Unfortunately, this is Dan Wells' worst book by far. It lacks the compelling or even likable characters of his other two series, the good plotting, well conceived mysteries, and original plots. I had a really, REALLY hard time even getting past the first chapter because all the characters are vapid walking examples of everything I hate about gaming and internet culture. I mean, really, live streaming your entire life... who gives a crap? The fact that people actually do give enough of a crap to watch them that it's actually a thing hits me right in the faith in humanity. Yeah, yeah, I know #firstworldproblems. I'm sorry family living in Africa dodging militias and warlords and wondering if you will find water that won't kill you to drink sometime this week, but god damn these characters annoy me. I mean, sure, you young people can tell me to get with the times old man, but my reply to that is Dadgummit ya damn youngsters, get off my lawn. Young people these days ain't got no respect, I say. No respect at all. Why, when I was your age... I was playing Nintendo... the original Nintendo... In the '80s... So sue me.
But it goes much deeper than a dislike for the characters. It takes an entire third of the book passing until something actually happens that's not video game garbage, inept and excessive infodumping, or characters talking about how awesome they are, while being horrible people. The book starts off with this sort of battle thing that Wells tries to pass off as actually happening when it's actually just a video game. I have read this exact same opening in four books in the last year, and it was stupid then too. Authors, please, stop using this as an opener. It really sucks. I mean, two sentences in I said to myself. "Ahg, this is video game, isn't it?" And you want to know what happened immediately afterward? All tension and drama in the scene completely vanished because no matter what happens there is absolutely no consequence whatsoever. It's not really happening, so there's really no reason to care. It's an incredibly annoying gimmick that seems to be taking the place of the opening with a dream or nightmare cliche that was old when the world was young, and really, it kinda needs to stop. Added into the mix are my personal dislikes of entitled, foul-mouthed little spoiled brats who think the universe revolves around them because they can kill me 87 times on Call of Duty or Halo online (A.K.A. Hardcore Gamers), and you've got a completely pointless opening where I don't care about anything that's happening, acted out by characters I hate by association with my own experience with hardcore gamers. Seriously, Dan, you do not want me to think about the thirteen year old shit stains who do nothing but play Call of Duty all day long and scream profanities at anyone that isn't up to their standards while you are introducing your characters to me. That was an enormous mistake, buddy. And it pretty well taints those characters for the rest of the story. It doesn't help that these characters all turn out to be horrible, spoiled, vapid assholes without anything resembling brains or common sense either. The beginning of this book did just about everything possible to make me hate it right out of the gate.
On top of that there's the fact that this book is HIGHLY derivative of other work. There is absolutely nothing new or original about this book. I mean, we're talking almost to the point of plagiarism here. Yes, Dan, I saw Ghost in the Shell SAC, Serial Experiments Lain, .Hack//Sign and the Matrix too. Could you be a little less blatant in borrowing ideas, worldbuilding, plot points, villains, etc etc etc from them please? Plus there's a lot of gamer and Spanish slang used in this book, and very little of it is explained to those without a working knowledge of gamer or Spanish slang.
I really don't want to read a book about horrible people playing a glorified version of Call of Duty, because it's exactly as boring and pointless as you might think. You think watching someone else play video games is boring? Yeah, try reading about someone playing video games. It's even worse.
The book DOES get better around the halfway point... slightly. It goes from unbearable to just interesting enough to keep me from screaming obscenities at it and taking it back to the store for a refund.
So yeah, not only is Marissa an entitled, spoiled brat, she's also dumb as a post. I mean, sure, she's an expert hacker and all... but she has zero common sense and even less in the way of deductive reasoning. I am constantly, and I mean CONSTANTLY, connecting the dots in this book's mystery far before she has her AHAH moments. Which doesn't speak too well to the quality of the mystery either. And from a man that started his writing career with a series of supernatural murder mysteries that are pretty damn good, that's kinda pathetic. Just sayin'. And on the common sense front, let me give you an example. Marissa tells one drug dealing gang that another drug dealing gang is selling drugs on their turf. Then says "oh, I hope that doesn't start a gang war or anything." Next day, GANG WAR!!! Yeah, um, DUH!!! You grew up in this neighborhood, girl. How can you be this utterly and completely oblivious to reality? There is no way that you are this naive, having lived in this place all your life. WHAT DID YOU THINK WAS GOING TO HAPPEN!!! Got both her brother AND her father shot on that one. The sheer stupidity of this character is astounding. Our hero, ladies and gentlemen. Oh, and forced drama is forced... and drama that feels forced DOES NOT FEEL DRAMATIC!!! Suspension of disbelief? What's that? Good job there little miss hacking genius. And you think I can't tell that you're constantly skipping school?
