Fobwatch And Cinders

Shards Of Time Chronicles #2

by J.P. Feather

Of all the creatures that roam between the Fae Kingdoms, Hell, and the Human Lands, Maela is the one chosen by the Devil himself.

Now he walks beside her, guiding her through the dangerous art of time magic and revealing fragments of the past, present, and future. With a pocket watch in her hand, Maela begins to unravel the secrets hidden within her nightmares and piece together the moments in time that were stolen from her.

A place where her mother wore the mask of the enemy.

A lover with tears in his eyes and a promise of eternity.

A city made of lights and lavender.

Each fragment draws Maela closer to the truth, until they form a broken mirror reflecting a life she was never meant to remember. Everything around her begins to fracture. The squadmates she once called family start to fall apart. Lies surface from the one person who once held her heart in his hands. Her search for answers leads her before the kings and queens of the Four Kingdoms.

Then fate deals its final card.

A death brings back what Maela was never supposed to remember and when fear crosses the faces of the kingdoms, Maela realizes one terrifying truth — they have seen this darkness before.

324 pages, Kindle Edition

Published November 1, 2026

Reviews

[CKreads · Rating 4 out of 5]

I loved the continuation of this story and dare I say book 2 is even better! I loved ALL of the characters. I received some answers and just as many new questions. I am hooked and really looking forward to seeing what’s next!
Thank you to the author, J P Feather, for the opportunity to read an ARC. This review is my honest opinion.

[Regina Cartagena · Rating 3.5 out of 5]

ARC Review

Opening / Overall Experience

I received an advance copy in exchange for an honest review, and so here we go again.
Fobwatch and Cinders had some very big shoes to fill after Lavender and Steel, a book that left a lasting impression on me. I went into this sequel eager to return to Maela's world, uncover more of its mysteries, and see how the characters and their relationships, especially Maela and Luan's love story, would unfold.

We said our goodbyes in Lavender and Steel after a cliffhanger that left me devastated, the stakes sky-high, and my poor heart in pieces. Naturally, I expected this sequel to pick up that momentum and hit the ground running. It had all the ingredients for a spectacular continuation, but somewhere along the way, it lost some of the magic that made the first book so memorable.

The core of the problem for me is that somtimes this installment confuses making things happen with developing what happens. There is no shortage of ideas, revelations, or conflicts, but too often, the story moves forward before their significance has time to sink in.

Despite my mixed feelings, this universe still fascinates me, and I'm not ready to give up on this story just yet.

Scorecard
Overall⭐⭐⭐
World-building⭐⭐⭐
Romance⭐⭐
Spice🌶️
Ending⭐⭐⭐⭐

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Overview

With the Devil himself taking Maela under his wing as her Time Guardian, Fobwatch and Cinders promises a journey through time magic, stolen memories, and secrets that could change everything Maela thought she knew about her past. As fragments of her memories begin to resurface, she must piece together the truth while navigating uncertain loyalties and old wounds that refuse to stay buried.

What I struggled with most was the narrative's cohesion. Plenty happens, but the connections between events and plotlines aren't always clear. New revelations often arrive before previous ones have been fully explored, and I occasionally found myself going back to check whether I'd missed something. At times, reading this book felt like rummaging through a box of evidence that someone had thoroughly shaken up, trying to work out which clues mattered and how they were supposed to fit together.

The emotional impact suffers for the same reason: major events often pass before their consequences have time to sink in. Maela's grief over Maynard, for example, feels surprisingly brief given the weight of her loss.

Thankfully, the book also has moments that genuinely shine. The scene in which the squad shares their scars was a particular highlight. It's tender, painful, and revealing, allowing the characters to lower their defenses and connect in a way that reminded me how much I care about them when the story gives them room to breathe. I only wish the novel had sustained that same emotional depth throughout.

The second half begins to recover some of the direction and character depth I had been missing, particularly from Chapter 15 onward. The pieces start coming together more effectively, and I caught glimpses of the story that had captivated me in the first book.

Ultimately, I don't think Fobwatch and Cinders lacks good ideas. I simply wish it had spent more time developing the ones it already had. At 324 pages, the book feels a little too tightly packed for everything J. P. Feather wants to explore. I would have gladly read a longer story if it meant giving its plotlines and characters the space they needed to reach their full potential.

