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The Everstone Chronicles #1
The Hesitant Heiress
After being unjustly expelled from the Boston Conservatory of Music, Amaryllis Brigham sees her dreams of founding a music academy in her hometown of Seattle, Washington, disappearing before her very eyes. Now, the only way to achieve her goal comes with high stakes for someone set on avoiding men as much as possible: Marry within the year to inherit the immense fortune of her estranged grandmother.
Amaryllis reluctantly moves in to her aunt's Boston home and rubs shoulders with fashionable society. Despite her own misgivings, she soon finds herself quickly falling in love with the most unlikely of men, Nathan Everstone, the envy of every eligible female, whose father has haunted her dreams for the decade following her mother's tragic death.
However, Nathan turns out to be much more than he seems...and everything she never knew she wanted. But can she ever really trust an Everstone man?
Amaryllis reluctantly moves in to her aunt's Boston home and rubs shoulders with fashionable society. Despite her own misgivings, she soon finds herself quickly falling in love with the most unlikely of men, Nathan Everstone, the envy of every eligible female, whose father has haunted her dreams for the decade following her mother's tragic death.
However, Nathan turns out to be much more than he seems...and everything she never knew she wanted. But can she ever really trust an Everstone man?
314 pages, Paperback
First published August 1, 2014
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Dawn Crandall
7 books805 followersDawn Crandall’s debut Gilded Age Victorian romance, “The Hesitant Heiress,” was a 2015 ACFW Carol award finalist in the debut category and received the 2015 Gayle Wilson Award of Excellence, the 2015 Write Touch Reader's Choice Award and the 2015 Romancing the Novel Reader's Choice Award. Her follow-up novel, “The Bound Heart,” received the 2016 Laurel Award from Clash of the Titles. Dawn earned a BA in Christian Education from Taylor University. She’s been balancing books and babies lately as her two sons were both born as the first four books of her 5-book Everstone Chronicles series were being released from Whitaker House from 2014 to 2016. Dawn lives with her husband and two young sons on a hobby farm in her hometown in northeast Indiana.
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February 2, 2016I'm not actually trying to rate my own book here, but since I spent two years writing it, I can honestly say I've read it more times than I can count. :) I hope anyone who has the chance enjoys reading it. I really LOVED writing it and getting to know these characters. I still feel so honored to have it published by Whitaker House!
December 7, 2014
This book was such a fun, quick, easy read despite a few annoyances and a confusing beginning. There were so many people introduced within the first chapters, and so many places mentioned that I felt really lost and had trouble remembering who was connected to whom and how. It also bothered me that the heroine, who had been secluded for over a decade, referred to everyone she was about to meet by their first names. The story is set in the 1890's, so there shouldn't be any reason for everyone to call Aunt Claudine simply "Claudine". Detail, I know, but add that to the other literary pet peeves I encountered in this novel, and it was enough to drive me a bit mad. ;)
Amaryllis Brigham (love her name!!) sees her life changing drastically when she is expelled from the music conservatory where she is studying, in Boston, because of a letter. I never mind a little mystery and a little intrigue in my novels, but I HATE IT when a situation that effects the whole of the novel is not explain until almost the end, when I have totally forgotten everything about it. We never know exactly what this letter says. It's never properly explained. We know that it comes from Bram Everstone, and we know that Amaryllis detests him, but her hatred isn't explained until wayyyy later, and I found it extremely frustrating because Bram Everstone's son shows up, and it's clear that sparks are flying between him and Amaryllis, but she refuses to even get along with him because she hates his father, and we are all here left wondering WHY??? Why does she hate him?? That made the romance annoying at the beginning, because it didn't seem as though Amaryllis has a legitimate reason for disliking Mr. Everstone (who is always referred to as "Bram"), and his son. It made her seem so cocky and difficult, and at twenty-five and still on the shelf, she should have been so pleased that the wealthiest man in all of New England was interested in her. And for all the family connections she had, I wonder again, why has she not seen them sooner??? Everybody is apparently dying to meet her, and she hasn't seen her relatives in eleven years, and again, it's a case of WHY?????!?! She's been studying music in Boston, for heaven's sake, not hiking icebergs somewhere in Antarctica! Why hasn't she or her relatives ever made a move to see each other before now?
I know right now it sounds like I didn't enjoy the book, but all that ^^ happened in the beginning. As the romance progressed, I found myself so reluctantly enjoying it that I had trouble putting the book down. Truly. And I think that speaks really well for the author, because not only is this her first novel, but she managed to keep me interested enough to momentarily forget my annoyances and delight in the story. I was so caught up in the whole middle section that I was ready to give this a 5 star rating. But then the H/h started having misunderstandings and behaving like indecisive chipmunks not sure where to hide their winter stock, and I lost all patience with them. Really, for heaven's sakes, make up your mind. I hate it when the heroine agrees to marry the hero and then jilts him for a personal-reason-that-she-can't-explain-to-him-because-she-already-hurt-him-enough. NO!! Speak up and be done with it! Honesty! Frankness! Integrity! Gahhh!!!!
I understand that what made the book less enjoyable for me were strictly personal issues, and for that I still wholly recommend it to anyone who likes that genre. It's well-written, engaging, and except for the heroine who drove me batty most of the time, the whole crew of characters are really engaging, and I found myself eagerly anticipating book 2. The hero was really loveable and very dreamy, but I had a slight preference for his best friend, who comes back in the next book. :)
All in all this was a very interesting read, and the gorgeous cover certainly makes a lovely addition on my Kindle shelf!
Amaryllis Brigham (love her name!!) sees her life changing drastically when she is expelled from the music conservatory where she is studying, in Boston, because of a letter. I never mind a little mystery and a little intrigue in my novels, but I HATE IT when a situation that effects the whole of the novel is not explain until almost the end, when I have totally forgotten everything about it. We never know exactly what this letter says. It's never properly explained. We know that it comes from Bram Everstone, and we know that Amaryllis detests him, but her hatred isn't explained until wayyyy later, and I found it extremely frustrating because Bram Everstone's son shows up, and it's clear that sparks are flying between him and Amaryllis, but she refuses to even get along with him because she hates his father, and we are all here left wondering WHY??? Why does she hate him?? That made the romance annoying at the beginning, because it didn't seem as though Amaryllis has a legitimate reason for disliking Mr. Everstone (who is always referred to as "Bram"), and his son. It made her seem so cocky and difficult, and at twenty-five and still on the shelf, she should have been so pleased that the wealthiest man in all of New England was interested in her. And for all the family connections she had, I wonder again, why has she not seen them sooner??? Everybody is apparently dying to meet her, and she hasn't seen her relatives in eleven years, and again, it's a case of WHY?????!?! She's been studying music in Boston, for heaven's sake, not hiking icebergs somewhere in Antarctica! Why hasn't she or her relatives ever made a move to see each other before now?
I know right now it sounds like I didn't enjoy the book, but all that ^^ happened in the beginning. As the romance progressed, I found myself so reluctantly enjoying it that I had trouble putting the book down. Truly. And I think that speaks really well for the author, because not only is this her first novel, but she managed to keep me interested enough to momentarily forget my annoyances and delight in the story. I was so caught up in the whole middle section that I was ready to give this a 5 star rating. But then the H/h started having misunderstandings and behaving like indecisive chipmunks not sure where to hide their winter stock, and I lost all patience with them. Really, for heaven's sakes, make up your mind. I hate it when the heroine agrees to marry the hero and then jilts him for a personal-reason-that-she-can't-explain-to-him-because-she-already-hurt-him-enough. NO!! Speak up and be done with it! Honesty! Frankness! Integrity! Gahhh!!!!
I understand that what made the book less enjoyable for me were strictly personal issues, and for that I still wholly recommend it to anyone who likes that genre. It's well-written, engaging, and except for the heroine who drove me batty most of the time, the whole crew of characters are really engaging, and I found myself eagerly anticipating book 2. The hero was really loveable and very dreamy, but I had a slight preference for his best friend, who comes back in the next book. :)
All in all this was a very interesting read, and the gorgeous cover certainly makes a lovely addition on my Kindle shelf!
November 14, 2015
When I pick up a book by a new-to-me author, I'm usually a little hesitant. I don't know what to expect. Will I like it? Will I hate it? Will it draw me in? Or will it leave me looking for a better book to spend my time with?
I definitely did not hate this book, but I didn't simply like it either --- I loved it!! Yes, it drew me in quickly and kept my attention to the last page. What did it leave me looking for? Book two!
I loved the characters! Some of them did annoy me sometimes, but I have yet to read a book that that statement doesn't apply to. The setting, the time period, the story line... it was all great and I really enjoyed it!
As for the writing style... I know I've said before that I'm usually a bit reluctant to read a book written in first person. For me, first person narration will make or break a story. In this case, it definitely made it. I can't tell you how much it drew me into the story --- so much that it made me almost feel like a part of it. It really brought the story to life for me!
Often, I read an author's debut novel and think, "Eh... it was okay. It's their debut novel, though, so they've got room to improve." On the other hand, my first thought upon reading this book was more along these lines: "Oh my gosh! This is her first book?!" I have a funny feeling that Dawn Crandall just might end up on my Favorite Authors list. ;)
I can't wait to read the rest of this series!! :D
I definitely did not hate this book, but I didn't simply like it either --- I loved it!! Yes, it drew me in quickly and kept my attention to the last page. What did it leave me looking for? Book two!
