This was such a cute, easy read. I finished it in one sitting because the story moved at exactly the right pace for me. There wasn’t a ton of unnecessary fluff or excessive inner monologue, but it also didn’t move so quickly that the romance felt like insta-love. The writing was straightforward, the story flowed naturally, and I genuinely enjoyed spending time with these characters.
Erissa chooses to enter River’s life and everything that comes with it. She’s caring, nurturing and accommodating without ever feeling like a doormat. She has a backbone, she speaks up when necessary, and I especially appreciated that she never begged River for clarity, chased him around, or made a spectacle of her feelings. She paid attention, moved accordingly, and let that man figure himself out.
River was probably my favorite part of the book. I love an expressive MMC, and once he knew what he wanted, there was no unnecessary game-playing or emotional constipation. He was possessive without making Erissa feel powerless, caring, generous, and increasingly certain about the place he wanted her to have in his life.
But what I appreciated most was that the author actually showed me why River fell in love with Arissa.
That’s something I think a lot of romances miss. Sometimes we’re simply told that two characters are madly in love, but nothing about their interactions has convinced me why. Here, it was built through small moments. Erissa learned about River’s training and made meals with his career in mind. She cared about his daughter. She considered his family. She created a welcoming home for the people he loved. She brought this effortless warmth into his life without demanding recognition for it. And gradually you see River becoming happier, more settled and more at peace—with even the people around him noticing the difference.