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Worldbuilding

That said, I still find this universe intriguing. The sequel introduces several concepts that make me want to understand it better.

The relics, the Guardians, the origins of demons, and Maela's connection to time magic all offer interesting possibilities while building on the magic system established in the first book. There is still plenty here that sparks my curiosity, even if the execution doesn't always do these ideas justice.

My main disappointment is that I rarely felt fully immersed in the world itself. The city, the atmosphere, and even Nova War Academy could have benefited from more descriptive detail. I wanted to picture the places the characters inhabit and feel transported into their world, but the setting often remained in the background.

The lore has a similar problem. We receive more information about the universe, but much of it comes through brief explanations scattered throughout the story. There's a difference between being told what a relic does and seeing how its power shapes the world, affects the people who use it, or changes the course of events. I wanted to discover these things alongside the characters and experience the magic as a living part of the narrative, rather than have so many fascinating concepts introduced and then left waiting for further exploration.

The Devil's new role as Maela's Time Guardian is... a bit strange.

In Lavender and Steel, he was a formidable antagonist whose mystery and intentions made him such an intriguing presence. Here, he suddenly becomes a guiding, almost mentor-like figure to Maela. The shift could have opened the door to an interesting new dynamic, especially considering Luan's previous warnings about him, but the transition feels far too casual. One moment, we're being warned to stay away from the Devil; the next, it's practically, "Okay, he's your Time Guardian now... chill."

I didn't need the Devil to remain the villain, but I wanted the change to carry more weight. A shift this significant should leave room for distrust, uncertainty, and tension, particularly when the characters have every reason to question his intentions. I missed the sense of danger that made his presence so memorable in the first book.

Royal Magic also feels like a missed opportunity. Its connection to Maela's visions and time magic is an intriguing revelation, but it never quite receives the weight I expected. Rather than feeling like a discovery that fundamentally expands our understanding of Maela and her place in this universe, it sometimes comes across as another ability added to an already growing list.

Even so, the foundations are there. The magic system remains consistent, and the mythology continues to spark my curiosity. I'm hoping the next installment takes these elements further and gives them the depth they deserve.

A small note on the side: Hadrian's role as a new character left me wanting more, too. Given what Maela endured at his hands, I expected his return to carry a stronger sense of psychological tension. The story gives us glimpses of that history, but I struggled to feel its full weight in their present interactions. The issue isn't that trauma has to look a particular way, but that the narrative doesn't always make the connection between Maela's painful past and the danger of facing him again feel as developed as it could be.
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Romance

One of the things I loved most about Lavender and Steel was the dynamic between Maela and Luan. Their relationship was built on suspicion, secrets, attraction, and the constant push and pull between two people who had every reason to keep their distance. Maela was observant and analytical, never one to accept things without questioning them, while Luan was a commanding, dangerous general with his own principles, responsibilities, and secrets. Their chemistry came from that clash of personalities, and watching them slowly let their guard down was one of the best parts of the first book.

Unfortunately, I struggled with their relationship in this sequel, particularly during the first fifteen chapters, which sometimes felt more like a romcom / academia drama than a continuation of the story I had fallen in love with. The humor and romantic interactions weren't necessarily bad on their own, but the balance felt off. Maela lost some of the sharpness and analytical edge that made her so distinctive, while Luan seemed to lose part of what made him so magnetic.

And I have to admit, I missed my dangerous, possessive shadow general. I missed the Luan who could command a room, inspire fear, and still make it very clear that Maela was the one person who could get under his skin. I don't mind a man being hopelessly in love, but I do mind when his devotion starts replacing the very qualities that made me fall for him.

Luan spends considerable time declaring his love and promising what he would do for Maela, yet I often missed the intensity and authority that once made those declarations hit so hard. His attitude toward rules and his own code also shifts in ways that don't always feel earned. I wanted to see how loving Maela challenged his principles, not watch those principles bend whenever the plot required it.

Now that Maela and Luan are together, I wanted to see their love evolve through difficult choices, meaningful compromises, and the ways their principles might clash. Their circumstances offered plenty of opportunities to explore what they could become together and what they were willing to sacrifice for each other. I wanted their relationship to grow through those experiences, rather than rely so heavily on repeated declarations of love.