I loved the characters! Some of them did annoy me sometimes, but I have yet to read a book that that statement doesn't apply to. The setting, the time period, the story line... it was all great and I really enjoyed it!
As for the writing style... I know I've said before that I'm usually a bit reluctant to read a book written in first person. For me, first person narration will make or break a story. In this case, it definitely made it. I can't tell you how much it drew me into the story --- so much that it made me almost feel like a part of it. It really brought the story to life for me!
Often, I read an author's debut novel and think, "Eh... it was okay. It's their debut novel, though, so they've got room to improve." On the other hand, my first thought upon reading this book was more along these lines: "Oh my gosh! This is her first book?!" I have a funny feeling that Dawn Crandall just might end up on my Favorite Authors list. ;)
I can't wait to read the rest of this series!! :D
March 21, 2015
Dawn Crandall’s debut, The Hesitant Heiress is guaranteed to please Jane Austen and Charlotte Bronte fans especially. While Crandall’s voice is definitely her own, the feel of the story is one of a classic. Detail to the time period and high society was impeccable. Expect a romance that delivers, long buried secrets with intriguing plot points and an engaging supportive cast to compliment Amaryllis Brigham—also a well-written and complex yet sincerely sweet main character.
I was given a copy of this book in return for an honest review. All opinions are mine.
I was given a copy of this book in return for an honest review. All opinions are mine.
July 4, 2014
Often when I read a book, I spend the whole time trying to ignore all the ways it should be edited better (one consequence of being an author, I guess). In the case of The Hesitant Heiress, I never got the chance. This book is well-written and well-paced. From the first chapter, we have an intriguing dilemma that begs resolve. I liked the heroine. I cheered for her. I disliked those she disliked. I was so impatient to discover who would win her heart that I read as fast as I could, finishing the book in one day. I particularly enjoyed the author’s way of writing scenes that had nothing to do with the romance between the hero/heroine. Usually, those are throw-away for me. Unless the writing is stellar, I scan non-romantic scenes just to make sure I don’t miss a relevant fact. This book was so well-conceived that every scene was interesting and drew me into the storyline. I wanted to know about everyone involved, which will keep me buying books in the series. I loved that the author didn’t dwell on historical phrases just to make the story sound historical. All the phrasing and dialogue sounded natural, not forced. And the descriptions of clothing…some books go on and on ad nauseam about the different details in historical attire, not so in The Hesitant Heiress, where every description seemed a portrayal of what would occur naturally in real life. Probably the most impressive feat was the great reveal. I never saw it coming. Though the author alludes to the less than stellar attributes of several characters, I never suspected the villain nor that he was quite so vile. Bravo! Excellent debut, Dawn Crandall. I eagerly anticipate the following books in the series. Author Felicia Mires, Christian Romance for any Genre
October 6, 2014
I do not usually read historical fiction but when a friend said how much she loved this book I figured I would give try something new. And boy am I go a I did! Fantastic read! I fell in love with the characters from the very beginning and found myself not wanting to put the book down. This had just enough of a mystery about it and missgin puzzle pieces to keep me reading and guessing until the end. If you love historical fiction I highly recommend this book. And even if you don't, I encourage you to try something new! You won't regret it.
May 22, 2016
I have said it before, and I will say it again, I love reading stories written in first-person narration. New to me author,Dawn Crandall, has entered into the world of writing with a refreshing, crisp style and voice with her debut novel, "The Hesitant Heiress."
Set during the gilded age, in 1890, it didn't take long before I was lost amongst the pages experiencing Boston Massachusetts and Bar Harbor Maine in all of the opulence of that time period. The plot was mysterious and filled with secrets and the climax was quite suspenseful! It became a book that was hard to put down. I enjoyed reading about the heroine, Amaryllis Brigham. She was complex and fully fleshed in ways that I could relate to as a reader. Nathan Everstone, the hero of this story, was charming and had a soft heart that made me
want to cheer him on throughout the pages.
There are two things that I want in a historical novel. I want the story to cause me to want to know more about the actual history during that time period or event, and I want the story to convict or encourage me in my faith. "The Hesitant Heiress" gets two thumbs up from me. In my spare time I found myself googling about the 1890's and wanting to know more about our nations's history of that time. Second, I enjoyed the gently woven message that spoke to my heart about understanding and accepting that all things happen for a reason, by God. We all make mistakes, sometimes they are accidental, but each mistake has its own consequences. Amaryllis carried a deep guilt and wasn't able to fully live until she was able to accept the grace and forgiveness that was so freely offered to her. Sometimes, I need to be reminded that God does forgive, and we need to accept that grace and move on.
This was an engaging story with a taste of mystery and suspense, charming gentlemen, grandeur manors and beautifully penned settings alongside the rocky Atlantic coast. It was refreshingly unique.
Set during the gilded age, in 1890, it didn't take long before I was lost amongst the pages experiencing Boston Massachusetts and Bar Harbor Maine in all of the opulence of that time period. The plot was mysterious and filled with secrets and the climax was quite suspenseful! It became a book that was hard to put down. I enjoyed reading about the heroine, Amaryllis Brigham. She was complex and fully fleshed in ways that I could relate to as a reader. Nathan Everstone, the hero of this story, was charming and had a soft heart that made me
want to cheer him on throughout the pages.
There are two things that I want in a historical novel. I want the story to cause me to want to know more about the actual history during that time period or event, and I want the story to convict or encourage me in my faith. "The Hesitant Heiress" gets two thumbs up from me. In my spare time I found myself googling about the 1890's and wanting to know more about our nations's history of that time. Second, I enjoyed the gently woven message that spoke to my heart about understanding and accepting that all things happen for a reason, by God. We all make mistakes, sometimes they are accidental, but each mistake has its own consequences. Amaryllis carried a deep guilt and wasn't able to fully live until she was able to accept the grace and forgiveness that was so freely offered to her. Sometimes, I need to be reminded that God does forgive, and we need to accept that grace and move on.
This was an engaging story with a taste of mystery and suspense, charming gentlemen, grandeur manors and beautifully penned settings alongside the rocky Atlantic coast. It was refreshingly unique.
October 2, 2015
I was really curious when I read in a blog post that Dawn Crandall chooses specifically to write in first-person narration (my favorite!), so I decided to enter the giveaway for her debut, The Hesitant Heiress, a romantic historical, which also happens to be my favorite genre. My curiosity certainly paid off because what I found was an engaging main character, a plot laced with mystery and a delicious romance.
Amaryllis Brigham’s life is thrown off track when she is forced to leave the prestigious Boston Conservatory. The desire of her heart is to open a music academy, but now the funds to do so are tied up with her fortune – a fortune that is only hers if she marries. Add into this the twisted mystery of her past and the run-ins with enigmatic Nathan Everstone – a man whose father is behind her dismissal from the Conservatory – this is one absorbing read.
I know this is a short review (I’m so behind on reviewing these days), but I wanted to at least write a little something about such an enjoyable book. It reminded me a lot of Jessica Dotta’s style, except for the first person narration. I’m really looking forward to book two in the Everstone Chronicles.
Amaryllis Brigham’s life is thrown off track when she is forced to leave the prestigious Boston Conservatory. The desire of her heart is to open a music academy, but now the funds to do so are tied up with her fortune – a fortune that is only hers if she marries. Add into this the twisted mystery of her past and the run-ins with enigmatic Nathan Everstone – a man whose father is behind her dismissal from the Conservatory – this is one absorbing read.
I know this is a short review (I’m so behind on reviewing these days), but I wanted to at least write a little something about such an enjoyable book. It reminded me a lot of Jessica Dotta’s style, except for the first person narration. I’m really looking forward to book two in the Everstone Chronicles.
September 28, 2016
What would you do if your dearest dream was to move back to the wilds of Washington state from Boston, in the 1890s, but you have no means of doing so? What if there was a chance of getting a good-sized inheritance if you married within a year, but you have no desire to do so? That's the dilemma that Amaryllis finds herself in. When she moves to her aunt's home and reunites with her cousin, Lawry, after years apart, she also finds herself face-to-face with his best friend, Nathan. A story of mystery, love, society expectations, and deep emotion ensues and had me devouring every page.
Amaryllis...don't you just love that name? She's very stubborn and it is aggravating at times.There's obviously a very volatile connection between her and Nathan, but she absolutely refuses to find out the truth of her past so that she can be free. You can run, but you cannot hide and I wished at times she would just face things head on, like she does with other aspects of her life. However, there are other times when she is extremely no-nonsense, naive, and likable. Her fight against her feelings and the resulting tension is entertaining. I couldn't get enough of Nathan's smoldering looks, unending patience, and all-around charm. He had me swooning, even with the mystery surrounding him.
I came to really love the Everstone family and their circle of friends. The beginning of the story was a little confusing to me and I had to read it a couple of times, but once I got into the book, I couldn't put it down. I felt completely immersed in this world and I'm so glad there are other books in this series that will allow me to continue on. The plot is engaging and there's a perfect mix of mystery, religious elements, characters interactions and development, and romance.
