wow!
It is a short story, but I wish it were longer. It was an emotional rollercoaster ride and the ending was a complete surprise.