The story also leaves some important emotional consequences unexplored. Luan helped erase Maela's memories to protect her, but that decision had consequences he could never have intended. Given what happened afterward, the narrative could have explored the complicated line between protecting someone and taking away their ability to make informed choices. This could have added another layer to their relationship, forcing both characters to confront the cost of decisions made in the name of love. Instead, the implications never receive quite the attention they deserve.

And yet, we still get moments that leave me swooning. There's a particular exchange I absolutely had to share because it brought me to happy tears, and I hope it makes you fall in love with Maela and Luan all over again, just as I did.

«“One side is for you, the light, the constellations and stars, like you.”»

And then comes the part that made my heart melt:

«“The darkness, me, the night between your stars, always close and never too far.” ❤️»

My goodness, this man. This is exactly what I mean when I say I don't need declarations of undying love every other chapter. Sometimes, all it takes is a few carefully chosen words to reach this hopeless romantic's heart.

From Chapter 15 onward, the romance begins to recover some of the depth and direction I had been missing. I was reminded of why Maela and Luan captivated me in the first place, and their original dynamic occasionally began to peek through again. Still, some revelations that could have changed how they understood one another didn't carry the emotional weight I expected.

Ultimately, I don't think Maela and Luan needed less romance. They needed more of the complexity, tension, and emotional development that made their relationship so special in the first place. I still care about them, and that is precisely why I wanted more from their story.
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Ending

For me, the ending was one of the strongest parts of the book. The tension between Maela and Luan reaches a breaking point, and the heartbreak and helplessness that follow left me aching for them. Just when their relationship seems to be hanging by a thread, a real threat emerges once again, raising the stakes and leaving their future more uncertain than ever.

While this part of the story plays with the lovers-to-enemies trope, there's something particularly cruel about the way it approaches the idea of lost memories. It raises a question that feels far more painful than simply forgetting someone: what happens when the history two people share can no longer guarantee that they will recognize what they once meant to each other? When the past itself becomes an obstacle to the love it once helped build?

There's a painful symmetry to the way this story explores memory, love, and the fragile line between devotion and hatred. It gives their conflict a different emotional dimension, one that made me feel the weight of everything Maela and Luan stand to lose. And with the stakes rising and so much left uncertain, I was left desperate to know what happens next.

This is where I felt the familiar pull of Lavender and Steel most strongly. The heartbreak, the helplessness, the looming threat, and the uncertainty surrounding these characters brought back the emotional tension I had been missing. Despite my frustrations with the journey, the ending reminded me why I fell in love with this story in the first place. I'm not ready to walk away just yet. 🖤
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Thank You, Author

Thank you so much for the opportunity to read Fobwatch and Cinders as an ARC! 🖤

Although this reading experience was bittersweet, I sincerely hope to have the opportunity to return to this world and witness the maelstrom finally unfold in Book 3. There is still so much I want to discover, and I'm not quite ready to leave these characters behind.

For now, this is just a farewell, not a goodbye. 🖤

[Babe in Bookland · Rating 3.75 out of 5]

Fob Watch and Cinders

Rating: 3.75 / 5 stars

I wanted to love this sequel a little more than I did. I was happy to be back in Maela's world, and there were plenty of moments that had me turning pages because I genuinely wanted answers. The world keeps getting bigger, the secrets keep piling up, and I was invested in figuring out how all these pieces were supposed to fit together.

And honestly, I do think this book improved on Lavender & Steel in some ways. But a lot of the same frustrations came along for the ride.

Let's talk about the worldbuilding first, because I WANT THE LORE.

There are so many interesting elements here: Fae, demons, spirit guides, time magic, ancient relics, hidden identities, and a whole history that Maela is only beginning to uncover. The possibilities are genuinely intriguing. But I kept finding myself wanting more explanation. We would get introduced to a new magical concept or piece of history, I'd start asking questions, and then the story would move on to the next thing.

I wanted to understand how the magic worked, what its limitations were, what the consequences might be, and why certain characters or abilities were so important. There is so much potential here, but I often felt like I was getting little pieces of information instead of the deeper exploration I was hoping for.

The pacing didn't always help, either. There are a lot of mysteries and side quests competing for attention, and sometimes the story jumps from one development to another before I've had time to process the first. Some character decisions and transitions also felt abrupt. I wanted certain moments to have more buildup and emotional weight instead of feeling like we were rushing to the next plot point.