Content: mild-moderate religion; mild, swoony romance (tension, slight innuendos, kissing); mild violence (mainly talk of previous deaths; kidnapping). Clean!
*I received a copy from the publisher in exchange for an honest review*
Amaryllis...don't you just love that name? She's very stubborn and it is aggravating at times.There's obviously a very volatile connection between her and Nathan, but she absolutely refuses to find out the truth of her past so that she can be free. You can run, but you cannot hide and I wished at times she would just face things head on, like she does with other aspects of her life. However, there are other times when she is extremely no-nonsense, naive, and likable. Her fight against her feelings and the resulting tension is entertaining. I couldn't get enough of Nathan's smoldering looks, unending patience, and all-around charm. He had me swooning, even with the mystery surrounding him.
I came to really love the Everstone family and their circle of friends. The beginning of the story was a little confusing to me and I had to read it a couple of times, but once I got into the book, I couldn't put it down. I felt completely immersed in this world and I'm so glad there are other books in this series that will allow me to continue on. The plot is engaging and there's a perfect mix of mystery, religious elements, characters interactions and development, and romance.
Content: mild-moderate religion; mild, swoony romance (tension, slight innuendos, kissing); mild violence (mainly talk of previous deaths; kidnapping). Clean!
*I received a copy from the publisher in exchange for an honest review*
October 7, 2015
I've been wanting to read The Hesitant Heiress for some time now so was glad to finally obtain the book and read it.
What I enjoyed about the book: the time period, the location (United States), the small bit of mystery and the quotes leading into each chapter. In addition, this was a very easy to read book and I read it rather quickly.
The romance between the two main characters never seemed real for me. I enjoyed the banter between them. It was the continual roller coaster of attraction and shoving away that made me a bit crazy.
I'm glad to have read this novel and do look forward to reading the next book of the series.
What I enjoyed about the book: the time period, the location (United States), the small bit of mystery and the quotes leading into each chapter. In addition, this was a very easy to read book and I read it rather quickly.
The romance between the two main characters never seemed real for me. I enjoyed the banter between them. It was the continual roller coaster of attraction and shoving away that made me a bit crazy.
I'm glad to have read this novel and do look forward to reading the next book of the series.
May 26, 2016
Review on author request against a copy of the book and on my unbounded excitement and eagerness to gorge The Everstone Chronicles!!
"Without ceasing I make mention of you always in my prayers... For I long to see you..."
Nathan: Wow Amaryllis!
Amaryllis: Huh [Wow! His eyes! (drools) his smile! (sigh)]
Nathan: Yay Amaryllis (claps)
Amaryllis: Duh (wow, he's so charming!)
Nathan: Be my friend Amaryllis
Amaryllis: Who do you think you are? (sigh! Why is he not looking at me??)
Nathan: Bye! (Huh, I won't think of her!)
Amaryllis: Good riddance! (Where is Nathan??)
Nathan: Oh, I want to see her! (Runs back)
Amaryllis: So, he's back? [yay, he's back!(claps)]
Nathan: Oh, I love her so!
Amaryllis: Why do I keep thinking of him??
Nathan: Amaryllis trust me!
Amaryllis: Huh, over my dead body! (oh, I do trust him!)
Nathan: I love you Amaryllis!
Amaryllis: Liar!
Nathan: I do love you!
Amaryllis: Huh, pretence!
Nathan: Why can't I have her??
Amaryllis: Oh, I love him so!
Nathan: I want to marry you!
Amaryllis: Liar! (oh, I wish you would!)
Nathan: I love you!
Amaryllis: I love you too!
xoxoxoxoxo
Nathan: Let's elope!
Amaryllis: I can't marry you! Go away!
Nathan: Big mistake!
Amaryllis: Huge mistake!
Nathan: Oh, but I still love you!
Amaryllis: Oh, I love you too!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
This in short is the gist of the story!
Splendid, in a word!
Absolutely, truly and positively loved, loved and just loved the book and the characters! I was sad when it finally ended, which is enough to prove, it's an outstanding book!
Brilliant debut novel!
My congratulations to the author for achieving such a story! You Dawn Crandall are undoubtedly an exceptional and original writer! Very intelligent writing! Hats off to your effort!
A splendid combination of romance, mystery, suspense, intrigue, drama and humour. The conversations are superlative in quality, very witty, enjoyable and feeling.
Read such a good one after so long! The historical fiction these days are just a bag of utter amorous nonsense, and the Hesitant heiress was such a refreshing change!
Further, I must add that it is captivating! I can't seem to stop singing it's praises! A story which actually felt like a story of true love! What romance! What pure love! And what a roller coaster ride! I was on the edge most of the time! Many times I felt like I was reading a Fanny Burney novel with its many ups and downs and turns and twists! What a journey for Amaryllis and Nathan! To be honest, I must confess I was a bit exasperated with Amaryllis for some time because Nathan was being honest and he was genuine while she was presumptuous, prejudiced and stubborn enough to remain that way with her preconceived notions! She comes to her own conclusions and though is intelligent enough to stand on her own, she doesn't use her brain in thinking about the possibility of another side to the story! But having said all of this, I must say she is a very likeable heroine. Her actions are actually justified because of her past experiences, having had them as a child, and then the same experiences forming the basis of her judgments. She is kind, loving, ambitious, talented, charming, obedient and very much suiting Nathan Everstone!
Speaking of whom, I must say I found a new entrant to my favourite hero's list! He is fabulous and fascinating and enigmatic and charming and just so full of undeterred and pure, undying love! He is a Hero! The best thing about him along with his perseverance, for me as I found was his faith and belief in God. And he is so very misunderstood by everyone!
Nathan and Amaryllis make a charming pair! They are so similar, which Nathan does realise very early in his acquaintance with Amaryllis, but she takes a lot of time to come to the grip of it. Their love for a humble, unpretentious life is again beautiful. I just can't get over them!
A remarkable element of the book is the usage of beautiful and and wonderfully suitable quotations, like the one I have mentioned above from the Bible. Very meaningful and catchy. Some very touching.
The secondary characters too are very likeable and though form important threads through the story, they do not steal the lead pair's thunder. The focus throughout has been very well managed. More so, since this book is from a first person POV. And again, Dawn Crandall has, I think, a remarkable talent for that!
I believe I can go on and on about the book tirelessly, but the best thing would be for you to grab a copy and savour it! It's absolutely worth the time!
"Without ceasing I make mention of you always in my prayers... For I long to see you..."
Nathan: Wow Amaryllis!
Amaryllis: Huh [Wow! His eyes! (drools) his smile! (sigh)]
Nathan: Yay Amaryllis (claps)
Amaryllis: Duh (wow, he's so charming!)
Nathan: Be my friend Amaryllis
Amaryllis: Who do you think you are? (sigh! Why is he not looking at me??)
Nathan: Bye! (Huh, I won't think of her!)
Amaryllis: Good riddance! (Where is Nathan??)
Nathan: Oh, I want to see her! (Runs back)
Amaryllis: So, he's back? [yay, he's back!(claps)]
Nathan: Oh, I love her so!
Amaryllis: Why do I keep thinking of him??
Nathan: Amaryllis trust me!
Amaryllis: Huh, over my dead body! (oh, I do trust him!)
Nathan: I love you Amaryllis!
Amaryllis: Liar!
Nathan: I do love you!
Amaryllis: Huh, pretence!
Nathan: Why can't I have her??
Amaryllis: Oh, I love him so!
Nathan: I want to marry you!
Amaryllis: Liar! (oh, I wish you would!)
Nathan: I love you!
Amaryllis: I love you too!
xoxoxoxoxo
Nathan: Let's elope!
Amaryllis: I can't marry you! Go away!
Nathan: Big mistake!
Amaryllis: Huge mistake!
Nathan: Oh, but I still love you!
Amaryllis: Oh, I love you too!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
This in short is the gist of the story!
Splendid, in a word!
Absolutely, truly and positively loved, loved and just loved the book and the characters! I was sad when it finally ended, which is enough to prove, it's an outstanding book!
Brilliant debut novel!
My congratulations to the author for achieving such a story! You Dawn Crandall are undoubtedly an exceptional and original writer! Very intelligent writing! Hats off to your effort!
A splendid combination of romance, mystery, suspense, intrigue, drama and humour. The conversations are superlative in quality, very witty, enjoyable and feeling.
Read such a good one after so long! The historical fiction these days are just a bag of utter amorous nonsense, and the Hesitant heiress was such a refreshing change!
Further, I must add that it is captivating! I can't seem to stop singing it's praises! A story which actually felt like a story of true love! What romance! What pure love! And what a roller coaster ride! I was on the edge most of the time! Many times I felt like I was reading a Fanny Burney novel with its many ups and downs and turns and twists! What a journey for Amaryllis and Nathan! To be honest, I must confess I was a bit exasperated with Amaryllis for some time because Nathan was being honest and he was genuine while she was presumptuous, prejudiced and stubborn enough to remain that way with her preconceived notions! She comes to her own conclusions and though is intelligent enough to stand on her own, she doesn't use her brain in thinking about the possibility of another side to the story! But having said all of this, I must say she is a very likeable heroine. Her actions are actually justified because of her past experiences, having had them as a child, and then the same experiences forming the basis of her judgments. She is kind, loving, ambitious, talented, charming, obedient and very much suiting Nathan Everstone!
