If cheating is an issue for you, stop right here; that’s what this book about. It’s one of those tropes you either love or hate, so if that is a deal breaker, find another book.
Madeline is the perfect Stepford wife. The forty-year-old keeps a perfect house, perfect kids, PTO and classroom volunteer, community volunteer, you name it she does it. But she’s stuck in a sexless and increasingly loveless marriage. So when the young principal of her children’s school propositions her, she throws caution to the wind, putting not only her marriage, his job, her children, and both of their reputations in jeopardy, to pursue a whirlwind lust-fueled affair.
Ben is in his early thirties and the object of a whole lot of PTO mom’s fantasies. But from the very moment he met the tightly strung Madeline, he knew he had to have her. So when he overhears an argument between Madeline and another PTO mom discussing her lack of sex life, he takes the chance to seduce Madeline. Next thing you know, they’re heading out of town for a romantic weekend that ends in declarations of love. But Madeline knows that she can’t risk losing her children if she attempts to divorce her husband. Just how much is either Ben or Madeline willing to sacrifice in order to make a relationship work?
The story was sweet, sad, and hopeful, pretty much running the gamut of the range of emotions, but this is such a short read that there really isn’t a whole lot of development, for either the characters or the storyline. There is the beginning of a great story that could easily be novel-length, but its brevity is felt with a lack of connection to the characters, specifically the heroine Madeline. The ending is a little predictable as well, but the HEA was sweet.
There were also plot holes and inconsistencies that detracted from the story as well. I can suspend disbelief with the best of them, including the declarations of love within days of the beginning of their relationship, however there was one very glaring, very well; here, I’ll just show you… (scene: they’re sitting on the beach on the California coast, so the Pacific Ocean)
The contrast of hot coffee and cold ocean air woke me up further, but it wasn’t until the sun began to peek over the ocean that I came fully awake.
“Oh.” The word escaped me on a sigh.
As the sun rose, brilliant red and gold streaked across the sky and over the ocean, polishing the blue-gray water with shimmering light. It was like watching a painting come to life—a blaze of colors leaping and dancing, washing away the darkness of night…(passage edited for relevance)
“Thought you’d like it. It’s one of my favorite things about coming up here. Sunsets too. We’ll go down to the beach tonight to watch it.”
As written, the sun is coming up over the Pacific Ocean. I had to go back and read that a couple of times to make sure I was reading it correctly. While a romantic scene, I can’t suspend the belief that the Earth is no longer rotating on its axis.
This is the first book I’ve read by the author and I would certainly pick up other titles, but this one just wasn’t for me. It had a lot of potential, but the execution fell flat.