Maela was another mixed bag for me. I wanted to see more consistent growth, particularly when it came to how she handles her emotions. She has moments of self-awareness, where she recognizes that she needs to put her feelings aside, but then seems to fall back into the same patterns. I also found myself frustrated by some of the conversations between her and Luan. There were questions that needed actual answers and difficult issues that deserved to be worked through, but sometimes intimacy seemed to take the place of communication. Girl, can we please finish a conversation?

I did enjoy seeing more of the relationships and the secrets surrounding Maela's past unfold. There are revelations that genuinely caught my attention, and I was especially interested in the connections between the different magical beings, kingdoms, and characters. I just wish those revelations had been given more room to breathe.

And then there's the ending. Without getting into spoilers, A LOT happens. There are major revelations, devastating losses, and some pretty significant shifts in what we understand about Maela and her world. I should have been completely wrecked by certain moments, especially involving Luan, but everything happened so quickly that I struggled to fully absorb one thing before the next was thrown at me. I wanted to sit with those emotions. I wanted the story to let them land.

The additional Luan POV chapter was helpful, though. It gave me a little more context and helped tie together some of what happened at the end.

I also have to mention the Fourth Wing parallels. I noticed several in the first book, and I found myself noticing even more here. Some individual similarities can absolutely be chalked up to familiar fantasy-romance tropes. But when the parallels start appearing across character dynamics, magical conflicts, and specific plot elements, they become harder for me to ignore. I'm not claiming every similarity is intentional, but it did take me out of the story at times.

There were also some editing and continuity issues that really needed another pass. Character names were mixed up in places, including Hadrien being referred to as George during a scene, and even the academy name seemed to change depending on the page. These may sound like small things, but they pulled me out of the story, especially when I was already trying to keep track of so many moving pieces.

Overall, I was still invested. I wanted answers, I wanted to understand the bigger picture, and that cliffhanger definitely has me curious about what happens next. I think the sequel made some progress, and there are ideas here that I really do find compelling. I just wanted more depth, more consistency, and more time for the story's biggest moments to have the impact they deserved.

I finished with plenty of questions. Some I can't wait to have answered, and others I wish the book had answered along the way. 😂

[Kmilbulls · Rating 2.5 out of 5]

ARC review
I also read book 1 of the series as an ARC and was really hoping book 2 would work out some of the editing and detail issues. I was disappointed to find the same things were prevalent in Fobwatch and Cinders. There is so much potential in this storyline but it reads like a rough draft. There are SO many awkward transitions and lack of supporting detail that there ends up being disconnect between what you know as a reader you SHOULD be feeling in a scene that should be intense, but you just can't get there because there are no compelling details or time to breathe in the scene before it's over and on to the next thing. It feels like this book includes scenes that really make no sense or have any relevance to the storyline, while forcing a scene that should be a robust chapter on its own, into a tiny paragraph that gives you whiplash while scratching your head wondering what the heck is happening.
Finally, the relationship between Luan and Maela still feels oddly disconnected and just not fully formed to create any real attachment to them as a couple.
I so wanted this book to be more fleshed out, with fewer silly editing errors that were in the first book-- unfortunately this was more of the same. Combined with the lack of supporting detail of so many important scenes, it became endlessly distracting from the story. I struggled through this book because I just couldn't find myself caring what happened until almost the very end but by that point I just don't think I can go on to the next book. I wish the author well and success but with so many lovely original books out there, I won't be continuing with this series.

[Jacinta Kruger-Barnard · Rating 2.75 out of 5]

I'm really sorry. I tried so hard to get into this book. Things were moving so slowly, and the sudden changes in scenes just pulled me out of the story.
Unfortunately this is a DNF for me.

The scenes change so suddenly. One that still has me frustrated is when they are in their class discussing a strategy for fixing the wards. Maela gives her answer, and then suddenly we are walking to a different class.

We are left with no feedback, was her answer correct? Was the professor impressed by what she said? Did anyone push back and have a debate over her strategy?

I still want to know if she gave a good answer!

I was also put off by the after care in the first spicy scene. He literally just gave her oral. Yet he is saying things to her as if they just had a hate f**k.
He even asked if it was too much, the only thing that happened was that she O'ed, how is that too much?
I'm sorry, for me that is just too fluffy. I'm not that sensitive that I need that level of after care. Cleaning her afterwards was sweet. After that he could have just held her. That's it. No need for the "you are loved. You are cred for" stuff. I know many people would enjoy that. It's just not my cup of tea.