Speaking of whom, I must say I found a new entrant to my favourite hero's list! He is fabulous and fascinating and enigmatic and charming and just so full of undeterred and pure, undying love! He is a Hero! The best thing about him along with his perseverance, for me as I found was his faith and belief in God. And he is so very misunderstood by everyone!
Nathan and Amaryllis make a charming pair! They are so similar, which Nathan does realise very early in his acquaintance with Amaryllis, but she takes a lot of time to come to the grip of it. Their love for a humble, unpretentious life is again beautiful. I just can't get over them!
A remarkable element of the book is the usage of beautiful and and wonderfully suitable quotations, like the one I have mentioned above from the Bible. Very meaningful and catchy. Some very touching.
The secondary characters too are very likeable and though form important threads through the story, they do not steal the lead pair's thunder. The focus throughout has been very well managed. More so, since this book is from a first person POV. And again, Dawn Crandall has, I think, a remarkable talent for that!
I believe I can go on and on about the book tirelessly, but the best thing would be for you to grab a copy and savour it! It's absolutely worth the time!
June 7, 2016
Amaryllis Brigham has been suddenly ejected from the Boston Conservatory of Music. Since she has no place else to go, she turns to her great-aunt and soon finds herself in the middle of Boston's Society. She longs to return to her beloved Seattle though. In order to accomplish that, Amaryllis must marry. Her maternal grandmother has left her a sizable fortune with the stipulation that she marry within a year. She doesn't trust men and has no desire to marry. But she soon finds herself falling in love with Nathan Everstone, a man with his own secrets. Will she learn to trust God and in doing so discover that sometimes things from the past aren't what they seem?
This was the first book I've read by this author, but it won't be the last! The cover caught my attention months ago, but I just hadn't gotten around to reading it yet.
I'll admit, that at first it moved rather slowly. But as the story progressed, and I stuck with it, I found myself becoming enthralled in this story. It has all of the feels of a gothic romance. But it's not.
By the time I finished the book, I promptly wanted to read the second one as I became engrossed in the tale. I loved how Nathan pursued Amaryllis. I loved how he was relentless, yet also tender.
Overall, I enjoyed this book.
I received a Kindle copy for free from the author to review in anticipation of the 4th book coming out later this year. My thoughts and opinions are my own.
Recommended to fans of historical fiction, Julie Klassen, Roseanna M. White, Jody Hedlund
Rating - 4 stars
This was the first book I've read by this author, but it won't be the last! The cover caught my attention months ago, but I just hadn't gotten around to reading it yet.
I'll admit, that at first it moved rather slowly. But as the story progressed, and I stuck with it, I found myself becoming enthralled in this story. It has all of the feels of a gothic romance. But it's not.
By the time I finished the book, I promptly wanted to read the second one as I became engrossed in the tale. I loved how Nathan pursued Amaryllis. I loved how he was relentless, yet also tender.
Overall, I enjoyed this book.
I received a Kindle copy for free from the author to review in anticipation of the 4th book coming out later this year. My thoughts and opinions are my own.
Recommended to fans of historical fiction, Julie Klassen, Roseanna M. White, Jody Hedlund
Rating - 4 stars
July 7, 2014
The Hesitant Heiress ( The Everstone Chronicles #1 )
By: Dawn Crandall
When I first saw the cover of The Hesitant Heiress I just knew I would love it. My eyes was drawn to it. Dawn did not disappoint . She has penned an awesome story and I love the way she puts quotes at the first of every chapter. I fell in love with her main character, Amaryliss Breghan . She is a young lady who thinks she knows what she wants. She loves music and it means everything to her. Amaryliss had to leave The Boston Conservatory . She is to inherit from her grandmother's will on one term that she will marry within a year. Amaryliss does not want to get married to any man. She really wants to go back to Washington and find a music academy of her own. There are some suitors that want to marry her, but do they love her or only after her inheritance. She thinks she knows who is behind her having to leave The Boston Conservatory. Things start to really happen on over in the book. I could not read fast enough to see what was going to happen next. There are some twist and turns that keeps you on the edge. I loved this story and I think Dawn Crandall has did an awesome job on her first book . What will happen to Maryliss , will she find someone to marry or will she lose everything? The Hesitant Heiress will be available August 1st.
I was given an Advance Reader Copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for my honest review, and I have given it.
By: Dawn Crandall
When I first saw the cover of The Hesitant Heiress I just knew I would love it. My eyes was drawn to it. Dawn did not disappoint . She has penned an awesome story and I love the way she puts quotes at the first of every chapter. I fell in love with her main character, Amaryliss Breghan . She is a young lady who thinks she knows what she wants. She loves music and it means everything to her. Amaryliss had to leave The Boston Conservatory . She is to inherit from her grandmother's will on one term that she will marry within a year. Amaryliss does not want to get married to any man. She really wants to go back to Washington and find a music academy of her own. There are some suitors that want to marry her, but do they love her or only after her inheritance. She thinks she knows who is behind her having to leave The Boston Conservatory. Things start to really happen on over in the book. I could not read fast enough to see what was going to happen next. There are some twist and turns that keeps you on the edge. I loved this story and I think Dawn Crandall has did an awesome job on her first book . What will happen to Maryliss , will she find someone to marry or will she lose everything? The Hesitant Heiress will be available August 1st.
I was given an Advance Reader Copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for my honest review, and I have given it.
August 7, 2017
Ah, such a satisfying story! Excellent job for a debut novel. I loved the first-person narration, and how Amaryllis is an honest and pleasant character to get to know. She has to face the past, of the summer she was fourteen and her life fell apart, and we see it unfolding as she faces the events all over again, bit by bit. She obviously won't be able to move on with her life until she looks at it frankly and learns how to deal with the truth, instead of shying away from the horror of what she'd felt.
I enjoyed every minute, could hardly put it down...and the HERO! Way to write a good guy, one who might get frustrated at times, but who still is determined to overcome the obstacles and gain his goal. :)
It's a good thing books two and three are in the mail, because I don't want to wait longer than necessary to get them!
I enjoyed every minute, could hardly put it down...and the HERO! Way to write a good guy, one who might get frustrated at times, but who still is determined to overcome the obstacles and gain his goal. :)
It's a good thing books two and three are in the mail, because I don't want to wait longer than necessary to get them!
May 7, 2017
I enjoyed the first person perspective in The Hesitant Heiress. I felt like the plot unfolded gradually as layers and details were revealed bit by bit. The emotion, conflict, and romance made this a book I was totally immersed in!
September 5, 2014
Reviewed at The Power of Words: http://tinyurl.com/ortv5ly
I'm so glad author Dawn Crandall gave me the opportunity to review her impressive debut novel because I thoroughly enjoyed it. The Hesitant Heiress is a historical romance set in 1890 New England - from Boston's Back Bay to Maine's Bar Harbor. The prose is polished and realistic for the times, characters are complex, the plot captured my attention, and . . . well, let me just say that fans of tender romance will find much to enjoy here!
Aside from the pure entertainment factor of this story, The Hesitant Heiress stands out to me because of its uniqueness and complexity. Although not a Regency, the polite social mannerisms, quiet humor, and expectations of behavior - especially where women are concerned - of writers like Georgette Heyer. Other factors - like the setting, hint of mystery, and first-person POV - are evocative of Gothic romance writers like Victoria Holt. Being a long-time fan of both of these styles made me feel right at home, often with a smile on my face as I turned the pages.
The way Dawn led into each chapter with a classic quote also added much richness and insight. For instance, it's great the way this quote from The Three Musketeers leads into a scene between Amaryllis and Nathan: “You are very amiable, no doubt, but you would be charming if you would only depart.”
Dawn did a great job at creating a sense and feel of place, making locations come alive. One of my favorite chapters describes a social outing north of Boston to a place called Nahant Island, home of one of Bram's hotels that looked like "an oversized cottage with walls of windows overlooking the coast." A touching and memorable scene takes place on the rocky coast and a boulder named Castle Rock. To get a feel for all the visual images created by this story, be sure to visit Dawn's Pinterest board for The Hesitant Heiress.
Amaryllis and Nathan are likeable lead characters who immediately drew me to them. Amaryllis, a talented pianist who wants to establish her own academy of music, is frustrated to discover that she must marry in order to inherit. Nathan, born to wealth, has come to realize that there is a lot more to life, as evidenced in his words to Amaryllis: "The impressiveness that comes from having such a large amount of money is quite overrated. Were you aware that all anyone really cares to know of me is the fact that I am born into the Everstone family, and that I am therefore wealthy beyond reason?" Nathan's father, Bram Everstone, is Amaryllis's nemesis and part of her reason for seeing men as controlling and undependable - and cause for her recurring nightmares. Although we don't see Bram until close to the end, he is a major character who casts a compelling shadow throughout.
