I'm going to read this again when I'm awake! I made it my bedtime reading for the past few nights, and it definitely requires a little more concentration than I've got at two a.m. However, it's also wonderful to read something so well written and know I can focus on the narrative rather than whether the grammar and punctuation are correct. :)
This is a short story about...well, I'm not entirely sure, but it feels like the beginning of a mesh of stories, and I'm rating it on that basis. Things happen very quickly, and I get the feeling it's intentional.
Of course, all of this is soooo cryptic, because explaining would lead to spoilers!
Thinks I'm going to have to ask the author some questions...