It's not terrible. It just wasn't hitting it for me. I may revisit this down the line and hopefully it will hit different and I'll be able to get into it.

I am so thankful I got the opportunity to read the advanced copy, and I am really so sad that this book didn't click for me.

[she just Reads too much. · Rating 4.5 out of 5]

This series keeps getting better with every book!!

Fobwatch and Cinders is the second book in the Shards of Time Chronicles and keeps you hooked from the start. Maela has grown into her magic and more secrets keep popping up. She is more determined than ever to get to the bottom of everything and figure out what she is not being told. Her relationship with Luan is finally out in the open but that comes with its own set of complications but together they will weather this storm. I loved how book 2 brought in more information from the secondary characters and each helping to fill in the blanks of this twisted puzzle.

Sooo many revelations came to the questions you had in book 1 but just when you think you are getting to the bottom of it more questions and complications arise. I truly can’t get enough. At times I feel like I needed more information and back ground to truly grasp what was happening but as you continue reading the answers slowly unfold and everything comes together. I CANNOT believe that cliffhanger!!!! My mouth hit the floor and I couldn’t believe what just happened. I also loved the bonus chapter from Luan POV and hope we get more from his POV in book 3.

Thank you J.P. Feather for allowing me to be apart of the ARC team for book 1 & 2 you have me hooked and I can’t wait for book 3! Please don’t make me wait for long I have to know what happens next.

[Kiriaki Alexiadou · Rating 5 out of 5]

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ 5 Stars!

Fobwatch and Cinders by J.P. Feather was another fantastic installment in the Shards of Time Chronicles!

This book did an excellent job of keeping me hooked, building on the story while revealing new and intriguing details about both the FMC and the MMC. The secondary characters also shine, each contributing another piece of the puzzle and helping us slowly uncover the bigger picture of what our characters are truly up against.

I loved how the story continued to unfold, giving us more questions, more revelations, and even more reasons to be invested in these characters and their journey. And that ending? Let’s just say I was left staring at the pages thinking, “WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, AND HOW LONG AM I GOING TO HAVE TO WAIT?!” 😭 I need the next book immediately!

Thank you so much to J.P. Feather for giving me the opportunity to be among the first readers to continue this wonderful story. It was a pleasure to return to this world, and I can’t wait to see where the journey takes us next! ❤️

[Camie Underhill · Rating 4.5 out of 5]

I received as an ARC copy from the author

What a great second book! This gave us almost everything we were wanting answered or explained from the first book. We got more of Luan and Maela ( which jumped up the spice to 1-2 peppers) as well as more lessons and explanations regarding the magic and back story, Maela is trying her hardest to make it through the academy while staying true to who is. I like that while the romance isn’t the main part of the story it is a big part of the backstory that we get to learn more about in this book. I can’t wait for the next book especially with the ending because while more things were revealed for Maela the ending will tear ur heart out (it presents one of my least favorite tropes simply because it makes u mad lol) still think it’s worth reading and I can’t wait to see how it plays out in the part of the story.

Thank you J.P. Feather for the chance to read this early!

[AJ Robertson · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was intense. Not only are we dealing with the weight of uncertainty and mystery, but now abusive exes are popping up?

I'll brief you that your unanswered question from book one is technically answered. I don't consider that a spoiler just something that'll make you dive in quicker. 😏

Maela is absolutely going through it in this. She has no idea who to trust, what's really going on, and trying to navigate friendships and a secret relationship.

I'll just say there's a lot of secrets that a plethora of people are holding, and they all begin to untangle and not in a pleasant way.

I learned more than I thought I would, and I'm grateful for it. Things are getting juicy now, and I can't wait to read the next one to see just how this all plays out.

“Let me hold your broken pieces until you can breathe again.”

“Three minutes."

[Mallory Dapice · Rating 3.5 out of 5]

The magic, the demons, the overarching storyline, and how unwavering Maela is (like damn this girl gets the shit kicked out of her over and over) gives this series so much potential. I said this also about book 1, there is something great here it just needs some fine tuning.