The part that music played in this story was something else I really connected with. As a former student at the Boston Conservatory of Music, Amaryllis often had to entertain at the piano, and I loved how Dawn seemed to find pieces that expressed Amaryllis's mood at the current time. Nathan once commented to Amaryllis: "Your piano playing has become alarmingly turbulent as the months have gone by. . . . Not once have you played anything as calm and relaxing as Beethoven’s Moonlight Sonata since the night of Claudine’s dinner party back in March.”
Faith is the backbone of this story, and we see that God has transformed Nathan from the man he used to be. For something that should be as natural as breathing for the Christian, I don't know why a scene like this surprises me, but I found Nathan praying over Amaryllis so in character and moving:
"Nathan reached out and put his arms around me, bowing his head close to my shoulder, and whispered, 'Lord God, I thank You for bringing Amaryllis into my life. Please watch over and protect her while I’m unable to be with her in these coming days. Strengthen her heart, Lord, that she may trust me as she trusts You. For I’ve taken Your commands to heart, and I strive to love her as You have. I would do anything for her.'"
Writing this review has made me want to go back and read The Hesitant Heiress again. Character-driven stories are my favorite, and I highly recommend this novel to all who enjoy gently-paced stories with charm and character depth. 5-star rating because of its uniqueness and how much I enjoyed it.
Thank you to Dawn Crandall for providing an ARC of this book in exchange for my honest review.
I'm so glad author Dawn Crandall gave me the opportunity to review her impressive debut novel because I thoroughly enjoyed it. The Hesitant Heiress is a historical romance set in 1890 New England - from Boston's Back Bay to Maine's Bar Harbor. The prose is polished and realistic for the times, characters are complex, the plot captured my attention, and . . . well, let me just say that fans of tender romance will find much to enjoy here!
Aside from the pure entertainment factor of this story, The Hesitant Heiress stands out to me because of its uniqueness and complexity. Although not a Regency, the polite social mannerisms, quiet humor, and expectations of behavior - especially where women are concerned - of writers like Georgette Heyer. Other factors - like the setting, hint of mystery, and first-person POV - are evocative of Gothic romance writers like Victoria Holt. Being a long-time fan of both of these styles made me feel right at home, often with a smile on my face as I turned the pages.
The way Dawn led into each chapter with a classic quote also added much richness and insight. For instance, it's great the way this quote from The Three Musketeers leads into a scene between Amaryllis and Nathan: “You are very amiable, no doubt, but you would be charming if you would only depart.”
Dawn did a great job at creating a sense and feel of place, making locations come alive. One of my favorite chapters describes a social outing north of Boston to a place called Nahant Island, home of one of Bram's hotels that looked like "an oversized cottage with walls of windows overlooking the coast." A touching and memorable scene takes place on the rocky coast and a boulder named Castle Rock. To get a feel for all the visual images created by this story, be sure to visit Dawn's Pinterest board for The Hesitant Heiress.
Amaryllis and Nathan are likeable lead characters who immediately drew me to them. Amaryllis, a talented pianist who wants to establish her own academy of music, is frustrated to discover that she must marry in order to inherit. Nathan, born to wealth, has come to realize that there is a lot more to life, as evidenced in his words to Amaryllis: "The impressiveness that comes from having such a large amount of money is quite overrated. Were you aware that all anyone really cares to know of me is the fact that I am born into the Everstone family, and that I am therefore wealthy beyond reason?" Nathan's father, Bram Everstone, is Amaryllis's nemesis and part of her reason for seeing men as controlling and undependable - and cause for her recurring nightmares. Although we don't see Bram until close to the end, he is a major character who casts a compelling shadow throughout.
The part that music played in this story was something else I really connected with. As a former student at the Boston Conservatory of Music, Amaryllis often had to entertain at the piano, and I loved how Dawn seemed to find pieces that expressed Amaryllis's mood at the current time. Nathan once commented to Amaryllis: "Your piano playing has become alarmingly turbulent as the months have gone by. . . . Not once have you played anything as calm and relaxing as Beethoven’s Moonlight Sonata since the night of Claudine’s dinner party back in March.”
Faith is the backbone of this story, and we see that God has transformed Nathan from the man he used to be. For something that should be as natural as breathing for the Christian, I don't know why a scene like this surprises me, but I found Nathan praying over Amaryllis so in character and moving:
"Nathan reached out and put his arms around me, bowing his head close to my shoulder, and whispered, 'Lord God, I thank You for bringing Amaryllis into my life. Please watch over and protect her while I’m unable to be with her in these coming days. Strengthen her heart, Lord, that she may trust me as she trusts You. For I’ve taken Your commands to heart, and I strive to love her as You have. I would do anything for her.'"
Writing this review has made me want to go back and read The Hesitant Heiress again. Character-driven stories are my favorite, and I highly recommend this novel to all who enjoy gently-paced stories with charm and character depth. 5-star rating because of its uniqueness and how much I enjoyed it.
Thank you to Dawn Crandall for providing an ARC of this book in exchange for my honest review.
March 13, 2016
I don't normally care for first person narrative. There are some exceptions, however - books where the author just does such a stellar job that I do genuinely enjoy that perspective for that book. Varina Denman and Kristan Higgins come to mind; now, Dawn Crandall is another author I will be adding to this list. In fact, most of the time, the story so captivated me that I forgot I was even reading in the first person! Dawn's writing style simply embodies talent - from her prose to her characterizations to her kissing scenes. (ohhhh the kissing scenes!!! Don't get me started on those or we will be camped there all day!) The quotes at the beginning of each chapter added to the entire reading experience for me, creating a sense of anticipation for what that section would hold and many times bringing a chuckle to the surface at the quote's dry wit or the irony of its application.
Amaryllis and Nathan quickly became one of my new favorite romantic pairings. Nathan with his intense brooding gazes. Amaryllis with her endearing but absolute cluelessness. Oh the FEELS, y'all! I forgot to breathe so many times during The Hesitant Heiress that I'm surprised I didn't need medical attention by the end ;) And when Nathan spontaneously bows his head near Amaryllis' shoulder and prays aloud for both of them???? I think I actually swooned a little. So tenderly perfect. Real men can be tender and gentle and spontaneous pray-ers - in fact, they should be!!
And then there are the "villains", both of whom end up being a bit of a surprise in their own way. I won't spoil anything for you but let me just warn you to hold on to your hats!! Just when you think it's safe to relax, it may not be. That's all I'm saying.
Between my love for these characters and my pure enjoyment of the artistry of the writing, the setting of 1890s New England became icing on an already yummy cake. Ever part of the background without taking over or fading away, the lifestyle of these wealthy Vanderbilt-contemporaries is essential to understanding the lives and the motivations and even the insecurities of the people we meet on the pages of The Hesitant Heiress. As Nathan himself said at one point, "Were you aware that all anyone really cares to know of me is the fact that I am born into the Everstone family, and that I am therefore wealthy beyond reason?" At which point, I'm pretty sure I hollered through the book to Amaryllis, "Hug the poor man, for the love!"
Bottom Line: With a voice reminiscent of Georgette Heyer or Jane Austen, Dawn Crandall will whisk you away into another era, a time when inheritance dictated one's future and twenty-five was considered long past the age for marriage. The beauty of the romance and the dimensionality of the characters lingers long after the book is closed. As this is the first in the series, the author sets the stage here for the other books by introducing a myriad of secondary characters whom you will care about just as dearly by the end as you do Nathan and Amaryllis. If you like Julie Lessman (or Julie Klassen for that matter) or Sarah Ladd, you will love The Hesitant Heiress.
(This review is based on my own purchased copy of the book and is, as ever, only my honest opinion.)
Amaryllis and Nathan quickly became one of my new favorite romantic pairings. Nathan with his intense brooding gazes. Amaryllis with her endearing but absolute cluelessness. Oh the FEELS, y'all! I forgot to breathe so many times during The Hesitant Heiress that I'm surprised I didn't need medical attention by the end ;) And when Nathan spontaneously bows his head near Amaryllis' shoulder and prays aloud for both of them???? I think I actually swooned a little. So tenderly perfect. Real men can be tender and gentle and spontaneous pray-ers - in fact, they should be!!
And then there are the "villains", both of whom end up being a bit of a surprise in their own way. I won't spoil anything for you but let me just warn you to hold on to your hats!! Just when you think it's safe to relax, it may not be. That's all I'm saying.
Between my love for these characters and my pure enjoyment of the artistry of the writing, the setting of 1890s New England became icing on an already yummy cake. Ever part of the background without taking over or fading away, the lifestyle of these wealthy Vanderbilt-contemporaries is essential to understanding the lives and the motivations and even the insecurities of the people we meet on the pages of The Hesitant Heiress. As Nathan himself said at one point, "Were you aware that all anyone really cares to know of me is the fact that I am born into the Everstone family, and that I am therefore wealthy beyond reason?" At which point, I'm pretty sure I hollered through the book to Amaryllis, "Hug the poor man, for the love!"
Bottom Line: With a voice reminiscent of Georgette Heyer or Jane Austen, Dawn Crandall will whisk you away into another era, a time when inheritance dictated one's future and twenty-five was considered long past the age for marriage. The beauty of the romance and the dimensionality of the characters lingers long after the book is closed. As this is the first in the series, the author sets the stage here for the other books by introducing a myriad of secondary characters whom you will care about just as dearly by the end as you do Nathan and Amaryllis. If you like Julie Lessman (or Julie Klassen for that matter) or Sarah Ladd, you will love The Hesitant Heiress.