And speaking of that... Wells kind of glorifies Marissa's constant ditching of school. I don't know about you, but this is not the sort of role model I want my daughters looking up to. I want them to get a good education, so they can move the hell out of my house and never move back into it. I want them to get careers that they truly enjoy, so that, if they decide to marry, they're not dependent on their husbands should things go bad. I am ALL for women pursuing higher education and enjoyable careers, bucking off that pesky (and very outdated) social stigma of a woman's proper place in society, but you don't get those things without paying your dues in high school first, and making it into a good college and/or apprenticeship. You have to work for the career you want, and unfortunately, even in this day and age, women have to work twice as hard as men to get that career. I don't want my girls reading books about girls who are constantly ditching class and blowing off responsibility so they can go play video games and hang out with drug dealers. Seriously Dan? THIS is the sort of example you think my kids should be looking up to? I've got two words to say to that. Fuck you. Did you even THINK of the sort of example you're setting for your target audience while writing this garbage? I don't know what's worse, if you didn't even connect the dots at all, or if you did and still wrote the character this way. She doesn't even learn the error of her ways by the end of the book, so as to make it a learning experience for readers. She's still the same school-ditching irresponsible mess at the end as she is in the beginning. Dan, buddy, do you understand that when you write a character like this, and make her the hero of the story, without showing a single consequence for her absolutely stupid actions except a brief telling-off by her father that is pretty much forgotten in the very next chapter, you basically tell every teenaged girl who reads about her that it's all right to do all of the stupid shit she does?
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OH
MY
GOD...
Did I just say all of that? God damn, I sound like a responsible adult... What is the world coming to? Dammit, I miss the days when having been born in the '70s was cool. Or, wait... was it ever? I can't remember, you know, the memory is one of the first things to go. Excuse me for a second, I need to go yell at some kids to get off my lawn.
Another thing that kind of bothered me is that there is a lot of extra, unnecessary description in this book. I get it, you're proud of the world that you borrowed from several different Anime series and duct taped together, Dan, but do you have to go on, and on, and on, and on, and on describing it to me? I mean, even Robert Jordan would tell you to lay off it a little. This book has Dan Wells' style to it, but it doesn't have any of his normal skill or passion. It feels really phoned in. Especially in the character and mystery departments.
I was really hoping that he would have raised the bar for himself after Partials and John Cleaver... but he really didn't. The characters are horrible, annoying and stupid, and the world and plot are borrowed from other series I'm quite familiar with. When bad things happen to these characters, most of the time I think to myself that they deserve it for how absolutely idiotic they are acting. The "just say no to drugs" is STROOOOONG with this one. There's a scene where Marissa gets yelled at by her dad, and it's written in a way that we're supposed to feel that she's being put upon... but everything her dad said was true and absolutely valid. I was more on his side than hers. Yeah, yeah, get off my lawn, etc etc etc. There's a part earlier where her robot arm gets smashed up doing something stupid after she sneaks out of her house after being grounded, goes clubbing with a dude she knows is a drug dealer, drinks underage and then whines about it for the next forty pages because everyone is picking on her. Our hero, ladies and gentlemen. And the author expects us to feel sorry for her? Riiiiiiiight. That's going to happen. I was no genius when I was seventeen either, but I could usually figure out that drinking with drug dealers and clubbing while I'm supposed to be grounded is probably going to get me super double mega grounded, my ass paddled back into the stone age, and possibly disowned on top of it. Hey writers, just a bit of a heads up, people like spoiled brats just about as much as they like douchebags. STOP MAKING THEM INTO YOUR PROTAGONISTS, WOULD YA!?!?!?! It is INCREDIBLY hard to care about a character that is constantly whining, doing stupid shit, getting in trouble for it, and instead of learning from the mistake, moping around and whining some more. Do you want to read about a character like that? I sure don't. A character that whines about her mistakes rather than learning from them and doing better next time is a character I certainly never need to read another word about so long as I live, thank you very much.
Oh, and obvious bad guy is obvious... TIMES THREE!!! Seriously. THREE obvious bad guys trying to pass themselves off as good guys. Really?
And zombies...? Really? I knocked a star off the rating for that alone. Would everyone just quit beating the walking dead horse already? Zombies aren't cool anymore. They've gone WAY past stale into instahate territory. Sure they're just people with their brains hacked and killing everything in sight, but friggen Dan Wells CALLS THEM ZOMBIES IN THE BOOK!!! NO!!! BAD!!! BAD DAN WELLS!!! NO COOKIE FOR YOU!!! Yeah, and, uh, I played Duex Ex: Human Revolution too... way to jack someone else's ending there, bro. I just gotta say, even if it's unintentional, this book just steals SO MUCH from other pre-existing sources that it's absolutely shameful.
I highly doubt I will read any more of this series when it comes out. I absolutely hate the characters and Wells borrowed far too much plot and worldbuilding from other series that I'm quite familiar with. If I hadn't seen all those shows that this book rips off before hand, I might have enjoyed it a bit more than I did, but, on the other hand, those characters were just absolutely awful, so probably not.
If you're thinking of picking up this book, basically the same story was told in series such as Ghost in the Shell Stand Alone Complex (TV series, the movie is a little... well... watch it and see...), Serial Experiments Lain, .Hack//Sign, to some extent Sword Art Online... Go watch those instead. They're way better than this book. They actually have likable, sympathetic characters in them, and know how to use their setting to be entertaining, instead of snore-inducing. If you want to read a good book by Dan Wells, pick up I Am Not A Serial Killer, or Partials instead. Or even Hollow City. I would avoid this one though, it was just not a good book. Not well thought out. Not well plotted. Not really all that well written. Borrows too heavily from other series. And good god, Can Marissa just go away please... forever...? She and her friends are such annoying, whining spoiled little brats that it basically made most scenes unbearable.
Although, I have to admit that I laughed out loud at the line, "It's the internet. They've seen boobs before." But it wasn't worth reading the whole book for that one line.