I find the story didn't often set up the scene or put emphasis on secondary character development. There were times where I felt like I was just plopped into a new situation/scene without any setup. Maela is just somewhere new on a new day talking to someone else. There are secondary characters here that I didn't find very memorable and couldn't form connections to.

The last like 10% really carried this book. The very last 3 pages (the letter) I was like oh shit okkkkkkkkk you got me now. I'd love to see how this story ends.

[Melani Pušnik (melyxreads) · Rating 5 out of 5]

What a profound adventure this book continues on!!

There are happy & wholesome, but also sad & devastating moments. The way it was written just made the emotional impact hit that much harder. And I absolutely love that!
There was no holding of my hand, but rather my heart. It was wrapped up in the words, tearing it apart and holding it together all at the same time, just as the words formed the story and wove themself around it.
I have thoroughly enjoyed this from page one to absolutely devouring the whole book.

✶ 𝖘𝖕𝖔𝖎𝖑𝖊𝖗𝖘 𝖆𝖍𝖊𝖆𝖉 ✶

The last few chapters just chip away and reveal so many important things it really takes you for an exquisite spin.

Luan and Maela ... I adore these two so much & this book - their story - has made me cry.

I AM SOOO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT BOOK!!!

Three more minutes 🤍

✶ 𝐦𝐞𝐥𝐲𝐱𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐬 𝐡𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐫𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰 𝐨𝐟 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐀𝐑𝐂 ✶

[Tommy Moreau · Rating 5 out of 5]

J.P. Feather did something in Fobwatch And Cinders that authors rarely manage to do when I read books, she stunned and surprised me with a nice little twist that I won't spoil, you will have to read this excellent book to find what I am talking about. The romance between Maela and Luan is getting stronger and I love how they support each other like Luan says to Maela: "You're the only one", ... "The only person who gets under my mask. Under my control." This kind of love is rare and it is beautiful to see. Sadly, demons and other antagonists have other plans and be prepared to feel a world wind of emotions. This second book in the series completes well the first and I cannot wait to see where J.P. Is bringing us and Maela in the third. Now the worse part, waiting for the next book. Enjoy reading.

[Ashley Thompson · Rating 4.75 out of 5]

Thank you J.P. Feather for the opportunity to read and share my honest review of book 2s early copy read! I am unsure how many books I have read that I have ever thought book 2 was even better than book 1! I do know it is a small number.
The growth and relationships are amazing! I sat down and didn’t stop reading until the end!
The way the story brings you in and event after event unfold into an art form of tangled turmoil.
How one life is so different once truths are puzzled out!
Who is an enemy and who is a friend? But oh how magic can change that one question in a heart beat.
Demons, Fae, half- turned, human… and hell hounds.
I am so excited and looking forward to book 3! Definitely a must read!

[Landon · Rating 5 out of 5]

ARC Reader
This is the second book in the series. It did take me just a small second to remember the events of the first book, though it was still chapter one maybe chapter two by the time I was fully on the same page again.
I loved the world, plot, and characters so much. The second book just adds more depth to all of it. Getting to learn more about Maela and Luan specifically.
There are lots of twists and turns in this. I found myself trying to guess the next one when even the smallest hints were given. I'm happy to say I got it half right at least.
I loved it so much, but I also hated the ending so much. Such a cliffhanger ending. I can't wait for the next book to come out.
I loved the bonus content especially. I would love to see more chapters from Luan's POV honestly.

[Sarah · Rating 3 out of 5]

I really enjoyed book two in this series. The focus this time was more on the plot and its many twists and turns rather than the romance and relationships which was more the theme of book one. The last two chapters had me on the end of my seat, I saw one of the plot twists coming but the rest were jaw to the floor. A really interesting storyline that was unfortunately, like book one, let down by poor editing and pacing. Characters were referenced as though they were important and I didn’t even remember them from book one even though I read these almost back to back. A lot of scene jumping and missing information on the how’s and whys but at its core it’s a really good book if you can make it through the spelling errors and plot issues.

[Jennifer Peters · Rating 5 out of 5]

I received an advance copy of this book at no charge. This is my honest, voluntary review.

Fobwatch and Cinders was just as good as the first book. It kept me engaged and wanting to read it everytime.

Luan and Maela are great their story is beautiful. There was an added mystery and secrets to their relationship but it kept you guessing.