(This review is based on my own purchased copy of the book and is, as ever, only my honest opinion.)
August 27, 2014
Dawn Crandall’s debut novel has swept its way into my heart with its stellar ensemble of compelling characters and a deeply charming and captivating romance! With a writing style that’s reminiscent to the classic Jane Eyre, this tale is written in first person point of view and captures its period to perfection. Normally I shy away from reading books told in first person, but any uncertainties I initially had were quickly quelled by the superb writing!
I was easily drawn into Amaryllis Brigham’s world as she is reluctantly immersed into the distinguished society of Boston in 1890. Bereft of any other family and having been unceremoniously kicked out of the Boston Conservatory of Music, twenty-five year old Amaryllis takes up her wealthy Aunt Claudine’s offer of residency. She longs to found a music academy in her own hometown but it seems the only way she can now attain that goal is to marry within the year to inherit her grandmother’s fortune. Amaryllis rejects that idea and strives to make her dreams come true other ways… without a husband. Can she reach her goals on her own? Or will she allow a ghost from her past by the name of Bram Everstone whom she discovered was the one behind her dismissal, continue to extract her peace and affect her life?
Nathan, the charming and enigmatic son of Bram Everstone, arrives back in Boston with Amaryllis’ cousin Lawry in his father’s long, private railcar. Having seen a younger photo of Amaryllis and hearing so much about her from Lawry, Nathan is curious though unprepared when he sees this beguiling young woman waiting at the train station. He then endeavors to get to know the beautiful yet confusing Amaryllis, though finds it near impossible to understand her or to climb her carefully constructed walls of self-protectiveness. Will he be able to cause her self-made fortress to crumble enough to allow him access to her heart?
Unanswered questions teased me throughout the story, but as the tale unraveled they were all answered satisfactorily! Mysteries, misunderstandings, and even murder, all added intriguing and exciting layers to ‘The Hesitant Heiress’. And when Amaryllis wasn't exasperating me with her lack of perception, I found the interactions between her and Nathan intensely intoxicating. The story’s finale was one of the best endings I’ve ever read. Suffused with compelling drama and tension, it was thrilling while bristling with romantic tension. Well done Dawn Crandall!
Well done Dawn!
I was easily drawn into Amaryllis Brigham’s world as she is reluctantly immersed into the distinguished society of Boston in 1890. Bereft of any other family and having been unceremoniously kicked out of the Boston Conservatory of Music, twenty-five year old Amaryllis takes up her wealthy Aunt Claudine’s offer of residency. She longs to found a music academy in her own hometown but it seems the only way she can now attain that goal is to marry within the year to inherit her grandmother’s fortune. Amaryllis rejects that idea and strives to make her dreams come true other ways… without a husband. Can she reach her goals on her own? Or will she allow a ghost from her past by the name of Bram Everstone whom she discovered was the one behind her dismissal, continue to extract her peace and affect her life?
Nathan, the charming and enigmatic son of Bram Everstone, arrives back in Boston with Amaryllis’ cousin Lawry in his father’s long, private railcar. Having seen a younger photo of Amaryllis and hearing so much about her from Lawry, Nathan is curious though unprepared when he sees this beguiling young woman waiting at the train station. He then endeavors to get to know the beautiful yet confusing Amaryllis, though finds it near impossible to understand her or to climb her carefully constructed walls of self-protectiveness. Will he be able to cause her self-made fortress to crumble enough to allow him access to her heart?
Unanswered questions teased me throughout the story, but as the tale unraveled they were all answered satisfactorily! Mysteries, misunderstandings, and even murder, all added intriguing and exciting layers to ‘The Hesitant Heiress’. And when Amaryllis wasn't exasperating me with her lack of perception, I found the interactions between her and Nathan intensely intoxicating. The story’s finale was one of the best endings I’ve ever read. Suffused with compelling drama and tension, it was thrilling while bristling with romantic tension. Well done Dawn Crandall!
Well done Dawn!
January 2, 2016
I loved the mystery and suspense of this story! Dawn has penned a very intriguing historical romance, skillfully maintaining suspense through the whole story. Throughout it, you’re given tidbits of Amaryllis’s history that have shaped her character. Also, Dawn keeps you guessing about the romance – will Amaryllis end up with Nathan, the man she’s falling in love with, or with another friend who would make a most convenient match?
Amaryllis is a complex character, very independent and intelligent. She is trying to find her way in a society too stuffy for her, yet not willing to sacrifice her own happiness for money. She feels as though she’s not had any control over some of her past life events, and this has borne a deep longing for consistency in her life. I enjoyed the fact that she wants to use her God-given musical talents to help others.
I thought the cast of characters was reminiscent of an Austen story, with several friends, family, and acquaintances having an active role in Amaryllis’s story. This was a nice element, because in some stories the cast can be small and restrained, when in reality, some of us have many people directly involved with our daily lives.
I also enjoyed the late 1800’s New England setting of Boston and coastal Maine, complete with elaborate mansions, parties, and visits to the ocean.
Faith in God was a prominent feature of the story, and the characters learned and grew as a result of God’s leading. One thing in particular I noticed was the theme of love – God’s love is given to us freely, even when we don’t deserve it or feel undeserving ourselves. We sometimes find God’s love in unexpected places, like in a new friendship, the support of our family, or in romantic love.
Re-read in 2015: enjoyed it just as much the second time! And I liked seeing hints at the mystery and romance early on, some things I missed the first time.
Amaryllis is a complex character, very independent and intelligent. She is trying to find her way in a society too stuffy for her, yet not willing to sacrifice her own happiness for money. She feels as though she’s not had any control over some of her past life events, and this has borne a deep longing for consistency in her life. I enjoyed the fact that she wants to use her God-given musical talents to help others.
I thought the cast of characters was reminiscent of an Austen story, with several friends, family, and acquaintances having an active role in Amaryllis’s story. This was a nice element, because in some stories the cast can be small and restrained, when in reality, some of us have many people directly involved with our daily lives.
I also enjoyed the late 1800’s New England setting of Boston and coastal Maine, complete with elaborate mansions, parties, and visits to the ocean.
Faith in God was a prominent feature of the story, and the characters learned and grew as a result of God’s leading. One thing in particular I noticed was the theme of love – God’s love is given to us freely, even when we don’t deserve it or feel undeserving ourselves. We sometimes find God’s love in unexpected places, like in a new friendship, the support of our family, or in romantic love.
Re-read in 2015: enjoyed it just as much the second time! And I liked seeing hints at the mystery and romance early on, some things I missed the first time.
August 26, 2014
It is 1890, and Amaryllis Brigham is a talented musician, but a slanderous letter from the rich influential Bram Everstone ends her study at the Boston Conservatory of Music, and sends her to the home of her Aunt Claudine. Here she is reintroduced to her childhood friend, cousin Lawry Hampton, and his friends, Jay Crawford and Nathan Everstone … Bram’s son.
Amaryllis discovers she is a rich heiress, but she must marry in order to claim her inheritance. She has no desire to marry, yet the money would enable her to return home to her beloved Whidbey Island, Washington, and establish a music school. Logic would dictate that the handsome Jay would make the ideal husband, as he’s a preacher in search of a wife to accompany him to fulfil his call to preach in Washington. Yet Amarillys finds herself attracted to Nathan, the son of the man who has ruined her life in more ways than one.
The Hesitant Heiress is written in the first person, which is an unusual choice for a historical romance, but it works. So many of the characters are hiding secrets, and first person enables the reader to uncover those secrets slowly, and means they have the same element of surprise to us as they do to Amaryllis. I liked that, as it added to the suspense.
This story has it all—fascinating characters, secret love, obsession, suspense, loads of romantic tension, and a few rather fabulous kisses. I thoroughly enjoyed The Hesitant Heiress. The only thing I didn’t like was the teaser for the sequel, because now I’m going to have to wait months to find out what happens. Recommended for fans of historical romantic suspense from authors such as Colleen Coble.
Thanks to the author for providing a free ebook for review.
Amaryllis discovers she is a rich heiress, but she must marry in order to claim her inheritance. She has no desire to marry, yet the money would enable her to return home to her beloved Whidbey Island, Washington, and establish a music school. Logic would dictate that the handsome Jay would make the ideal husband, as he’s a preacher in search of a wife to accompany him to fulfil his call to preach in Washington. Yet Amarillys finds herself attracted to Nathan, the son of the man who has ruined her life in more ways than one.
The Hesitant Heiress is written in the first person, which is an unusual choice for a historical romance, but it works. So many of the characters are hiding secrets, and first person enables the reader to uncover those secrets slowly, and means they have the same element of surprise to us as they do to Amaryllis. I liked that, as it added to the suspense.
This story has it all—fascinating characters, secret love, obsession, suspense, loads of romantic tension, and a few rather fabulous kisses. I thoroughly enjoyed The Hesitant Heiress. The only thing I didn’t like was the teaser for the sequel, because now I’m going to have to wait months to find out what happens. Recommended for fans of historical romantic suspense from authors such as Colleen Coble.