There is still a very good balance of romance to plot and one doesn't take away from the other. The last quarter of the book is crazy with so much happening, and the ending broke me. I am impatiently waiting for the next book to find out what happens.

[Emily Hildyard · Rating 5 out of 5]

The second book in the series (review contains spoilers of first book) after maela killed her brother and summoned the devil, she is lost and doesn't know what to do. With new demons popping up all over the academy, maela needs to figure out who the traitor is and who wants her dead.

This second book was as good as the first. The author has me on tenter hooks all the way through and has me guessing which character is good and which character is a traitor. The twists and turns of this story are incredible and unpredictable. Can not wait for book 3!

[Anita · Rating 2 out of 5]

It has potential, but still felt like a fourth wing impersonation, just less so than the first book.
And it definitely needs another round of editing. It feels like some information is shared and then left hanging, then suddenly things are known that hasn't been explained.
The amount of typos and weird sentences put me off, and the last couple of chapters were so suddenly different that I was lost for most of it, taking me away from the story completely. I wanted to give this book a fair chance by finishing it, but I won't be continuing this series.

[Kerensa Baeckelandt · Rating 4.5 out of 5]

I received an ARC from the author.

Wow, just wow!
This book had even more suspense, mysteries, and secrets than the first one. Plus, you gradually pick up on little clues that only become clear at the very end. The lines between friends and enemies blur, and you start to question everything you know and believe.
I thoroughly enjoyed this book, just like I did the first one.
I’m really looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds and what else we’ll discover.

[Allison · Rating 5 out of 5]

Have you ever read a book where you just have to sit with the ending for a minute because you never saw it coming? Yea, that’s what happened here….and it was done in the most beautifully heartbreaking way possible. And it’s definitely a massive cliffhanger as well.
I had no idea where Maela’s story was going to go, but now that the pieces are starting to fall into place, I need to know what happens next.

[Amy Tighe · Rating 4 out of 5]

I loved Fobwatch and Cinders! It is the second book in thr Shards of Time Chronicles. Fae, Humans, and Demons are fighting for control of the world and magic. This book picks up right where the first left off and constantly has you on your toes. There is forbidden romance, friends turned enemies and enemies turned friends, found family, and so much more! The book ended and I cursed because I need more!!

I received an advance reader copy and left this review voluntarily.

[Coco Fischer · Rating 4 out of 5]

There are some answers to questions from book 1 but still plenty of answers to come.
There is plenty of twists and turns. There are spots throughout the book that are not seamless and I think should have been caught by beta readers. All in all the series is decent. I look forward to getting more of the story in book 3

[Meg Williams · Rating 4 out of 5]

Fobwatch and Cinders — J.P. Feather
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I really enjoyed this one! Although I did prefer the first book, I loved the twists in this instalment and getting to know the characters even more.

I love when a story unfolds in front of you, keeping you guessing along the way, and this one definitely delivered. Filled with friendship, magic and plenty of unpredictability

[Tamara · Rating 4 out of 5]

Thanks to the author for providing me this book. I got curious after book 1 of this series. And book 2 is even better. It picked up where book 1 ended. In book 2 I got some answers I wanted, but it left me with so much more questions. Hopefully I get the answers in Book 3. Because the cliffhanger screams book 3.

[Stephanie Dunigan · Rating 4.5 out of 5]

ARC Review
Really enjoyed this book! Poor Maela really had a hard time in this book. I love her big heart and her determination. Also love her relationship with Luan. I was certainly not expecting the twisty ending. Now I will be waiting (not so patiently) for the next book!

[Lynette Van der Merwe · Rating 5 out of 5]

I have no words, not me sobbing at the end for so many things.

Luan's POV at the end was beautiful.

[Dayna Rose · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved this book as much as the 1st!!! Its very well written with so many twists and turns that you don't know whats going to happen when you turn the page. I can not wait for the next book.

[Angela Green · Rating 5 out of 5]

I loved this series such a strong charector she goes through so much but still carrier on loved this book the end omg

[Emmarose Thompson · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book was just as good as the first one. You really felt what the characters were feeling. The twist was unexpected and I loved it.

[FROSTB1T3 · Rating 5 out of 5]

The journey with Maela and Luan continues, and I must say, it REALLY continues. New reveals, twists, obstacles.

Book 3, I’m ready for you. And Maela, keep kicking ass at what you are doing.