Thanks to the author for providing a free ebook for review.
September 10, 2014
The Hesitant Heiress is Dawn Crandall’s debut novel, however you’d never guess this is her first book. From the first chapter Dawn weaves the tapestry of the story and made it impossible for me to put the book down. The story begins with Amaryllis a young woman who has had her share of heartache and her trust of others is tentative at best. She is unceremoniously expelled from the Boston Conservatory of Music; and left with little options she decides to turn to her great-aunt and is thrust into society and so the excitement & mystery begins. The story is written in first person, and you are given an intimate view of exactly what Amaryllis is thinking. Amaryllis is reserved and determined to remain single even though her aunt wishes to make a match. Nathan at first glance is everything Amaryllis has tried to avoid, however his patience and desire to build a relationship with Amaryllis captures Amaryllis’s heart. I completely enjoyed reading the story of Amaryllis and Nathan and I’m looking forward to reading more books by Dawn Crandall.
September 13, 2014
Who will win the hand of The Hesitant Heiress?
Amaryllis Brigham was just a child when tragedy struck. Her mother was killed when the ship she was a passenger in sank. Amaryllis always felt responsible because she had disobeyed causing the event that put her mother on the ship that day. On the day of her Mothers funeral she is put in the carriage and sent off to a private school where she feels she is being punished for her disobedience. When she is expelled from the Boston Conservatory of Music before she can graduate, it shatters her dreams of opening a school of her own. She is sent off to her Great-Aunt Claudine and into the world of the rich and thrust into life of high society. She is told that she is to inherit a fortune, but only if she weds in a short period of time. Will she fall in love with one of the many suitors that know of her inheritance and want it, or strike out on her own penniless? I was drawn in from the start and the ending was ... well... full of action you won't want to miss...
Thank you to the author for gifting me a copy.
Amaryllis Brigham was just a child when tragedy struck. Her mother was killed when the ship she was a passenger in sank. Amaryllis always felt responsible because she had disobeyed causing the event that put her mother on the ship that day. On the day of her Mothers funeral she is put in the carriage and sent off to a private school where she feels she is being punished for her disobedience. When she is expelled from the Boston Conservatory of Music before she can graduate, it shatters her dreams of opening a school of her own. She is sent off to her Great-Aunt Claudine and into the world of the rich and thrust into life of high society. She is told that she is to inherit a fortune, but only if she weds in a short period of time. Will she fall in love with one of the many suitors that know of her inheritance and want it, or strike out on her own penniless? I was drawn in from the start and the ending was ... well... full of action you won't want to miss...
Thank you to the author for gifting me a copy.
August 12, 2016
This book reminded me more than once of Jane Eyre in its writing style. The first-person point of view was smooth and pulled us right into Amaryllis' world (I love her name!). Amaryllis is a gifted pianist, but life has conspired against her in some ways and she has mysteries of her past to unravel before she understands where she fits in the world. I truly enjoyed her friendship with Meredyth (the next book in the series is about her!), her relationship with her cousin, Lawry, and with Nathan Everstone. The ending was very satisfactory and this series is sure to please Bronte-lovers!
I received this advanced reader copy; this book releases August 1, 2014.
I received this advanced reader copy; this book releases August 1, 2014.
July 17, 2014
When I was given the opportunity to read an advanced copy of Dawn Crandall's book, knowing that this was her debut novel, I was curious about how it would measure up to other favorite books/authors of mine. I can say, without hesitation, that The Hesitant Heiress had every element that makes a story great!
First, let's begin with our heroine. Amaryllis Brigham has the rare ability to play the piano by ear. She wants to use her talent to help others to study music, but it seems that there is always someone who is trying to undermine her hopes and dreams. Amaryllis is a character you want to root for, but there's an element of sadness around her as she struggles with her mother's death, a feeling of abandonment, and a man that she believes is responsible for ruining her education and reputation. Amaryllis also struggles with fear, and her fight to try and conquer those fears. All of these traits and more make Amaryllis a character that most of us can relate to. Her battle within continues as she is in the presence of Nathan Everstone. There were times when I just wanted her to give up and give in to her feelings of affection, but if that had happened there wouldn't be the excellent tension that was created. In the end, I thought the author did a great job at developing Amaryllis' character and resolving different aspects of the plot in a page turning manner ; ).
Now for our hero. I'm a big fan of the mysterious, brooding type. They're just more interesting and exciting to me. Nathan Everstone has a little bit of that mysterious side and that drew me in. I liked the fact that he didn't fawn over Amaryllis...he wooed her. If a hero is too sappy or just too perfect, the author has lost me. I didn't get lost with this hero : ).
Crandall did a great job with the pacing of the novel as well as the tension. I loved the ending because it was fast paced and I was truly surprised by it. The Hesitant Heiress had all the elements of a good (clean) historical romance. I would definitely recommend it!
*I was given an advanced copy of this novel by the publisher to give an unbiased review.*
First, let's begin with our heroine. Amaryllis Brigham has the rare ability to play the piano by ear. She wants to use her talent to help others to study music, but it seems that there is always someone who is trying to undermine her hopes and dreams. Amaryllis is a character you want to root for, but there's an element of sadness around her as she struggles with her mother's death, a feeling of abandonment, and a man that she believes is responsible for ruining her education and reputation. Amaryllis also struggles with fear, and her fight to try and conquer those fears. All of these traits and more make Amaryllis a character that most of us can relate to. Her battle within continues as she is in the presence of Nathan Everstone. There were times when I just wanted her to give up and give in to her feelings of affection, but if that had happened there wouldn't be the excellent tension that was created. In the end, I thought the author did a great job at developing Amaryllis' character and resolving different aspects of the plot in a page turning manner ; ).
Now for our hero. I'm a big fan of the mysterious, brooding type. They're just more interesting and exciting to me. Nathan Everstone has a little bit of that mysterious side and that drew me in. I liked the fact that he didn't fawn over Amaryllis...he wooed her. If a hero is too sappy or just too perfect, the author has lost me. I didn't get lost with this hero : ).
Crandall did a great job with the pacing of the novel as well as the tension. I loved the ending because it was fast paced and I was truly surprised by it. The Hesitant Heiress had all the elements of a good (clean) historical romance. I would definitely recommend it!
*I was given an advanced copy of this novel by the publisher to give an unbiased review.*
July 24, 2014
Debut author, Dawn Crandall, has set the bar pretty high with her first book. I loved the story of Amaryllis Brigham, a young woman determined to make her own way in a time when it was expected women would do as they were told. Amaryllis was perfectly scripted to represent a woman of this era without stealing away the parts of her which made her unique and fun to read about. Her subtle sense of sarcasm left me smiling on many occasions. When presented with an opportunity to marry for wealth, she didn't see that option as the only way, but instead logically thought through her options and sought an alternative way for her fund her music school out west. When faced with feelings for Nathan Everstone, she denies her own heart. How could she ever have feelings for the son of the man responsible for all the bad things that have happened in her life? She is determined to keep her heart safe, but at what cost to herself? I felt the emotional roller coaster Amaryllis rode throughout the book as she fought her feelings for Nathan. At times, I wanted to have a heart to heart talk with her. Why couldn't she see what a good guy he was? When I first opened this book, I was a bit disappointed to see it was in first person point of view (POV). This is not a type of book that I usually prefer. I like to read third person, which allows me to hear the thoughts of several different characters and not just one. I was a bit wary as I started to read, since I usually have a hard time enjoying first person POV's, but by the end of the first chapter the POV was the last thing on my mind. Crandall writes in a way that makes the reader forget about point of view, instead I found myself absorbed by Amaryllis and Nathan. I love her writing style, it's fresh and unique. I can't wait for book 2! I was given an Advance Reader Copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.
April 2, 2015
The cover is so pretty I would have been terribly disappointed had I not loved the book! But The Hesitant Heiress, Book One of The Everstone Chronicles, was all I’d hoped it would be. Set in Boston and Maine (with connections to California and Washington) in the late 1800’s, The Hesitant Heiress reminded me of some of my favorite classics (Wives and Daughters and Jane Eyre in particular), yet this story was unique—and totally captivating.
Amaryllis Brigham had loved her life on her father’s horse farm on Whidbey Island, Washington until her mother drowned in a tragic accident and her father abandoned her to a series of boarding schools. Eleven years later, Amaryllis is forced to discontinue her education and move in with her aunt, Claudine Abernathy. All Amaryllis wants to do with her life is return to Whidbey Island and open a music school. But when her aunt informs her that her mother’s parents, whom she’d never even met, have named her heir of their sizable estate on one condition, that she marry within the year, her reclusive lifestyle comes to an end.
To complicate matters, the son of the man she holds responsible for destroying all her plans seems to be playing games with her heart. Amaryllis is determined to avoid Nathan Everstone. Unfortunately, her avoidance makes him all the more determined to win her over. Her aunt and only friends seem to be taking Nathan’s side.
As I read this book, I decided Amaryllis must be one of the densest heroines ever, but it was her reasoning and Nathan’s response to it that made the story so fun to read. When it took a dangerous turn and the most unlikely hero showed up to play a surprise role, I was hooked. Author Dawn Crandall has become one of my favorites, just that quickly. I’m already engrossed in her second book.
I received a complimentary copy from the author in exchange for this review. I recommend this book!
Amaryllis Brigham had loved her life on her father’s horse farm on Whidbey Island, Washington until her mother drowned in a tragic accident and her father abandoned her to a series of boarding schools. Eleven years later, Amaryllis is forced to discontinue her education and move in with her aunt, Claudine Abernathy. All Amaryllis wants to do with her life is return to Whidbey Island and open a music school. But when her aunt informs her that her mother’s parents, whom she’d never even met, have named her heir of their sizable estate on one condition, that she marry within the year, her reclusive lifestyle comes to an end.
To complicate matters, the son of the man she holds responsible for destroying all her plans seems to be playing games with her heart. Amaryllis is determined to avoid Nathan Everstone. Unfortunately, her avoidance makes him all the more determined to win her over. Her aunt and only friends seem to be taking Nathan’s side.
As I read this book, I decided Amaryllis must be one of the densest heroines ever, but it was her reasoning and Nathan’s response to it that made the story so fun to read. When it took a dangerous turn and the most unlikely hero showed up to play a surprise role, I was hooked. Author Dawn Crandall has become one of my favorites, just that quickly. I’m already engrossed in her second book.
I received a complimentary copy from the author in exchange for this review. I recommend this book!
September 5, 2014
Amaryllis has been targeted once again by a cruel man hating on her family. This time she's been kicked out of the Boston Conservatory, taking away just one more thing that she loves. So when she is invited to stay with a distant relative she must jump at the chance. Upon arrival, Amaryllis is treated lovingly and realizes this was a good idea. Well at least she thought it was until she finds that a descendant of the hateful man, Nathan Everstone will not only be in the same area but the same HOUSE! Will she stay with her dear Aunt or try to leave on the nearest form of transportation to escape the dreamy son of the evil man trying to tear her life apart? Or will she finally trust Nathan and let him into her heart?
Nathan Everstone has been drawn in by Amaryllis from the moment he heard about her..but he never imagined the child he'd dredged up in his mind had grown up into a stunning young woman. He's completely in love with the sweet young woman but there is one problem...she can't stay in the same room as him for longer then a few minutes! Confused at her constant rejection and persistent to get her to befriend him, will he ever truly understand? Or will she never fully trust his word?
The Hesitant Heiress has to be one of THE best historical romance I've ever had the privilege of reading. Dawn has done a fabulous job of getting readers hooked on Amaryllis and her snubbing the ever gorgeous Nathan Everstone and they can't resist being drawn into his persistent attempts to get a certain someone to trust him. Filled with Romance, Jealousy, and an overwhelming need for trust, The Hesitant Heiress is the perfect Historical Romance and Dawn Crandall is my new favorite author!!
SO worth the money!!
Nathan Everstone has been drawn in by Amaryllis from the moment he heard about her..but he never imagined the child he'd dredged up in his mind had grown up into a stunning young woman. He's completely in love with the sweet young woman but there is one problem...she can't stay in the same room as him for longer then a few minutes! Confused at her constant rejection and persistent to get her to befriend him, will he ever truly understand? Or will she never fully trust his word?
The Hesitant Heiress has to be one of THE best historical romance I've ever had the privilege of reading. Dawn has done a fabulous job of getting readers hooked on Amaryllis and her snubbing the ever gorgeous Nathan Everstone and they can't resist being drawn into his persistent attempts to get a certain someone to trust him. Filled with Romance, Jealousy, and an overwhelming need for trust, The Hesitant Heiress is the perfect Historical Romance and Dawn Crandall is my new favorite author!!
SO worth the money!!
November 5, 2014
The Hesitant Heiress was a captivating tale, a novel that I had trouble setting down in order to get anything else accomplished around the house!
It is the story of a young lady with a tragic past, who doesn’t quite know how to handle the high society that she finds herself thrust into. It is told in first person, which adds to the mystery of the novel. The reader only knows what has happened in the past, and the events that are currently taking place in the story, through the eyes of Amaryllis Brigham.
Amaryllis is a girl with so much hurt in her heart. I felt so sorry for all that she had gone through. I enjoyed the growth she experienced throughout the book, even as I sometimes felt frustrated with her inability to discern who could truly be trusted, and who could not.
The hero of this novel is mysterious and brooding, but not so dark as to pull down the story. I really appreciated that in The Hesitant Heiress. It has the hint of gothic, without the heaviness that I so often associate with that genre. I loved slowly discovering the truth of what had happened in the past, and watching everything unfold and the truth finally come to light. And the romance in this story is fabulous! I truly can’t say enough about how much I loved this story and I am really looking forward to reading the next book in the series.
My thanks to the author for the complimentary copy I received of The Hesitant Heiress. All thoughts and opinions expressed in this review are my own.
This review will post on my blog tomorrow (11/06/14) at: http://wp.me/p3o95H-Ky
It is the story of a young lady with a tragic past, who doesn’t quite know how to handle the high society that she finds herself thrust into. It is told in first person, which adds to the mystery of the novel. The reader only knows what has happened in the past, and the events that are currently taking place in the story, through the eyes of Amaryllis Brigham.
Amaryllis is a girl with so much hurt in her heart. I felt so sorry for all that she had gone through. I enjoyed the growth she experienced throughout the book, even as I sometimes felt frustrated with her inability to discern who could truly be trusted, and who could not.
The hero of this novel is mysterious and brooding, but not so dark as to pull down the story. I really appreciated that in The Hesitant Heiress. It has the hint of gothic, without the heaviness that I so often associate with that genre. I loved slowly discovering the truth of what had happened in the past, and watching everything unfold and the truth finally come to light. And the romance in this story is fabulous! I truly can’t say enough about how much I loved this story and I am really looking forward to reading the next book in the series.
My thanks to the author for the complimentary copy I received of The Hesitant Heiress. All thoughts and opinions expressed in this review are my own.
This review will post on my blog tomorrow (11/06/14) at: http://wp.me/p3o95H-Ky
June 1, 2016
Dawn Crandall is an author that I have recently come in contact with. I am excited to read her books. This is her first book and the start of a series that I will be reading.
The book starts off as Amaryllis looses her place at a music conservatory. She is forced to live with relatives that she hasn't seen in years. There is a lot of mystery as to the reason's why she is forced to leave the school that she enjoys. Amaryllis keeps a lot of things about her past closed off from everyone. The mysteries surrounding her are a little confusing. As a reader, you have part of the picture with a lot of questions. It makes it difficult to keep up with the story.
Fortunately, if you keep reading, it all is revealed. The story keeps moving through the confusing part and was able to keep my interest. Amaryllis is a complex young lady who has suffered through a lot of emotional pain. At times you wanted to tell her to get out of her "funk" and look around and see the man, Nathan, who is right in front of her. She has a man who adores her, in spite of her mood swings, and wants to be with her. She pushes him away because of the things she believes his father did to her to make her miserable.
This really is a good book to read. It is full of romance and humor. The book's characters are Christian, their faith is mentioned as an integral part of their lives.
I look forward to reading the rest of the books. Now that I am familiar with the characters and their history, I can't wait to see how their love stories will unfold.
The book starts off as Amaryllis looses her place at a music conservatory. She is forced to live with relatives that she hasn't seen in years. There is a lot of mystery as to the reason's why she is forced to leave the school that she enjoys. Amaryllis keeps a lot of things about her past closed off from everyone. The mysteries surrounding her are a little confusing. As a reader, you have part of the picture with a lot of questions. It makes it difficult to keep up with the story.
Fortunately, if you keep reading, it all is revealed. The story keeps moving through the confusing part and was able to keep my interest. Amaryllis is a complex young lady who has suffered through a lot of emotional pain. At times you wanted to tell her to get out of her "funk" and look around and see the man, Nathan, who is right in front of her. She has a man who adores her, in spite of her mood swings, and wants to be with her. She pushes him away because of the things she believes his father did to her to make her miserable.
This really is a good book to read. It is full of romance and humor. The book's characters are Christian, their faith is mentioned as an integral part of their lives.
I look forward to reading the rest of the books. Now that I am familiar with the characters and their history, I can't wait to see how their love stories will unfold.
July 5, 2014
I admit to a certain skepticism when I read Christian fiction. At times I have been willing to accept a lower quality in exchange for clean content, or content that isn't offensive. In the case of "The Hesitant Heiress", I did not feel as if I was settling. The author was very thorough with details about high-society life in the late 19th century, which made me feel as if I was really there (and actually understood something that is such a foreign world to 21st-century modern life). Her main character knew her classical music inside and out, as a piano prodigy should, and she weaves in the faith of the characters and their struggles in a refreshingly honest way. Not only are the main characters intriguing, but she has rounded out the "supporting cast" well - I never felt let down by any of the characters' development. "The Hesitant Heiress" has all the necessary suspense, frustration, hope and disappointment needed for a good story plot, and the author has thrown in a few delicious twists to keep the reader on his/her toes. I stayed up until 3 am reading because I HAD to see how it finished! The ending left me already looking forward to the second book in the series. I would recommend this for anyone looking to enjoy a good novel that isn't difficult to follow - great as a weekend/beach read.
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